After Bash: Kyon Ki Itna Pyaar Tumko (FF) - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
aww pooor Bani!! 😭 😭
great parts! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 loved all parts!!

continue soon.. am anxious to know how and y Mr.&Mrs leave the house

Henna x
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73


Short parts???😕😕 that was 3 parts!!!

😆😆😆

But u are right! i started falling asleep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cuz i hadnt written them earlier

So had to write all 3 @ night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
awww babee...
that all is hard wrk for u i am soo suree..managing all the fanficss...
well...grr888 story.....but i wanted all this to last forever...loollzz...
thnksxxx babee..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I finally caught up!!!! I really like the way u write!!! I hate Kaka!!! I can't wait for the next part, the preview sounds interesting!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
ohhhhh plzzz cont soon...i wanna knw y jai n bani left the house 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
Oooo man Jaanu...finally caught up in like 10 min!!😆


Poor Bani....i hope some1 does something about this "kaka" 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Part 36

Bani is sad!!!

She's like

What did I do that Kaka doesn't like me??

She is wondering!!!

During dinner time

Bani is in the kitchen!!!

She is cooking!

Masi is like what are you doing?

U just got back

Go and take rest!

Bani's like its okay!!!!

She cooks dinner!!!

She sets the table and stuff!!!

Everyone comes out and eats!!!!!

Kaka is sitting down

He is quiet!!

Jai's mood is ruined!

So he's not that hungry either!!!!

Bani is looking at him!!!!!!!!

Afterwards….

Dinner is over!!

Jai is in his room!

He's standing by the window!!

Bani comes behind him!!!

She puts her hand on his shoulders

He turns back

And looks at her!!!!!!

She comes closer to him

And hugs him!!!!

Bani: Whats wrong???

Jai: Nothing!! I Don't know why he's here!!!!!!…..

Bani: Its okay! Just leave it!!!!!!

Next Morning

Jai is getting ready to go back to work!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
Part 37

He's ready!!!!

Bani is praying!!!!!!

She finishes praying!!

Jai eats

And he goes to work!!!!!!

Masi and Dadi are gone out for a walk!!

And everyone else is doing their own thing!!

Bani is there

Kaka comes out!!

Bani looks at him!!!

Kaka really doesn't want to face her!!!

Bani stops!!

Kaka: I didn't expect my nephew to marry a girl like you!!!

Bani is stunned!!!

Kaka: I always thought that he was bright!!!… but apparently I don't know what he saw in you!!!!.. I know what all of you girls are like!!! Ur only in it for the money!!

Bani is sad!!!

Bani: Its not like that..

Kaka: Bus!!! Its okay!! U don't have to tell me!!!!! Middle class!!! The mistress of this house...!!!! That's disgusting!!

He walks off!!!

Bani is just looking on!!!!!!!

In the after noon

Jai comes home from work!!!!

He goes to his room!

Bani is sitting on the bed!!!

Jai comes and sits next to her!!!!!

Jai: Bani whats wrong?

Bani: Oh ur back!!!!…

Jai: Whats wrong?

Bani: Nothing!!!

Jai; Something is bothering you!!

Bani: Not at all!!

She smiles

And gets up!!!

She goes out!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
Part 38

Jai is just looking on!

Bani's in the kitchen!

Rano and Pia are helping!

Pia is telling Bani

That she heard Kaka talking to her this morning!

Bani is shocked!!!!!!!

Bani: How??

Pia: Becuz I came out for something and heard!!!

Bani is sad!!!

Pia: I cant believe Kaka thinks like that!!! That u are here just for the money!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: I guess he didn't want a girl like me as Walia Bahu!!!!!!!

She is sad!!

Pia: Don't worry about it!!!!!

And then

Jai is standing right there!!!

He heard that!!!

Kaka comes out!!!

Jai is giving him a look!!

He comes and stands in front of him!!!

Kaka is like what?

Jai: Who are you to insult my wife?????

Kaka: I didn't say anything!

jai: Don't lie!!!

Kaka: I told her what was on my mind!!!!!

Jai: Why do u even care about where she comes from? Or what her status is?? I know everything about her and I trust her!!!!!!

Kaka: I don't!!!!! You realize later on that I was right!!

Jai: U are wrong! And you always will be!!!… U listen carefully!! U maybe be my uncle… but no one has the right to come in my house and insult my wife!!

Kaka: Excuse me??? Ur house??? U better think twice of who u are telling that too!

Jai is looking at him!

Kaka: This isnt ur house!! This is my house!!! I built this house!!!!! I let ur dad stay here!!! And all of you guyz grew up here!!! But now.. he's no more! And he never repaid me back!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai: What kind of brother are you???

Kaka doesn't care!!!!!!!

Kaka: The one that wants each and every penny back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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