Short Story: Eternally Yours Part 2 Pge 4

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cheeze

@cheeze

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Wow, wonderful short story. I am loving this. Aaaaaww the two teen lovers.................sooooooooooooo cute 😳

Please continue soon. Can't wait to read what happens when they meet again. When do they meet, how do they meet, is Jai able to keep his promise of working hard and striving to meet Bani one day/some day 😉 ?

Great work 👏

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

fianlly yeh thread mila
awww JB youngsters in loveeeeeeeeeeeeee
at the tender teenage years how cuteeeeeeeeeeeee
now ab yeh part two jaldi se likh so i find out when and how they meet again
and how both will react
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
continue soon
please
please
please 😃

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mitali patel

@Mitu1228

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: loranlee4u
Omg hinna! How cuteee!!! awww young love!
hope they meet again!
IT's really interesting
i suuggg. you keep it going missy 😆
Continue soon

your sis.
😳 maddi

Then no marriage of urs n Hinnus. Not right. Shes ur sister, so my sali.

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mitali patel

@Mitu1228

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

I likey, but u know that. Told u when read first time. Love n post other part soon.

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cute1228

Then no marriage of urs n Hinnus. Not right. Shes ur sister, so my sali.

that's exactly what i was thinking!! sometimes she says she's married to me, other times she says that she's my sister!! make up ur mind maddi!!! 😆 😆

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Amazing story.. 👏 👏 👏
beautifully written. Emotions are well pennned.
Pls continue with the next part soon..

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Hinna beautiful ff
Very well written 👏
Their friendship😃 😃, first love 😳 , first kiss 😳 😳 .... awesomely described 👏
I loved it 👏
Plz continue ASAP!!!!
I'M WAITING FOR U TO POST NXT UPDATE SOON 😃 😃 😃

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#18

OMG fantastic fanfic! I LOVED the idea of Jai and Bani being teen
sweethearts! I can so totally imagine it. Jai seems so hot and so nice, unlike
the monkeys I have in my school. Why can't we have someone like that in
our school -envious sigh- PLEASE continue SOON!