CHARACTER SKETCH
BANI- HEROINE (I didn't know what else 2 put there)
JAI- HERO
RIMPY- BANIZ CLOSE FRIEND
ROHAN-BANIZ OTHER CLOSE FRIEND AND RIMPY'S BOYFRIEND
JASSIE-BANIZ FRIEND
AJAY-JAIZ BEST FRIEND
BHAIYA
BHABI
...more characters will cum as the story progresses...
HERE IT IS---
PART 1
Each morning at 8:25am sharp the music would start 2 play and this meant that there was 5 min 4 the students 2 get 2 their 1st period classes....
Bani got up 4m the desk that she was sitting at in the library wit her friends "Lets go you guys...we don't want to be late today Aliya" she said will turning to her friend Aliya
History was Bani's first period class. She loved history...it used 2 put her 2 sleep b4 but this year her teacher made it fun 2 learn. "Hey Rimpy! Hey Bani!" called Rohan while entering the class. He was Rimpy's boyfriend and Bani's best fiend. Soon tall and handsome Jai entered the room. Rimpy and Bani gave each other the 'look'. See the thing was that Bani and Aliya sat beside each other and at the group of tables in front of them sat Jai and he always looked 2wards where Bani and Rimpy sat so Bani thought that he like Rimpy and Rimpy thought that he like Bani.
"Well he can't like me for sure, I mean I'm going out with Rohan so why would he like someone he can't get?" said Rimpy later on that day in math class. Bani, Rohan, Rimpy and Jassie, another friend of Bani's, were all in the same math class and they never did any work.
"That is true but still you never know," said Bani.
"You guys why do you care whether or not he likes any of you…unless one of you like him back," said an annoyed Jassie.
"Eww no! He's as ugly as the bottom of my shoe!" Rimpy proclaimed in a disgusted voice.
"He's not that bad," said Bani. Jassie and Rimpy gave her a weird look, Rohan was to busy taking a nap.
Time went by and Jai continued to stare. Every time Bani would look in his direction he would turn away. After a while Bani felt a strange feeling for him, she didn't know what it was. She thought she like him but wasn't sure, so she decided to ask Rohan. Rohan was someone that she could talk to for hours about anything and everything and Rohan would never tell anyone what they talked about, not even his girlfriend. So one day in math class when Rimpy and Jassie were not there (they had gone on a science trip) Bani bought up the topic of Jai.
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PART 2
"Rohan, I think I'm falling for Jai" Bani said in the most romantic voice any one has ever heard.
Immediately Rohan looked up from his work. It looked as if all the air had been sucked out of him. "Bani, kya keha tum na?"
"Mujhe Jai aacha lagne lag hai. I mean all these days of thinking that he like me or Rimpy has made me like him."
"WOW! Yaar that's good. He is a nice guy. Lekin, what do u like about him?" Rohan had a look on his face that said he was happy for Bani yet at the same time he felt liking making fun of her.
"What do I like about him? I like everything! I way he walks so slow yet it seems as if he is running. The way he sits lazily in his chair staring in Rimpy's direction and mine. The way he talks, his deep voice that comes out slow, every word from his mouth seems so sweet…his height is to die for and his looks…ahhhhhhhhh" Bani was definitely love struck. "But what do you think Rohan? Is it okay me liking him?"
"Yeah why wouldn't it be okay?" Rohan asked "I'm gonna watch his every move now…ab muje path lagan hai ke who tume chaata hai ke nahi…I mean since he's always starring your way in history class! This is sooooooooo cool!"
"But listen no telling anyone, not even Rimpy" Bani warned Rohan even though she knew her best friend wouldn't tell anyone.
Bani felt like she had gotten a burden off her shoulder after she told Rohan about her feelings towards Jai. Bani's behavior towards Jai had completely changed as well, she would get all lovey dovey when she saw him and Rohan would give her looks from the other side of their history class if she saw him looking at her or her looking at him. Bani was so in love with Jai that it was a surprise that none of her friends has notices. She had dreams about Jai in the night, her normal dream was of Jai telling Bani about his feelings for her on a cursie and asking her to go out with him. Every time Rimpy said "He's looking at you Bani" Bani would reply "No, he's looking at you," but deep down she wished that he really was looking at her.
One day after class Rohan and Bani were walking to their lockers which were not located to far from each other, Rohan stopped at her locker and said, "Bani, now look when Jai goes by he'll fully stare at you," Jai who happened to be at his locker which was beside Rohan's walked by Bani, who was trying to stare at Jai without making it obvious did stare at Bani when he walked by her. Bani's heart melted at this, thank god Rohan was there to help her keep her cool.
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PART 3
'Wake up, Bani!!!' Screamed Rohan loudly in Bani's ear while they were sitting in front of Bani's locker, 'Yaar, usually I am sleeping and Rimpy has to wake me up but today its you. miss. prefect, is sleeping in class not 2 mention shez staring at me. What is this? Why are you drooling over me anyways? You know I'm taken and my girlfriend happens to be your bestfriend!'
'Rohan, for your information I wasn't drooling over you' she glanced towards the hot hunk Jia, who was passing by. She was brought bacl to earth by Rohan's poke 'You better stop flirting with me or I'll tell Rimpy and that won't be gud.' Bani stuck her tounge out at Rohan, it was funny how she could behave so childish with Rohan but couldn't even say a word to Jai.
'Bani, If you tell Rimpy, I won't help you... and I'll tell her that you like HH(nickname 4 Jai)'Rohan glanced over at Jai and then winked at Bani, 'You get what I mean?'
'Bani was fuming and ready to kill. Anger lines creased her face as she shot daggers at Rohan, who was laughing.
'KK im sorry, now lets get down to bussiness' Rohan had finally managed to control his laughter and give Bani a serious look that seemed to be hidding his curiousity.
'Yeah.....So will you help me find out if he likes me? please Rohan, I really need you to help me. Will you help me?' Bani tried not to sound desperate but the whole Jai staring at her or at Rimpy was killing her. She needed to know that Jia liked her and her alone.
'Hi, Bani....Rohan!' squeled Rimpy as she gave Rohan a kiss on the cheek and watched him nodd at Bani and Bani's breaking into a grin. Rimpy knew that they were friends but she couldn't help and wonder what were they talking about, 'So, what did I miss you guys?'
'Nothing much, honey. Me and Bani were just talking about how boring this class was.' Rohan felt Rimpy tighten her grip on him as he relieased that he was talking about his and Rimpy's favorite class. He looked over at Rimpy who was shotting evil glances at poor Bani and then at Bani who looked ready to run before Rimpy killed her. Rohan wonder why was Rimpy so insecure?
'Okkkkkkkkk, newaiz....u guiz the zoo is soooooooooooo cool, the tigers the birds.....' Once Rimpy started talking there was no stopping her. Bani made her escape.
'Rimpy, I'll call you tonight and you can tell me all about it, okay? I really have to go get lunch before my next class, Sorry.' Bani hurried away and hoped that Rimpy won't get the wrong message about her and Rohan's conversation. She felt bad for poor Rohan who was about to get his head bitten off. 'Good Luck, Rohan' she whispered out loud. So lost was Bani in her own thoughts she didn't even realise that someone was coming straight at her. THUD!!!
Who did Bani crash into?
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PART 4
Bani fell back, the person's arms caught on to her before she hit the ground.Bani's hair had fallen over her eyes, her math text book with a million pieces of paper were now all over the floor. She didn't noe whoz arms she had fallen into but huz ever they were the felt warm and comfy. She bought her hand up over her face to move her hair from her eyes and saw....JAI. Bani stood up right away, her heart was beating....actually it was ponding, a 100 beats per second, 1000, by now she had gotten out of Jaiz arms and was standing up....10000....100000....."
'You okay?' his voice was so sexy and he sounded so concerned.
'Huh? What?' SHIT! Bani thought, the first words that come out of my mouth in front of him are huh and what.
'You okay?' Bani had Jiya darak darak playing in her head, hez sooooooooooooooooooooooo cute, she thought.
'Umm, yeah I'm fine...thanks for ummm catching me' She couldn't look straigth into his eyes and talk. By now Bani was on the floor picking up her stuff. She was looking at Jai's shoes, but all of a sudden it was his knees that could be seen, he had also on the floor helping her.
'Thank God its lunch eh, otherwise the hall would be crowded and people would be stepping all over your papers.'
