Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh man! interesting...what did really happen that night?
its awesome!
please continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aww thank you all of you for the lovely comments. 🤗 🤗 🤗

I am going to post up the next part just for you guyz now and i'll continue it tomorrow or the day after.

sorry but i won't reveal what really happened for a couple more parts. I want some misunderstandings to clear up first, but i hope you guyz still enjoy the fanfic. and please leave your comments.


In the meantime they show Bani and Masi talking about Jai-Bani's relationship

Masi: Bani beta agar tu Jai se itna pyar karti hai to tu use bata kyun nahi deti (if you love Jai so much why don't you tell him?)

Bani: Masi ye mumkin nahi hai (Itz not possible Masi)

Masi: Lekin kyun Bani? Tu munna ke liya itna sab kuch karsakti hai lekin use ye nahi bata sakti ki tu usse itna pyar karti hai? (But why? If you can do so much for Jai why can't you tell him that you love him so much?)

Bani: Kyunki Masi Mr.Walia ne apne ateet main kuch aisa kiya hai jisse meri sari zindagi badal gayi hai (because Mr.walia did something in his past that changed my life) (remember Bani doesn't know Masi knows)

Masi: Main janti hoon beta, lekin jo kuch bhi Munna ne kiya who sirf ek hadsa tha aur kuch nahi. Munna ne jaan buch ke toh tumhari Maa ko kuch nahi kiya who usse galti ho gayi thi (I know but whatever Jai did was an accident and nothing else. He didn't do it purposely it was a mistake).

Bani was shocked out of her wits knowing that Masi knows about the PR Raaz.

Back to Jai and Tarun.

Jai: Tarun how do you know about that?

Tarun: I know because that night after whatever happened I saw you so broken and lost that I just couldn't believe that my best friend could do anything even by an accident. I decided to take the things in my own hands and solve the matter, so using my contacts I went in depth of this case and found out some clues, and when I found out the real truth I was shocked out of my wits.

Jai is just shell shocked, he can't believe he has such an amazing friend.

Jai: I can't believe you did this for me, I was just so shocked that day that I couldn't think straight but by the time I found out the truth it was too late.

Jai: I have one request for you. Will you do it for me?

Tarun: anything for you Jai. You know I am always with you.

Jai: Please don't tell about this Raaz to anyone. Not many people know it and I don't want bani to find out the real truth at any cost. She won't be able to handle it.

Tarun: but Jai, it will help your relationship with her. When she finds out the truth then she won't be able to go away from you.

Jai: I know but I would rather stay away from her than see her in so much pain. After she finds out she won't be able to face me, I can tolerate the hatred she has towards me but I can't see her being completely heart broken.

Tarun: I don't understand both of you. If you guyz love each other so much, then I think both of you should confide in each other.

Tarun: from whatever you have told me Bani has a reason behind her alimony claim, and you have this truth, don't you think it's better if you both just talk to each other?

Jai: I just can't tell her the truth Tarun, you don't know her, she won't be able to handle it. But yeah I need to find out the reason for Bani's alimony claim before she tortures herself more. I know whatever she is doing to me she is hurting herself more. I can see the pain in her eyes, I just wish I could find out the reason behind her rudeness.

Tarun: I will try to find out the reason as soon as possible. Now don't worry about that, you just go home and relax and try to talk to her.

Jai: Thanks, I don't know what I would do without you.

Tarun: okay now stop flattering me and go home.

With that Jai just smiles and leaves.


I really hope you guyz like this part. if you don't please let me know how to improve it!!!!

Any type of suggestions and comments are welcome. Hope you enjoyed reading it!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
great part loving it please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
awesome lonely!
please continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
hey, awesome start. i love it so far. i look forward to reading more. i hope tarun tells bani the truth so she can get back with Jai.

great job!

anam
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
It was wonderful and great
Good job once again 👏 👏 👏
Plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Thank you all so much for the lovely comments!!!

I am really flattered, please continue reading my fanfic and leave some feedback thanks.

I will post another part either tomorrow or day after.

thank you again,
lonely14
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
read both parts!

they were good!!!!!

I loved it

SO whats the secret?? Please cont soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

read both parts!

they were good!!!!!

I loved it

SO whats the secret?? Please cont soon!!!!!!

I'll reveal it soon. don't worry.

thanks for the comments, thanks punjabi_heera.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Preview for tomorrow:

Bani and Masi are talking, Bani is telling her she won't forgive Jai. and meanwhile Jai is listening to their conversation!!!!!!

Will Jai listen to something that will prove his faith in Bani? or will he be heartbroken again?

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