SS: The Most Devoted Wife

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Long ago there lived in Ujjain a great king called Jai Walia. He was a brave soldier, a fair judge and an able administrator and his subjects lived happily and secure under his tutelage. He had four lovely queens who loved him dearly:

Pia: The most beautiful one.

Roshni: The cleverest one, a master at diplomacy and statecraft.

Sonali: The wisest and most talented one, a master of arts and sciences.

He loved all the three but the darling of his heart was his eldest wife and the patrani (Chief Queen) Banidevi. This preference often irritated the other queens and they would often berate him for his choice asking him why he preferred Bani so much, she was not as pretty as Pia, as learned as Sonali or as versed in statecraft as Roshni. JW would only reply that she is the one who is most devoted to me. To which they would protest that didn't they serve him as loyally and go to any extents to please him. 😳😳😳One day they decided to take matters in their hands they went up to JW and said "You either prove that she is the most faithful and devoted wife or strip her of her title"

JW was thoughtful, he consulted his Mahamantri (Chief Minister) Tarundas a wise old brahmin who had served him long. He whispered something into his ear. Next day, the king woke up with a terrible headache which threatened to split him apart. Alarmed the Vaidraj (Royal Physician) Nachiket was called for. He observed the King and said that the only way he could be cured was if any of the queens would stamp on his head repeatedly (as he had been so instructed by Tarundas).

Pia was applied for but she refused saying that it was a great sin for a woman to step on her husbands head and she would spend seven lives in hell for doing that. She refused as did Roshni and Sonali offering the same excuse. Now Bani was applied for and she readily offered to do the needful. Tarundas stopped her observing that she was about to embark on a great sin which cud cause her to rot in hell.

Bani merely observed "My lord is in pain and you are thinking about my hell and heaven, I don't care a damn if I can relieve my lord and master's pain" At this the King woke up and addressed his other wives "So do you see the difference between Bani and yourselves" The three junior queens were ashamed and apologised to both JW and Bani and promised to be dedicate themselves fully to pleasing the King and honouring the patrani and not play games.

Now that the King was free of settling the neverending sqaubbles between the queens, he devoted himself to furthering his kingdom's political aims and soon conquered the whole of Bharatvarsha. In the process he also acquired a fine harem of queens 😉for everytime he would conquer a kingdom, the vanquished king would offer him a princess as wife in return of allowing them to continue ruling over their kingdoms as his vassal. King Jai also fathered scores of children 😉and lived happily ever after with his devoted and lovely wives (and princes) but Banidevi continued to remain the apple of his eyes.😛

Rgds,

Priyanka

PS: The last para is dedicated to my friend Swati.😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆

kash bani wd have stepped over his head.. 😆

and other wil stand there shocked..

faithful and devoted wife...

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Davia,

(kash bani wd have stepped over his head..)

JW wudn't have risked her going to Nark for no rhyme or reason.

(faithful and devoted wife...)

I am talking about my FF's Bani, not the Bani of KS. 😆

Rgds,

Pri


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pri, loved the story yaar and i agree with davia that bani shld have stepped over head, na rehta head na hota headache 😆

i pity woman of that kingdom and rather princess of neighboring countries that first they have to get married to JW and then after his death his 100s of sons may have spoiled life of 1000 more girls.

pri, i am sure about one thing that even if bani would have stepped on his forehead leading to his death banidevi must have gone to swarg, first for doing this for curing her husband, for being dutiful wife and also for getting rid of such a filthy king from earth.

thanks for dedicating me last part, but i am sure about one thing 100s of his wife must have made his life living hell on earth only, so don't want to curse him more 😆

will be waiting for more stories from u.

swati
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Swati dear,

You may bash my Munna although Bani is his fave queen. He can never do enuff, can he? 😭 😭 😭

Rgds,

Pri
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Diiiiiii one more short story from you. Will read and comment later. As of now, I am so happy that you wrote a ff. Wonder what is your Munna in this ff? 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: majumdar

Swati dear,

You may bash my Munna although Bani is his fave queen. He can never do enuff, can he? 😭 😭 😭

Rgds,

Pri

why u made her fav queen, i don't want bani to be among a list of queens, i really want bani to kick that JW and rather run away from him. u know me i can't do without bashing ur munna as i am always looking for points to bash him as he is 😡

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Swati dear,

It was Rajdharma, the king was expected to have a large harem of queens, not necessarily for love but for diplomatic reasons.

Rgds,

Pri
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pri,


Another one.....great start of my IF day...😆😆


100s of queens.......I wonder where he got the time to conquer regions....🤣🤣



But I've to agree with Swati in one point...


Originally posted by: swatinarang

banidevi must have gone to swarg, first for doing this for curing her husband, for being dutiful wife and also for getting rid of such a filthy king from earth.




😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful story!!!!!!! i just couldnt stop laughing on 'tarundas' and 'vaidraj nachiket'!!! 😆 😆 😆

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