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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow great story 😃 ... Didn't know that there were any other member supporting Bani besides me and Reema 😛
You say that Pia is going to suffer like hell, but Mr. Walia is going to marry her ... I don't agree with divorce, there could be another way of Mr. Walia have the child, why divorcing Bani 😡 😭
What is going on Bani's mind? Hope that she finds someone who supports her on this moment!!!

Brilliant, gr8, wonderful, beautiful part 👏 👏 👏
Please continue soon 😉

BTW i think that friend name was Sonya 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

Wow great story 😃 ... Didn't know that there were any other member supporting Bani besides me and Reema 😛

thanx for wonderful comments nancy, even i was not aware that there r many people who support bani in the way i support her.😊


You say that Pia is going to suffer like hell, but Mr. Walia is going to marry her ... I don't agree with divorce, there could be another way of Mr. Walia have the child, why divorcing Bani 😡 😭

u know i call that thing jaigiri or walia buddhi, but have some faith in me 😉, there r going to be surprises for u in my ff.


What is going on Bani's mind? Hope that she finds someone who supports her on this moment!!!

don't worry bani's happiness is first in my mind even before pia's suffering and she will be what she wants to be and not what other wants her to be.

Brilliant, gr8, wonderful, beautiful part 👏 👏 👏

thanx.
Please continue soon 😉

i will.

BTW i think that friend name was Sonya 😊

yaar frankly i was writing jai again and again only jaya came for my mind and i have written that only. but i think u r right may be sonya or sonia was her name.

swati

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Fab part.
like the new Bani.
how I am Bani's supporter even before JB camper....loved it.
Oh I give my full support to Bani......if she wants abortion then that the thing......like the new stubborn, revenge seeker Bani.
can't wait for next part.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please cont. soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

Arre meri sherni…u writing a ff… cool…ab humme bhi mauka mila hai comment karne ka!!! 😆 😉

hi

today I was feeling like writing something and one story was coming into my mind for few days. So I am writing a short FF and will try to end it soon and I am a very bad writer so please just bear me and if u don't like then please give ur comments or send me PM so that I can discontinue this. in my ff i can only promise happiness to my angel bani, pain to pia, and JW i still have to decide. Actually my motivation for writing this story is someone from IF only. Hey its good that ur writing…I don't think u will be bad writer…definetly won't be as bad as me…😆 and as u promise to be angel to Bani and pain for Pia…I'm happy and reading this ff.😊 As for Jai..u haven't decided…awwww…but he's such a cutie pie!!! 😳

This story starts from where yesterday's episode ended (March 8, 2007) Haven't seen this episode…but I'm following anyways!! 😆

JW has gone to hospital to collect bani's report from yesterday checkup and pia is also there getting her treatment and after seeing pia over there he also follows her while she enters doctor's chamber, he just stay on the door and try to hear what is going on inside. Why do these sisters have to visit the same hospital!!! He's gonna bump into Pia ki bacchi all the time…and that doesn't sound good!! 😕

Pia: Doctor what is wrong with me, I don't want anything to happen to my child. Doctor is there any complications to my pregnancy and whether my child is healthy or not? As if u care!!!

Doctor: Pia u r having a complicated pregnancy because of ur earlier abortion and u will be required to undergo a lot of tests and u will have to take special precautions during ur pregnancy and u shld be mentally and physically fine to carry this pregnancy safely. So does Jai know that she had an abortion???

Pia: Doctor I cannot tell u that how important this child is for me and all my future planning depends on this child only as I have lost all the relations because of this child and now I can get back all what I want from my life by having this child in my life only,. But I don't have enough money to pay for my bills, please help me out with this.

Doctor: Pia don't worry about money as Mrs. Walia ur sister has agreed to pay all ur bills and that is why we have carried out all the tests and we r continuing with ur therapy. So don't worry for that at all as all ur bills will be forwarded to her and she has already deposited 4 lakh with us for ur treatment.Bani, I know she is ur sister but really this women is sooo heartless…I would think twice about helping her out…theres a limit to everything!!