'Yeah, that's true'
'Where were you running off to in a hurry?'
'Cafe' He was trying to make a conversation but only a maxium of three words were comming out from her mouth. Both of them had stood up by this point.
'You got something in your hair' OMG...he noticed my hair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bani tried to find the lock of hair with junk in it but couldn't manage to find it, 'Want me to do it, thts if you dont't mind' all Bani could do was nod. He leaned over and reached for her hair, she could feel his thumb on her face and his hands struggling to take the piece of wateva it was in her hair out, 'There its gone!'
'Thanks so much first you saved me froming falling down and now....'she was actualy looking into his eyes and talking and was saying more than just a few words but stupid Rohan had to butt in.
'I swear this looks like an indian movie secen, first the heroine falls than she has somthing in her hair and than....i dont know wat happens next. Anyways i came here to ask you,' he said pointing at Jai, 'would be interested in beinging in Bani and my group for the history project. You know how its supose to be two boys and a girl so I'm working with Bani, stupid teacher told me I can't work with Rimpy, shez such an....' thank god Jai interupted him
'Yeah. I'll work with you, I mean if Bani doesn't mind.'
'Nah Bani doesn't mind, do you now Bani'
'Nope, don't mind at all!'
'Kool, so I guess we will talk details in class tommrow'
'Yeah' why can't we talk details right now...I got all day to look...i mean listen to you, Bani thought.
'So I'll see you guiz' and with that he walked away with a huge grin and leaving a hugger grin on Bani's face.
Rohan turned to Bani 'Say thank you'
'For what?'
'I just got Jai in our group so you can stare all you want and now i can easily find out if he likes you'
'OMG!!!!!!!!!!ROHAN I DIDN'T THINK OF THAT. OMG! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!' she wanteed to lean over and hug him but Rimpy was giving her dirty looks from where she was sitting, whats with her Bani thought, so instead she put her hand in her pocket and realized that the paper wasn't there.
'OMG! OMG OMG OMG!'
'What happened now?'
'The piece of paper that i drew heart all round mine and Jai's name, its not in my pocket....OMG what if Jai has it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'
'Calm down, calm down. Breath and listen, I'll ask him if he has it i have class with him next period so breath and you go get food and check in you bag maybe you put it in there. And now I'm gonna go to Rimpy before she pirces a whole in my body from staring' with that he walked off. Bani checked in her bag....where is it she wondered, she had a feeling that Jai had it....but she didn't know for sure.
She ran off to class but the only thing she thought off during class was...
Does Jai have the piece of paper?
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Part 5
"The note, where was it? Jai had to have it, where else could have gone?", those questions run over and over in Bani's mind. There is no way she well be able to focus on chemistery and she had that stupid test, the one where the teachers tests you on everything she never taught you. Then it clicked she had to be in class to take that stupid test, right?
"Ms. Malthora, my head....", that was all Bani managed to say before she passed out right there in chemistery class.
Every student in class gathered around Bani as Ms. Malthora tried to make her regain conciouness. Bani let Ms. Malthora shake her a little bit before responding with a barely audioable, "I am fine, I want to take this test".
Ms. Malthora smiled at her new favorite student and said that it was okay and Bani have a friend drop her home. Bani immediately walked away to Rohan's class to get a ride(he very conviently had a car problems this morning). Bani hoped that everything would go as planned once she got to Rohan's class and that Jai would do exactly what she wanted.
Meanwhile, Rimpy is fighting with Rohan. "Rohan, look at me! I am good looking, nice, sweet person and I choose you to be my boyfriend!"
Rohan,"I know but.."
Rimpy, "I can very easily get any guy I want!"
Rohan, "I know but..."
Rimpy on the verge of tears,"I picked you!!! And what do you do???"
Rohan,"Try to understand..."
Rimpy," You flirt with Bani, when I am not around. How could you?"
Rimpy is now crying and Rohan is looking at Rimpy hopelessly, wondering why does he love this girl so much. After letting her cry for a whole minute, he wraps his arm around and trys to comfort her or atleast explain that Mr. Bandit is fixing his hearing aid and that they well get in trouble if she doesn't quiet down. He finally got her down to a few sobs a minute, when Bani walked in.
"Mr. Bandit, can I talk to Rohan?", Bani gave him a pleading look and old Mr.Bandit melted and let Rohan join her in the hall. Conviently at the same time Jai was walking to class(bad boy hez late!) and he ran it to the two and decided to wait for Rohan to finish and go in togather. Bani wondered why Jai was standing there and not going inside, did he find the note, is that why he is staring at her? She decide to ask Rohan on the way home. "Rohan, I need a ride home, please. Thats the only way I can get out of chem. class and I have splitting headache."
Rohan,"Bani, my car is in the shop, sorry".
Bani,"How am I suppose to get home, then?"
Jai," I well drop you, I know where you live....I mean you just have to tell me where you live...." Jai was turning many shades of red.
Bani looking at the floor, "thanks". Bani got ready to put on her detective mask and find the note. Jai's behavior confirmed he had the note.
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Part 6
"No problem, but don't you have a chemistry test today?"
"Yea I do but its a formative so its okay, and newaiz the teacher said that i shud go home....but how did u noe i had a test?" Is he stalking me or somethin? He noes where I live and bout my test. If he is I dnt mind at all, Bani thought to herself...she had a sudden pang of excitement in her.
"Oh um um I um...Ajay told me...hez in ur calss rite...so yea. We better get going if Mr.Banit sees us he wont let me go" Jai changed the topic.
"Yea lets go....I'll see you later Rohan, say bye to Rimpy for me"
"Its better tht i dnt mention u in front of Rimpy, shez really pissed"
"Oh...Im so sorry..."
"Nah dnt worri bout it. You go home and rest." he turned to Jai "You get her home safely...if nething happens to her ill run afta u"
"Don't worry shez in safe hands"
Bani hugged Rohan, and this bought a strange look on Jai's face, and headed off.
When they got to the parking lot Jai said he had to make a call and walked off into a corner. "Hello mom, Im comming home early."
"Why?" his mom asked
"Who, ek dost ko ride chaia ta so i said tht ill drop her."
"HER?!?!?! Who her? Is it her her the one tht you like that her?"
"Jai, sorry to bother you but r u done cuz it looks like it goin to rain so we better get going." Bani had made her way to the corner.
"Mom, ill c u at home ok...Bye"
The sky outside had drakened a lot in the past little while and as soon as Bani and Jai reached the door it started to pour.
"SHIT!!!!!!!!!This had to happen now!"Bani was in sever pain and wanted to go home but it was impossible to drive in this rain.
"O well. Dnt worri I get you home lets just sit here"
So they sat down. It was kinda hard for Bani to sit she was stuggling with her skirt(the flare onez in style rite now). On the floor she noticed how long Jai's pants were, Baige and black looks good on him, she thought. Bani simply loved the way she dressed, the long low hanging pants, not to low though, and the long t-shirt...it was so simple yet so sophistcated. On the other hand she was simple and blah. there were days like today were she got all dressed up, a nice baige colour skirt wit gold dots and a shirt in the same colour but lighter shade. Other days she'd just throw on any thing tht she could find. Rohan described Bani as a girl hu was sumtimes girly and at other times tomboyish and and other timez normal. But the one thing with Bani was that she bought a new outfit everyweek.
"You look nice in a skirt" Bani was shocked at his remark
She some how managed to smile and say thanx. "You should wear it more often, it suits you,"He was looking right into her eyes and she was looking into his. His eyes drak brown so filled with luv with care with compassion wit passion, mezmericed her. They sat on the floor staring at each other for 2 minz, but it seemed like 2 hourz, they were distrubed by the exit door closing. THUD it made a noise and it brought cold air with it. "I think we should leave now, the rainz slowed down." with that Jai got up and led the way to his car. He had a red covertible whose roof could open, but too bad it was raining today. Bani had the same car but in red, she didn't bring it that day because her bahiya had dropped her off.
They drove along and it seemed like they were goin on and on forever, Bani didn't mind it. Every now and then Bani would glance at Jai, he looks so HOT when hez driving, she thought. They made idle conversations, there wasn't much to talk about actualy Bani was bak to the 3 word answers stage that she has before. The car jerked and Bani swang forward, her head almost hit the dash board but she bit her lip and it was bleeding. "WHAT HAPPENED?"
