Part 20: Concluding part!!!!! (yep you guys are saved from the torture!!!!)
Warning: Highly boring and high tendency of sleep overtaking while reading it!!!! It is very long!!!! So be ready for the torture!!!!!
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This part is for navs, who requested for an extra part!!!!!! Navs hun, I hope I at least brought a smile to your face!!!! I don't know if I did justice with your expectations, so sorry!!!!!!!
And for all my special readers, thank you so much anju, sravs, meera, maddi, jigna, navs, shafaq, anam, munnabhai, nidhi, GULI and everyone who has been really sweet to me!!!!!!!
Jai entered the outhouse and was enchanted by its beauty. The house was decorated like a new bride. It had white lilies(wonder why?) everywhere, everything around him was white and pink. There was misty fog by the floor creating the illusion of clouds(like you know they had for the pag phera rasam), and there it was a beautiful mandap decorated with flowers, with the fire illuminating, making it more captivating. Jai was astounded by its beauty, but he didn't understand why such a beautiful atmosphere?
He was just standing there shocked, before he could do anything, he heard footsteps. He turned around and was amazed by her beauty. She was wearing pink jimmy choos (with you know the strap around your ankle, and a high heel), a really pretty pink lehnga with zardoosi work on it, as his eyes moved up he could see her bare waist, which she tried to cover with her duppatta, but was unsuccessful, and then her choli which had zardosi work making her look alluring.
Her lips had pink lip gloss, making him just want to go bite her(heheh behave, not now) 😆 . She had little make up on, light pink eye shadow, just a hint of blush, all enhancing her natural beauty. He thought that all the time he had known her, she never looked this sexy/hot before. okay so guys wanna know who she is or should I just leave it??? Well I guess I'll wait for some response(yep guys I need an ego boost, heheh) so will continue only if you guys want!!!!!!
Then we see her full face, and it is none other than BANI!!!! (Couldn't disappoint you guys, and yes Jigna the guilting worked).
Jai was just appalled by her beauty, he was just standing there staring at her, like someone bewitched him. yaar...kabhi mujhe bhi aisa dekha karo 😳 😆
After what seemed like hours(okay actually more like 5 minutes), he regained his composure and speaks.
Jai: Bani tum yahan? Aur ye sab kya hai? (Bani you here? And what is all this?) ( come on jai, she is back for you)
Bani: Mr.Walia first I want to apologize to you for misunderstanding you, and not trusting you. When I was leaving the house why didn't you tell me the truth about yours and anjali's relationship?
Flasback scene
When Bani was leaving the house, she ran into Anjali. Anjali was shocked to see bani in that state, bani was crying like there was no tomorrow, and she also had her luggage with her.
Anjali: Bani tum kahan ja rahi ho? (Bani where are you going?)
Bani: Main Mr.Walia ki zindagi se door ja rahi hoon, main tumhare aur unke beech nahi aana chahti. (I am going away from Mr.Walia's life, I don't want to come in between you two)
Anjali started laughing like crazy, surprising bani to no end.
Anjali: Bani, Jai and I are best friends, we understand each other very well and also love each other but we are not soul mates. Actually the truth is that I love Tarun, I have always loved him ever since our college days. Jai knows that very well, he is the one who helped me move on, he showed me that I could do so many other things besides crying over him, but my love for Tarun never weakened, it grew stronger every passing moment. (for those of you who make a million assumptions, I was disappointed that none of you caught that anjali must've known tarun from the past, after all she is jai's best friend and so is tarun) My love for Jai is not the kind a husband and wife share, actually I can't describe our relationship. It's not the normal friendly relationship, neither is it THE LOVE, it's more than friendship but less than love. (I don't know how to describe it, I hope you guys got the point).
Bani was very happy listening to this but at the same time sad because she just left the one person whom she loved more than her life, only if she had trusted him, she wouldn't be out here crying, when she could be in his arms, feeling loved and protected!!!! (haila I wish that too par kya karein???) She doesn't understand why he didn't stop her!!!! He could've told her there was nothing between him and anjali!!! Why did he let her leave?
Anjali: Bani, I know it's none of my business but if you want your marriage to work you will have to take a step, knowing Jai he will just sit and brood thinking that at least you are happy. He will make his life miserable but not come to you.
