FF- Saathi Re- Part 6-Page 24,April10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Everyone I am here with an FF I plan to start this one and finish it! LOL. I will start of with the introduction and be back with the first part in a few minutes!

Take Care, and comments would be awesome

Part 1: Page 1

Part 2:Page 8

Part 3: Page 12

Part 4:Page 17

Part 5: Page 21

Part 6: Page 24

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Saathi Re- Introduction

Jai has finally arrived back in Mumbai, he is driving home from the airport talking to Bani. None of this bomb blast or Pia losing her memory didnt happen! Everything is the same!

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When you say those three little words,
"I Love You."
I just want to freeze the moment,
And hug you forever…………..by :TheWorldFell&UWerentThere

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Bani: Mr. Walia, when will you be home?

Jai: Coming baba baba, only five minutes and we will once again be together, and this time I will never leave you!

Bani: Mr.Walia I have missed you so much. Massi, Karuna aunty, Dadi, Adi uncle, everyone has showered me with so much love, but I missed you the most!

Jai: Bani I have missed you too, you have been in my memories through my whole trip, I couldn't concentrate on any of my work, if only you were with me~

Bani: Your so sweet!

Jai: That I am.

Bani: So how was your trip all in all?

Jai: It was good, but again, if only you were with me.

Bani: I just can't wait to see you, I have prepared all your favorite dishes, worn your favorite saari, and even that of your favorite color, Oh Mr. Walia, I love you so much!

Jai: Bani, I love you……....................................................*Cr ash*

Jai: Baniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

Bani: Mr Walia??????

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I hope you all liked my introduction, 😆I will be back with the first part in a few minutes! I hope to get lots of comments on this FF, it will be short and sweet! Happy or Sad ending Muje ni Pata! J😉😆

Take Care!

Anyone who wants a PM when I update, just tell me😊!

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melonie thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Me first 😃 😊 , Will reply in detail latter 😳 . Saving the spot. Now will go back to reading it 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏Yaar nush....u just ace my jaan..in siggies and now even at FF...total ekta maayi ishtyle...this killing suspence...pahlei meethi meethi baatei aur phir crash and then a nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!....awww it was shooo cute....u rock my jaan...but dont keep these lovebirds more far anymore...waisei bhi in real KS they are never gonna get together...atleast in ur FF....!!awwwwwwww continue soon my jaan...and u simply rocked!!

My goodness woman, where are your blessed fingers... I could kiss them!!

"Bewitching" sweetie...

Keep'em coming!

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Edited by sughra2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No sad ending, THAT IS A WARNING 😆. I am tired of crying, don't make me more emotional 😆 😭.
Ok back to the FF, It was really a good start, Man why did you have to make a car crash yaar 😭 . Hope he will be perfectly fine 😃 .
Ok hope you will update soon 🤗 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Namaste Nushin Ji

FABALOUS Intro,just loved it.very sweet and cute.sweetu no sad ending,as you already know I am jani deewani.hope jai is okay,im missing him.cant wait for the part 1,really excited. 😊


aapki preetu 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey!

Great start! really looking forward to read more of this.

I hope Jai will be ok.

Update soon!

Anam

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aw they had a cute conversation! but then crash 😲 hopefully Jai didnt get hurt! Continue soon,


Maro
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Saathi Re- Part one

She could hear the sound or nurses and doctors talking

Bani couldn't take it anymore, this wasn't happening, why to her, why to her Jai?

Bani Praying silently: Please let my Jai be okay, please let my Jai be okay, please let my Jai be okay please……

Doctor: Mrs. Walia, Mr. Walia is now unconscious

Bani didn't even let him finish and ran into the room to see the love of her life!

Bani: Mr. Walia, Mr. Walia, How are you? How did this happen? Oh no your hea….

Jai: Bani….why are you asking me this, it should be Pia worried for me not you, after all it is your sister that I am in love with.

Bani: Huh? What are you talking about Mr. Walia?

Jai: Meri Pia princess kaha hai?

Bani: Mr. Walia what has gotten into you, don't you remember that Pia has betrayed us, she has betrayed us both,

Mr Walia please!

Jai: Bani stop your nonsense, I don't remember anything about that, all I remember is Pia being the love of my life!

Bani: I don't know what you are saying, why are you doing this to me, you just told me on the phone you loved me, why are you saying this now?

Bani is almost on the verge of tears as she calls the doctor.

Bani: Doctor, why isn't he remembering me, that he loves me doctor why? ( Bani now shaking the doctor)

Doctor: I'm sorry Mrs. Walia, I was just coming to tell you, Mr. Walia has suffered partial memory loss, he does not remember anything that has happened in the past year. Seeing that you only got married a few months ago, he doesn't remember.

Bani: W-w-w-hat…..Bani just breaks down on the floor crying.

Bani to God: Why have you done this to me, what have I done to deserve this….. Kyun… Kyun???

The Doctor goes and informs the rest of the parivaar about this, they are all just as devastated as Bani.

Doctor: It is best not to inform Mr. Walia about this, as right now he needs to get everything he wants!

From the room Jai is still yelling for Pia.

Jai( Raging Bull voice): Meri Pia kaha hai?

Bani has no other choice but to call Pia.

Bani on the phone….

Bani: P-p-p-p-ia, Please come to the hospital don't ask any questions just come, with that she hangs up the phone, holds the wall for balance, and starts crying wondering again and again why she has been so severely punishedL

Pia arrives at the hospital, and Bani gives her a brief on what has happened.

Bani: P-pia we need to keep him happy (still sobbing), and he only remembers until when he was in love with you! Pia you have to help him get through this, and once he is better we can tell him the truth. Pia just do this once thing.

Pia: Haan Di, (Silently) Aree Wa, I never expected this to come, it's amazing how luck always comes my way, and Di don't think I will ever let Mr.Walia know the truth, I will use this lie to my advantage and Mr.Walia will show so much hatred to you that you will wonder why you are even living!

With that Pia leaves for Jai's room, and goes to a very happy Jai upon seeing Pia! He holds her in a tight embrace, leaving Bani to watch, shiver and cry silently to herself……

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"When you left I lost a part of meIt's still so hard to believeCome back baby please 'causeWe belong togetherWho else am I gonna lean on when times get roughWho's gonna talk to me on the phoneTill the sun comes upWho's gonna take your placeThere ain't nobody betterOh baby babyWe belong together"***********Next Update- Longer- Promise!
Edited by strawberry007 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great intro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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please cont soon!!!!!
thanks
sunju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sughra2

👏Yaar nush....u just ace my jaan..in siggies and now even at FF...total ekta maayi ishtyle...this killing suspence...pahlei meethi meethi baatei aur phir crash and then a nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!....awww it was shooo cute....u rock my jaan...but dont keep these lovebirds more far anymore...waisei bhi in real KS they are never gonna get together...atleast in ur FF....!!awwwwwwww continue soon my jaan...and u simply rocked!!

My goodness woman, where are your blessed fingers... I could kiss them!!

"Bewitching" sweetie...

Keep'em coming!

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Maan you are just too sweet. You are just as ace, and talented! Thanksss sooo much your the best!😊

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