Tanhayee.. FF(Part 10, pg.23) uptd 02/10 - Page 5

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WOW!!! that was BEAUTIFUL as always dc!!! plz continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: bollycrazy

omg! all i can say is wow!!! it was amazing!! i just both parts n ther amazing!!! cont soon plzzz!! 👏 👏 👏

so sweet.. thanks yaar!

dc

OMG dc u cant stop there...what happned..
OMG OMG OMG...kya yaar...
omg...cant wiat for your next update...
hope it comes soon....
haila...they picked the same sari...im guessing for the same massi...
oh....update soon...pretty pelase...
JAZ

Omg DC!!! That was an Awesome part!!!! 👏 I love your writing style! 😉 CAn't wait for the next part so update soon!!!!! 😃

Goddess

that was beautiful.simply superb.loved it.plz cont soon.cant wait to read more. 😊

Originally posted by: angad4life

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WOW!!! that was BEAUTIFUL as always dc!!! plz continue soon!!!

Thank yaar!!😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

that was beautiful.simply superb.loved it.plz cont soon.cant wait to read more. 😊

Thank you so much!!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

that was beautiful.simply superb.loved it.plz cont soon.cant wait to read more. 😊

hey, I was going to say that. You beat me to it.


-Rimpy

Hi dc,

Love your writing style, it just has a way of absorbing you into the story and making you feel a part of it...the way you have captured the little nuances is really very good and just adds in that extra bit of life to the whole story...very beautifully written...serious can't wait to read the next chapter...though I wish more interaction is shown between them,,, however the way you have built up the anticipation of bringing them together is definitely very good... 👏 👏 👏
please update the next chapter soon...

Garf

Aww DC...............Just caught up with your new FF!!

Loved the description👏..........have a feeling that this FF will be a little more serious than your other one............what's happening to that anyway?!!😕

Hoping to read the next part soon!!😉