We Belong Together..27/6-Part 5 page 6

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Hi Everyone,

Since yesterday I have been thinking about all the possible scenerios of how Bani and Jai will end up getting married. As I was posting my prediction yesterday I felt that the prediction had somehow changed into a fan fiction. So with some work on it today and withthe help of our lovely Sabsj I am posting how I feel the story should move on today.

Please do comment to let me know whether I should continue😕.

I'm posting 2 chapters, so be prepared it's long..............Here you go. I'll only post chapter 3 (its ready) if anyone is interested.

Luv Nikita

Chapter 1

Accepting his defeat Jai looked at himself in the mirror. Today was the first day of a new chapter in his life, a new chapter without Bani. From this day onwards life would never be the same, life wouldn't even be worth living.

Jai cursed himself. All those years back how could he have fallen for Pia. Jai hated Pia so much that just the thought of ever touching her again was suicidal. As Jai got dressed all he could think about was Bani…….was this it, the end of there relationship. Jai regretted listening to his conscious, how he could let Bani just walk away from his life….he loved her more then life itself, he needed her. All his life all he ever wanted was love, then once he had it how could he just let it leave. Jai's heart was aching for Bani, just to hold her in his arms and never let her go. It was too late, in a couple of hours she is going become Mrs Aparjit Deb. Jai's body stiffened and jealousy ripped through his body. How could someone else touch her? What will happen when he see's Bani in AD's arms, how will he be able to watch Bani living a married life with someone other then him……Bani was his and always will be……..A tear dropped from his eye, he wiped it away and prayed to God to give him the strength to watch Bani as Mrs Deb.

On the other end of the corridor someone else had tears in her eyes, but these were not tears of sorrow but tears of happiness. Pia stood in front of the large mirror admiring herself in her wedding outfit. Today her dream was finally coming true, after the wedding no one would be able to separate her name from Jai Walia. Mrs Pia Jai Walia, it had a nice ring to it, it was meant to be. Pia smiled, and felt the urge to go and see the man that she loved so much that she ruined all other relationships just to get him.

Pia walked across the corridor and opened the door to Jai's room. There he stood in his sherwani, he looked so handsome. Jai looked over to her and the anger built up inside him.

Pia How do I look Mr Walia?

Jai did not say anything just continued with what he was doing.

Pia Well I have to say that you look gorgues, I'm finding it very difficult to keep my hands off you.

She hugged him from behind, Jai jerked away and with fury he in his eyes said

Jai Pia just get away from me.

Pia Mr Walia what are you saying, in a couple of hours we are going to be husband and wife, how will you keep away from me then?

Pia had a cheeky smile playing on her lips.

Pai You know Mr Walia over 6 years back we were supposed to get married, you fought with everyone to be with me……look at me….today I will be yours. Remember those times Mr Walia when all you could think about was me, making me happy by sending me gifts….you were like a love struck teenager, so eager to get married to me.

Jai closed his eyes in disgust.

Jai I don't regret proposing to you.

Pia's face lightened up, it was working, reminding him of the way that he felt for her.

Jai If I hadn't planned to marry you then Bani may never have been in my life.

Pia looked up in shock.

Pia Yes Mr Walia, why don't you realise that she was in your life because of me. If I hadn't ran away that day you would never have married her. She was never your type, you wanted someone like me beautiful, sophisticated and you ended up with her……plain and simple Bani. She can never meet your expectations.

Jai You're right about one thing. Had I proposed to Bani she would never have agreed to marry me. You see I knew you weren't in love with me but I also knew that I could persuade you with greed and that's what happened. But with Bani money was never more important then love to her and deep down that's what I was looking for in my wife.

After today you will be my wife, but the day that Bani and me got married we became soul mates, and that will never change.

Pia Mr Walia you are forgetting that Bani di's soul mate now is Mr Deb.

Jai turned away from Pia.

Jai I don't care who she gets married to, in my heart she will always be mine and I her's.

Pia lashed out at Jai

Pia Why? Look at me Mr Walia. I can give you everything that she gave you, even more. I love you so much that I can even kill someone for you.

Jai Well that's the difference Pia, you can only think of killing someone, but Bani, she would even kill herself for me, as would I for her.

Pia watched Jai in disbelief. Why was he hurting her so much. She thought that after knowing that di was getting married to someone else Mr Walia would accept this and accept her from the heart.

Jai Don't think about it too much Pia, you will never understand, because even though you say you love me, you aren't even capable of loving anyone, especially the way in which Bani and I love each other.

