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Jazmin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#131

haila...great part...but short part...hope you update again soon
JAZ

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mitali patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#132

That was a great part, loved!!! Dr. Kapoor is so nice!!! It was short, but really good!!!

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Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#133

hey hinu..
that was an awesome update..
but it was to short
not cool at all.
u cant do that..
hehe.
.jk jk..

continue asap
please

cheers
❤️Nirxxx

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khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#134

Great part but too short 😉 😊 .....hope Dr. Kapoor is going to help Bani out.......please continue soon 😊

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cheeze

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Posted: 18 years ago

#135

Sorry guys for the short part, that was all I could come up with.................. I know it's not what you all expected but Hinna MADE me write it......... 😛

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: jnawaz
haila...great part...but short part...hope you update again soon
JAZ

like i said, all criticisms go to cheeze 😆 😆 😉

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mitali patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: cheeze
Sorry guys for the short part, that was all I could come up with.................. I know it's not what you all expected but Hinna MADE me write it......... 😛

It was great, I loved it!!!

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: cheeze
Sorry guys for the short part, that was all I could come up with.................. I know it's not what you all expected but Hinna MADE me write it......... 😛

HEY!! don't blame this on me!!!

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Isha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#139

that was an awesome update!! contiue soon!! but omg u make ur parts soo freakin small!! u make the next one long plz!! i am suprised nir hasnt asked yet..cuz she is the first to complain on such matters 😆 but anyways if not nir then moi...hahah so ya update soon!! lets say tom lolz

cheers
hinna ( 😆 😆 hehhehe)

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#140

Okay, so, before you all complain about another short and crappy update (according to me), i'd like to apologize and say that i didn't have time to write much as my mom's yelling at me to go to sleep 😆 😆

Part Ten:

As with the beginning of every new day, Rano fed all the children, and got them ready for the happenings of the day. Today, she and Mausi had decided that the children needed new clothes. They were, after all, growing children. They had decided to take them shopping for a couple hours, and then go out to lunch at a nearby restaurant. That way, Mausi and Rano would get a chance to talk, while the children would get a nice outing.

Bani had decided to get some fresh air, as she felt claustrophobic in that house. Although it was very spacious, it felt as if she got more suffocated with every minute that she stayed there. She needed a change in scenery, and thus decided to take a small walk, while also getting some errands done. She had just moved in with Dr. Kapoor not so long ago, and still didn't have many clothes of her own. She had been borrowing some of Dr. Kapoor's clothes, as they had coincidentally been the same size. She realized that it didn't seem right to be borrowing someone else's clothes, and therefore decided to buy some of her own clothes, as all her clothes were still at the Walia Mansion.

Bani was walking down the street, looking at the displays of the many shop windows. How they attracted attention from all the onlookers with their extensive design and use of color. She was just one of the many who was appalled by their beauty. She finally pulled herself away from the clothes and decided to grab a bite to eat. She hadn't eaten in hours, and all the walking had made her tired. She went into the nearby restaurant and sat at a table in the far left corner of the room, next to the window. She was looking outside the window, admiring the beautiful scenery, when the waitress came by to take her order. She ordered some daal chawal and a cup of tea.

As she was waiting for her order to come, she was looking at the people around her. How their lives seemed to be filled with so much happiness and joy. She wished her life could be as good as theirs, but it seemed as though fate had other things planned for her. She was pulled out of her reverie when she noticed someone familiar. She saw Mausi and Rano with three children. She recognized her children almost instantly. Her first reaction was to run to Mausi and Rano and hug them, but then she remembered what they had done to her. The accusations that were thrown upon her during the court room trial was deeper than just words. They pierced her heart until her very soul and existence was ripped into pieces. She would have expected it from anyone else, but the fact that the two people that were closest to her also hurt her the most was what kept her from going up to them.

Fate seemed to love to play games with her. Not only were her children taken away from her, but they were put right in front of her where she could neither hold nor touch them. Bani tried to stay as discreet as possible, which wasn't hard considering that both Mausi and Rano were busy attending to the kids. Bani couldn't help but stare at her children. Bani had had enough. She decided, that as a mother, remaining quiet while such injustices were happening would be an insult to all the mothers around the world. Being a mother, she had a right to see her children and her children had a right to be with their mother. This relationship between mother and child was far beyond any enmity or hatred harbored within her.

All comments, good or bad, are welcome 😃

Edited by ~Unforgettable~ - 18 years ago

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