FF: Mein Tumhari Dost.. Tum Mere Pyar - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
awwww..... 😭 the beginning was so cute with the kiddy luv 😳 😳 😳 and now she's leaving 😭 jai should start missing bani and realize his feelings for her 😃 can't wait yaar--- update soon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
YAY guli!! another ff!! I really love the way this story is going!!! Please continue soon!!! I can't wait to see what happened with Jai that he is in the shocked state!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Part 11

Jai is like ur going to leave me!!!

Bani smiles!

She's like I will always be with u!!

just think of me

And I will be there!!!

Bani is like

U have Roshni now!!...

She will replace me!

Jai is like

Ur my bestest friend!

My one and only!!!!

Bani is sad hearing him say that!

Bani is like this is what I want to do!!

U want me to be happy right??

Jai is like of course!

I always want the best for u!!

But he's like how will u get there!

Bani is like

I will manage!

He's like let me help u!

Bani is like its okay!

Jai is like no!!!

It's the least I can do!!!

He's willing to help her!!!!

After a few days….

Bani is packed up!!!

And she comes to Walia House

To say good bye to everyone!

She touches Krishna and Masi's feet!!!

And she hugs them

And cries!!!!!!!!

Jai is standing right there!!

He tells her

I will take u to the station!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Part 12

Bani: Jai..

Jai: Bani!!... no!! I don't want to here it!!

Bani agrees!!!!!

Jai gives money to the cab driver

To take her things there

And he drives her!!!!

Its silent in the car

BAni wants to cry!!

But she stops herself from crying!!!!

The car ride took about an hour

But that hour went by soo fast!!

And it only felt like 10 mins!!!

Bani closes her eyes!!

Both get out of the car!!!

Bani is like I guess this is it!!!

Jai is like u take care of urself

And make sure u call me everyday!!

Bani laughs

And says I will!!

She's like u take care of urself too!!!!

And then she hugs him tight!!!!!!!!!!

And he hugs her back!!

And she cries!!

Jai: Arre.. why u getting all mushy for?

Bani laughs and says sorry!!!!!!

Jai laughs too!!!

Jai takes her by her train

Her stuff is already there!!!

And then she's about to go

And she waves to him!

He waves back!!

Train moves and slowly they are apart!!!

Bani's on the train crying

Cuz she's missing him already!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Part 13

Jai is like wow!! I wont have my best friend by me!!!!!

2 years pass by…….

Bani and Jai have been talking to each other

But in the beginning

It was everyday

But then slowly

It began to fade away!

She kept herself busy

Trying not to think about him too much!!!!

They only talked like

Once a month!!!!

Twice if they were lucky!!!!

Jai was doing good too!!!!

He got his own company

And him and Roshni were just fine!

Jai was happy with her!

And she was too!!!!!

But then one day..

Roshni tells him

That she has to go away!!!!

Jai is like why???

Roshni is like

I have to do something for myself!!

And she got a job

Outside of the country

And he's shocked!!!!

Roshni is like

I am sorry!!!

But I really want this!!!!

Jai was soo happy with her!!!!

But now she's going!!!!!!!!

1 week later

She ends up leaving!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai was upset
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
Part 14

After she left!!!!

Jai is like

1st bani left

And now she left!!!!!!

Jai gets a phone call

And he's shocked!!!!!

And then

He comes to the hospital!!

Krishna's there!!!!!!

She's admitted there!!

Becuz she has cancer!!!

Jai's in a state of denial!!

He doenst want to believe it!

But its true

And she's in her last stage!!!!!!!

Jai keeps telling her

That nothing will happen to her!!!!

Krishna is like

How long will u say this?

U know its true!

Jai is like no!

Afterwards…

Bani calls Jai!

And they talk for hours and hours!!!!

And he's just telling her everything!!

Bani is surprised about Roshni!!!!

And is shocked about Krishna!

She's like oh no!!!!!

Jai's crying over the phone!

And when he's like that

She's sad too!!!!!!

Jai's just pouring his heart out to her!!!!!!

Few days later…….

Jai gets the news

That his mom is no more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And he cant bare that shock!!!!

And he goes out of control!!!!!!!!



The End!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Preview for tomorrow:

Back to present day!!!!!

(remember this was all a flashback)

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
that was so sweet.jai really missed bani. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

My poor baby!!!!! everyone left him 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
awwwwww i feel bad for jai. poor jai.

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