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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila! kya story hai di!

wow! loved all the rest of ur stories on ks!

congrats for the 12th one!

sorry i cant post my silly comments to all.. actually i should be doing my
business h.w!

well done! di!

👏


Can u do my HW too?😳😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

that was terrific hun!!! plzz start a part with sahil and rano in it i luv there jodi!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM ADDICTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
NOW ALL I CAN THINK BOUT IS JAI AND BANI IN A CAR IN THE NITE....if i fail my chem test itz cuz of u Guli(can i call u tht)...jkin...cont soon...im dyin of anticipation here

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
haila...thappar...but why yaar 😕 😕 😕
but that hug...omg...so sweet...
humara hero in action...aye haye...cont soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
hey! wow i hope they fall in love soon! lol and i think that she will get slapped by her parents or u know somestep mother or i dont know! hehehehehhe
but plz cont soon! 😊 well done!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Do I even have to say what I'm thinking right now?!😆

Adding it to my list..............will catch up with ALL of them when I have time!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
great fanfic. can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
😆 😆 😆 i love bushes too!!! SIKE! wow guli, you're on a roll!!! 12th fanfic?????? lol, great start!!! can't wait till da next part! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Part 7

Jai takes her home

And she says thanks!!!

And she says sorry about everything!

Jai is like its okay!!!!!!

And he leaves!

She comes home!!!!!

And her parents are waiting for her!!!!

And they are like where have u been????

Bani is stuttering

Her parents are really strict on her!!!!!

Bani is trying to tell them what happened

But she gets yelled at!!!!

And her dad slaps her

Syaing what are you doing out soo late and what not!

Cuz it was late!!

Poor Bani!

She always has to face problems in her home!!!!

And this time

Things get sooo out of hand

That her dad just kicks her out!!!!!

Bani's on the streets!!!!!

She's thinking

Where do I go??

She has no where to go!!!

She goes by a bus stop!!!!

And she sits there!!!!!

Bani's thinking about her past!!

And she's always has gone through torture!!!!

She never had anything her own way!!

She always had to live through her parents rule!!

And now….

She has no place to go!!!!!!!!!

She's crying!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Part 8

She stays there all night in the cold!!!

In the morning

She's sleeping on the bench

And people have surrounded her!!!!!!

And they are just looking!!

She isnt awaken yet!!!!!

They just look!!

Cars are honking

Cuz some people are blocking the road!

Jai's going down that road

And he's honking too

He comes out

And tells people to move!!!!

And he's like whats going on

He comes

And sees

And is shocked to see Bani there!!!

Jai is like isnt she….

He comes to her

And wakes her up

Saying hello????

But sees that she's running a fever

He tells some guys to help her

And put her in the car

He takes her to the hospital

And gets her treated there!!!!

After a while

He comes inside

She opens her eyes!!!

And sees him

She's thinking how am I here????

She's shocked to see Jai!!!!

He's looking at her!!

Bani: U here??

Jai is like…

I brought you here!


The End!

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