FF Phir milenge note on Pg 41 15/5/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow
that was awesome... 👏 👏 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice ff 👏 👏 👏
The tragedy that happened with Bani has broken her from inside but she's stronge enough to hide her emotions but after seeing Jai, poor Bani 😭 😭 😭 ...
I hope Jai tells her, his part of story soon!!! But I'm looking 4wArd to Bani's cold ehavior with Jai.lol...very good 👏 👏
Please do continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm so sorry friends....

okay guys you wont belive this I had the whole chapter written and then something on my laptop happened and everything went blank I feel like crying cause I didnt evan have a back up or any of it written down may be you will get an up date but late by midnight I'm working on it again I'm so sorry friends

Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Working on it guys

You guys wont belive it...its just not ny day 2nd time I wrote an update and when I post the topic the IF went down and evan dough I posted it da nothing I'm really sorry guys but its just not my day today after spending 6 hours on IF writing it again

It has to be done tomorrow know but I will say the secoond time round I had a really good twist I just feel like crying belive me

What I can do is give you a little hint what happens in the next part jai and bani get married with some hot fire works find out tomorrow know cause I'm not writing it 3rd time round today so I'm really sorry once again just not m day.............aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh

Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its okk.
may b its realy not ur day.

😲 they got married???Bani actually agreed to marry Jai???

hmm.next part must have a good twist.

waiting for tomorrow to come

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwnnn dont worry.. we believe u... wow cant wait for tomm.. and next time u write it u might wanna actually save it just incase it gets deleted again.. atleast this way u dont have to type it up all over again.. ur right today is really not ur day.. plzz continue soon.. cant wait for the next update
Edited by phool527 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read the first part.........fabulous part.....amazing.......ur hint is very exciting.....they r going 2 get married.....cant wait to read the next part
continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm writing the up date again should get it done by before midnight by the way how do I save it phool527 cause I have no clue dear other wise I wouldnt be in this mess aaahhh 😭 😭 😭
Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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better save each and evry part after typing type a pra save next aprt save.. so that it will helkp u
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay I'm really sorry friends after yesturday I really didn't want to up date but khy karo had to for you lot anyways this is a little up date I will to the next some time tonight so please do read and leave comments once again I'm sorry.

Part 2

After dropping meera and rano home AD headed back to the hospital he wanted to check on bani but the truth was he really needed to talk to jai and get some answers from his freind.

Jai had sent Aditya home to telling him he should go home and get some rest and that he will call him if he need anything.


Jai stood by the window of the hospital room and looked out in the sky he remembered when bani walked in with AD to the party hall she looked so beautiful in that black dress which had just straps holding it, she looked slimmer not that she was fat before, or he was complaining, her hair had grown longer down her waist line which looked good... but the smile that use to be on her face was not there.

He turned around and look at bani who was sleeping breathing in and out slowly throw her oxygen mask god what a mess thought jai to himself.

AD had walked into bani room looking at his sister who was in so much pain he wanted to cry... when her and rano had come in to his life 5 years back who knew that today they would be a part of his life more like his real sister that he loved and adored and looked out for all the time.

Walia we need to talk mate with a look of a bit of worry on his face.

AD and Jai had headed to the hospital cafe to have a chat over a cup of coffee.

After jai had told AD what had happened 5 years back how his sister jigs one mistake had distroyed not only bani and her sister rano life but his family too.
Since that day his father hadn't spoken a word to jigs and had blamed her for what had happened.

AD but jai you do know that bani not gone stop at nothing to bring down the Walia.

Like rano said this is just the begining yaar she not gone stop at nothing and you know that.

Jai but not if she a walia too AD.

AD what are you saying jai.

Jai I'm saying that I'm gone marry her.

AD okay let me get this straight you want to marry bani and how do you intend to do that...let me guess your gone get on your knee and propose to her...or what you could do is kidnap her...na this one much better idea hold her at gun point and marry her.

Jai stop it AD its not funny you know.

AD yes its not funny thats what I'm trying to tell you are you out of your mind screamed AD you want to marry her and she gone agree to this dream on Jai Walia...dream on mate

Jai who said anthing about asking her AD.


I know its not long as I had written before but did do my best so next up date tonight till then enjoy reading love Perveen.xXx😊

Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago

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