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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

oops...sorry i haven't updated in a while!!! i'll post a bunch of updates tomorrow and the day after and finish the FF okay?! 😉 😃

thanks for the wonderful comments guyz 🤗



tsk tsk, very bad srav!!! torturing ur lovely fans!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~



tsk tsk, very bad srav!!! torturing ur lovely fans!!! 😆

i love how you read the comments but not teh FF hinna😆

that's why you're so special😉🤗

and heyyyy...i'm not torturing...i'm going to bombard them w/ updates...or wait...is that the torture?!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars


i love how you read the comments but not teh FF hinna😆


that's why you're so special😉🤗


and heyyyy...i'm not torturing...i'm going to bombard them w/ updates...or wait...is that the torture?!😆



lol, yupp, i know right!! lmao 😆 😆 Hey, but maybe one day, ur FF might be special enuf for me to read 😆

Both ways is torture, u don't update, they wanna know what's gonna happen, u do update, they have to read ur horrible writing 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey guyzz!! don't know if you read my comment above! I am going to take some time off IF...so I'll be finishing off this FF today and tomorrow! Will post a bunch of parts! (well not a bunch...there's only a few left 😉 😆 ) Thank you soooo much for the wonderful comments 🤗 I will post one more update today...and then two tomorrow!

thanks Canadiankudi for your idea...it was great..but stupid me didn't know how to incorporate it into this part😕 😆thanks though🤗

Hi ppl! I'm back with the first update...will post one more today and two tomorrow! Thanks so much for the wonderful comments 🤗 !!!

Part 29

Warning: Bani goes a little wacko in this part (like me 😆 )

Bani smiled and got a wicked glint in her eyes as she went to open the door.

She opened the door and pretended to pout. Jai stared back at her guiltily.

Jai: woh Bani..I'm sooo sorry!

Bani pretended to sniffle.

Jai: what do you want me to do? Anything for you! 😳

Bani looked away and grinned and then she turned back and stared at him morosely.

Bani: you've hurt me a lot Jai.

Jai frowned thinking (what? It was only a joke…nothing to get so serious about!)

Jai: oooh…I'm sorry, Bani. I'm really sorry. You know I didn't mean to!

Bani sighed: so…will you do anything?

Jai nodded happily: anything!

Bani: will you buy me ice cream?

Jai nodded and grinned.

Bani: will you buy me a cake?

Jai: of course!

Bani: will you buy me a diamond necklace?

Jai nodded.

Bani: will you buy me a house?

Jai raised an eyebrow and nodded anyway!

Bani scrunched her forehead: this might be a little hard…do you want to try?

Jai grinned in the anything is possible for Jai way: of course!

Bani smirked: will you buy me the white house?

Jai raised BOTH his eyebrows.

Bani: will you buy me this planet?

Jai frowned.

Bani: will you buy me the moon?

Jai's eyes were wide by the end of Bani's tirade.
And then Bani smiled back at him happily.

Bani shrugged her shoulders and with twinkling eyes: you don't have to do any of that. 😃

Jai let out his breath and said dryly: I was hoping you'd say that.

Bani slowly walked up to him and stopped a few inches before him.

Bani whispered: how come we never went to our honeymoon? 😲 😳

Jai raised his head surprised: woh Bani…I didn't know you wanted to…I mean I didn't want to force you.

Bani slowly lifted her arms and wound them around his neck.

Bani: I want to!

*****

Pia sat in her living room, all ready to go. Pushkar was twenty minutes late. She began to think he actually forgot about her. She glared at the floor. He was probably busy with his new girlfriend. *HONK* She ran and looked out the window. Yep. Pushkar's car. She just stood there for a few minutes staring at the car…making him wait(yep she's evil 😈 !) Then she went outside, opened the door, sat in the car and looked straight ahead…not saying a word to him.

They drove in silence for a few minutes before Pia began feeling a little uncomfortable.

Pia: ummm Pushkar…where are we going?

Pushkar smiled: to my house.

