Kuch Kuch Hota Hai-JB ff-FINAL pg82! - Page 56

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Posted: 18 years ago
sweet parts inavars!! loved 'em
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plzz continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww how cute was that!!! 😳

looks like sahil and pushkar have a few romantic bones in their bodies too!! who knew?!! 😕 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

IM VERY DISAPOINTED! HOW COULD YOU? I CANT BELIEVE YOU? YOUR FINISHING OFF THE FANFIC? LIKE I SAID EARLIER, SOMETIMES I MISS KASAMH SE FOR THIS! ---THATS RIGHT YOU READ IT RIGHT, I MISSS KASAMH SE FOR THIS FANFIC AND YOUR GONNA FINISH THIS IN A DAY? OMG.. I COULD NEVER BE MORE DISPOINTED AT YOU.. BUT I CAN ALSO BE VERY GENEROUS AND NOT FORGET ABOUT HOW WONDERFUL PART 29 WAS... AWESOME,GREAT,FANTASTIC,WONDERFUL,MIND-BLOWING! LIKE ALWAYS!!!! BUT THIS WONT STAY LONGER 😭😭😭 ..ILL TTYL BYEE.... 😔

.rd 😉

Edited by desaicutie - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
guyz..i'm sooo sorry! i know i was supposed to finish it today..i even have the epilogue written but i can't seem to write the J-B part today...see my brain's used to stupid comedy....and i'm all lost 😕 😆 so will post them tomorrow..for sure!!!
Edited by inavars - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hiaalllaaa!!! How do ya do it Sravi Dear!!! Tat was like sooo CUTE!!! 👏 ur just 2 much! kept me blushin and laffin and smilin lolz!!!! And U WILL NEVER DISSAPOINT ME!!! that was really really realllyyyy good!!!! heheheheh SUPERB! i need to check mi best describin word list... all i got is Superb and Awsome... LOlz... ooo found another 1 fantastic 😃 hmmm..... WONDERFUL 😆 yea... more words comin up... lolz

cant wait fer more!!!!

luv ya alwayz
maddi
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Posted: 18 years ago
FINALLY after a little more than two months...I'm done 😭 or will be after this part and the epilogue 😆 guyz...i can't thank you enough for all your encouragement and support!!! I love you all!!! I hope you all enjoy this 😃

Part 31:

It was decided that Bani and Jai would go to Fiji for their honeymoon. (Why? Cuz of the beaches 😆 )

Bani sighed nervously as she got out of the cab. What was she thinking when she asked Jai about a honeymoon? Now they were in Fiji in front of the cottage where they're about to spend the rest of the week. Jai turned around and smiled at her as she got out. The driver was taking the luggage inside. She paused to take a deep breath and looked at the magnificent cottage in front of her.



Jai stood waiting by the door for her to come. She walked up to him nervously and he let her inside before he followed. Jai walked towards the honeymoon suite while Bani followed him quietly. The driver dropped the luggage off next to the door and left. (let's assume Jai paid him…poor guy…he needs the money! 😆 )

Jai unlocked the door but his eyes didn't leave Bani's even once. He nudged the door open with his booted foot and held a hand out to Bani. Bani, with her eyes downcast, entered the room and gave Jai her hand. He squeezed it. Taking a deep breath she lifted her gaze and her breath froze when she saw the unmasked desire in his eyes 😳 . She quickly let go of the hand and began looking around the room. Her eyes fell on the window…the view was breathtaking! She slowly walked up to the window and laid a hand on the cold glass. She heard a click of the door closing but didn't turn around. As she stood there gazing out of the window, she never noticed when Jai came and stood behind her….until he laid his hand on top of her resting one on the window 😳 . She gasped but didn't remove her hand. He slowly slid his other arm around her waist and pulled her back against him. Bani closed her eyes and rested her head back on his shoulder. He gently pushed aside her hair and nuzzled her neck. She quickly turned around and faced him with a small smile. He leaned in and Bani moved back a little until her back was splayed against the cold glass. She gasped. Jai put an arm on either side of her waist and blocked any escape. Bani's heart began beating wildly. His eyes were twinkling as he leaned in to nuzzle her neck once again. Bani shut her eyes. Jai kissed her on her neck and slowly moved his way up her collarbone, her chin, her cheeks….and then he bit her earlobe..gently! Bani's eyes popped open 😆 . She slowly lifted her arms to wrap around his neck and stood on her tip toes. She leaned in and kissed his lips gently at first and then with so much pent up passion. By the time he let her go, her eyes were brimming with tears.