"I think the batteries dead!"
"SHIT! SHIT! SHIT!"
Bani and Jai were stuck in the middle of nowhere wit trees all around them, Bani was saying SHIT but she didn't really mean it. She was scared to be in the middle of nowhere but she felt safe because she was with Jai. Jai slowly leaned over towards her,
OMG WAT IS HE GONNA DO? she thought.
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Part 7
Jai leaned in closer to Bani, Bani had mixed emotions about Jai leaning in close. She didn't know weather to feel happy or scared. When Jai was less than a few inches away from her, she couldn't take it anymore. Bani pushes Jai away and asks "Jai, what are you doing?"
Jai laughing, "Bani what do you think I was doing? I was just about to give you a kiss, isn't that what you wanted?"
Bani," Did you just say what I think you said? How could you Jai? I thought you were a nice person but I guess I was wrong..." Oh god, he has the note and he has read it, why else would he say all this?
Jai laughing even harder, " Who do you think I am? I was playing around to see how you'd react. I must say you are a lot like your friend Rimpy in this manner. Anyways I was just trying to wipe away the blood form the cut on your lip." leans forward and drags his finger over her lips, not quite touching them but close, he wipes the blood away. A speck of it gets into her maang but neither notice. Maybe it was a sign but I guess only time will tell.
Bani joined Jai in laughing, though her thoughts were still busy trying to figure out if Jai has the note or not ," Sorry....You know there is something I have in common with you, too. And Rimpy isn't like that, she just comes off that way.." Thinking about Rimpy, she filled with guilty, she had wronged Rimpy without meaning to and had lost her friendship. For people they are close friends but there hearts couldn't be further away.
Jai filled with curiosty wanting to know what bani has in common with him, "What do we have in common, other than we both go to the same school? And as for Rimpy I don't even want to go there she was biting off poor Rohan's head in class today. Poor guy."
Bani's eyes twinkled at the thought of Rimpy yelling at Rohan, it was like she knew something that no one else did. " Jai, we both drive the same kind of car, different color and both of our cars broke down today. Mine in the morning and yours now. I think Rimpy has some good reason for what she does".
Jai, " I think we should sue the car company, what do you think? Lets forget about Rimpy, I don't want to talk about her right now."
BEEP,BEEP!!! The person that just honked the horn is looking at a piece of paper that has the words Jai+ Bani on it drawn inside a heart.
Hows honking the horn?
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HOPE U ENJOY IT...JAI SHOWZ FEELINZ 2WARDS BANI IN THIS PART!😉
Part 8
Jai and bani turned around to c hu waz honkin...but the car drove by splashing the rain water from the ground all ova jai'z car.
'i swear thts Rimpy's car' B thought out loud
'if it waz than she wud hav stopped and helped'j responded 'eh bani didnt i just say tht i didnt wanna tak about rimpy while we r stuck here...in my car.'
'sry i cudnt help it!'b cud feel her cheeks and ears redden. 'so wat do u want 2 tak bout?'
j had a "how bout u"look in his eyes but he said 'i unnon...u tell me'
so the two started talking but b4 tht b called rohan 2 c if he cud cum pick them up...his fone was busi....it had been an hour and they were still in the car....j and b had reclined their chair...b had fallen asleep...j sat there staring at her ' shez so pretty, she looks cute even wit her hair messed up (it had gotten all messed up bc she kept turnin her head while sleepin)' j thought just than a lock of hair fell onto baniz face and the tips were goin into her mouth and she was being bothered.
'shud i move it...i shud its annoyin her...but of if she wakes up...i cant stare at her than....itd b 2 obivious...but shez uncomfortable...im movin it!' slowin jai moved his slow trembling hand towards her face and as slowly as he cud moved her lock of hair 4m her face....
she fidgeted....
he was tuckin it behing her ear....
she woke up...
his palm covering her ear and part of her cheek....
his eyes in hers....
her eyes in his...
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PART 9
Their heads drew close to each others their eyes still locked in each otherz....jaiz hand was still on baniz ear...he gentely bought it 2 her cheek bone and smoothed her skin...love was pouring out of both their eyes...their foreheads were about to touch...RING...RING...it was baniz cell...Rohan waz returing her call...jai and bani parted ways as they were snapped bak 2 reality
rohan said that he would get to bani and jai as soon as possible...he took half an hour....jai and bani sat through the half and hour in silence...none of them said a word or dared to look at each other...baniz heart was still beating really fast...she had yet 2 recover from the shock tht the to be romantic scene between her and jai...she wondered how he felt...'kya uski bhi haalta mera tara hai? kya usne pyar se who saab kiya...ya phir was it a spur of the moment thing...ya phir...he did it cuz hez a guy and im a girl and we r alone in a car in the middle of nowhere and he was trying to......NO!...ye tho nahi ho sac tha jai use kisma ka larka nahi hai!'
rohan and finally arrived...it had started to rain like crazy again...without sayin a word jai had handed bani his jacket indicatin her 2 put it on 2 stop her clothes from getting wet....akiyoon mein baathain horai thi....
rohan had dropped jai home first and than on the way 2 baniz house he asked her 'kya howa tum dono ke saath ghari mein...u were in there 4 hourz...alone...in the middle of nowhere...HOW ROMANTIC!....tho baatho bani kya howa...u 2 werent even talkin 2 each other so i noe sumthin happened but tell me what!' so bani tld him...she tld him everything the talkin bout rimpy the car tht she thought waz rimpyz...and the to be romantic part...every detail bout it...except 4 when she waz sleepin....rohan waz shocked by the end of it and he waz crussin himself 4 callin at such a rong time...he apologized 2 bani ova and ova gain...she sayin dnt worri bout it every time...all nite bani dreamt of wat the rest of her to be romantic scene wud turn out...she had the craziest fantasies! bani woke up the next dai still not recovered 4m the shock 4m yesterdai..when she got 2 her locker at school(her car had cum bak 4m the mechanicz and sittin in it reminded her of yesterdai) bani almost fell on the floor of more shock...on her locker was a typed note tht said "I HAV UR NOTE WIT THE HEART ON IT...MEET ME 3RD PERIOD ON THE SOCCER FIELD" all dai bani stared at tht note...she cudnt stare at jai cuz 4 sum reason he wasnt at school tht dai😭 3rd period finally came round and bani headed straight 2 the soccer field....she waited a while and soon in the distance she cud c a girl headin in her direction....
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Part 10
the girl was so close now tht b cud tell hu it waz....it waz RIMPY...and she didnt look happi
'WHAT THE H-LL?'she screamed hldin up the piece of paper wit the heart and b and jz name 'WHAT THE H-LL IS THIS? U LIKE HIM AND U DIDNT EVEN TELL ME...AND U GO OFF AND TELL ROHAN...U TELL MY BOYFRIEND HU U LIKE AND U DNT TELL ME!!!!WHY IN THE WORLD WUD U NOT TELL ME?!....U AND ROHAN WERE TALKIN BOUT IT AT LUNCH THE OTHER DAI AND WHEN I CUM ITS ALL HUSH HUSH?! WHAT IS THIS?!?!?!' she was really mad...b started talkin
'listen rimpy clam down...i didnt tell u bc i thought u were goin 2 make fun of me...i mean the whole j starin at one of us thing u found funni and if i tld u tht i fell 4 the guy ud laugh...and i tld rohan bc hez my bestfriend..'
'BUT IM UR BESTFRIEND 2!'
'i noe but still i thought ud make fun of me....'and b tld her the rest of the story..bout rohan thinkin j likez b bak and the car and the to b romantic scene....everything was fine between them after half and hour...
'...i didnt c him 2dai...i dnt think he came 2 school' b said sadly as she walked wit rimpy to her car
'hehe, poor u ...i saw him...last period...he came 4 last period onli cuz we had a test...wat a gud boy' rimpy added in scarcastically '...oh and btw hez commin 2 rohanz surprise bdai parti at my house 2dai...ure commin rite?'
