FF: A Bounded Relation...IMP Note on 149 - Page 97

Dil,

That was simply, simply awesome! You are truly a great writer at 15, very mature and very detail oriented. I love your writing style as well. I hope to see a lot more of your writing in the future.

Coming to the update, Jai's anger with his sister is completely justified, his disappointment with Anu, Anu's with her own self were portrayed very well.

Then Munni crying like that was really heartfelt, and the budding romance between the two is very much progressive and perfectly penned.

Now what's with Rano, she is being a bit harsh with Sahil, not even giving him a chance to say anything, but I guess she is justified in her anger too, at least against his mother. Who is the mystery man??

ok so now im totally intrigued 😃 😃 😃 ...who is this deep masculine voice that called out to sahil...oh ho...kaun hai bhai...hume bhi toh batao... 😉 😉 😉 ...omg omg omg...me totally waiting for next update...

but haila...i loved the JB scene with the hug and the crying and then the breakfast scene...aww...that was just awesome... 😳 😳 😳 ...you had better stick up for the woman you love...haye...main marjawaan...and omg omg...im still dying to see JB share a tender kiss or something...ahem ahem... 😉 😉 😉 ...you know...something to get the process of the real jr. walia mission under way 😳 ...

loved the update iggy...totally loved it... 👏 👏 👏
JAZ

Are, where is the next part.
I was enjoying myself and it was finished
So Bani has fallen crazily for Jai, so interesting 😃

Seeing Bani act as a wife was so great, it was so cute to see her taking care of her husband well-being.
I can't wait to see them more confident in their relationships.
Who is Rano savior???? I can't wait to know his name 😉
Great part 👏

Dil wonderful part once again. Loved how JW was protecting and supporting his wife....the progression of JB's relationship is just great going 👏 👏 ......slow and steady but it's moving na 😳 😃 ....would love to see more firworks between JB.....I hope you know na what I meant 😳 😃 😃 .....Saahil....uff.....Rano is giving him hard time 😛 😆 .....wondering whose voice it was....Ranveer 😉 😉 .....JB have fallen in love for each other.......can't waiti to see how both of them are going to confess their love for each other 😳 😳 .....please update soon 👏 👏 👏

haila jaani!!!

thank you sooo much for updating!!

this part rocked! 👏 and i totally loved it!!!!!!!!

awwww jai was consoling her!!!!! jigs.... cant wait for the real heart attack to come!! 😆

breakfast scene was cute! 😳

and i think its ranveer in the end!! 😕 😕 😕 ........


plz cont soon!

wowoowowowowowowo

lagta hai tum exam time mein hai int likana chati hoo wowowow

that part was really rocking.. bani was soo nice even to jig and stopped jai.. then he took her to the room jahan bani ne ropadi in jai's arm. phir uthaliya..😳phir huggy sleep🤗 hmm subha soo atlast munni is in lvoe but kahegii nahii .. uff ye dono ke donon hain bewakoof why dotn they sayit..

bani coffe alyiii woow phir jab breakfsat table par adura plate deka too juice lekar chaligayi .. uffo bani u dint understand whyjai left it akir u shd eat the reminaing isliye😉 phir study mein tie ko teek akrna..😳loved the scene phir massi ne kahi tum pregnant ho are amssi fiakr na akrein jaldi jai banadega bani koo pregnant😉akri aapki munna bahut hii naughty bhi to hain...

pls cotinue soon par promo chalega due to ur exams and health..

davia

amazing part
love jb's interaction
cont soon

wonderful part loved it pls cont soon..........

''Jai: Aur hain… keep your well wishes to yourself… we don't need them from a witch…. (hisses) ''

i loved this line 😆 👏
awwwwwwww..JB r too cute..they've become so comfortable around each other 😳 cant wait for the next part 😃

Hey Baby,

what a comeback update,simply rocking.too good,seriously girl with each and every update you just blow me away.love how JW gets soo protective abt Bani, Jigysa really have no words for her in my dictionary. 🤢 🤢 love how you etched out JB's level of understanding and them being comfortable with one another.too good.lalalalala someone is in love,finally at least one duffer realized.I really liked how you etched out Bani's feelings,simply beautiful.the study scene was soo cute,bani acting all wifey.hehe.looking forward to the next part. 👏


preet 😳