Pia She doesn't love you, she hates you.

Jai Even in her hate I can only see love. Now please go away, I just want to get this charade over and done with.

Pia walked away as a dejected woman, after everything she done for him he was still rejecting her. After the wedding things would change, he would grow to love her, just the way he grew to love Bani di. Pia wiped away her tears and went back to her room.

Walia mansion was full of guests, the family just stood around, unhappy with what was happening. They watched Jai come down the stairs.

Dadi Aditya why does Jai always have to suffer, isn't he ever going to be happy.

Adi The only time I saw him truly happy was the times he spent with Bani. Ma Bani is his life and without her he is just a body without a soul.

Dadi God, please listen to a mother's prays and give my Jai his happiness. Please God.

Dadi started crying and Adi hugged her.

After a while Karuna and Jigyasa came down the stairs with Pia. Pia had her face hidden with her dupatta. Jigyasa and Karuna were the only people who were happy with this wedding.

They went and sat Pia next to Jai at the mandap. The pandit started the ceremony, the phere's took place and Jai then tied the manglastura around Pia's neck. Jai remembered all his moments with Bani, his wedding, the night they consumed the marriage, Karva Chauth, the day they declared there love for one another and then there re-marriage. This was destiny….for the remainder of his life memories is all Jai was to live with…..memories of Bani.

Jai was brought out of his thoughts by Jigyasa. She nudged him as she lifted Pia's veil slightly so that Jai could apply the sindoor. Jai's hand was shaking, he couldn't do this, this last step would forever separate him from Bani, there was no turning back from this point.

Jigs Bhai Pia is waiting.

Jai thought back to Bani again, she is probably getting married to AD right now and must be happy. Jai thought about stopping the wedding, but just then he looked up at his kids. They were all he had now, and if he wanted to protect them he would have to stay with Pia in a dead marriage.

So without looking at her Jai just filled her maang with sindoor. The pandit did his final chants and pronounced the couple married.

Just then everyone heard screaming from above. They looked up and noticed that Pia was standing at the top of the stairs holding her head.

Pia Stop this wedding, I'm the bride, Mr Walia is getting married to me.

Everyone was shocked including Jai, if Pia was standing upstairs whom did he just get married to.

Jigs Who the hell are you.

Jigs was pointing at the lady under the ghunghat. Pia came down the stairs ranting and raving. Just then slowly the lady lifted the veil and everyone's jaws dropped.

Jai Bani……………..

Chapter 2

Jai couldn't believe it he had just married Bani again, a wide smile spread across his face. Before he could say anything further Pia started screaming again.

Pia No this can't be true, this wedding is false. There is going to be only one Mrs Jai Walia and that's me, I'll deal with you later.

Said Pia while pointing at Bani who in return just smiled at raging Pia.

Pia But first Panditji please start the ceremony, Mr Walia sit down.

Pandit Beta, the ceremony has already taken place, this couple is bound by marriage now.

Pia No, this wedding is false, I don't care what just happened before. Mr Walia, will you please sit down.

Pandit Beta, you are telling a married man to get re-married, I'm afraid this is illegal and I can't be a part of it.

Pia just froze, Jai and Bani were married, once again Bani had taken her love away from her. Rage built up inside her, she looked up at Bani and could see a big smile on her face. She went forward and lifted her hand to slap her. Before Jai could stop her a firm hand grabbed Pia's wrist. It was AD.

Bani just stood there smiling. AD looked over at Jai and said.

AD Walia what kind of a tradition is this that your newly wed wife would get slapped from your mistress.

Jai Deb!!!!!

AD No need to raise your voice Walia. Isn't protecting your wife one of the promises you make to her when you get married, but then saying that you couldn't even protect your first wife, how will you protect your second.

AD then looked at Pia, he was still holding her hand firmly.

AD But like I said to you before Walia you will always find me in-between Durga and the rest of the world, including you Pia.

AD let go of Pia's hand, Pia lowered her eyes. There was something in both AD and Bani's eyes that scared her. Then for the first time that day Bani spoke.

Bani Mr Deb my job here is done, shall we go?

AD Yes Durga, let us go now.

Everyone was shocked, where was Bani going now, didn't she just get married to Jai. Bani could see what everyone was thinking and so she turned to both Jai and Pia.