'wud i miss it...its rohanz badi...he felt so bad 2dai...cuz no 1 said hbd 2 him'
'awwwwwww my poor babi!'
the two friendz got into bz car and drove 2 rimpyz talkin bout jai rohan and the parti
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PART 11
it was 9pm later tht dai(fridai) and rimpyz rents had left the house so the 'kids' as they called their daghter and her friendz cud hav sum privacy
all the decorations had been done...the house looked great...rohan was at home sulking over the fact tht no 1 remembered his bdai...b kept callin him every hour or so 2 mak sure tht he didnt cum 2 rimpyz house b4 he needed 2....it waz jaiz job to get rohan to rimpyz house around 9:30...all the guest had arrived and were dying 2 giv rohan a surprise of his life...b looked gorgeous...she was wearing a green and maroon churidar...the pants were maroon wit a nice floral design made by scquences on them...the shirt waz green wit a similar design as the pants....
'K EVERY1 HIDE....ROHANZ IS 5 MINZ AWAI...I JUST GOT A CALL 4M JAI...HURRI HURRI HURRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' there waz a sudden hassale as every1 tired 2 find a perfect hiding spot...b and rimpy hid behind the front doors...they heard jaiz car (he waz usin his momz cuz his waz in the garage) pull up the drive wai...the house waz quite and dark...rohan and jai walked in...
'SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' every1 jumped out and b had turned the lights on...rohan looked like someone had just hit him wit something hard....he was delighted....
'HAPPI BDAI JAAN!' rimpy walked up 2 rohan and gav him a 5 hour long hug!
when it waz b turn she walked up 2 rohan in a funni sort of wai stuck her hand out and said happi bdai...rohan shook it....than she turned 2 rimpy and asked....'is it okay if i hug ur bf?' she did it purposely and rimpy laughin said yes..so b hugged rohan cuzin jai 2 mak a face gain....
the parti waz wild...afta the cake and food every1 waz dancin (rimpy had hired a dj)
WANNA NAACH ALL NIGHT (2)
DO YOU FEEL ALRIGHT
WANNA NAACH ALL NIGHT
DANCE WITH ME BABY, WONT YOU DANCE WITH ME ALL NIGHT
WON'T YOU PARTY PARTY PARTY, WONT YOU RUN THE FLOOR ALL NIGHT
PYAARE PYAARE LAMHE, PYAARI PYAARI BAATEIN
SAPNO KE DIN HAIN, SAPNO KI RAATEN
HO GOONJEN HAI DIL KE TARAANE
BAJNE HAIN GEET SUHAANEH
BEHKE HAI SAARE DEEWANE
TOH NACH LE NACH LE ALL NIGHT
WHERE'S THE PARTY TONIGHT!
b rimpy rohan and the rest of the guest were goin krazi on the dance floor j waz standin by the drinks(no alchol...so dnt worri he wont end up in bed wit sum random girl) a slow song started playin and many ppl started 2 make their way off...b went upstairs to rimpyz room to freshen up....
tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
jaayen
j saw b go upstairs and so he followed her...he stayed far behind...there were so mani ppl round tht she didnt even notice him...she went in the room and into the washroom...j came into the room...she came out of the washroom and saw j lockin the bedroom door
'ja...j...ja...jai....ummm door kyon lock kare ho?' b heart waz beatin fast gain...she waz scared...
'muhja tumse baath karna hai' he sounded mad
'bo...bol..o...bolo...'she cudnt stop stutterin...
he walked towards her...slowly and confidently...she kept backing up...she cudnt help but notice how dashin he looked in this black dress pants...wit black dress shoes and a purple lilacish colour shirt wit the top 2 buttons undone and the sleves rolled bak due 2 the warmth in the house...he kept commin forward...she kept goin backwards...
forward
backward
forward
backward
forword and then
THUD!
b waz up against the wall now...jai zeroed in on her...he slowly bought his right hand up and moved a lock of hair from her face and tucked it behind her ear..than he put tht hand on the wall beside her waist...the left hand slowly rised and took its position on the wall
a locked bedroom b gainst a wall and j in front of her wit his handz on the wall beside her waist....
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dnt kill u guiz its short...but it has the 1st eva jnb scene...enjoy!
Part 12
'jai keh kya kare ho...let me go...koi aajay ga...jai' bani waz moanin..she had tired 2 put up a fight but j had grabed her handz and put them up gainst a wall...
'ab chup chap kare ho aur meri baath ke haan ya naa mein jawab do' he looked sooooooooo cute and sexy b shook her head
'did u draw a heart on a piece of paper wit urz and my name on it'
'woh main...'
'yes or no?' he wanted a straigt 4ward answer but wasnt gettin mad tht she waz protestin....
'haan'
'did rimpy somehow find the note'
'haan'
'did u notice tht i waz starin at ur direction in history?'
'haan'
'is tht how u started 2 like me'
'.....ha-haa-haan' she quickly said it and looked down on the floor
'so u like me?' he knew the answer but was makin life difficult 4 her...
'yea' she said still lookin at the floor
he bought his index finger 2 her chin and lifted her head up...the other hand still hldin on 2 herz....'i like u 2...infact i luv u!' the 2 love birds stared at each other eye in eye...b cud feel his breath on her forehead...he bought his other hand and cupped her face...slowly he bought his head close 2 herz...his lips were nearin 2 herz...slowly their lips smacked...his hands went around his waist and herz round his neck...
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Part 13
their lips came awai 4m each otherz their hands still in place...b put her head on his chest....'y didnt u tell me' j asked caringly will stroking her bak...
'i dnt noe...i thought...i dnt noe'
'well im glad we noe now...u wanna go downstairs...or stay here' he asked teasing
'lets go downstairs...rimpy and rohan will start 2 worri'
'k lets go..but u gotta promise me a dance'
'promise'
so they walked hand in hand downstairs...the slow musik waz still playin...bnj headed towards the dance floor...almost every1 at the parti waz starin at the newest and hottest couple...rimpy and rohan hadnt seen them yet...they were 2 busi dancin....on the dance floor j wraped his hands round baniz waist and bz round his neck and her head on his chest....this wud become their signature...slowly they danced awai not sayin a word yet sayin everythin....
'UR DATIN AND U DIDNT TELL US!!!!!!!!!!!!'rimpy and rohan had found them....
the 4 of them mad theri wai up 2 rimpyz room...once there rimpy began
'HOW CUM U DIDNT TELL US? WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN? HOW DID THIS HAPPEN? OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!.....................'
all through out this j leaned gainst a wall wit b leanin on him and j played wit her hair.........rohan waz amazed at his gf amazement and at jnb
'SPEAK WILL U!!!!!!!!'
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i rote pt 14 2 timez and closed the window 4 sum reason...newaiz...jnb scenes in this one...dnt noe got no idea wat im gonna rite...ill rite as the creative jucies flow😉
enjoy
PART 14...
rimpy started at jnb out of breath 4m all the screaming...rohan waz now sittin on the bed jnb were still in the same pose...
'well...'b began...and she tld rimpy and rohan about how jai ne pyar ke ishar kiya tha...well not all the detailz😉
'OMG THTS SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE' rimpy ran 2 giv bani a hug (4 all u tht thought she waz bein mean...well she waznt she waz just anticipated...might turn mean later thou)
rohan casualy got up and shook hand wit jai and started 2 giv b a hug but stopped and asked j..
'do i hav permission?'
'yes u do...but onli as a friend'
so rohan hugged b...'congrats...u deserve it'...he wishpered
soon the parti died down...ppl cudin get ova the fact tht jnb were a COUPLE now...
rohan rimpy jnb were standin near baniz car...she waz tryin 2 start it but it wudnt...'DAMN IT!!!!! i swear im not payin the mechanics'
RING RING
'hello bani?'
'haan bhabs(baniz bhabi) bolo'
'where r u...r u sleepin ova at rimpyz or commin home...'
'no no bhabs im cummin...as soon as my car starts...'
'ill drop u home...'jai interupted
'hu said tht?'
'bhabz it waz jai...he lives close by so he'll drop me home since my car isnt startin...ill b there in 20 minz k bhabz'
'bani if u wanna stay at rimpyz u can'
'noooooooo bhabz im not leavin u alone...im cummin home im 20 minz...k...luv u bye'
(BANIZ FAMILY...BOUT TIME I TLD U BOUT IT...well therez no pia...4 all those hu hate her....therez no rano...its her bhaiya and bhahz...her parents died when she waz 16...shez 19 now so 3 years ago in a car accident...her bhaiya and bhabz luv her and she is sumwat spoiled...but there is a raaz and ill revile it later on😈...her bhaiya now ownz their dadz company...wat type dnt noe yet....and so rite now he is in dubai 4 a business trip and bhabz is pregnant!)