Pia: I figured that…but why?

Pushkar: that's where she is.

Pia narrowed her eyes. SHE again! Who the hell was she?

Pia: tumhari ma jaanti hai uski baare main?

Pushkar: nahi…abhi batane waala hoon.

Pia distressed: to main kyon aa rahi hoon? Mujhe kabab mein haddi nahi banni hai.. 😆

Pushkar chuckled: Pia…just relax.

Pia: shut up! I am relaxed! Waise bhi…woh ladki main to nahi hoon…to mujhe kyon pareshani hogi?

Pushkar nodded: that's true!

*****

Pia got out of the car and looked at her surroundings. It's been a while since she last came to visit Pushkar's house. She vaguely remembered his mother. She followed Pushkar inside his house nervously.

Pushkar: ma!!

Ma came into the living room smiling: ha beta….arre yeh Pia hai na?

Pia: ha…aunty…aap kaise hai?

Ma: main theek hoon beta…kitne saal hue hai..

Pia: ha…(then she looked at Pushkar) woh dikhayi nahi de rahi hai

Ma: kaun?

Pushkar: woh ma…maine bataya na…ki aaj main aapko us ladki ko dikhaoongi.

Ma nodded smiling widely: haa…beta to yehi hai..Pia?

Pia's eyes widened and shook her head disappointed: nahi…aunty woh koyi aur hai..

At the same time Pia said that, Pushkar said: ha maa…woh Pia hai!

*****

Rano looked nervously at Sahil from underneath her eyelashes. They'd been driving in silence for ten minutes. Every other minute, Sahil would begin saying something but then he'd stay quiet. Rano was growing anxious. She hated silence!

Rano: Sahil...hum kaha ja rahe hai?

Sahil: woh Rano..main nahi bataoonga..it's a suprise!

Rano smiled: theek hai!

After a few minutes, in front of an isolated (as in no one's there!) park, Sahil stopped teh car. Rano looked at him confused.

Rano: Sahil, there's no one here!

Sahil: That's the point!

Rano raised her eyebrows. What exactly was Sahil planning? she quietly got out of the car and followed him. It was slightly chilly so she was happy she was wearing her scarf. She sighed and walked ahead with her head down. After a minutes she looked up and couldn't see Sahil.

Rano: umm..Sahil...tum kaha ho?

No answer.

Rano getting a little scared: Sahil?

She screached when someone put their arms around her from behind.

Sahil: Rano..rano...it's just me! calm down.

Taking deep breaths she turned around and was shocked out of her wits!

In one hand he was holding the biggest bouquet of red roses she'd ever seen. And in the other hand.....

Sorry....I know boring part...I'm at school and just wrote that! I'll begin writing the next parts after I get home in like 6 hours!

Edited by inavars - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 lolz bani yaar she sure turned 😆 for a moment....that was awesome yaar plz plz cont soooon. i wonder what u'll write for their honeymoon 😳 luvedd it as always....keep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

Hey guyzz!! don't know if you read my comment above! I am going to take some time off IF...so I'll be finishing off this FF today and tomorrow! Will post a bunch of parts! (well not a bunch...there's only a few left 😉 😆 ) Thank you soooo much for the wonderful comments 🤗 I will post one more update today...and then two tomorrow!



why r u taking time of IF???? 😕 ok, so i read this part, now u can't say i didn't read ur FF!!! 😆 although i barely got what was happening, it's ok, as long as i read it 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
WELL DONE HUN!! nice to see you back into your ff, i looooove your Jai Walia!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
YAY SRAV u updated!!! Awesome part, I loved every single situation in that part!! What do u mean ur taking a break from IF??? I'll miss u soo much yaar!! Anyway Please do continue with the multiple parts soon!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks guyz 🤗 and hinna i'm proud of you......that's a first 😆 🤗

i wasn't sure if people would notice that i updated cuz i couldn't edit the title...stupid school computers...i can't edit posts or send PM's 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!! sravs di.

fantastic...

loved the part!!

plz do continue!!

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