Flashback ends
okay next part jai and bani's confrontation!!!! would jai accept her back??? or will he reject her??? and whose wedding is it???
writing more!!!!! will only post it only if you guys want!!!!
Bani: Mr.Walia why didn't you stop me?
Jai: Bani, I couldn't, you always misunderstand me, I know you respect me and may be even love me but there is no trust, no communication between us. Whenever people tried they came in between us , because you let them. That night without even talking to me you had assumed so many things and decided to leave the house, thinking I would be happy with Roshini. You were not in any condition to listen to me, so instead I provided you proof of my love through my actions.(heheh we all loved it didn't we???). Then before we had a chance to talk, pia came in, I thought you would tell her that our relationship is not farce, so I thought probably you think of it as a mistake, so to not burden you with the guilt, I took it upon myself by apologizing, even though it meant everything to me, but I had to do that. Then the whole PR thing happened, even though I knew you would hate me for that (remember he only told her half the truth), I still had hope that may be you would give me a chance but you left me, and when you filed for a divorce and claimed for alimony I was devastated. I knew you wouldn't do it, but you didn't trust me enough to tell me the truth. And now with anjali you did that again, without even thinking once, or even asking me you assumed what our relationship was, and made a decision to leave the house. You always made hasty decision, and I would suffer, this time I didn't want to give you any explanations, I wanted you to trust me, but I guess it was too much to ask for. Bani, I am not god, I am just a human being GODDAMMIT!!!!!I love the goddammit 😆 ...and of course blame bani for everything....i expected this from u...itz okay...that's what FF's are for 😉
"I know its hard to forget and forgive,
All I want is just one chance for you to give"
By the end of Jai's monologue, bani was completely broken and the tears wouldn't stop flowing.
Bani: Mr.Walia, I know I have hurt you, but please let's give our relationship one more chance, just a last chance. yes give me a chance too 😳 🤗
Jai was just standing there looking at her without any expression.
Bani(is now completely dejected): I am sorry Mr.Walia for everything I have done. Probably I am not destined to be with you. I am sorry for everything, I …….
Before she said anything further, Jai just grabbed her and kissed her passionately on her lips. (what else could he do? That was the only way to shut her up. LOL)
agree w/ that 😆
They stood there kissing each other for almost like 10 minutes, both of them intently matching each other's passion, and just letting themselves flow with the emotion and desire within them. Suddenly we hear someone cough… that brings them back to reality. They turn around to see Anjali and Tarun looking at them with wide grins on their faces. Anjali was looking really pretty with a very heavy red lehnga and choli, and tarun was wearing black, both of them looked like a match made in heaven!!!!!
Both Jai and Bani are blushing profoundly.
Tarun: Agar tum log chaho toh hum baad mein aate hain. (If you guys want we will come back later). yaar...Tarun's cute in your FF😉
This makes them blush even more, with jai having a cheeky smile, and bani's eyes downcast.
Jai: ummmm…… Tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho? (What are you guys doing here?)
Anjali: hum yahan par shadi mein aaye hain (We came here for the wedding)
Jai(all confused): Shadi??? Lekin kiski??? (Wedding??? But who's???) tumhari aur.........merii 😳
Tarun: Haan, we are getting you too re-married, this time with a never ending sacred bond, where both of you will tie the knot with love and understanding, and it won't be a burden, or ever be called a forced marriage. (awww isn't he sweet??? Me thinks so.)i guessed right! i guessed right!!! whooo hoooo!!! happy dance 😎
Without waiting for anything else, Tarun and Anjali grab Jai and Bani and make them sit in the mandap. Tarun and Anjali both tie the knot, and then while the mantras are going on they take the saath phere, and then when it comes time to put the sindoor, they both remember the last time, but then jai gives her a million dollar smile, which makes her melt, since bani's father isn't anymore tarun being a sweetheart does her kanya daan, and this time when he puts the sindoor in her maang, we could see love in both their eyes. And then he ties the mangal sutra around her neck. great description hun! simple yet precise.......you read mine😆 😆
All the while Tarun and Anjali are just lost in each other. Both of them are happy, now that they have found each other, and that their friends are happy. Finally all the rituals are done, since there are no adults there, all of them just hug each other, and congratulate them.
Tarun and Anjali both give each other signals to say something, but both of them are shy, finally Tarun decides to speak up.
