FF: Mein Tumhari Dost.. Tum Mere Pyar

Part 1

Jai is entering Walia House in a wheel chair…

Everyone is looking at him!!!!!

They are all sad!!

He's in a state of mental shock!!!!!!!!!

And he's not saying anything!

Or he isnt moving!!!!

Doc is like…

Someone needs to get him out of this!!!..

Meanwhile……..

In another part of town…..

The phone is ringing….

Someone picks up the phone

And they are like WHAT?????

I will be there!!!!!!!!

Everyone at Walia House

Is trying to get Jai out of his shock!!!

But its no use!!!!

Masi is trying her best!!!!

But nothing is wrong!

In the late evening…..

the person that was on the phone

Comes to Walia House

Masi looks

Masi: Bani????

Bani is crying!!!!!

She comes to Masi

And hugs her!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: Masi….

Bani comes to Jai

Bani: Jai.. its me Bani!!!!….. Jai… its me Bani! Ur best friend!!!!!!!!!!!! Jai!! Answer me!!!!!

She's soo sad!!!!!

Jai and Bani are best friends!!!!!!!!

They are good child hood friends!!!!!

Bani goes my Krisha (Jai's mom) photo!!!

Part 2

There's a garland around there!!!!

Bani wants to know what happened after she left!!…

Masi is like lots of things happened after you left!!!

And now

Look at him!!!!!

Masi: We have to bring him back!!!!

Masi tells her to sit down….

And Masi tells Bani what happened

Bani is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

And now…

He's in this state!!

Bani cant believe it!!!

Bani is like u don't worry masi

I will help get my best friend back I promise you!!!!!

Masi smiles

And looks at her!

Bani goes into the guest room!!!

Cuz now

She's determined to get Jai back on his feet

And back to normal!

She goes into his room!

And she sits next to him

He's just lying there……

She puts her hand on his forehead

And she's just looking at him

She cant believe

That he's in this state today!!!!!!

Bani is crying!!!

You hear noises…

Like 2 little children laughing……..

And talking!!!!!

And then..

Bani goes back in time……………

(this flashback will take lots of parts…… so then you guyz will know how jai and bani know each other and how he's in this state….. so basically since… its night time.. lets just say it takes the whole night for this flashback…………. I don't know how many parts… but I will go with the flow)


The End!

whoa dude 11th fanfic.....haila how much free time do you have.....i am procastinating my homework by reading all these fanfics.....
keep up the good work...

CK❤️

hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa im so happy right now 😃 .. this is a DIFFERENT one.. i like i like.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

11th ff congrats
i think jaanu is goint to have 12th one before october ends just to make it dozen
wow Jai is in a mental shock something interesting, i hope its not to do with pia aur roshini

[QUOTE=Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli
If Ekta can be the queen of soaps.. i can be the queen of FF!!!

Jaanu you are already the queen of FFs on I-F better then the ekta
Know you are the queen of KS fan fictions for JB
First it was TD, then Sinndoor, Kusum, and KYPH

Hey,
WOW!!!!
11 Fanfics!!!!
This one seem to be different and interesting!!!
Pls continue soon,
Cannot wait for the next part,

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

P.S. I have 6 right now. I am planning to put 4 more ff since I had some unique ideas myself. So, be on the lookout for 4 more. Do not worry I am catching up to u!!!! 😆
Hope u do not mind!!!

wow! guli..sounds really interesting!! loved the first 2 parts...can't wait for the flashback 😛