Pia is overwhelmed and gives a look(and I feel like slapping her). I feel like slapping her too…isski toh mein!!! 😡

From there pia goes to her friend (friend who invited 3 sisters for her marriage and told her that she can get whatever she wants from life and let me assume his name was jaya as I don't remember her name) and JW is still following her. She meets Jaya in coffee shop and there pia and jaya are having a talk and JW is also listening while sitting on back table. Oh yeah…I remember that friend…naam mujhe bhi yaad nahin hai…but kitni bolti thi woh kuch zyaada hi zabaan chalti thi…kya kya dala uss pia ke dimaag mein!!!

Jaya: Pia how r u and what has happened to u, u look so pale while in pregnancy u shld be extra glowing.

Pia: jaya u know whose child I am carrying, I am carrying JW child and this child is my key to walia's empire.

Jaya: How could u do this to bani, I just cannot believe u that u have ruined life of ur own sister who raised u like mother.

Pia: I don't think that I have done anything wrong and it was only u who told me that I can get whatever I want and I shld try to get that by hook or crook.Yes blame her…she started it didn't she!!! 😆

Jaya: pia I told u to make ur life and not to ruin bani's life, I don't how a sister can do this and I just hate u for this and tell me what will happen when this child will come what u r gonna tell him about his father and whether JW is ready to accept this child and leave bani.

Pia: Right now he is not on talking terms with me and don't want to talk to me as bani di is also pregnant and he is busy taking care of her, but I know once this child will come he will come back to me and he won't go back to di for his lifetime.High hopes dumb girl!!!

Jaya: What will happen if he don't accept this child? Then what u will do and how u will be able to raise that child.

Pia: I have thought about that also, if he won't accept that child as his and won't give me all the privileges of being Mrs. Pia Walia and won't divorce bani di then if child will be a son I will hand over him to underworld people to make him the biggest gunda of this world and if in that case child turns out to be a girl, I will handover or sell her to some one in red light area and will ensure that she becomes number 1 call girl of india. So that will be my revenge if I am not given my rights by JW.
HAILA…yeh pia!!!!!! Damn her…is this child only Jai's not hers???? Evil women kahin ki!!!! 😡 😡 😡 Gunda ya dhandhe waali banayegi…disgusting!!!! Jai…just finish her off right now!!!

Jaya: Pia how can one mother think of doing this to her child, I just hate u and I don't want to have any further relations with u and please don't ever try to contact me or meet me for me u r dead and now I don't know any pia as when u can do this to ur mother like figure bani then what u can do to me and then she slaps her around 6 times and says ur a bad name for womanhood.sirf 6 slaps…nooooooo…need more six more coming from me!!! 😡

While Jw was listening he feels sharp pain in his heart (u know he is hypertensive, diabetic, and suffering from a number of other disorders also).and he makes a decision about his life and then he goes back to WM with that decision.Haila ab phirse palti toh nahin khayega yeh banda after hearing all that??? 😕 She's obviously rattled him!!!

Jai: Bani I need to talk to u about our relationship and my relationship with pia.

Bani: Mr. Walia I don't want to talk anything about pia. I don't even want to here her name!!!

Jai: But bani I want to talk about pia as she is my would be wife and I want divorce from u and I want to marry pia as soon as possible. Bani I know u r quite strong and u will be able to take care of our child, but pia is not that mature and she won't be able to handle the responsibility of a child alone and she need my shoulders for that and that is why I just want to divorce u ASAP and marry pia.Right now I'm Mad!!! Jai are u crazy!!!!!! U wanna divorce Bani for that urghhhh!!!! Aurat ke naam par kalank!!! Pia couldn't handle responsibility

Bani just lost all her color after hearing all this and just drops on floor with a thud, and then JW takes her in his arms and put her on the bed and covers her with blanket and then he speaks to himself bani I am so sorry I am once again hurting u, but I cannot tell u the reason that what pia will do to my child if I won't marry her and I want u also to move on with life and have happy life with ur child and that is only possible if u will think that I never really loved u and I always loved pia and thinking all this JW goes to meet maasi and karuna.Jai plzzzz don't do this…I'm gonna cry u can't leave Bani!!!

JW: Maasi and karuna its good that u both r here as I want to talk to u and then he tells them what pia will do if he won't marry her and then he tells them that he has asked bani for a divorce and now again she is not feeling well. So please take care of her, but don't tell her the real reason behind divorce as I want her to leave with peace in mind that at least she is separating from a person who never ever loved her and with that JW starts crying and then maasi and karuna also losses their power and starts crying and then karuna goes to bani's room to meet her. Now I'm crying even more!!!!