Jai: Baniii…kya hua?

Bani just shook her head silently and watched him with a slight smile on her face.

Bani: it's nothing!

Jai: something something?! 😆 (anju….i HAD to include this for siddharth 😳 ….after all it's the last part!)

Bani: NOTHING!

She blushed and quickly ran out of the room. Her heart beating wildly, Bani left the cottage and went towards the beach. She continued running as fast as she could and skidded to a stop once she neared the shore. She stood there gasping for breath. She hugged herself. She didn't hear the soft footsteps that followed her above her speeding heart beat.



Jai: Baniiii

Bani jerked out of her reverie but didn't turn around. She pursed her lips and continued looking out into the horizon.

Jai laid a hand on her shoulder. Bani closed her eyes. He turned her around to face him. She slowly opened her eyes and looked at him. Just then (in typical filmi style 😳 ), it thundered and Bani hugged Jai. Stroking the top of her head, Jai grinned.

Suddenly Bani noticed what she was doing and jerked out of his arms. Jai gave her a knowing smile and slowly slid his hands from her shoulders to upper arms causing her to shiver.

Just then, a raindrop landed on Bani's lower lip. (guyz…don't ask me how this happened….that's just how it works in J-B land 😆 ) Jai's eyes dropped to Bani's lips. Noticing his gaze, Bani parted her lips. Jai leaned in and slowly grazed his lips across hers. Bani shivered and closed her eyes.

Jai: Baniii

She didn't open her eyes.

Jai: Baniii..

Bani: hmm?

Jai: Bani…I wanted this to be so romantic…I was going to give you roses…carnations…chocolate…sweets…but I just can't wait any longer. I have to tell you.

Bani's eyes popped open.

Jai: Bani, I've told you this before. A long time ago. But then you didn't believe me. Or maybe you did. Maybe I didn't believe YOU!

Bani frowned. Now he was talking in riddles. What did he mean?

Jai: Bani, I love you…with all my heart and soul. Without you, I'm nothing……

Bani didn't hear the rest of what he said. I love you I love you I love you Those words kept reverberating in her ears. Thunder. Lightning. It began raining…pouring. (come on guyz..it's a landmark event! 😳 😆 )

Bani stood there shocked. Her eyes filled with tears and a slow smile spread across her lips.

Then she heard what he was saying.

Jai: if you don't love me back…it's okay…just promise you won't ever leave me!

Bani covered his lips…stopping him from saying anything further.

Bani: Jai…how could you even think I would leave you? I love you Jai. I've always loved you. You complete me Jai!

Jai, with shock evident in his eyes, slowly removed Bani's hands from his lips. He turned it over and kissed her in the middle of her palm. Bani tried to pull her hand back but to no avail. He had a tight hold on her. Bani blushed. He slowly grazed his lips along her hand until he reached her wrist. He dropped feather light kisses across the inside of her wrist. Bani shivered. He let go. Bani stared back at him, not knowing what to do.

The rain began pouring harder. Bani looked up at the sky and laughed happily. Jai looked down at her with wonder in his eyes. She was truly his?! As Bani stood there laughing and playing in the rain, Jai suddenly lifted her into his arms.

Bani shrieked: jaiiiiiiiii…what are you doing?

Jai: carrying my wife…you have a problem with that?

Bani with playful eyes: actually no!

With that, Jai carried his wife into the cottage!

(The rest of it…you guys can imagine! 😉 )


Epilogue:

Jigyaasa's room:

Meet Krishna Jeet Walia, a naughty naughty boy 😈 😆 . Today he has a new adventure in mind. He saw this on TV last week actually. Materials needed – scissors. Krishu gave a cutesy smile to his sleeping Jigyaasa bua. He liked to call her sleeping beauty…err typo…sleeping beast.

