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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

plzzzzzzz do tell me.. cuz i don't know

haila you are the writer and you don't know??? koi baat nahi, now you know the connection me n my baby share😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

haila you are the writer and you don't know??? koi baat nahi, now you know the connection me n my baby share😳

hailaaaaaaaa.. how u so sure.. its wat u think it is??????????? hmmmmmmmmm.. it could be somethin else.. as I AM the writer. hmm
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

awww it's okay!!!!! take your time.

thanx jaan.. im ALMOST done
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
one more part.. thank anju and her EMOTIONAL blackmailing.. and don't try it afta this cuz it ain'tttttttt gonna work

*~*~*PART 10*~*~*



my 10th part... yayyyyy thanx guyz 🤗

everyone makes their way home.. jai had a smile on his face once his business deal had gone successful but that smile had only gotten bigger since he had seen bani.. and he had his share of "communication" wit her... pushkar drops bani/raashi home.. and then leaves

bani/raashi make their way inside their apartment.. they both go slouching in front of the couch. where they had put blankets and pillows. that's where they did their talkin.. watched tv..
Raashi: ok now tell me
Bani: what's there to tell
Raashi: i don't know u tell me. im sure there's a lot to tell.. u seemed confused when u came back
Bani: well first mr. walia wouldn't stop lookin at me.. and that just led to
Raashi: i know that part.. skip to the next part.. wat happened in there
Bani: well nothing happened...i was standin there and he came.. then
bani tells raashi everything.. raashi's listening carefully (they're best friends - now they share everything)
Raashi: im lost.. y r u confused.. he didn't even talk to u
Bani: well when he was bout to leave.. he whispered in my ear "thanx bani i got my answer"
Raashi: what.. wat does that mean??
Bani: i don't know..
Raashi: hmmm.. well u don't worry.. im sure he'll tell u.. eventually
bani: awwwwwww mannnnn
Raashi: relax bani
she gives raashi a hug.. who hugs her back
Bani: btw
Raashi: hmmm
Bani: i think the table they were sitting on was gonna catch fire
Raashi: huh catch fire. wat r u talkin about?
Bani: well ranveer seemed jealous
Raashi: of
Bani: ufff.. wat do u mean of?? u and karan.. i mean he kept on staring at u guyz..
Raashi: really??
Bani: yeppp...
Raashi: hmm.. he was lookin.. now he was lookin.. when i was his wife
Bani: was?? u still are jaan
Raashi: i know but u know wat i mean..
Bani: oh well forget it
Raashi: thank you!!!!!!!
Bani: oh btw did u see pia??
raashi burst out laughing
Raashi: yeppp.. now that was one jealous women right there they both share a laugh and go to sleep..

Ranveer's in his room.. he's trying to sleep.. he's on his side of the bed.. he looks down.. all of a sudden he remembers the time when raashi used to be there.. when she used to make her bed on the floor.. he continues to stare out in space.. as he remembers her dancing wit that guyyyyy today.. laughing smiling giggling blushing. as ranveer gets angry.. gets up... and makes his way downstairs - to get some water. take a walk.. COOl down

the next day goes by pretty fast.. the three musketeers are busy in the restaurant its a busy saturday.. while jigs is planning to go to the resturant again.. not next week but TOMORROW - sunday.. its anu's bday.. the whole family's going.. the resturant is booked - well half of it is.. wit jigs and her friend and some family members.. the chopras, walia's all would be going there once again.. tomorrow..

its sunday morning.. bani/raashi are busy at home.. cleaning up their house.. just chilling.. enjoying their day.. then make their way towards the restaurant.. as today was also a celebration day for them.. as today it had been 1 month since their restaurant opened.. so they were gonna celebrate among the workers.. in the restaurant.. the shuklas were comin to dinner also..

Its evening.. the restaurant looks fabulous.. its decorated.. wat not.. the three musketeers are in their office.. busy.. doing some work.. bani/raashi along wit pushy are dressed in biz suit 😉 (yep yep no salwaar kameez.. business suits for the ladies) as they had a meeting to attend to and they had just finished.. they're both talkin away in their office.. little do they know... as the walia's come walking in.. jigs is impressed just like before.. pia's amazed.. (some of her friends came too).. everyone's enjoying.. talking)
Bani: im so tired
Raashi: i know today was a busyy day
Bani: well how about a toast??
raashi looks around.. no champagne no nothin but water bottles
Raashi: uh... will water work???
(they all laugh grabbing their water bottles.. they raise a toast to their success to their business success)
Pushkar: we should celebrate
Bani: um..we are... isn't the water enough for u??
Pushkar: haha ur so funny.. i mean let's go out
Bani: hmm true.. let's go to the movies
Pushkar: um.. ok which movie
Bani: i wanna watch jaaneman
Raashi: no umrao jaan
Pushkar: nooo DON.
Bani/Raashi : ehhhhhhh
Pushkar: ok so we'll go to the movies tomorrow.. and we'll decide tomorrow which movie
Bani: hmmm good idea. so tomorrow evening - its movies
Raashi: yay perfect


