What a fab performance by Ram!! - Page 389

Originally posted by: aditee

Aditee....you should stop judging yourself....remem you just do the HW! We grade you! 😛 And man I loved the prelude! We all know that it's leading to something really good and we just can't wait! 😉 Ok here I go!



Plane descends in Don Muang airport, Bangkok at Noon Thai time on Sunday afternoon.
The airport si 25 kms north of the main city. Mr Kim has sent his facilitator to the airport who is waiting for J and B holding a placard and escorts them o the waiting limo.

DETAILS DETAILS....Aditee you put your heart and soul into writing this FF and it shows hun! I love how detailed it is! Nobody would've known if you BSed your way through it but no....you have to be thorough! Makes it all the more enjoyable! 😃

Before that, there is crisis with the luggage and one of B's bags is lost in transit. J albeit tired and weary after the long flight, (u see he didnt sleep as well as wifey did) wrangles with Thai Airways agents to get a timeline. B obviously not very happy, decides to let the issue go.
3 PM by the time luggage crisis is resolved

This has happened to me once and boy did I hate it! Except I had no knight in shining armour aka JW to help me out so I had to wait a whole day! 😭 Oh my JW...where art thou! 😳

The limo takes them to Millenium Hilton situated on the banks of Chao Phraya river offering sweeping views of bangkok.

A mini tour of BK while we're at it....so Aditee your FF is both entertaining and informative....that's it you've officially classified yourself as an excellent author! When you write that book of yours we'll manage all of your royalties np! 😉

Mr A has made reservations on the top floor in the delux view suite. The suite has an elegantly designed living room styled after ancient thai palace in jade, gold and red. The two roms leading from it, one is done in jade and gold and the master in crimson and gold. B has personally never seen a room this big in her life, and another shock awaits her when she enters the bathroom, fitted with a tub as big as a swimming pool, with gold faucets and trims.

Bani hun your husband is royalty! Nothing but gold will do! 😛 Better get used to it sweetie! He's not only unaware of the fact that he's good-looking he's also unaware of how wealthy he is! What I'd do to get a guy like him only my God and I know 😉

The luggage guy (kya naam hota hai? help me here) leaves after accepting his hefty tip.

Busboy? Porter? Attendant? Ok just ask the others! 😛


JW:Tumne kya socha main jaan bhoojkar ek kamra book karoonga?
B(flushes and lies) nahi to
JW (curious ) to tumne kya socha tha?
B: I dont think anymore (tersely)

Aah the tease again at his pranks! He knows what she's thinking yet he wants to hear it from her mouth! 😉 If only Bani had the same skill as you did JW....we'd prolly hold her at a higher regard as a woman! 😛

JW laughs"sure" (stands in front, hands in pocket, sleeves rolled up to the elbows, rocks on the balls of his feet)

Dedication to the AF! Hands in pocket I'm keeping....something so sexy about that I can't even begin to explain! 😳

JW:we cud share(softly) approaches her, how can he look so dangerously sexy even when he has just gotten off a 6 hr plane ride she wonders, by the time she is done wondering, he has.........

I will share anything and everything with you JW! All you have to do is.....actually you don't have to do anything I'll do everything that there needs to be done!!!! 😳😳 Bani we wonder the same thing 24/7 hun! We know it's illegal for a guy to look that hot! (Simi you can leaf through all those law books of yours but I'm sure there's some law against that! 😛) Aditee....LOVED "DANGEROUSLY SEXY"......He's LETHAL! Those looks can kill any woman! I did I died a long time and went to heaven! 😳

B arching her back, almost laying on the bed, "NO!"
He bends down "Have I told you how u look in jeans?" (husky)
B: Mujeh maloom hai main kaise dikhti hoon (smug)

As AD would say I'm glad Bani had the guts to say something....with someone like JW hovering over me the most I'd manage would be a little mouse squeak....IF I'm lucky! 😳 Did I mention that I'd be dead by then anyways! 😳

