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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Thanks all, I am glad its going well for you.Atleast one fiction is in our control Huh? 😆

Thanks for being addicted, hope I live up to ur expectations.........

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shafaq

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

wowwoowww !! i mustt say thtt u r a grr88 writer...u must continuee writing.....i actualli read all of ur from part 1 - 16.....in onee day....and its soo co0ol.....u r mind blwoing....keep writing more....wil be waiting ! 😊 😃

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

Aditee, you make a fantastic, sensual, tingling story, every episode is so much awaited by all of us.
I just love it 👏

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sahar khan

@red_ruby82

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

just read part 17...sum1 is askin for a good beatin!!! tarun needs to run n hide!! oh god the tension is growin stonger per sec! im guessin a huge explosion in the next one aditee or r u plannin to intensify it a lil more??! cant wait to read the next part!! great job as usual! 👏

sahar

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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+ 7

Posted: 19 years ago

#45

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oh my ghosh thinks are boiling and heating the tension, bani has her hands full a over posseive strong dashing jealous hubby and a jealous heartbroken manju friend 😆
plz continue soon 😛

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stonex

@stonex

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

excellent part
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sam111222

@sam111222

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

poor tarun. 😆 😆 very nice part. 👏 👏

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sabsj

@sabsj

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#48

why poor tarun, how besharam can he be to run after her knowing that she is married now. he is trying to take pangas with the wrong guy ...... way to go JW ....... may u win all the match points and finally ur prized trophy BANI 😛

great work aditee, dying to know what happens ... pls treat us to something long or maybe 2 parts to help us go thru the weekend. 😭

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#49

aditee.. it was wonderful part.. plz do continue!!

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#50

Aditee, too good ... thsi tarun is a duffer, why does he want to be in a hospital right now and lose his job as well? stupid of him to go before the firing squad. hope JW gives him a piece of his mind.

love
Sangita

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