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Absolutely great Aditee,👏 👏 👏 I am hopelessly addicted to your fanfic...Needless to say can't wait to read the next part...

Love

Garf

hi,
that was another very sweet part! excellent! awww that is so sweet of JW to ask for a chance lolz! and bani oh my, she was jealous! heheheh 😉
plz cont soon! i will be waiting!

thanx for a wonderful part once again.every single interaction of J-B is so interesting.Hats off to u for writing such a lovely story. 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: aditee

Hi! All
Thanks for loving it so much yet again.
I cant imagine how you all go back to read it. 😕 I am ashamed at the grammatical errors and typos and ridiculous spelling mistakes I make in each part. Makes me wonder if I ever went to school 😕
Maybe I didnt!

I dont think I wud be able to go back and correct it all in one go. So I'll just leave this whole thing the way it is, all flawed...........

The next part will not be a wedding the part after will be.

Hopefully the writing marathon will happen over the weekend. Iam living out of two places right now and cant promise much till I return home for good....
😉

May post a short and sweet (hopefully) one tonite!

I LOVE THAT SONG! Its from Umrao Jaan (yes the new Aish horror) Havent loved any song this much in the last decade......

Take care

A

Empress,
please don't talk about flaws....typos, grmmar etc. are irrelevant given the quality of your writing.....

Btw, congratulations about Kekta stealing from your ff....although on second thoughts maybe i should offer my commisserations....and feel sorry for myself...now i have the added heartache of watching kekta mangling a truly wonderfully story.....
and at the end of the day, we all know that kekta's JW and BW will never be anywhere close to your JW and BW, two ppl i know i am far more addicted to than i ever was to KS.....

Btw, i too am saving your ff.....

armana

Aditee,

it was prickling and awesome again.

So painful, JW who would die for a few soft words of her, trying to catch any indication from her side, that yes, she loves and needs him too. Eventhough he knows she does, but to hear it from her.....I could picturize him with a few tears in his eyes out of emotion and bliss.

But Bani's position is horrible - to be forced to marry - to be left without any decision-power. Who would not feel hurt, insulted, disgusted, rebellious, furious. No position to envy - a true trap. No wonder she can just be difficult with Jai - and the feelings that keep coming up for him she'd rather not have at all.

As you say - their ego....
would he tell her he loves her - she might start melting?

highest regards for your story...
Maria

Abt the possibility of using your ff:
in this situation what honour can they do to your story?Anyhow if it helps Balaji to bring the old J/B back, I guess we all would be grateful to you.

That was a sweet part.Part-53

Maria, has said everything so beautifully. 👏

Loved the way they made each other jealous.He tried to shower his care,love as ususal by his actions...

Loved their conversation, fights.😆
'U just brand me...eachtime..teeka, Mehandi,Lipstick...😳 (Including Haldi smell,just realized that we Indians r so lucky.😳We have so many beautiful things.)
I know I smell gr8.😆 '

Aditee, I love ur Hindi.It has some sweetness.Sometimes I read again & again for it.

Thanks a lot for a wonderful part.

absolutely great..
so romantic...
I like the part when he talks to Rano so cool anc calm.

loved part 53...now i am hooked....I love the intensity in ur FF....

Awesome part 53 is simply awesome... Love the monologue and the attitude JW has....Can't wait to see what happens at and after the weddiing....

Nidhi

woowwoow !!! Aditee !! u leave me speechless once again!
amazing hun !!
jut loved the last dialogueee !!! ohh-my ! 😳
pllzzz cont soooonn !!! will be waiting eagerlyy !!!
thnksx hun !
👏