Bani Yes, Mr Walia I'm going back home to my family, but don't worry I'll be back. After all this is my house now. Before I go though I would like to apologise, because of me the happiest day of your life has now turned into the worst day. But Mr Walia please don't think that I will shatter all your dreams completely. Our room must have been decorated for our first night together, please feel free to spend it with Pia, as your wife I would want you to at least have that much happiness.

Jai was shocked, was Bani saying all this. Did she still believe that Jai wanted Pia, why would she marry him then? What was going? Jai wanted to say so much to Bani but the words were just not coming out. Bani looked at Pia's shocked face.

Bani It's not your fault Pia, it's fate. You were never destined to be Mrs Jai Walia, I'm sorry to say, once a keep always a keep. Make the most of tonight, because now we will be constantly meeting each other and this night may never come again.

Bani felt so good; she could see both Jai and Pia hiding their faces in shame. Bani had waited for this day for so long, she wanted to carry on and say something else but then thought that even getting too much of something good can be bad for you. AD on the other hand was also amazed just like the rest; he couldn't believe that Durga had the courage to say this to Jai and Pia. At that point AD realised that Bani was truly dead and the person standing in front of him was his Durga.

AD Shall we go Mrs Durga Jai Walia?

Bani Yes Mr Deb.

Both AD and Durga walked out with there heads high……….This was the first step towards Jai and Pia's destruction, and they were victorious.

Hi Everyone,

I have updated with chapter 3, I hope it meets expectations. Also I have posted a note on page 4 to say thank you to all of you that left a comment.

Thank you and enjoy.

Nikita

Chapter 3

Jai was pacing from one end of his room to the other replaying everything that had just happened…..Bani was his wife, for the 3rd time he had just married her again. A weird feeling pulled at his heart, memories of the time when Bani didn't want him to go to London and declared her love for him kept playing in his head "I love you Mr Walia" those were the words that had sent Jai in a whirl will of emotion…...

Jai I love you to Bani………….

Rano stood at the door, not wanting to break Jai from his thoughts. She could tell that he was thinking about Bani. He had a small smile playing his lips, his eyes closed, and then she heard the words "I love you to Bani" coming straight from his heart. Just then his eyes shot open and the smile disappeared. His face became rigid and his body stiffened.

Rano Mr Walia, what happened?

Jai Rano what just happened out there?

When I saw Bani's face under the ghunghat I couldn't believe my luck. It was like all my dreams coming true in just that split second, and then Deb and Bani saying all that stuff about Pia and me. How could she Rano?

Rano Mr Walia how can you forget that whatever didi had said was exactly what she was made to see. Five years ago she was shown by Pia and by our actions that you don't love her, and that you sent her to a mental asylum just to be with Pia.

Jai I know Rano that's what Pia made her see and I can understand her hatred towards me, but then why would she marry me?

Rano Simple Mr Walia……..so that Pia doesn't marry you. She wants to ruin both of you, so how could she let you get married and lead a happy life!!!!

Jai sat down on the sofa. He was tired of being a mere puppet in Pia's hands, tired of seeing only hatred in the eyes that once taught him the meaning of love, tired of these games that AD was playing with him, and lastly tired of failing every attempt to bring back his love.

Jai So revenge brought her back to me? He said with a low voice.

Rano Well not just revenge Mr Walia. Jai looked up at Rano confused.

Rano Krishna and Atharva. It was all a part of my plan. Jai looked at Rano in astonishment.

Rano Mr Walia after you told me yesterday that you didn't tell didi the truth because you want her to be happy and you think that Mr Deb will keep her happy I approached him. After talking to him I realised that Mr Deb wants to punish you for something and has been using my didi in the process. I got thinking that how can that man make didi happy? Once he has used her he will just throw her away.

Jai thought for a moment, he never thought about that. He had just assumed that over the years Deb had fallen in love with Bani, I mean who wouldn't?

Rano Mr Walia it is possible that Mr Deb has fallen in love with didi, but after talking to him it seemed as though he has been waiting for a long time to carry out his revenge on you, so I don't think he would let love ruin his determination. Didi was with him for the last five years, obviously Mr Deb knew who she was, and he also knew what happened five years ago...

Jai Both Bani and Deb hate me so how did you convince them to go ahead with your plan?

Rano Well firstly Mr Walia I didn't approach Bani and Deb but I approached Durga and Deb. Jai gave her a confused look.

Jai She's Bani not Durga?

Rano I know she is Bani, but for her Bani died five years back and now she is Durga. If I had approached her as Bani she would never have listened to me, but when I approached her as Durga she was willing to listen. I indirectly told her that whoever would marry you would legally be the mother of your kids-Athrva and Krishna. So if Pia got married to you then Athrva and Krishna would call her mama, and if Bani was ever to re-appear getting her kids would be impossible. She probably does not remember that she had signed any kind of adoption papers.