JW (throws his head back and laughs) Kaise? Lets see if our reviews match (bends down further)
B brings her hands in front as a shield, TOO LATE!
He si already bending over
J(huskily) jab bhi tum overhead bin se samaan nikaal rahi thi tumahara, I cud see a tiny patch of skin, begging to be touched" (slides his hands between her waistband and her t-shirt)
B I know (trying to sound like a seductress all confident, but comes out squeaky)

Don't bother Bani....you're pretty much licked! 😛 This entire trip is his so you might as well just give in now! 😉 Btw Aditee you didn't say it but I imagine the masculine hands and those long fingers....I saw it all hun....don't worry! 😳

JW: its your turn (waits)
B:It fully covers me (realizing conv is slipping into dangerous territory)

Only conv Bani? 😉 Where are those masculine hands now? 😉😳

JW: Thats a minus............
Starts nuzzling, she is tired, he is too, both roll on the bed sideways, she slides her fingers thru his hair, his mouth starts trailing a path of fire on her face and neck, and he finally swoops down on hers..........

BANI!😡 Only JW is allowed to slide his hand/fingers through his hair! Don't you dare touch his hair again! 😡 Mere gunde toh tumhare peeche pade hai lekin tum mujhe bhi bulvaane par tuli ho kya? 😡
So JW got his way afterall! 😉 Well he is THE JW! That no hands rule seems to have vanished into thin air now! 😆😆


not a formal business meeting so he decides to dress casual a black Polo short-sleeve t-shirt with its signature red logo on his left chest, and faded blue jeans. He decides to chuck the formal look for the evning, shampooed hair, no gel, just brushed back with a casual flick.

Hai...did I say I died....coz well I think JW just dug me out of my grave and killed me again!!!! 😳😳😳 Hai...koi mujhe bachaaye! Aditee I know everyone will dedicate this to themselves so I'm gonna do the same! The faded blue jeans are all mine though.....I know that! And well the hair.....MINE too! Hair's always mine! 😳 Can he look anymore hot? This has to be sent word for word to Kekta camp so someone can dress him up EXACTLY like this! I just can't do with just imagining him like this....Simi pull your strings...make it happen! Dosti ki khatir! Btw Aditee...red logo on left chest....WHAT A GREAT ADDITION! 😳 Imagine karte hue hi pagal ho jaaoongi main! 😳😳 Left chest.....ok I'm not sure how much longer I can go! I'm in JW land now! So if I stop making sense from now.....don't blame me! 😛 And Aditee those top 2 buttons are unbuttoned....I know....you didn't have to write it....I just know they are! 😳

How can he do this in anew country. Is work that important, why cant he take the EVENING OFF? He probably has forgotten all about me she thinks

Bani....pati ko itne hot attire mein dekhkar pagal ho gayi kya? Ab yaad aa raha hai woh! 😛 He could take the evening off but how can he sataaofy you if he did! 😉 You underestimate JW, Bani! Bechari Bani....usko pata nahi kab JW ki jhaal mein phas rahi hai! 😛

Decides to pamper herself, walks into hubby's bathroom, and tries some of the array of bath salts and bubble baths that form a neat row near the vanity mirror..

Are any of them AD's orange-ginger? 😕

What better time to wear it when JW is not around she thinks!

Did you really think he's not coming home for the night Bani? 😛 You temptress you! 😉

Its a fuchsia pink saree with a halter-neck back less blouse (yes she lives in Mumbai and watches TV and bought it after seeing Rani's promo in KANK:-)and looks exactly teh same! thanks Soap!)

Hmm...can't see Bani in this but what the heck....she's in a different country and no Kekta mai to dress her like a sanyasin! 😛

Wears her signature pink bangles in one hand leaves the other one bare, and her neck except for her MS gold chain. Her heart skips a beat when she looks at her reflection as she thinks of the person who occupies her mind 99% of the time these days. Her face suffuses with a warm red color, kinda compliemnting the saree, as she drapes her pallu over her shoulder, and realizes in shock that there is no way she can pin it on her shoulder.

The scene is set! Plenty of skin showing.....and more to be shown in offing! Bechara JW apne dil ko sambhalega bhi kaise....waise agar Bani ke iraade nek nahi hai toh JW peeche kyun reh jaaye! 😈

Decides she's got to be super careful about holding it all evening long. Dabs Clinique Happy in all her pulse points......... looks at her reflection and is quite impressed!

