ff kaise kahein chap31 pg 45 15/10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hope you like it....i couldnt find a better title....and im not following the
k sequence on purpose

Anyhow here it is


chap 1

Bani was sitting in front of the mirror ...she was a very beautiful girl ....her
parents had died in an railway accident...that's the only thing she lacked but
her Mama and Mami had looked after her like their own kid as they had none.
They were living in a small town ..her mama ,mami had educated her ///looked
after her''.like a mother and father'

Mami came into her room'. combed Bani's hair nicely. Put the bangles, bindi on
her.


Mami-'dekho beta,lakhein wale bahut bade log hai..par dil ke ache hai...ladke ka
baap.Mr Aditya walia'ke waha tumhare mama driver the'.unhone jub kaha ki wo
tumhe riste ke liye dekhna chate the'to'tumhare mama khusi ke mare''

Bani nodded. She couldn't say much..her mama mami were so excited about this
..she couldn't tell them she wasn't ready for marriage.

Mami told her that in the boys family. There was only his father ,his Masi ,and
two younger sisters'.and she would live like a queen in that house..they lived
in the city away from this town but she would be happuy.

Mama came in to the room calling Mami to get the tea ready coz the boys family
would be here soon.
Bani and mami went to the kitchen.

After some time Aditya Walia came ..Mama welcomed him'and asked why his son
hadn't come'.Aditya didn't reply


Aditya and Mama spoke for sometime'mama told aditya that he didn't know how to
thank Aditya for coming to his house and stuff..

Mama called Bani to bring the tea''

Bani served them tea'Aditya asked her some questions ..


Finally Aditya said that Bani was going to be his daughter in law'after sometime
Adi went'
The wedding was taking place in a week'

Bani was in her room thinking why would a rich family want her to be the
bahu..and so soon''maybe the son is disabled, crippled or mentally
challenged'.she thought that could be the only reason'but still she didn't want
to get married'she was scared 'she was scared of her wedding night'.she couldn't
take anyone touching her'it bought her flashback'.tears,''whoever this was,..


It was night '..Bani was sleeping'sweating'saying in her sleep-'NO 'NO'..leave
me '

She was getting flashbacks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Great u start a new ff.
like the starting.
Bani scared of physical interaction...bc of her past...what happen...looks very interesting.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey awesome
intro
loved it
please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chap 2

The week passed by very fast…everything was done. Aditya Walia had sent her wedding jodha…a maroonish with golden
works suit……Bani hadn't seen the man she was marrying …he was never at any functions…she didn't even know the name of her future husband.

It was her wedding day now. She looked at her mehndi it was dark….for who do I have this mehndi on my hand for….i don't know his name…how he looks like…a stranger….she hadn't opposed to the wedding coz her mama mami had done a lot for her …she owed it to them….
The wedding was going to take place in the town's hall. Then after the wedding they were e going to the city …which was 2 hours away..

It was 5pm when the wedding started..the pundit asked for the groom to sit on the mundap…Adi called his son….his son had the sehra on so his face couldn't be seen…

His son came murmuring like it matters…. and sat in the mundap then Bani was called she had the palu on her face …she sat on the mundap…

Sindoor was applied the Pheras taken…Bani couldn't see his face …but she was relieved that at least he wasn't disabled….maybe then he had a cleft lips she thought…the wedding was over….the new couple took everyone ashirwaad …Masi included ..it was time for vidai…
Masi and Aditya left earlier then the new couple to welcome them at home.
Bani's husband was waiting for her in the car…after some time she sat beside him…her palu was still on her head covering her face….she was crying ….sniffing all the way to the Walia Mansion…on the way Anu who was Jai's youngest sister asked her if she needed anything to eat or drink… ….Bani just shook her head…. Jigs the other sister wasn't at the wedding .

Bani was too depressed living her home…. to a strangers home. Unknown people ….her coming life…and and no…the wedding night…
.
They reached the WM..Masi was standing there with the aarti plate to greet them …Anu lifted the palu and now they saw Bani's face…Masi told her that she looked just like an angel. They did the rice kicking thing and the red kumkum footsteps thing…But Bani realized that her husband hadn't even turned her way to see her face…

A girl came from a room… She made a face at Bani and commented that the village gawar had come. to destroy her brothers life.. ….
Masi told Bani not to take anything she says into her head.


Masi led Bani and her husband to the sofa..
Masi-"Munna…kitni der se tu yeh sehra pehna betha hai…ab to utaro…"

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part
mab she's married to jai and he is old
great parts pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chap 3

Bani heard her husbands name for the first time....Munna she thought…people from cities used that name???she was Mrs. Bani Munna WALIA…Bani didn't really like the sound of that..

As he lifted the sehra…Bani was looking down on the floor…like a new dulhan…Bani was anxious to see her husbands face. But this wasn't the right time…
The game of finding the ring in the plate was played. Still Bani could not see his face…her shyness didn't want her to see him. And the fact that tonight was…. with him a stranger…a total stranger….Bani had found the ring

Anu and some ladies took Bani to the room…


Bani was sitting on the bed…. shivering inside…she had decided that she will tell her husband that she couldn't have any physical relationship until they completelty knew each other…she was educated and from young age she wanted love marriage someone who understood her and she hoped she had love marriage morte then ever when ….the incident happened…her love would have understood if she told him the truth

. Her parents had died when he was about 14….and they took care of her like their child…she had to marry whoever they chose.


She sat there..Gathering guts to tell that she couldn't have it tonight…how would he react she thought….he would not go against her…..would he??….

15 minutes later she heard something outside the door..Girls teasing her husband…. she heard Anus's voice too. Finally he came in....

Bani's heart was beating fast as he closed the door and locked it...


He came towards the bed...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haila ab kya hoga pls cotninue soon...

getting suspense.. jaldi open karoo...

pls update karoo

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great FF!!!

i love it already!!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sangeeta...............

new one.......great beginning...........


u made jai and bani get married in the beginning and why is jai least bothered...........

what is bani frightened of and her past.........doesnt want physical intereaction with her husband till she know him....

nice........

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi nice ff
so many raaz to be exposed

do continue soon....

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