Grrrrr….

Krishu jumped in his spot at that noise. Jiggy bua is snoring. He smiled wickedly as he saw his bua's jet black hair spread across the pillow. He padded up near the bed and climbed in quietly. Time for action: scissors – hair! 😈 😆 Enough said.

*****

Bani smiled as she came out of the bathroom towel-drying her hair. Last night was amazing. The dinner…ahemm…after dinner! She blushed as she saw her husband sleeping peacefully. She heard a scratch on the door and went to see who came to visit. Little Ruchi – just turned three yesterday…

Bani: hi baby!!

Saying that Bani held out her arms to her daughter. But no…Ruchi was Daddy's girl all the way.

She came storming into the room chanting: daddy daddy daddy daddy

And when she noticed that her daddy was still sleeping, she quickly jumped onto the bed and sat on his stomach.

Jai: ufff…Bani…what are you doing? 😳

Bani blushed: Jai…main nahi…Ruchi hai!

Jai opened one eye: hi Princess.

His princess promptly poked him in his open eye. 😲 😆

Jai: oww

Ruchi: hi pirate!

Bani laughed.

Bani: ruchi beti….if you poke your daddy's eye out…he's going to have to become a pirate and walk around with a patch over his eye.

Ruchi frowned. What was mommy talking about? Seriously Mommy talks too much. That's why Ruchi loves Daddy more than Mommy.

Jai: Princess…why don't you go to your bhaiyya? I'll be right out.

Ruchi frowned and left. TARZAN…I'm coming!(yep...Krishu's Tarzan...and Ruchi is umm...well Tarzan's sister 😆 )

Left in the room alone, Bani avoided Jai's searing gaze.

Jai: Bani.

She looked at him and blushed.

He raised an eyebrow. She put her eyes downcast and nodded.

Jai (surprised and happy), with his mouth hanging open, jumped off the bed and skidded to a stop in front of her.

Jai: Are you sure?

Bani cleared her throat: yes…

And then to Bani's utter amazement, he lifted her in his arms and twirled her about. Bani began laughing.

Bani: Jai!!! Put me down!!!

He put her down and looked at her with so much happiness evident in her eyes.

Jai: we're going to have another baby, Bani…I can't believe it!

Bani, with playful eyes: well believe it Mister!

Jai looked at her with his eyes shining with love: Baniii…have I told you lately how much I love you?

Bani pouted: no…not today!

Jai Walia looking into his wife's twinkling eyes and whispered her favorite words: I love you Mrs Walia!

*****

Jigyaasa just woke up from her beauty nap and looked at herself in the mirror.

BANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

*****

Krishu dropped his water gun. Oops….looks like Jigs bua woke up!! Time to run and hide! 😆



*THE END*


Special thanks to:

Min_3088 – thanks for your awesome comments and encouragement hun!! You've been there since the very beginning…not just this FF but my other one too…so a big hug to you!!

Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli – Thanks Guli!!! It's an honor to have you read my fanfic….after all you are the FF queen!! Thank you so much for the encouragement!

Nibbles: thank you so much sweetie!!! I love your comments and am very glad you took the time to read my FF!!

Jigna_07, Tazmanian Devil, Vedo – thanks hunnies…like Min, you've been reading from the very beginning and always left sweet comments!!! Thank you so much!!

lil_desi_goddess – thank you so much sweetie!! I love how you call me di…finally another lil sister….meera's my other one…I think!

Indian101 – thank you soo much for your awesome comments hun!!!

Desaicutie – my loyal FF reader….THANK YOU soooo much hun!! You're sooo sweet…and I'm soo sorry you missed KS b/c of this FF! I hope you enjoyed the last part!


Khattimeeti – anjuuuuuuuu!!! Thank you so much hun for all the encouragement. Truly! I am her chinna…need I say more?!

Lonely14: Shinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! hmmm….what do I say about this girl?! I live to argue with her….not really!! I love you hun!!! And I love your comments and suggestions!!

Divya123, nyzbabigyal, ziddi – thanks divya, navs, and mamta!!! Don't know if you're still reading this….but thank you so much for your wonderful comments!!!

