FF: U R My Sunshine: Updt Ch 20, pg 118 - Page 50

i know i'm supposed to be fainting and all, but i can't help shuddering too... sabs this is possibly one of the darkest scenes you have ever written, i am in absolute awe!! 👏

bani's sleeping pills, jai's disgust but instinctive protection of her... quite obviously a regular occurence for him!! him sobering her up and that final paragraph... please saby i cant take much more, stop making me so upset!! 😭 😭 😭

ab bhi keh rahi hoon, we need to re-evaluate this guru-cheli equation!!! 👏

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honestly. I feel BAD for Bani, my poor baby
awww sweet of him to help, but he basically just stripped her 😆
aww both in the showerr 😉 im surprised he didn't do anything 😉 😉 But yeah ..Poor kid mann..lost evertything

Hi Sabsj,

That was a brilliant part. Poor Bani...for a second there she must have really thought that Jai was taking advantage of the state that she was in.....I'm sure he enjoyed it😆.

Please update soon, I need to know what he wants to talk to her about now...he's already wrecked her life!!!

Nikita

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i hate Jai to cause all this pain to Bani. How could he do such a thing, and be selfish. He could accept a conjoint guard.
He destroyed her life and dare to see her or try to talk with her.
I really don't know but i think in Bani shoes even if he's handsome in first i will think at the fact that he takes my life away so i will get him out of my home asap and my life.
I will hete him from the bottom of my heart. Just imagine you have only one paerson in your life and someone comes and get him away how will you react.
Si i still hate Jai, i think she should go visit Jai and ignore him and talk with him only for the visit and show him how much she hates him.
I'm sorry but i hate injustice even if it's a ff i know it happen in real life.
Excellent update really well written. 👏
Hope you will update soon dear. 😉
Take care and please continue to pm me when you update thanks 😉
Take care
Diey

omg...im so late in commenting and reading...its been one h*ll of a weekend and one h*ll of a monday...wont get into the nitty gritty details...but to sum up...life sucks...i so needed your ff...it was like my escape for today...i really needed it...thanks shabbo...great update as usual...jai is getting on my last nerve...ok not going to ven out my personal anger on jai now... 😕 😕 update again soon yaar...
JAZ

Originally posted by: swatinarang

i already updated yaar..............aisi kaise i could make swati wait, no way.

Originally posted by: divya_123

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as usual fab part sabby
aww kabir i feel really bad for him barre ke jagro mein poor kid is getting punished

continue soon 😃

thanks divoo, will try and update soon