FF:Kuch Toh Hua Hai :Part 20pg59(end) - Page 4

Love the characters....
👏 👏 👏

Great ff.
loved it.
Awwwwwww.....interesting meeting btw JB...kids are naughty...can't believe they just did that. 😆 😆
plz cont. soon.

lol talk abt irritating they soaked bani again...hahaha good for her...

hmmmmm,,,,jai and bani eyeing each other...agey agey kya hoga ram jaane 😆

cont soon

neetu

wow great part
im guessing their is no Mrs Walia in the picture hmmm 😉
Bani is starting to feel something towards Jai.

plz could u pm me when ever y have updated
thank u

Taj

omg...jai...jai walia...aagaya 😳 😳 😳 lol...this atharva is so cute...poor boy's swimming was almost ruined by bani... ...cant wait for next update...lets see just how much jai 'gets to know' this childrens author... 😉 ...lol...cant wait
JAZ

the second part was even more tasteful to read

kids r really naughty
waitin 4 nxt update

a very interesting meeting and can see the sparks are already flying pls cont soon...........

Originally posted by: davia389

wowo that was funnythanks!,... athrava is cute.. yep.. i love his character😊

pls continue soon. will try! 😉
davia Thanks Davia

Originally posted by: angelrockz

wooow rt....yaaaaas jai gonna start luvin herYep!😉 .....bani doesn't like kids especially atharva 😆 he's going to trouble for her!.....continue soon will try! Thanks hun!

Originally posted by: divya_123

just read both parts
awesome FF dear 👏 👏 👏 Thanks!

really like how the story is going.I'm glad! keep continuingThanks for the comment hun!

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Hey just came across this FF..Lovely start n interesting story..Thanks!So Jai is already a dad..has cute lil twins..Looks like Atharva is a troublemaker. yep!
Haila, Jai pehley hee meeting mein latoo ho gaya 😆 😆 😆 Bani Rani tho uskey touch se freeze ho gayi 😳 😳 😳 that's what happens when JB meet!😉
Hmm..looks interesting..Bani munni is afraid of Papa bear than the kids. 😆 😆 😆 Yeah..lets see what happens next!
Good one..pls continue soon 👏 👏 👏Thanks for the comment hun

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hey Tanu, Hi!

You started a new FF, what a marvelous start? Thank you hun!

I like this Bani, but curious thing is AW, KW are not hers nope!...and I like her fiery character - She sure seems to be a little aloof from the kids! Yea.. but lets see if the kids can chnge that!

AW sounds really cute and naughty... He is! i have fun writing his charater!

Originally posted by: siumi

wow awesome updateThanks! but short 😛 will try and make it longer next time but i cant write long parts!😕
Loved the kids..poor Bani in front of Jai all wet 😆 heheh..
continue soon 😃 😃will try! thanks!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hi hey!
just read yr ff n its gr8 👏 Thanks! i'm glad you liked it!
cont. soonwill try! thanks!

Originally posted by: kripa0521

Great Part,Thanks! cant wait to read what happens next. will try and continue soon!
Kripa.Thanks Kripa![/QUOTE]

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago

Hey

another wonderful update,love the kids.so naughty and very cute.the feelings of both jai and bani were written very well.lookin forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