Tarun: ummm (Blushing profoundly) actually who main… who hum….
Jai: who main who main kya kar rahe ho, seede seede kaho.
Tarun: umm, Me and Anjali are engaged.
Jai and Bani cannot hide their excitement, they are so happy that these two decided to be together the rest of their lives.
Jai hugs both Tarun and Anjali congratulating, while Bani hugs Anjali. All of them are so happy that their lives are filled with happiness.
Jai: Aakhir, tumhe anjali ke pyar ka realization ho gaya. (finally you realized anjali's love)
Tarun: haan yaar, I can't believe I stayed away from her for 7 years. What was I thinking?
Anjalii: That there were lots of fish in the sea, and you didn't want to settle with one.
Tarun: Anjali, okay I am sorry, now I realized, and I am never going to let you go away from me ever.
Jai: And I will make sure of that.
This makes all of them laugh.
Jai(with a sheepish grin): okay, ab tum log jao, hum kal milte hain. (now you guys leave, we can meet tomorrow)very smooth jai 😉 😆
Tarun: Itni jaldi bhi kya hai??? (What's the hurry?)
Jai(with a devilish glint in his eyes): ab jab shadi karwayi hai, toh suhaag raat bhi honi chahiye. (now that we are married, we need to have the consummation night).
Bani just turns a deep shade of red, Anjali can't help but giggle, and tarun is just laughing.
Anjali and Tarun: Okay we are leaving, Have fun. They wink and leave.
Bani: Why did you have to say that in front of them?
Jai: maine kuch galat toh nahi kaha, ab jab shadi hui hai toh suhaag raat bhi.
Bani doesn't know what to say, so she is just blushing like crazy!!!! Jai starts moving towards her and then grabs her by her waist. 😳 😳
Goes close to her face, and seductively says in her ears: My darling wife, this time no guilt, no misunderstanding, no hesitations, just you and me.
Saying that he picks her up and takes her towards the bedroom (guys you know the threshold thing, you don't let your wife put her feet on the floor when the first time she enters your bedroom. Hehe yeah).
He puts her down, and goes and closes the door. Then he comes near her, she is just standing their blushing. He slowly moves towards her, first gives her a nice long passionate kiss on her lips, while doing that their hands travel everywhere, undoing each other's clothes. Bani is matching is his passion with intense fire, and all her desires are coming out. Bani unbuttons his shirt, while jai works on her dori, then take out her pallu. Slowly he breaks away from the kiss, then starts dropping feather light kisses on her neck, then her back, moving down to her bare waist. He starts kissing her everywhere, while taking out the clothing, she has on. Finally he carries her to the bed, and a night full of passion awaits them.
Prologue:
After that night, Jai and Bani never doubted each other. Even though there were usual misunderstandings, but instead of assuming things, they started communicating better. A month after that Tarun and Anjali got married. All the couples Ranveer-Rashi, Sahil-Rano, Pia-Pushkar, Tarun-Anjali, and of course Jai-Bani were totally committed to each other.
A few months later, Bani gave birth to a beautiful daughter, who was the eye-candy of the whole Walia parivaar. Even though the constant bickering continued in the family, the love kept growing. They had their usual share of fights, but at the end Love conquered all.
Thank you all for reading my fanfic, I hope I didn't disappoint anyone or offend anyone. If I did I am truly sorry. Thanks again all of you who showered me with lots of love through this fanfic, and thanks to those too who took out their belans(lmao). Thanks again!!!!!!! Shina.....you did disappoint me ................by ending 😉 hun........that was AWESOME....i'm soooo glad i read your FF....guess what?! it actually has a plot 😲 unlike...ahem...mine 😆 seriously the best thing about it was the PR raaz.....kaha SHINA 👍🏼 aur kaha ekta 👎🏼 seriously she needs to learn from you!!!
I hope you enjoyed this, like always love to read your comments and feedback.
Thank you,
Lonely14
I'm sad 😭 😭 😭 it ended!!!! 😭 so you better write another one soon!!!
The ending especially was absolutely FANTASTIC shina!!! I loved it! You wrapped everything up...unlike EKTA 😡 and still made it so romantic and cute!!!!!
Thank YOU for writing this SHina.............and you better start that second one soon......You know my virtual belan tendencies 😈 😆
Luv ya
Srav
Anupamaa