'so lets go u guiz i dnt want bhabz alone in the house'
'wherez ur bhaiya?' j asked
'dubai 4 business'
'icic...well lets go then...rohan u need a ride 2 or u goin later?'
'nah its k...im gonna go later'
'k c ya then...rimps ill call u 2moro k...and we'll decide wat we r doin then...nite guiz' gettin in2 the car b called out
baniz house was 15 min away 4m rimpyz rohanz waz 2 houses down 4m baniz and jai waz 5 min away...the drive 2 baniz house waz quite...except when jai wud stare at bani at the stop lights...
'jai green meanz go...chlo' b said scarcastically...luckly there were no carz behind them...jai was starin at b....
'hmm...i noe...dil nahi bolra jaana ko...i just want 2 sit here and look at u all nite' he waz cummin 2 crease her cheek when a car horn blew in front of them (car hornz= the disturbance in luv scene..happened 2 timez so far)
j started drivin gain...he stopped in baniz drivewai...her house was really pretty...white wit a lot of tress and flowerz a round drive wai wit a island wit a huge tree and a pattern made out of flowerz round it in the the middle...the backyard waz long...it had a pool and a basket ball/ volleyball/badminton court...and god noes wat else...this was not visible 4m the drive wai
bhabz room light waz open...bani got out of the car..well tired 2 but j pulled her bak by grabing on2 her hand...
'wherez my gudnite kiss' he asked wit the most romantic voice and look
'dnt get one' b teased
'well if thtz the case...then i also noe how 2 get wat i want forcefully'
'u wudnt' b warned while lettin herself go...she let him pull her 2wardz him...it felt so gud...she waz dyin 4 the cuddle of his arms 4 ages and she had finally gotten it...he slowly bought his head near her he brushed her cheek wit this head...his hand round her stomach and glidin across her bak...she had shiver in her spine...his lips neared his and herz his...almost there....
'BANI!'
------------------------------------------------------------ -------------------------------- b4 i start i just wanna say tht i luv u all 4 carin so much
Part 15
bhaz waz runnin...well at least tryin 2...down the front stairz...she came and hugged bani...
'OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG BANI Y DIDNT U TELL ME?!?! IS THIS JAI...IT IS JAI RITE?!....OMG OMG OMG....oh btw im baniz bahbi'
jai waz amazed at how amazed bhabz waz, bani waz in shock...
'nice 2 meet u bhabz...dnt mind if i call u tht rite?'
'no no not at all...god noez i might b cum ur future bhabz'
bani waz still in shock...she cudnt belive tht the 2 of them were socializin in tht wai....rain started 2 fall...
'u better head home jai...u never noe...ye mumbai ki barich khab tez ho gaya!'
'haan haan...chalo...ill c u 2moro than...'
'2moro?!'bani waz out of her trance
'yea 2moro hez gonna go shoppin wit us and than lunch'
jai hugged bhabz...well tried 2 her pregnant stomach waz not allowin it...and than gav b a peck on the cheek and drove off....
bhabz waz ova excited....bani had 2 brust her bubble
'bhabz ur cool wit it but huz gonna tell bhaiya?'
'u leave tht 2 me...u pregnant lady can make her husband do a lot of thingz😉chalo ab sujho we'll tak in the morining...'and she walked off sayin omg omg omg all the wai 2 her room
bani waz now in bed wit her fav blue pjz on...she lay there wit a teddy bear in her arm and thought about how bhaiya wud react 2 the news of b goin out wit j and if bhabz wud b jz futre bhabz....'do i wanna marry him, ye phir ye ise hai, is it a crush or more? will bhaiya b mad or will he b happi?'she cudnt stop thinkin...soon she waz asleep thinkin bout married life wit jai❤️
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PART 16
the next dai bhabz rimpy rohan and bani had planned 2 go shoppin 4 themselves and the babi tht waz round the corner...jai had been added 2 the plan...he had bcum the official bag carrier along wit rohan whu waz burried under all of rimpyz purchases....
in the morining jai had cum 2 pick them up....bhabz insisted tht he and bani went in his car and tht she came wit rohan and rimpy...rohan and rimpy didnt mind..they felt tht the new luv birdz needed time alone....
so in the car sat bani and jai...rohanz car waz ahead of them...jai waz tryin 2 mak conversation...but b waz once gain in the trance she waz in last nite...
at the mall they shopped and shopped and shopped....b waznt a shop-o-olic but 2dai she wanted 2 buy everything tht she thought looked pretty 4 her and the baby....they had lunch at sum next resturant...bani luved the food there...she rememebered when u used 2 cum ther wit bhaiya....after lunch when rohan rimpy and bhahz headed off 2 do more shoppin and tht 2 at the time when jnb were still eatin lunch...b got suspicous they had finished their food as quickly and poss and bhabz had winked at j when they were leavin....
j reached ova the table and held bz hand....wit his other hand he offered her a box...
'tumhara liye'
'kya hai?'
'kuch nahi'
'i dnt want it'
'well thts 2 bad u hav 2 tak it'
'no i dnt' b like the look he got on his face when she didnt agree wit him
'yes u do'
'nope'
'yes'
'nope' b waz havin a lot of fun
'yes' jai waz on his last nerve but liked when b did tht
'yes' b tired 2 trick jai but...
'there u said yes now tak it'
b took the box and opened it...and in there waz the most beautifull necklace she had ever seen ....it waz a white gold heart pendant tht had small diamondz on one side and tht hang at a tilt on the necklace....
'u like it?'
'jai...omg....' b got up and gave him a ever lasting hug....'thanx sooooooooooooooo much ....i love it...ill alwaiz wear it...omg...i luv u jai!'
'well thts gud 2 hear...mom will b happi and ofcourse im happi'
'mom?'
'yea she noez i love u and she had bought this necklace...well she forced me 2 the store and told me 2 chose and shez lik when u say i luv u 2 her giv it 2 her...i didnt have it wit me yesterdai so here it is 2dai ....i showed it 2 bhabz 2 and she luved it and so did rohan and rimpy...but matterz most is tht u like it!'
'OMG JAI...I LUV U!' another hug....
'u want me 2 put it on?'they were out of the resturant by now and were standin in a little hallway tht seperated the mall 4m the resturant...
'yea!' bani moved her hair...she cud feel jaiz hand on her neck as he put the necklace on her...he leaned down and kissed her neck...she turned around...he moved her hair 4m her face and kissed her lips...her handz around his neck and his around his waist (SIGNATURE POSE😉)
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Im hurt...onli one respnse 2 the last 2 parts....it hurts a lot😭😭so you onli get one short part 2dai and i dedicate it 2 Hirtik_luver(hope i got it rite) plz guiz a gud job or a suggestion on how 2 improve or wat u want more of in the ff wud b realli nice...showz tht u read it
Part 17
'hmmmmmm agar apa dono ke luv scene katham hogaya ho tho chalan?' rohan asked grinnin....
on the drive home bani cudnt stop thankin and sayin i luv u to jai...jai waz rather enjoyin this...he luved the wai her eyes sparkled up when she waz happi 'i shud get her a present everydai...just 2 c her like tht...and hear the wordz i luv u ova and ova gain' jai thought
bani waz informed tht jaiz mom waz cummin ova 4 dinner tht nite...'jai...aunty i mean ur mom...does she like traditional girlz or modernized?'
'y u askin' he knew y but luved teasin her...she waz so naive yet so clever
'cuz i just m...tell me'
'she likez girlz like u...jo waqt ke hisaab se kaam kartha hain'
'huh?' poor bani...everythin needed 2 b explained 2 her
'well i mean...tum college me western penthi ho aur when u go 2 the mall and hang out wit friendz...as soon as u get home u change into shalwar kameez...and thts wat mom wants in her bauhoo'
'okay' she said wit all smilez...but she cudnt help but wonder how he knew tht she changed into shalwar kameez when she got home...and...her heart skipped a beat when he said bauhoo...
the car pulled up in the drivewai of the dixith mansion....every1 seemed 2 b in a gr8 mood...they got 2 the door all holdin a few bagz and jai holdin the HUGE teddy bear he had bought 4 bhabz babi...it waz so cute...he had promised 2 get bani one (she luved stuffed animalz [ lik me!]) they got 2 the door 2 c it swing open and bhayia standin on the other side
baniz heart skipped a beat...jai almost dropped the bear...rohan almost ran for it...rimpy waz frozen...bhabz just stared at her husband....bani waz gonna faint
'hhhe-e-hey bb-bhaiya'
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THANX 4 THE REPLIEZ U GUIZ...HOPE U ENJOY THIS PART...THEREZ A TWIST😉
Part 18
'hey sis!' bhaiya hugged bani...then his wife...than rimpy...shook handz wit rohan...and when he got 2 jai...'and huz this?'
