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vaidahip thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK all the way

plzz continue very very soon šŸ‘



aww i will continue soon... i'm waiting for finals to be over tomorrow..then i promise i'll continue and post more than one part.

thanks for reading
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

WOW. YOU AR DOING A BRILLIANT JOB šŸ‘ šŸ‘ Yours is the only fan-fic that i read. It is so perfect that i never feeling readin any other version. Please keep posting. Am waiting desperately. šŸ‘




aww soo sweet of you, that really makes me feel special😳... i will continue soon... probably tomorrow. i promise to put more than one part up... thanks for reading
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks everyone.. the wedding was fun and i promise i'll continue soon. sorry to keep you all waiting so long.. do forgive😳

lots of luv

vaidahi
Edited by vaidahip - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww of course we forgive you, but only on one condition that u post an extra long part whenever u post another one?? šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† j/k
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

awww of course we forgive you, but only on one condition that u post an extra long part whenever u post another one?? šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† j/k



of coursešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† it will be super long...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey guys... I'M TERRIBLY SORRY for posting after so long.. but i finally got the time and here is the next part... i tried to make it a little longer... i hope you like it...
AND THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR SWEET COMMENTS.. i hope you haven't forgotten about my fanfic šŸ˜‰

Part 19

Stranger" shh… Jai… if your not alone then you better be somewhere where you are.

The person on the phone scared Jai so much that he listened and headed towards the study room. Bani stood to follow but Jai stopped her with a motion of his hand.

Jai entered the room and closed the door.

Jai: What do you think your doing calling me! How dare you…. You should be rotting somewhere and don't ever call me again

Roshini: oh hold on Jai before you cut the phone I thought I'd let you know that I heard about Dhruv and am terribly sorry (sarcastic)

Jai: Dhruv? HOW DO YOU KNOW! Roshini what have you done?

Roshini: Calm down Jai. Why is that when something goes wrong you always blame me. Shanti Jai..Shanti!

Jai: Shut up Roshini!

Roshini: shhh Jai you should really learn to control your anger. You know you still haven't changed. You remember that one night when we were at the park….

Jai: Roshini ENOUGH! Don't you dare call me again!

Roshini: hahaha Jai Jai Jai… I'm sure you will want me to call… OH in all this talk I forgot to give you a present… here listen…

On the other side of the phone a child's cry could be heard.

Jai: DHRUV!

Roshini: Mana pare ga Jai! You can recognize your son.. not bad

Jai: ROSHINI WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM!

Roshini: ENOUGH JAI. I'm done with joking around. How do you plan to stay happy with your 'PERFECT' family when I'm here alone!

Jai: Roshini please give my son back… I'll give you anything

Roshini: Now we are talking business. You'll get your son back but you'll have to do two things for me!

Jai: I'LL DO IT … but nothing should happen to Dhruv

Roshini: Woa Jai.. don't you want to hear what I want… I want you to DIVORCE BANI, MARRY ME and second sign all your property over to me and my bhaiya!!

Jai: WHAT ROSHINI! HOW DARE YOU ASK THAT!

Roshini: Jai if you want your son back then you will have to do what I say. And don't you dare to call the police because you know what I'm capable of. Your son won't be able to see the light of next day. Think hard Jai..

Jai: ROSHINI I WON'T…..

But all of sudden a hand stopped him from going further…

Bani (whispering and in tears): Mr. Walia… do what she wants… I want Dhruv back

Bani had heard the whole conversation. When Jai left the room she knew something was wrong.

Jai holding his hand over the phone: Bani you don't know what she is asking. She wants me to hand over all my property over to her and her brother. I'm willing to do that but Bani ican't do the second thing she wants

Bani:Mr. Walia.. please. Mujhe mera Dhruv wapas chaiyia.

Jai: Bani she wants me to divorce you and marry her

Bani's heart almost stopped. Her face stood still. The tears stopped and she was all in shock. Finally she spoke

Bani: Do it Mr. Walia. Say yes

Jai: Bani … what are you saying

Bani: Please trust me… for our child's sake

She placed her hand on his heart and he placed his hands on top of hers. Both in tears Jai, not wanting, gave his answer. He placed his phone on his ear..

Jai (Whispering): I'll do it

Roshini with trills and laughing on the other hand: I thought it take forever to respond;… Good Jai.. I assure you, you've made the right decision! I'll keep you more happy then that Bani ever could… I'll call back to give you the time and place we'll meet for you to sign the papers! Luv you (as she kissed the phone and hung the phone up in smiles)

Jai closed his eyes and slowly moved the phone down! He was in tears and he starred at Bani who still had her hand placed on his heart!. She closed her eyes as well and placed her head on his chest trying to digest the news about finally knowing where her son is but also knowing who he is with.

Jai embraced her and both stood there still confused to how they would get their son back.. Jai finally broke the silence

Jai: Bani…. you know how much I love and trust you. How can I divorce you and marry her. Bani how could you make me say yes

Bani: Mr. Walia we have to be strong… I have a plan to get our son back… I will not let my family break… Roshini will get for what she did

Jai starred at his wife and he finally gained the confidence he saw in his wife's eyes



What is Bani's plan... will Bani truly divorce Jai to get Dhruv.. stay tuned...

thanks for reading again...

luv

Vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
great to have you back!
that was a great part... šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was superb.just too good.loved it.glad you're a back. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome work didi..!! plz do continue when u get a chance!!

šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
its reallie going good!!..plz continue soon šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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