Outside the walia's are sitting enjoyin their dinner/drinks.. everything.. Pia's raving on about certain things - how expensive this is.. and she has it.. how expensive that is.. and she has it 🤢 tryin to be the center of attention.. until u hear someone.. he's the manager of the restaurant

Manager: excuse me ladies and gentlemen inside the office the three musketeers get ready to come outside.. cuz that was their signal.. they're inside waiting to make their entry.. while on the outside. everyone has their attention towards the manager now.. the shuklas r seated at a table.. they know wat the manager's about to say.. every one's smiling

Manager: im so sorry to disturb as everyone's here celebrating some occasion.. actually today's a big day for our restaurant.. cuz today's our one month anniversary all the workers cheer loudly.. as everyone claps.. u can hear some congratulations here and there

Manager: thank u.. thank u very much.. actually ahem.. u guyz r makin me feel like d boss.. im here makin my speech.. well actually most of u had requested that u wanted to personally meet the owners.. and talk to them.. thank them congrautlate them and so on.. well today u can.. cuz they're here.. they'll be makin their way outside in just a moment.. inside the three musketeers are excited and nervous.. bani's playing wit her bracelet.. she's in a stunning biz suit (expensive 😉) she has her mangalsutra.. sindoor.. as a cute bracelet in her left hand.. while raashi's also drssed just as stunning.. wit a small necklace.. and a matching bracelet .. along wit her mangalsutra and sindoor - they both didn't do anthin big wit the jeweleries.. cuz it was simple but cute... pushy's dressed to impress.. lookin good. wit his 2 fav. ladies 😉
Bani: im so happy
Raashi: me toooo
Pushkar: im kinda nervous
Bani: so r we
Raashi: oh stop it.. u guyz r makin me more nervous..
the manager signals them.. 2 minutes and they should come outside.. they nod.. (their office has that mirror thingy.. u know once side its a mirror.. otherside its a glass.. u get the point.. right).. there's a cake being set up in the front by the manager.. as 2 workers light a candle on the cake (1 candle - 1 month anniversary)..the music is playing.. everyone's waiting

Manager: sorry to keep u waiting ladies and gentlemen.. the moment is here.. plz join me in welcoming the 3 owners of this resturant.. wit out who... i would be jobless today 😆 😆 as he points to the door.

everyone turns their attention to the door.. the three musketeers take a deep breath.. as bani opens the door.. comin outside.. wit pushy in the middle and raashi on his side.. the three of them come out of their office... wit the welcomin sounds of applauds..

the 3 smile.. as the applauds go from high to HIGH... some have smiles on their faces.. while others like ahem jigs/pia and ranveer are sittin there ready to have a heart attack😆.. as the three musketeers make their way in the front... by the cake.. they all stand smiling.. facing the crowd (their customers).. right when the three spot the walia's.. at first confused but then the three decide to ignore that section and look at everyone else and smile.. 😉

the three of them are up there. standin and now talkin to their manager.. a lot of ppl r busy congratulating them.. they're busy sayin their thanx..shakin some hands wit the ppl at the nearby tables.. while the walia's/chopra's are sitting there 😲



haye ram this is a longgggggggggg part.. hope u enjoyed

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hope u guyz enjoy part 10.. thank anju for it.. and NO MORE blackmailing..its gonna work in the future.. this was the LAST time.. i mean it... and the next part - MONDAY.. now im gonna go. im hungry and tired.. so monday.. muah.. hope u guyz enjoyed part 10
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
im first to comment!!!!...Yes!!..soo happy for Bani, Raashi, and Pushkar on their accomplishments, just read the last two parts..they were just SUPERB, I love the way you right 😛 , oh no i wanna see Jigs,Pia, burning inside to see the 3 owners 😆 ..anywayz not long at all...plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
navi...love you hun...that ws great...
the cobras and walia finally know...
so happy... 👏 👏 👏 ...
bani and raashi u ignoe those horrible ppl...
and that line from bani was killer..."the table was going to burn..."...hilarious...cant wait for more
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Posted: 18 years ago
Damn..... jaanu.. u keep updating this one..... and i am like... aahh!!!! go back!!!!!! and start reading!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

the part i was waiting for... was finally here!

they find out!!!

but is that even a place to leave off????

man they are shocked

but what happens after that???😕

please cont soon jaani!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great once again.loved it.cant wait to read the next part.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
dude why did you leave off there!!!!!
man have to wait all the way til monday!
i guess i can wait!
that was awesome !
not long at all!!!!!
awesome job!
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