'jai walia, sir bani rimpy and rohan study 2gether' he added rimpyz and rohanz name in there 2 mak the relationship wit bani less obvi
'nice 2 meet u 2...and plz no sir shir..call me ranveer(yes yes i turned the dewaar 2 the brother...but hez not evil in here) or bhaiya'
'bhaiya it is than...excuse me..'jaiz fone had rung and he answered it as the rest headed inside
'bhabz im realli sry but anu(jaiz sis) ki tabaat karab hogiy hai...mom cant cum 4 dinner...she sayz shez sry...and im gonna head home 2...'
'dnt worri jai...aunty ko bolo if she needz nethin 2 giv me a call...'
jai said bye 2 every1 and headed 2wardz his car...
'jai!' bani cum and gav him a hug ( no signature pose this time...shez 2 worried bout bhaiya) 'i tell bhaiya as soon as i can...woh nahi tho nahi kahinga...i noe he'll say yes but itll tak sum time...hez realli protective over me since mom and dad passed awai...but i noe he'll say yes...i just noe it'
'dnt worri bani...ill wait till im 100 if i hafta 2...ive waited so long i can wait a little while longer...as long as i noe ur minez...and u r minez...u cant b sum1 elsez' he gav her a peck on her cheek and drove off
when bani entered the living room she saw tht there waz sum1 in there tht she didnt recognise
'ahh bani...idhar aao...bani meet tarun, yeh ashok uncle ka bata hai....hez gonna stay wit us 4 a while and hez gonna go 2 ur college!'
'hey' turun held out his hand...bani shook it...
'turun go and freshen up we'll hav dinner in a while'
so turun got up and left bhaiya turned 2 bani 'bani ill b straight 4ward wit u...ashok uncle ne turun ke kiye tumhar haat manga hai....i want u 2 hang around turun and c if u lik him...bani even i want u 2 marry him...hez a nice guy....but its ur choice....lekin hez a nice guy...perfect husband material'
bani stood frozen...bhabz rohan and rimpy were also frozen....bhaiya waz goin through the shoppin bagz....slowly bani turned her head 2wardz bhabz....her eyes were pleading 4 help...small tearz were sliding down her cheekz....her bhabz noded indicatin tht shez get her out of this mess...
bani slowly walked 2 her room....jaiz wordz echoin in her mind...'UR MINE...U CANT B SUM1 ELSEZ....'
hehe enjoy.....herez a peak at 2moroz update
'NO' bani screamed
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hey guiz 2 updates in a dai rent u lucki...well u c my midterm report cardz r 2moro and my avg is not the gr8 so it meanz im gonna stay awai 4m the IF and MSN and all those addictin thingz so i rote u another part 2dai
Part 19
bani lay frozen on her bed....bhabz came in...bani dnt worri ill tak 2 ranveer 2 nite k...dnt worri i wont let u get married 2 turun...bani look at me...i promise...ur bhabz promises' and she hugged bani...the 2 women stayed in an embrace till a servant came 2 call them 4 dinner
bani freshen up changed in2 her shalwar kameez, while doin this she again wondered how jai knew bout her changin into shalwar kameez as soon as she got home...
dinner waz quite bhaiya and turun were the onli onez talkin rohan rimpy and bhabz wud put in a comment or 2 but bani stayed quite...after dinner every1 sat in the grand living room...afta a while rohan and rimpy headed 4 home....bani went 2 drop them off....
rimpy hugged bani 'dnt worri jaan....bhabz promised and she wont let u get married 2 turun...'
'yea dnt worri bani....bhaiya wud hav 2 go thru a lot of ppl 2 reach u and put u in the mandap beside turun...' baniz fone rang
'hey jaan...i miss u...'baniz eyez poped out...it waz jai waz she gonna tell him or wuz she gonna sta quite...rimpy ran inside 2 call bhabz at the sight of baniz face rohan held baniz hand
'hello...bani u there...is it a bad time...is bhaiya around? hello?'
'ummmmmmmm no jai nothin....o here bhabz wants 2 tak 2 u....'bhabz waz yankin the phone out of baniz hand
she explained everything 2 jai...the whole turun thing....jai waz mad...he had waited so long 2 get bani he wudnt let go so easily...
'bhabz giv the phone 2 bani'
'bani im cummin there and tellin bhaiya everything....i cummin rite now!'
'NO!!!!!!!!!'bani screamed (here the peak i gav u😉)
'jai listen u cant cum....bhabz gonna tak 2 bhaiya 2nite...and bhaiya has 2 agree...or ill tell turun ...but u cant cum here....plz jai-'
'lekin bani-'
'jai agar tum mujshe pyar karte ho tho phir tum nahi aaogay'
'fine' he sounded annoyed yet caring 'but wat if bhaiya doesnt agree?'
'than ill tell turun-'
'tell me wat?' turun waz now standin at the top of the front porch steps looking down at the shocked faces of 4 people....whereas he waz all smilez
PEAK 4 PART 20
'i wanna marry --------------------------' turun informed (not tellin u hu hez talkin bout😈)
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Part 20
'tell me wat?'he asked gain...
'ummm nothin yaar...just tht our college suckz...'rohan tired 2 cover up
'hmmmmmmm ic....'
'ill c u guiz later its late hum chaltain hain' rimpy said indicating 2wardz rohan....and they left bhabz went inside and bani started following....
'bani...'
she turned around at turunz voice
'woh i wanted 2 talk 2 u bout the shaa--i mean wat time does college start 2moro?'
'its sundai 2moro so its close other wise it starts at 9'
'hmm k thnax'
bani knew tht it wasnt the time tht turun wanted 2 noe but sumthing else....
the next morining bani asked bhabz if she had taked 2 bhaiya...she said no...tht he had fallen asleep b4 she cud and tht in the morning he had left 2 puna...
'a last min bussiness trip' she had said...
jai had almost jumped out of his balcony upon hearing this...'tht meanz tht we cant tell him...mean tht the shaadi ideaz still there....BANI....IM COMMIN AND TELLING TURUN!!!!!!!!!!!'
'jai bhai is everything okay?' a sick anu had asked upon hearing jai scream
'haan jaan everythingz fine u go rest ill b there in a while' jai luved anu and he waz worried bout her and now the whole bani thing waz gettin my pissed and cuzin more stress...
'bani plz...do sumthing otherwise ill do sumthin...'
'jai plz...ill talk 2 u bout it 2moro at college....i love u and i wont get married 2 turun no matter wat....'
bani had calmed jai down 2 sum extent....tht sundai went realli slow...turun had woken up late giving bani and bhabz time 2 tak....afta turun had insisted tht they go out for a movie...so he and bani went...bhabz waznt feelin well and rimpy and rohan had other planz...all throught the dai turun wanted 2 say sumthing but cudnt....bani got reali irretated at this....sundai finally came 2 and end
mondai went slower than sundai...bani saw jai but cudnt giv him a hug cuz turun waz there...all the 2 desperate love birdz cud do waz make eye contact...by the end of college turun had finally decided 2 spill the beanz
'bani i noe tht humari shaadi ke baath chalri hai and the truth is tht i dnt wanna get married' bani tired 2 control her happiness at this but it waz impossible she tired hard not 2 jump 4 joy
'bani bak in goa therez this girl...reema i lik her she likez me we wanna get married and im 2 scared 2 tell my dad bout her but now im gonna cuz he wants me 2 get married 2 u and i cant...i dnt wanna get married 2 u but not luv u...do u get wat im sayin? i wanna get married 2 reema(therez the peak)'
so bani tld him bout jai and her worries ova the weekend by the end of it both of them were laughin....
'so we r cool rite...no hard feelingz?'
'nope!'
'friendz?'