Thank You salmansgurl, andrea_19, cordelia, pmtwist, goldie_ever, saniya9919, Innocent Angel, Auditi, kpatel84, akhilash, cute1228, NEHA*S_JANO_JAI, NAZMEEN, jeenal20, girly_arshxoxo, ridhijai, TallyHo, pondy, malkanoor, cutie_fruitie, Indian_godess, sweetu144, Punjabi#1, ffern1012, Jai-Bani_Kasamh, brainychild92, msrk, jyothi_cool, SRK all the way, archita_59, shahni4, srgmplover, annie_qt, koko g, munnihyderabad, cutie shruti, caddy, juhijani, xindian_baybeex, chickster, aishika_pyar_5, timothy, vangirl, putturani, angad4life, pooja.walia, Rajeev fan, hp85, K__S, apnaapna, morlen, paalki_palak, sweet16_aragon, $h@aq..., cutelady, bismazaman2000, Ravneet_jassal, kripa0521, black current, Henna 786, swatinarang, joa123, tinap_83, pc84, zuggy_ash, got2go2go, pop77, AMAL722, mysteriouz2, brb137, frndsnstrngers, Jaseeka, TINK, loka, shaz81...Thank You all of you for taking time to read my FF at some point 😛

Last but definitely not least my HUNGAMA gang minus Hinna..haha jk…I love you Hinna

Vaidahi, Isha, Maddi, Meera, Munna Bhai, thank you soooo much for your wonderful comments and support guyz….and Hinna, thanks for…..being yourself…since you don't read the FF 😉 !! Thank you so much guyz…I love you all…I don't know if you read this because you wanted to read it or because we're friends…but regardless I love you all…thank you so much for the encouragement…and ahemm…constant reminders to update!!! I love you alll 🤗 I've only said that a 100 times now 😆


It's finally over guyz!!! Thanks to every single one of you readers....and any silent readers 😉

I love you all and am going to miss you 🤗 🤗 🤗

~Srav 😉

PHEW...yes..i went through all 82 pages and wrote down all the ID's...if i've missed anyone...i give you permission to kill me NOW 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

first!! 😉 WOW, so ya I read it last night, but didn't have time to edit my comment!!!

First of all, why did u have to end it?? It's such an awesome ff!!!

I'm soooo glad that Jai and Bani finally ended up together (But DUH!!! that had to happen)

I loved Ruchi, and Krishna, they were sooo adorable!!!

Please please start a new ff soon!!! and I mean soon, and pls continue ur awesome Ranveer/Raashi one!! Bcuz if u don't I know how to get you to continue just ask Shina!!😆

But on a more serious note, u really don't have to thank-us we have to thank-you for writing such an awesome ff!!!!

Luv ya hun,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Lonely14: Shinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! hmmm….what do I say about this girl?! I live to argue with her….not really!! I love you hun!!! And I love your comments and suggestions!!

You live to argue with me???? 😕

aawwwww I love you tooo sravi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

but now i am sad that you ended it

I am gonna miss this fanfic(well till you start another one 😉)

The last part was just mindblowing, Might i say truly sravi style!!!!!!!

heheheh loved the jigs part. lmao!!!! only you could do that 😃😆

Lots of love,

Shina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

Lonely14: Shinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! hmmm….what do I say about this girl?! I live to argue with her….not really!! I love you hun!!! And I love your comments and suggestions!!

You live to argue with me???? 😕

aawwwww I love you tooo sravi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

but now i am sad that you ended it

I am gonna miss this fanfic(well till you start another one 😉)

The last part was just mindblowing, Might i say truly sravi style!!!!!!!

heheheh loved the jigs part. lmao!!!! only you could do that 😃😆

Lots of love,

Shina

😆argue...as in jai-bashing arguments😆 okay...i don't know what i'm talking about since i've given up jai-bashing😕

thanks Shina🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
A beautiful ending to a beautiful fanfic!!!
Thanks!!!

Hope you write another one!!!!
Can never get enough of JB especially with wonderful imaginative writers such as yourself!!!!

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