Hmm....have your tried Alfred Sung's Forever? Absolutely divine!!! 😉

Hair brsuhed and flowing freely, carressing her bare back, "i acn give Rani a run for her money!" she muses

Absolutely cutie! And I'm sure JW would agree too!!! 😉

Models herself in front of the mirror, walks back and forth and freezes when she sees her back view in the almost 360 degree view the mirror provides. Closes her eyes, she feels a tingle pass thru her body, shudders in response as if JW had touched her physically...........steadies herself and looks at the bed side clock, its past 8 PM!
NO SIGN OF JW.

Oh the anticipation! Leave the country and the only thought that occupies your mind is JW eh Bani? 😉 What happened to all the "I hate him" comments? 😉 It's so cute how every little thing reminds her of him and his touch! Aakhir JW ka jadoo chal hi gaya! 😉


I dont need him to enjoy my evening.She might need him for something else altogether but not this nite, she tells herself bitterly.

Shows what you know Bani! 😆 Waise at least you admitted that you need him for "something else"! 😉

She knows JW just has to touch her and she feels as if she had foolishly captured the exposed end of a live elctrical wire, violent shocks running up her arm, running along every exposed nerve. One touch of his can have me completely burned down to ashes,

Shh.....don't tell me! I wanna experience it all for myself! I don't want any prior judgements! 😛 I'll make my own when I cross that bridge! 😳


Tere bina jiya jaaye na, Tere bina jiya jaaye na. Bin tere tere bin saajna, saans mein saans aaye na

Great choice Aditee! 😉

She smiles, and he introduces himself as Sanjay Singh and is in Bk on a biz trip from spore works for some South East Asian Bank. Very young and pleassant Bani thinks. Hewants to knwo if she is waiting for someone, she denies and he asks her if he can buy her a DRINK! She accepts and they proceed to the table shown by the hostess.

What's with all the Sanjanas and Sanjays! 😛 Bechara Sanjay doesn't even know what he's getting into! Ab Tarun ka kya hoga? 😆


Bani suddenly feels a chill crawl up her spine and shakes it off as her imagination, continues talking.....
JW (flat)Hi! Mrs Walia
Startled, turns around almost dropping her soda on her saree

"Mrs. Walia" .... gets me EVERYTIME! Simi....I know you're commenting on this so I won't bother....I'm just gonna say ditto! 😛 Good thing she didn't drop the soda....already pallu sambhala nahi jaa raha....ab toh utarne ki naubat ayegi toh JW might just take her then and there! 😉

Just when she wanted to act cool and aloof and appear unmoved at his proximity her body decides to go on a sensual overdrive, responding to his closeness with all the thirst of a parched desert traveller presented with a jug full of cold water!

Wow....that was AWESOME comparison Aditee....I got goosebumps already! 😳

His eyes travel over her, tumbling silk of hair, notes the bare back and shoulder beside it, like a solder torch, follows it down her neck and back to her face.

Check, check, check.....JW mental notes made already! Bani you stand no chance! 😉

B: (her voice failing her, drying painfully, making her moisten her lips so thats he can speak again) Hi! Mr Walia (JW's eyes watch that tiny provocative movement, making her heart do another happy dance).

Won't let a thing escape will he! How observant can he be! Ok add to list Aditee "EXTREMELY observant"


Sanjay:(extending his hand) Hello Mr Walia. Are u by any cahnce the Walia of Walia Resorts?

EVERYONE knows him! He might as well be Amitabh Bacchan! 😛

JW (tearing his eyes off his wife, looks a lil uninterested at the stranger, but still tries to be pleasant coz its his wife he wants to kill right, not the stranger:-) Yes, thats me (smiles)

In that husky voice....yes I heard it Aditee! 😉 Kill her? more like devour her! 😉

Sanjay:(turning towards B) Banee u are his wife? Wow! I shud have known a you must belong to a guy like him! (kinda embarrassed and sheepish, smiling).