'friendz!'
so the 2 new friendz went 2 tell jai rohan and rimpy the gr8 new hu upon hearing were overjoyed....soon jai and bani were left alone....
jai slumped gainst a wall and bani went a put her handz around his neck...and his handz on her waist...than their lips on each otherz....SIGNATURE POSE!
PEAK 4 PART 21
'the time has cum'
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when bhabz heard the gr8 news she jumped wit joy...and she promised tht shed help turun tell his dad bout reema....tht nite jai bani rohan rimpy and turun decided 2 go out 4 a movie and dinner....during the movie turunz cell rang...it waz his dad...he waz gonna reach mumbai the dai afta 2moro.....
during the movie jai held baniz hand and pecked it every so often...bani didnt mind she rather enjoyed it! dinner went by good 2....
rohan waz the driver tht nite...1st he dropped rimpy off which took an hour! than jai(jnbz bye bye waz a quick one since anu had cum out in the balcony) and then it waz bani and turun...
when bani and turun got home bhabz waz already sound asleep but the 2 of them werent so they sat in the family room eating oreos and milk and talkin bout theri love lifes and future planz....it waz around 2 in the nite when bhabz screamed.....bani and turun ran upstairs...bhabz waz in labour pain...they rushed 2 the hospital and bhabz waz rolled in...the doctor checked her and said tht there waz still time and told her 2 walk...so bhabz walked hldin baniz and turunz hand in pain....bani waz nervous...she didnt noe wat 2 do she waz also excited cuz bhabz had asked her 2 cum into the labour room with her(i dnt noe wat the roomz called correct me if im rong ill change it) RING RING
'hey shogai te kya?'
'jai! no! guess wat?!' bhabz waz takin a rest 4m walking...'bhabz in the hospital...shez gonna hav a babi and im goin in the room wit her!'
'bani thts gr8 newz! im cummin 2 the hospital, which one r u at?'
so witin minutes jai arrived at the hospital along wit his mom!
'namaste aunty'bani said as she touched her feet
'aunty nahi beta...mom....im ur mom-in-law 2 b!' bani blushed lik mad at this and made eye contact wit jai until bhabz scream...the doctor ran out and gav one look at her and said 'the time has come'(PEAK)
it waz 3 and bhabz finally went in the room...bani along wit her. bani had given turun instructionz on callin bhaiya and telling him tht bhabz waz in the hospital...so turun kept calling but bhaiyaz cell waz unreachable till 4...and when bhaiya heard the newz he waz ready 2 walk back 2 mumbai but had 2 wait 4 the next flight which waz at 8 tht morining
4 o'clock...still no newz bout bhabz
5 o'clock....no newz
5:30...'CONGRATULATIONZ ITS A BOY!!'
PEAK 4 PART 22
'and who are you?'
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Part 22
it waz 6 by the time bani had cleaned up and cum out of bhabz room(she had been transfered 2 a private bedroom and the babi waz taken by the nurse 4 cleanin and prodcedure stuff so no one had seen it yet)
'BANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII CONGRATS!' rimpy had shown up wit her parents and rohan wit his
after all the congratualtin the nurse said tht they were allowed 2 go into c the babi and the mother...so everyone headed in and as bani followed them sum1 pulled her hand...it waz jai 'i havent said congrats 2 u yet'
'well say it now and let me go so i can c the babi'
'ur lookin at ur babi rite now rent u?' he said in the cutest teasing voice tht has ever exsisted
'yea i ....'she stopped her self half way realzing tht she waz bout 2 giv in 2 his plan 'not fair! u tricked me!'
he laughed and pulled her, well she let him pull her, outside the hospital in a small alley way...he leaned gainst a wall pulled her towards him put his hands on her waist and put his forehead on herz....she cud feel his warm breath on her face....he had his eyes closed...she stood there with herz open enjoying the moment then she slowly moved her handz up his chest and made her way around his neck....than she gentaly and very slowly kissed his cheek and then his lips (SIGNATURE POSE) baniz cell rang...it waz rohan bhaiya had arrived...it waz 9 and they hadnt even noticed the two of them had been in that alleyway for an hour!
bani and jai ran inside the hospital....bani waz gain scared jaiz mom waz with bhabz and bhaiya wud ask hu she waz...and what wud the answer of tht question be?
they had gotten to the door but before they stepped in jai said 'thts the 1st time you kissed me'really quietly in her ear...then he went in gave bhabz a hug picked up the baby and adored it (he looked so hot doing that!)(bhaiya waz not in the room) slowly bani made her wai in to the room and congratulated bhabz
'indar aao bani baacha apne aunty or hona wala unlce ko ek saath dekna chata hai! ' that was rimpy who also happened to be adoring the baby so bani made her way there and adored the baby to
'BANI!' it was bhaiya! 'i cud say bani aunty!' and he came over and gave bani a long hug....the babi waz now in rohanz hands and jai waz standign behind bani bhaiya let go of bani from the hug and looked at jai 'and who are you?' he asked in a strange way...'wait! wait! dont answer that. i know who you are...you are my brother-in-law to be....yani ke meri behna ke paathi dev to be' he put his hand around baniz shoulder and squeed it and winked at jai
jai and bani stood there drumstruck...
PEAK FOR PART 23
'ek sharta hai'
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PART 23
bhaiya gav out a loud laugh and pretty soon the rest of the people in the room except jaia nd bani started to laugh.
'apna mou ban kar lo bani koi makee chala giage!' this waz reali funny to turun as well
'bani jai, muja paath hai. i know that you guiz like each other and tht turun likes someone called reema and wants to get married to her. Raashi(bhabz) just tld me, and im fine with it!'
'bhaiya!'bani waz out of her trance and she ran to give her bhaiya a hug 'i love you'
'jai' his mom said indicating that he should go there to, so he did and both of them took arshitwad from the elders
'thanx bhaiya'jai said
'dnt get too happy now, i accept this lekin ek sharat hai(PEAK)'
'kya'jai asked sounding scared
'tum bani ko hamesha kush rako gay'
'bas itnee si baath, bhaiya uski kushi me meri kushi hai'bani blushed at this when everyone waz setelled down,
'bhaiya chalen mein aap ko ghar drop kar tha hoon. you must be tired from the filght' rohan told bhaiya
'no no. i waz tired lekin aapne beta ko dek ka takan chala gi. haan lekin turun bani ko ghar lekar jao, shez been here all nite, aur aap sab be ghar jain, aap log bhi raat bhar yahin teh.' so everyone left, rimpy went home with her parents, rohan with his parents
when bani and turun reached baniz car she realized that she did not have the keys, she peaked inside the car and saw the keys hangin in the car
'kya hua beta?' it waz jaiz mom
'woh aunty chabi gari me reh gayi'
'ooo, tho chalo we will drop you off'
'nahi aunty, ghar ke chabi bi gari me hai'
' tho kya hua humare ghar chalo'and she called bhaiya and tld him that bani and turun were goin to stay at her house
when jai heard the news he tried realli hard to not show his excitement...all through out the drive he kept looking at bani...the walia mansion came into site and the gates opened...then the car door...then the mansion doors...then bani steped foot inside the Walia mansion
PEAK 4 PART 24
'hmmmmm'
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PART 24
'aao bani, turun tum bi aao' jaiz mom said
'mom!' anu came running down the stairz, she waz dressed in jeanz and a over sized tee...she kinda reminded bani of herself, 'mom, ur bak!' she leaned over and hugged her mom 'wherez bro?'
'yahaan hoon' her bro answered from where he had plooped on the sofa
'bro!'and she gav him a hug 2...she wishpered sumthin in his ear and then he gav her sum money out of his pocket
'mom im goin shoppin...shaad raat anjali ke pas rah joon tho dnt get worried ill-' she stopped in the middle of her sentence to realize that she had guest at her house...'OMG OMG OMG...mom kya yeh...OMG it is u! BRO OMG!!!!!!!! okay anu calm down' and with this she stuck out her hand and said ' hey, im anu, ap ki howna wali...hindin meh kya ketha hain?..o well...meh aap ki ho na wali sis-in-law...aur aap hain bani dixit meri ho na wali bhabi?'
'haan anu, u guessed rite! ab jao get readi and go shoppin aur app ni ho na wali bhabi ke aram ker ne do' her mom butt in
anu ran over 2 her bro gav him a hug and said 'u were rite she is beautiful!'
