Contract Heir -Note on Pg 90

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silki

@joa123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#591

gr8 part 👏 👏
tooo senty 😭

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canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#592

awwww...awesome update

a bit emotional....loved it when Neev called out for Bani in the washroom.....

hope jai and bani can continue their life together forgetting about the contract

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#593

Tiny

that was just so beautiful,very touching.mother son reunion was so sweet.just loved it.indead jai never let her go now.beautifully written.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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+ 6

Posted: 18 years ago

#594

wow finally a very gud and touching episode..... i could feel neev's narazgi and bani's pain .... OMG u write so welll.........

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 18 years ago

#595

Tinni,

You did it again in few words you described the feelings and emotions of everyone in that room so beautifully, the mother sons feelings and relation and the father and husbnads too.👏

Cant wiat to read the next part from you soon dear.😃

Love

Krishna

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

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Posted: 18 years ago

#596

ths ws vry beautiful,very touching...i m waiting 4 nxt part...

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#597

Awww!!!! at last they all met.... 😃 👏 😳

Awww that kid is soooo adorable..... 😃 😛

whenever i read abt Neev & Kabir 4rm sabsj ff it reminds me of my nephew.... 😃

cant wait to read abt Jai's & Bani's conversation.... 😃

Its tooooooooo good buddy... 👏

plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon... 😃