(FF) Pyar Mein Twist! Note Pg. 100!!!! - Page 10

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

oh di.. i loved it!! amazing..

those bloopers that u make.. are all soo cute..

i loved the joke.. out of the 3 sisters.. only one has the privledge to be
having dinner with jigyasa!

plz do continue!

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Lol Thanx!!! I'm glad u like all my stupid bloopers!! I'll continue sometime soon!!!!

Luv ya,

Meera

Originally posted by: 12345#####

i feel sad for baniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

AWWWWWW don't worry abt Bani, she will get her fair share a little later on!!!! I'll continue tonight!!! Thanx for reading my ff!!!

Luv ya,

Meera

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

ya i wont say anything abut the bloppers either😆😆 meera...mia...mia...meera😆 anyways plz contiue soon😊

Thanx Isha!!! Anyway I'm glad u liked the part!!! I'll continue soon!!

Originally posted by: Vedo

awesome part! 👏 👏 👏
I love the joke about them n Jigs!! 😆 😆
so just bcuz its called Pyaar Mein Twist Saahil is twisting poor Mia's hand so badly?? 😆
Mia u better leave Jai...or ur Bani di will kill u!! 😛 😆
plzzz continue soon! 😉

Thanx Vedo!!! I loved writing the joke between them!!! ya, maybe that's why it's called Pyar Mein Twist!!!😆 Mia will leave Jai sooner or later don't worry!!! I'll continue in the evening!!!

Luv ya,

Meera

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

NAVS!!!!! Jaan, thankl-you sooo much for doing an in-depth analysis of my ff!!! I love it!!! It's so nice to know what you guys think!!! I'm glad u like all the Sahil/Mia scenes, I enjoy writing those for the obvious reasons!!😉😳I'll continue in the evening!!!

Luv ya and thanx once again!!!!

Meera

Originally posted by: adee_ahsan

zabardast! 😃

Thanx for liking my ff!!!

Part 5

Recap: Bani and Pia help Mia get ready for her dinner with Jai. Sahil stops her at the door and twists her arm.


Mia: sahil pls, mere haath choro.

Mia runs out of the house into the darkness.

From upstairs you can see a shadow go into a room!!! Who could that be??

Mia goes into Jai's car

Jai: where would you like to go??

Mia: doesn't matter, aap jahaan jana chah wahan

Jai: ok, then we'll go to my special restaurant

He drives to Nariman Point, from there they drive onto a ferry and then drive onto a island.

Mia: there's a Walia restaurant here??

Jai: It's a special one, for special people

Mia: ok? I thought we were going to like Rain, or Olive

Jai: Those places are all too common

We finally arrive infront of a private villa/bungalow

Jai: let's go

Mia: this place looks like someone's house

Jai: Just come with me!!

They both get out of the car and step into the villa

The lights are completely dimmed and there are candles lit everywhere and in the middle there is one tiny cicular table with two cute little chairs!!

Mia: WOW, Mr. Walia this is soo beautiful!

Jai: i know, I've always wanted to bring someone here

Mia: awwwm lekin what would you have done, if I had said some other place?

Jai: I would have conviniently driven us here

Mia: that's really sweet!

Jai: i know, aab khana khaiye?? i'm really famished!!

Mia: chailye

They go and sit down on the chairs and Jai presses a button to call someone who comes with the soup and as the night goes on they enjoy each other's company.

After a while around dessert time, someone comes
servant: Mr. Walia, aapka dessert jal gaya hai

Jai: WHAT??? HOW COULD YOU ALL BE SO CARELESS????


What will happen now?? How will Mia react to Mr. Walia's anger at such a small thing?? Now that the dessert has burned, what will they eat??

We finally arrive infront of a private villa/bungalow

hun was that intentional???? i love your little bloopers. hehhe.

awww the dessert got burnt???

awww a private villa, how sweet!!!!!!

Who heard Sahil and Mia, i think itz bani, better be Bani!!!!

It was awesome hun!!!!

wow! di.. fantastic. loved the location!!

oooooh the dessert is burnt.. what was it meant to be..!;)

well do continue!!

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Originally posted by: lonely14

We finally arrive infront of a private villa/bungalow

hun was that intentional???? i love your little bloopers. hehhe.

awww the dessert got burnt???

awww a private villa, how sweet!!!!!!

Who heard Sahil and Mia, i think itz bani, better be Bani!!!!

It was awesome hun!!!!

Shina, u'll never miss a blooper will you?? anyway Thanx for the comment!!! I'll contiue tom!!!
Luv ya,
Meera