'jai tum turun ko guest room dekho, bani tum mere saath aao' and so aunty took bani up to a room and asked her if she needed ne thing and if she did she should not hesistate to tell her or jai or anu or any of the servants. bani took off her sweat shirt to reaveal a tank top, climed in bed and fell fast asleep...
'mmmm'someone waz playin with her hair while poor her waz trying to sleep some more
'bani' the someone wishpered in her ear
'hmmmm'(PEAK)
'bani uto, char baj re hain'
so bani turned and faced the someone and rubbed her eyes only to see...
JAI
lying down beside her and that too in her blanket!
she screamed and jerked up but jai grabbed her hand and pulled her down...
now he lay in bed with her on top of him, him still holding her hand and the blanket all twisted around her!
PEAK 4 PART 25
'jai mujha neecha choro!'
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PART 25
she cud feel his chest rising up and down as he breathed...she quietly tired to get away from him, when it didnt work she screamed
'JAI!!!!!!!!CHORO MUJHE!'
jai just shook his head no
'jai plz, kio aa jaiya ga'
'ghar mein koi nahi hai' he said a matter-a-factly
'khana hain sab?' she stopped stuguling for one moment to find out everyonez whereabouts
jai noticed this and slowly pulled her towards him tellin her where every1 waz at 'momz gonna to the office, anu at her friendz house. turun is gonna wit rohan who came to pick him up to find ur house keys and get ur car unlocked' now he waz nose to nose with her...she jerked up gain but he pulled her bak down...she moved her hair from her face creased her neck...then her cheek...then her lips and then he bought his lips to herz
their kiss lasted 4eva and when it waz done she gave up and put her head on his chest he creased her bak....
'JAI!!!!!!!'
he had tired to get his hand under her tanktop but she waz quick to react...
'sorry! sorry!' he felt ashamed at his craving of her
'let me go!' she waz furious
'im sorry! bani! plz mujhe maaf kardo! i wont do it agin, i promise!' he wailed like a baby
'fine but if u do ill never tak 2 u gain!'
'okay i promise' and so she put her head on his chest again
"5 O'CLOCK" the digital clock called out bani and jai had been cuddled up for an hour...she had fallen asleep on his chest! and he had fallen asleep too!
she woke up at the sound of the clock and got out of bed...jai woke up to see her leaving and grabed her hand...he pulled himslef up and picked her up...they had a little eye to eye moment and then
'jai muhje neeche choro!'
'um,um' he shook his head no again
'pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee' she waz scuking up to him
'u noe ur realli cute when u do tht and no one can say no to that face' and he put her down
'i noe thtz y i do it!' she sounded all pepey
all of a sudden it thundered and lighting hit and the lights went out, actually it had been rain all day but jnb didnt notice it, bani lunged towardz jai and hugged him tight the windows brust open and wind blew in slaming the bedroom door shut
jai aur bani ek kamra mein bund ho aur light chaly gay(sing this 2 the tune of tht old song)
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PART 26
bani is holding on 2 jai with her life...he is just amazed at how sacred she is....she can feel his heart beating at a normal pace whereas herz is beatin fast...really fast....the room is still drak and the door still shut and the wind still blowing...bani is now shivering because of the wind
'tum bilig se daar thi ho?' jai broke the silence
'hmm'still holding very tightly
he moves her away from him...takes her hand and makes her sit on the bed...he is bout 2 go open the door just then the lighintin strikes gain...she pullz jaiz hand indicating for him not to go...
'it will only take 2 secondz...' she relectantly lets go of jaiz hand
he opens the door and sees that the whole house is pitch black he comes and sits beside a shivering bani....'therez no point in goin downstairs it 2 dark..hum light ana tak yahin wait ker tha hain' he then notices that bani is shivering
he takes of his sweat shirt (no no he is not topless...not yet😉) under he is wearing a black tee...he handz the sweat shirt 2 bani...who shakes her head no...he push it 2 her and she wears it...it smells lik Axe...'i hate that spray...but it smells so nice on him' she thinks
the hood of the sweat it on her head she takes it off...jai brings his hands up and puts it on her again...'you look cute like that'
their eyes lock
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PART 27
'HAPPI BIRTHDAI TO YOU HAPPI BIRTHDAY TO YOU HAPPI BIRTHDAY DEAER BANI HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU'
it had been three months since jai and baniz eyes had locked...there was no touchin no nuzzling no nothing...just the locking of the eyes as the winds blew and the lighting struck...
bahbz and bhaiya had named there bunddle of joy ajay...and he had grown to be a 3 month old adorable looking baby who the family could not seem to leave alone
after baniz birthday bash had quited down her family jaiz family rimpys family and rohanz family sat around talking
'puthar next year you will celebrate your birthday at jaiz house' rimpys moms statement made bani blush
'naaaaa' bhaiya spoke and than jaiz mom went to explain that she bhaiya and bhabz had decided that both jai and bani had 2 complete college than complete their further studies and than they would get married until than marriage was far from thought
it seemed strange but jai and bani knew that this was comming
5 months from that day they bid goodbye to each other
both jai and bani wanted to study bussiness but bani in canada and jai in the usa so they parted ways for four years (their programs would take 4 years to complete)
they had booked their flights on the same day and at the airport everybody had come to see them off
'ill be leavin to londo in 3 weeks and rimpys goin to ny(jai was also goin there) in a month' rohan informed jai and bani while the adults stood at the side and shared their worries
it took forever to say goodbye bani did not shed a tear her eyes were watery but she refused to cry in front of everyone...jai was just sad....bhabz cried....bhaiya tired to hide his feelings....mom was crying....rimpy was crying...rohan had small tears on his cheek
'will all passengers on the flight to toronto please proceed for boarding'
'thts me!' bani tired to sound happy but cudnt, jai and bani were now past security and they had stared at their loved one enough to last them 4 years
jai hugged bani....they stood in a corner and hugged each other...not saying a word....jai broke the silince
'4 years...thts a long time'
'we can come see each other'
'yea but still'
the boarding call went on again
jai kissed bani on her forehead her cheeks and her lips...each place 4 times
'4 times to last 4 years'
and with that the patient lovers parted ways for 4 years
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PART 28
'hey bani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' it was rimpy bani was still asleep in her bed in her apartment but she shot upright upon hearing the voice of her bestfriend
'rimpyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hey how are you? howz jai? howz rohan? o btw i talked to him yesterdai!'
'im fine! jaiz fine! and ye i talked to rohan 2! here talk to jai before he kills me!'
it turned out that the two of them were sitting at starbucks
'hey jaan' hearing his voice send shivers up her spine, she missed his touch...it was that touch that kept her going
bani talked to jai for hours and then rimpy, she was sort of jealous over the fact that rimpy was with jai and over the fact that jai and rimpy had a familiar shoulder to cry on and a person to share thier worries with while she and jai did not....jai felt the same way
each nite bani would tick off the days that had passed and then go to sleep dreaming of what would happen after the four years
she had made many friends who often came over to her apartment but she still missed her old friends
one year passed really slowly and while she sat at a tim hortons with her hot chocolate(it was the middle of june yet she was drinking a hot choclate) someone tapped her on her shoulder and said her name
the voice was familiar and when she turned around she almost jumped
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i noe i promised 2 but 1z all i got...3 next time i update
PART 29
'OMG OMG OMG....wat r u doin here' sudenly the whole of tim hortons was looking a bani jumping up and down and hugging ____(not tell you yet)
'well i had summer break so i thought id cum c u...can we go get icecream...i mean its boilin hot and ur havin a hot chocolate!'
'sure lets go'
so bani and _____ went out and had an icecream and shared their experinces over the one year they spent apart...they sat at the beach...his hands were wrapped around her waist and she snuggled close to him...passerbyers were looking at them...esp the onez who knew bani all wanting to ask 'is that your boyfriend' question, yet none willing to...bani smiled as ____complained over the 3 more years to come wit seperation...she remembered the times they had spent together...the suprise bdai parti, the shoping day, bhabz baby, the airport , her bdai...all those loving times they spent together....
this was the perfect dai 4 her wat more cud she want she saw ___and got to spent the dai with him and the rest of the summer...it waz PERFECT!
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sry the link i gav u b4 waz rong
HERE IS THE LINK TO PART 30-31...ALL UPDATES WILL NOW BE DONE ON THIS LINK
http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post.asp?PID=8261126&TP N=1