Meanwhile JW calls tarun and tell him to bring the divorce papers he has earlier made and tells him to come within 2 hours and in 2 hours tarun is there with papers and then JW calls bani and signs those paper and tells her to sign those papers and then with a blank look on her face bani also signs those papers. (on other hand JW tells tarun to prepare pushkar's and pia divorce papers as well).

(JW is thinking in his mind that bani I know that u will raise our child in best possible way and will give her or him high morals and values in life as ur not like pia).Awwwwww…but still…can't u secretly kill this Pia off instead…I'd be much happier!!!

With that bani leaves WM with a suitcase in her hand and …………..Swati…ur ff is so sad…I'm crying all for that Pia…damn her!!!

Tell me how u find this story and if I will get ur feedback then only I will be continuing this ff. so all of u r welcome with ur belans, jootas, and all other things. Please do comment even criticism is welcome.
Fantastic start my sweet billi…👏 want u to continue now…I'm curious to know where the story will go!!!
Taz!!! 😊

Swati

Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

Hey back again…blimey…I'm in some mood today…reading and commenting on ff's like crazy…😆 ab aa gaye hoon toh jhelo mujhe…🤣

PART 2

so here is part 2 of my ff:

Jai and bani went to court for one final hearing and signing final papers (process before proceeding for registration of divorce) and there:

Jai: Bani I know that I am again hurting u but I have taken this decision after thinking about life of everyone and I want to be with pia and take care of her child and I know that u will take great care of our child and just hope that u will be a great mother.

Bani: Mr. Jai Walia how u can think of that after what u have done to me. U r most disgraceful man I have came across in my life. Do u think that I will give birth to a Walia who will make others suffer in life, just don't be under any delusions Jai walia as I am gonna abort this child and I don't want to have any memories or any relationship with u any further. Bani told Jw everything with any expression on her face and a blank look and all the love that used to be there in her eyes for JW was not there and this was the first time that he was taking his full name. Haila!! Bani has given him an even bugger shock…abortion???? 😲 😲

Jai: Bani u can't do this as that child is part of u also as mine and I know that u r not heartless and u won't to any such thing. Yeah Bani…u wouldn't would u…plzzzz don't kill Krishna!!!

Bani: Jai Walia do u think that I will take care of ur child and what will happen when he or she will ask about his father and why he left me? I know u always loved pia and even in me u tried to see pia by giving me a western look, so its high time that I have accepted with my full heart the real truth that u only loves pia and u only cared for me as u wanted to have a child and now when u r having child from pia u r going to marry her. Thanx for showing me reality Jai walia and I won't forget all these things even for a single second as ur treatment to me is going to be my biggest strength in my life and with that she left the court.

Just before leaving she called JW and as JW turned to her side;

Bani: Jai walia I want a favor from u.

Jai(feels very elated and happy): Bani I can do anything for u, just tell me what u want from me.

Bani: Jai walia I don't want to have any relation with u or ur family and I just want u and ur family to never come in my life again and if in future if we cross each others path then it would be better that we meet as a stranger as I am gonna start a new fresh life and I don't want any of my bad memories coming in my way.

Jai: Bani if u want this then okay with me and I will tell others also (jai to himself bani wherever u will go my eyes will follow u to take care of u as I love u and only u). Awwww…I can't take this separation…its torture!! 😔Tu jahaan jahaan chalegi mera saaya..saath hoga!!!

Tarun: Bani I know u must be feeling bad, I don't know how jai can do this to u. I always thought that he is soulmate and he is in deep love with u, but now I am feeling ashamed even to call him my friend. I am ur friend and I will be there to help u in anyway and u r most welcome at my place anytime.

Bani: Tarun thanx for ur concern, but I think that now I have learned a new lesson in life and I just want to take my life my way, the way I wanted my life to be before my mother died and from today bani walia has died and a new bani is born.

With that as she comes on footsteps of court rano is standing there along with varun waiting for her to come down stairs.

Rano: Bani di I am also leaving WM along with u as I don't want to be those GFNs and I hate them when they can do this to u, u can think of what they will do to me and varun.

Bani: Rano u have to take care of varun and I want u also to start from beginning and if u feel that u can leave sahil's memory here only then only I can take u along with me, otherwise I have nothing to do with walia or bali's anymore and I am finished with them and don't want anything in my life that reminds me of them.