Jai And?

Rano Well after that didi walked away I knew she would be up to something as she went straight to Deb. They spoke for a while and then I saw Deb a little later giving one of the servants a bottle and some money. After that I just left everything in the hands of God and just prayed that it would go the way I wanted it to go.

Jai Rano you are my saviour, you have no idea what you have done for me. Thank you.

Rano Please Mr Walia you are embarrassing me by saying thank you. After didi went away from our lives I have always looked upon you as my family. I know that deep down didi loves you and you love her. I just want to see her back in this house and the whole family happy.

Jai I'm sure Rano, thanks to you, that will happen. Now that I have married Durga Pia will not be able to take the kids away from us. I will speak to my lawyer and get those papers taken care of. The court will always favour a complete family over just Pia. I will then tell Bani the truth and everything will be like it used to be.

Rano Not so fast Mr Walia, we shouldn't get ahead of ourselves. Pia can go to any extent to get what she wants. We need to tread carefully. For the moment I think we should let Pia stay here and not let her be suspicious of anything. Speak to your lawyer and get him to start the proceeding but continue to let Pia think that she can still blackmail you with the papers. You must have heard of the saying Mr Walia that keep your friends close and your enemies even closer. We have to keep an eye on her; she may try and harm didi or the kids.

Jai I agree, but I have to speak to Bani and clear the air. You heard her downstairs didn't you, she thinks that I have maintained a physical relationship for the last five years; I can't let her continue believing this.

Rano I understand Mr Walia but do you think that didi will listen. She will think that because she stopped your wedding both you and Pia have come up with another plan to get rid of her. It will take quite some time for her to start trusting anyone. So I think that. Also even if she did believe you to an extent do you think that Deb will just stand and watch you take her away? He's proved today that he will be standing by didi's side every step of the way.

Jai thought Rano was right, Deb would never let Bani separate from Durga but now Jai was determined that he was going to bring Bani back. Yesterday he had let Bani walk away from his life because he loved her, today she came back, for whatever reason, but she came back. This was enough for him, they are destined to be together and now Jai was going to do whatever he could to get her…….by hook or by crook!!!!

Rano Mr Walia I will keep an eye on Pia. No doubt after today she will do everything in her power to keep you away from didi and we need to know what she plans. As you for you, your task is a lot tougher………..Didi needs reminding just how much you lover her and how much she loves you. I don't know how you will do it, but I'm sure you will. The ball is in our court now and we need to play carefully.

Jai smiled at Rano and patted her on the head affectionately.

Jai don't worry about that Rano Bani belongs with me……she belongs in the house with us, and that's exactly what's going to happen.

Rano smiled and as she was about to walk out Jai stopped her and said

Jai you know Rano you are just like Bani. She will be so proud of you, she has done a good job raising you, and you have done a great job in raising our kids. You have become the sister that I never had. Both Bani and I are very lucky that we have you.

Rano We are family Mr Walia and we stick together no matter what.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantastic start Nikita!! 👏

Do post hte next parts too!

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Hey hun, you have done a fab job, so don't even fret about it. It's a great plot, much better than actual KS. Keep posting your doing great.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you Sabsj, I felt better after I got some feedback from you.

So thank you once again for proof reading it.

Nikita
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowow Wonderful job, such a good senario ! 👏
Now after reading it i'm sure something like that will happen . 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mine!! will be bk to read 😉

Henna x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rocking start Nikita!! 👏
I agree with Sheena...it's fantastic! 😉
I truly wish this is what happens for real!
Pls post chapter 3 ASAP!

V.
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, nikita,

I love it, it's fantastic, I do wish this happens like you wrote, it's what we all want!! Now we have to see what the wman who is scorned will do?

What about the kids, legally they are still Pia's, hope she won't do the runner on them!!

A beautiful job, my dear! I applaud you, sincerely!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!! that was a great start!! i really liked it.. 😉 you kept to the storyline and never 'went off on one' 😆

Keep up the great wrk.. cant wait for part 3 😛 how i hope its soon... hehe

Now i see revengeful Bani.. in the serial you cant

Henna x
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omg omg omg !!!!!!!!!!
this is awesome............I hope this wud happen 👏
i wud love to see pia crying 😈 and a revengeful bani
keep up good work and pls continue soon 😉

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