Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 34

Amazing!part really love it 👏 yes plzzz continue... 😃 dont want it to end 😭 😭 plzz...
thanks

luv,
cutelady 😳

once again you've proved that you're just amazing.
I'm just speechless. I loved the way you handled the situation between each couple. Seems like all the guys are feeling dejected haha! what are these ladies doing with these sexy guys?

aww thanks hun!!!!! yaar pata nahi in ladkiyon ka dimag kahan par hai. my poor sexy guys lol. I don't know when they'll be happy again, or even if they'll be at all. come on yaar, i had to learn something from ekta. don't you thin?

Ok...that picture of sallu was a killer! and u know it too haha. i don't know how u actually managed to write after looking at that picture? my eyes are still oogling over that pic 😆

lol i know sallu was just awesome, yaar why do you think the update was posted so late??? i had to recover after seeing sallu's pic.

the dress u chose for bani is a killer. i can't believe bani asked him such a thing after looking at him in those clothes? i would've forgotten everything till the next day.

I know right, Bani bani bani i don't know what she was thinking. man if someone was sitting in front of me with those clothes, especially compared to my sallu, i would forget everything lol. but itz bani we are talking about.

poor ranveer. so much for planning such a romantic honeymoon for janis and they had to just cut it short. maybe, ranveer will get a 50% off if he uses the same thing for him and raashi. he might get a discount cuz jani left earlier than they were supposed to be.

hahah hun they own that private island, and the private jet they could go there whenever they feel like it. after all they are the walias!!!! i know ranveer's planning went to a waste, but hey atleast they had a nice night, and a good day. she saw jai cooking what more does she want?

who is anjali's brother? did i miss a part or something or is that a mystery? why do i have a feeling that maybe jai walia is the brother? i could totally be wrong there....buttt....i guess i will find out.

Nah, you didn't miss a part. itz still a mystery. anjali's character is still a little shady to me. first you say that anjali could come in between jai and bani and now you are making anjali jai's sister??? yaar anam make up your mind.

amazing part once again. can't say anything less or more about it.

thanks

continue writing cuz i wanna read more haha! yes, u just write just to please me and cuz u know u wanna!

haha i'll try to continue soon, but not promising anything. hahah!!!!!!

love,
anam

Originally posted by: Cordelia

bani ne kya tekha le rakha hai hamare cuddles ko tang karne ka?? 😡 😆

remember what i said hun - serious break-up needs serious make-up!! 😉

yaar bani itz not bani's fault, first of all her hormones are acting crazy, phir uske pas ajeebo(KD) ke sanskar hai, so it will take time till she realizes what she has done.

hahahah make up hmmm interesting thought, will see what i can do about that.

thanks for the comments.

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

yehhhhhhhhhhhhh kya hua.. kyun huaaa.. omgggg bani - had to ruin d honeymoon.. it was goin so sweet and then they're already back.. haila.. that was gr88.. i think raashi'll see ranveer's sweet side on and will forgive him eventually .. bani betta make up fo wat she did.. ruined their honeymoon.. that was gr88.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

p.s.. salman looked sexiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😳 😳 😳

lol bani had to ruin the moment, otherwise she wouldn't be bani. lol.

yaar interesting thought but will rashi see the sweet side of ranveer or not? thatz the question. haha i was just about to give away the next part. lol.

aww thanks for the comments hun!!!! will try to update soon.

i know right, man it was so hard after sallu's pic to write about it. he does look sexy.lol.

Originally posted by: rose467

are you taking lessons from ekta, shina... take to the climax even with graphics.... tu bhi na 😡 joking

good part yaar, continue pls, and get well too

Rose

yaar i am trying but Ekta doesn't want to teach me to be like her fulltime, so you know i still care about you and wont' ruin your mood. lol.

thanks hun for the concern, i'll try to continue asap.

Originally posted by: divya74

Oh god,Shina!Ur so damn good with this stuff 👏 you should be one of the creative heads for balaji,i'm serious.....i think i'm gonna have to pm Ram Kapoor reguarding this matter 😉 😊 Btw,plz don't stop with ur fanfic,it's simply amazing,do try to length it a bit more 😉 I really hope Bani n Jai,patch up asap!Plz continue soon,can't wait to read more of ur fabulous fanfic! 👏

aww divya thanks a lot!!!!!!! hahaha me and one of the creatives(not so creative) head???? lol that would be damn hilarious.

hahah ram kapoor is going to be like hmm thank you but i think i am pretty happy with the creatives we have now. lol.

you want me to make the parts longer??? hun i thought that was long enough. lol i think most of the people didn't read after seeing sallu's pic. lol.

well i hope that they patch up soon too, but you knw i don't always get what i want.

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

firstt lemme tell u tht was grr88 part.....!!!! aww but i dintt wnt dem to go to a huneymoon and ave a fight / arguement...arrrree yaar.......thtss not gudd...
well do continuee soon...
and dunt endd ur fanifc....u r soo gudd....
tnnksxxx sweettii..
will be waiting eagerlii for ur update...!!
mwah !!
😃

awww thatz so sweet, thanks hun!!!!!

lol i know but you know itz jai and bani, they can't live without fighting.

lol well i'll try to continue as soon as i can.

thanks

Originally posted by: Vedo

👏
wonderful ff Shina...it's awesome!!
i'm eagerly waiting to find out who this Arjun guys is 😃 😃
plzzz update soon! 😉

awww thanks!!!!!!

hahah i am waiting to know who is arjun is too. lol.

will try to update as soon as i can.

Originally posted by: cutelady

Amazing!part really love it 👏 yes plzzz continue... 😃 dont want it to end 😭 😭 plzz...
thanks

luv,
cutelady 😳

aww thanks hun!!!!

will try to continue soon.

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

shina,
nice update but wanted to comment on it... not rite now will only do it.... once i finish my part....... hey btw u r not going to like this part one bit..... but promise me u will post.......comments on it.......

thanks hun!!! can't wait to read your comments.

i won't like it??? awww my poor baby jai please dont' be too harsh on him. awwww my baby.

okay i'll post my comments. (but hey dont' blame me if itz filled with me crying and being depressed). lol jp. will def. post my comments.