Rano: Di ur and Mr. Walia's marriage was not because of choice or love, but was a mere obligation so u can forget those memories, but my marriage to sahil was a love marriage and I just cannot live without his memories. So it will be better that we part our ways and I just wish u best of luck for ur future.

BREAKING OF 3 SISTERS AND THEIR RELATION.(but whether the love they r having in their heart for each other will also die, hard to say. Even I have doubts about that…despite all the hatred Bani may show towards Pia…her heart always says something else!!

Bani has made a decision in her life that the pain of betrayal she is feeling right now, he will give same pain to JW also and with that in mind she went to her gynecologist.

Doctor: How r u bani, u looks somewhat weak and pale, is everything okay with u.

Bani: Doctor I am absolutely fine and there is nothing wrong with me.

Doctor: Then why u r here as today u r not having any scheduled visit.

Bani: Doctor I am here to have an abortion ASAP.

Doctor: What? Bani who could u think about this at this stage and I cannot do abortion at this stage as it is pretty late and I cannot risk ur life.

Bani: Doctor this is my life and I want to live my life in my own way.

Doctor: Bani have u spoken to Mr. Walia about this.

Bani: yes doctor I have informed him also about this decision of mine.

Doctor: Bani no way I can do this at this late stage and even I am warning u that having abortion at such stage will be a very high risk for ur life, so u shld not even think about this and just give a second thought to ur decision.

Bani: Doctor ur not the only one doctor and I have to get it done anyway and I will go to some other doctor and with that bani left doctor's Clinic.

As soon as bani left the clinic, doctor called up Mr. Walia.

Doctor: Mr. Walia I am ur wife gynecologist calling if u remember.

Jai: yes doctor I do remember, is everything fine, bani is fine na.

Doctor: Mr. Walia ur wife was just here moments before for abortion and she told me that even u r aware of this and I have told her that having abortion at this stage can risk her, her life, but she is adamant to go for that and she is not listening to my advice.

JAI: Doctor just don't do her abortion and some how I will talk to her.

Doctor: Mr. Walia u can stop me but she has already told me that she will be going to some other clinic for that now, so u better take care of this issue ASAP.

Jai: Thanx doctor for telling me.

With this jai calls up aditya to make sure that no one in Mumbai does bani's abortion, but he is not aware of what bani is planning and going to do to give him pain. 😆 Oh cool Bani is planning something…can't wait for this!! 😊

Bani left for delhi as soon as she left her doctor clinic and heard her calling JW and she was happy that now JW will be feeling the pain for his lifetime and she has taken her revenge.

So, how u feel this part is, all the comments and criticism are welcome. Please do leave ur comments.

Swati

Swati darling…very interesting so far👏…wonder what Jai will do now!!
Continue soon!!!😃
Taz!

Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Such a great part!!! Love how she is makin Jai feel pain!!! Cant wait 4 the next part!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic ff 👏
JP marriage????????????????????????????????? 🤢 .... u really have hurt me 🤢

u write very very good 👏 👏 👏 congrats 😳 😊 😛

meenu 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part swati...loved it...cant wait for the next update...
I am sure she did a natak of abortion...she is not the kinds to abort a child...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Swati, you started a FF, it is so different! You get to the point right away!!

PART 1

I hate Pia 😡. Bani is being so generous with her and all she could think is betraying her and taking her sister's husband. How could she talk about her son or daughter being a criminal or prostitute, that was soooooo bloody unacceptable! 😡

If she tried to scare Jai Walia, she succeeded! He is planning to divorce Bani so that he could protect his child, couldn't he take Pia to court and ask to be the sole custodian for the children?? I love children, don't do this to Jai's baby!! 😭

Part 2:

That was heartbreaking for Jai to tell Bani it's over between the two, couldn't he have explained to her about Pia's conversation with her friend, Bani would have reasoned some thing, he could have just given Pia all his money and stayed back with Bani?

😭

Aww, Rano is not going with Bani..they are parting ways??

What is Bani really planning? She couldn't be so awful and heartless like Pia, she can not abort her child!! She is going to pretend that she is going to an other clinic but she will leave the town altogether!!

J & B are going to be apart, and there will be a leap..few years and the children will be 5 years old when they meet again???

Great start, dear!! I hope you are back to normal from your flu and roaring again!!!

Lot's of love,
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