SCORE! JW 1 Bani 0! Sanjay you're going in JW's good books! 😃 Smooth escape sonny boy! 😉

B thinks I DONT BELONG TO HIM. I belong to myself.!

😆😆 You keep thinking that Bani....you don't even know to what extent he plays with your mind....you MORE than belong to him! 😉

B: Mr Walia, why dont u join us ? (Her bravest line in her life), you should relax, you look tired, Can I order you something? (picks up the beverage menu in an affected way and pretends to read)
JW (muscle clenching in his jaw) No Banee thanks, I want to relax differently.

How brave of Bani...and how cheeky at that! 😉 But JW is not one to be taken down! JW you could've waited till you announced your plans to the world! 😉

B's breath catches in her throat
JW smiles at Sanjay, snakes his left arm around his wife's waist and pulls her up like a rag doll.

Do you still think you belong to yourself Bani? 😛

Bani feels his watch brand her back again.

AD this is all for you!

JW: sanjay so nice to meet you. We are staying her, if u are too, then we can meet for lunch or dinner sometime.

Translation: If I ever see you around my wife again I will skin you live! 😛


JW gently shoves B in the direction of the elevator. She tries to free herself but doesnt work. Decides not to pitch a tantrum and acquiesces. NOT A WORD FROM HUBBY.
Inside the elevator JW almost punches holes where the numbers once used to be! watches the floor indicator panel with unbelievable curiosity. Get off, walk to the suite, shoves teh card key and pulls it out.
JW walked purposefully inside the suite, arm still in the steely grip around her waist.

So it was there all the time eh? Btw I'm taking this one too....arm, hand....I'll take anything I get! 😛😳 Great lead Aditee!

Juke box is playing "Bheege hot tere, pyaasa dil mera, .............. (Kunal G's hit song)

I LOVE this song! And how apt! 😉

The click of the lock sounded like a mortar being fired. Bani, forcefully detaches herself and walks away to the windows in the living room, deliberately ignoring him......... when his chilling voice hits her ears.....


JW(soft, threatening, silky, letters carved in ice)


Game's over, Banee!

EGGJACTLY! Can't wait for the next part Aditee.....you've got us hooked like never before! You better get onto your HW right away tomm or else we're coming to Boise to personally watch you do it! Or we'll send Kekta mai over! 😛 My best part for this part....the show of possessiveness yet not a "show" at the restaurant in front of Sanjay! I loved how JW firmly but politely lets both Bani and Sanjay know what Bani is to him! No show of jealousy, no awkward moments, no unnecessary words spoken.....just the JW-style of showing what Bani's place is in his life! EXCELLENT Aditee! 👏👏
Now you better not make us wait too long for the next part! AD's gonna mark you down if you do! She's watching your every move! 😉
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Originally posted by: armaandeewani

AD! You are too generous! Thanlks yaar!

Originally posted by: soapaddict

pi! Rocking update !Awesome!

Loved your remark about the hair! Omigod I loved it! I am dying of laughter.. tere gunde!

And the black polo.. aditee.. I missed writing about that!

And Mrs Walia.. so true.. Simi.. you can't be the only Mrs W.

Also, Pi.. Loved what you said about the possessiveness...

Tarun.. tarun ko mein le loon? Please.. he's so cute? I mean the one Aditee. showed us... this one.. eh,....

Soap

Originally posted by: aditee

AD
The hotel is real, the decor is ALL mine 😳 I thot Bk hai, plus in the East they are not asahmed to use Red like they are here, plus gold is so south east asian so I combined it..........

Originally posted by: simran1285

Aditee WOW that was awsome I am speechless with dripping wet hair...where is JW 😡 ..if only he can see me in this avitar 😳 ..I know will leave bani

Aditee I will give a full..mostly line by line review tomorrow because if I do one now in this state it will come out like my hai...wet and boring so I owe you one..In the morning I will be fresh to a post mortem..why yes of BANI ofcorse 😈

Simi.. good one.. wet and boring! Raat ko sabke sense of humor aajate hain! Kaam se chutti na!?

If you are the one offing Bani.. and giving Post mortems.. who's gonna bail you out sweetheart. Lawyer to thu hai na?