FF-M&M: Chpt 3 pg 8

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

o that was so sweet
but that was really short.. can u please continue soon..

thanks
♥nirali

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Perveen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

cool keep it going dont make the flash back to long that us reader fall asleep please i hope u dont mind 👏 👏

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Tiffany

@TiaMaria93

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

nope, not at all!...it's not a flashback actually...we're not offended either! tips are always wlecomed!

Par um... we're going to re-do part two... and continue from AFTER the Suhaag Raat!! We'll see....for now i am taking part 2 off!!!

we'll continue after their marriage..and use flashbacks for the past or something..i dunno what to do...i don't exactly want to continue..i just want to leave that SR as it is!!

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mandu

@mandu

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Amy and Tiff...
wonderful intro to the twosome Playboy Jai and Pujaran Bani...
have to read more soon...pls jaldi likhna
mandu

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mandu

@mandu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Arre I just read that you are going to nix the flashback or rather past and continue forward with the suhaag raat ...uummm...didnt quite mean it like that.. 😆
Im sure Im going to love what you are going to write so pls jaldi post karna
mandu