JAii AND BANii FANFiiCTiiON

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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is my first fanfic for ks and i'm basically gonna lead on from where the serial is going. you can tell me honestly whether it's good or not. i won't mind.

Part one

Recap from latest ks episode: Bani gives the letter to Jai to read it, who takes the letter and begins reading it. Bani then tells Pia how could she do this to her own sister and how could she hold back this truth from her. Pia looks really scared as Bani gives her a lecture and Jai... He seems as if he will totally fall on the floor out of shock as Bani asks Pia if the letter is the cause that she wants to leave Walia Mansion and is this the reason why she wanted to leave Walia Industries also. Pia and Jai look mortified....The episode ends!

Pia : main…main who

Jai: Bani yeh to pushkar keliyeh hai…aur Pia Walia Industries ke saath he rehengi

Bani: Pia kya tum abi Pushkar se pyar karti ho aur kaun hai uski zindagi main ?

Pia [[flustered and left speechless while Jai keeps on looking at her]]: um…Di…

Pai just looks down and has nothing to say.

Jai [[in a tone of finality]] : ab aarti ka waqt ho chukka hai …. Bani hum iss ki baat kaal kar sakte hai … sabke samne nahi

Bani gets the message that she shouldn't make this a scene infront of everyone. But she's still curious as to who is the letter for and why is Pia lying to her.

Bani [[ to herself ]] : Pia ko kya hua hai? mujhe Pushkar se baat karne paregi kaal

Jai [[ to himself ]] : bhagwan Pia ko ek demaak toh do….aur meri shaadi toh gayi haath se

Pia [[ to herself ]] : ab mein kya kaaro…mein Di ko nahi kasakti lekin Mr. Walia ko mein kya ka hua

The continue the aarti and jaagran but bani, pia, and jai are jus not into it. Soon it's over and everyone goes into their own room.

Bani : Mr. Walia…mein jaane janti ho ke Dubai mein kya hua Pia ko ?

Jai [[ to himself ]] : itne problems ke baad, Bani ki aadat nahi gaye…who aisa sawal kyu pooch thi hai jiska jawab mere paas nahi hai.

Bani : Pia mujhe aaj thak kuch nai chupaya lekin aaj kyu

Jai : mujhe nahi pata…mein iske saath business karta hu…bus. aur Bani ab tumhe mere sawal ka jawab aapne pargaye. Bani, mujhe pyar karti ho…mujhe par vishwaas hai toh muhe kyu nahi baatahti ka suchai kya hai.

Will Bani tell him the truth or wait til the time comes ? Will she be tempted to tell him so they will be closer to each other…or will the awkwardness be still there ?


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Posted: 18 years ago
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lolz love jai's thought!

Jai [[ to himself ]] : bhagwan Pia ko ek demaak toh do….aur meri shaadi toh gayi haath se
heheh i no ryt!!! 😡

Jai [[ to himself ]] : itne problems ke baad, Bani ki aadat nahi gaye…who aisa sawal kyu pooch thi hai jiska jawab mere paas nahi hai.
😆

great update!
continue soon!

luv maddi 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 i like that sentence.....pia ko dimaag to do.........
damn good yaar!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love it dear u write so good!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tthanks soo much...i'll continue in a lil while soon as i think of the next part lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Bani : main apko baatogi lekin abi nahi...Pia ko kya hua?

Jai : meri maa, Pia ko pyar hua hai kisi ko. main aur kuch nahi jaanta lekin woh Dubai mein pagal hogi thi. yeh pushkar ko uski biwi peh contol rakna jaye.

Bani : utni choti si baat se Pia Walia Industries ko kyu choregi.

Jai : mujhe nahi pata...ab tum suchai batogi? aur hum romance kare ?

Bani [[ blushing ]] : Mr. Walia, lekin...

Jai [[ holding her closer ]] : yeh Pia paagal hi hai...ab mujhe kyu paajal kar rahi ho?

They hug and the scene fades slowly.

Next Morning :

Bani is cuddled up in Jai's arms and while Jai is awake and looking at her her beautiful face.

Jai [[ to himself ]] : yeh Bani oth mujhe suchai nahi baatagi ... aur kaun se poochu mein? aur yeh Pia ka kya karu.

Bani slowly opens her eyes and her and Jai have a lil staring session goin on...until BAni finally snaps out of it and blushes.

Bani [[ looking down ]] : aap ko office nahi janna?

Jai kisses her forehead and gets up while Bani gets ready to go downstairs.

Jigs, Aditiya, Mausi, Dadi, and Saahil are all at the table eating.

Jigs: aaj muhe bahot kaam hai.

Aditiya: tum humesha mujhe pareshna karti ho, itna kafi nahi hai?

Jigs [[ rolling her eyes ]] : aditiya, tum office nahi jaana hai?

Aditiya : main such raha tha ke aaj mein tumhare saath baat karu

Jigs: hai thodi merbani toh karo !

Everyone at the table starts laughing and JIgs just looks like she had enough.

Aditiya winks at Rano and Raashi. they smile back and sit at the talbe.

Bani comes down and Mausi and her exchange smiles as she goes in the kitchen and mausi follows her.

Mausi [[ with a worried face ]] : Tumko Jai ko kuch kehna jaye tha... uska bhi hak hai janeka, huh?

Bani: lekin mein Mr. Walia aur Jigyasa ki beech kuch kehna nahi jati...woh dono bhai ben hai.

Mausi : Toh Jai ko malum hona jaye kyun ki Jigyasa uski ben hai...hain na?

Bani: mujhe samjhe mein nahi aata main kya kaaro...

Jai comes down for breakfast and the whole family is eating...

Preview: new hurdle for our love birds to cross

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jaanu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haila!!!!!...

I thought you only come on and not post

And now u started a FF!!!!!!!....

following my footsteps huh??? i know i know!!

u did the same to TD!!!!

please cont soon!!!!!!!! i cant wait!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow Kajal its so wonderful, great start
loved how Jai said "Bhawgan Pia ko ek dheeemak do" 😆 😆 😆
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Jaanu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haila!!!!!...

I thought you only come on and not post

And now u started a FF!!!!!!!....

following my footsteps huh??? i know i know!!

u did the same to TD!!!!

please cont soon!!!!!!!! i cant wait!!!



sorry jaanu...i couldnt help myself...after reading yours i had to do my own lols. so glad u liked it !
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jai [[ to himself ]] : bhagwan Pia ko ek demaak toh do….aur meri shaadi toh gayi haath se

haila...that was funny...i was laughing out loud at my desk at work...ppl r like u r crazy... 😆 ...omg...i totally needed that laugh...work sucks...thanks....keep it coming cant wait for the next part...keep them funny... 👏

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