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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

The JW in the show is wat 40? The JW in this FF I imagine to be say 32-34...I don't know his flirtatious nature...his way w/things...makes it seem like that.

Btw JW (FF-waala) raat ko biwi ke saath...subhe jaab woh uthi taab u already had that mass box of bangles??? Lightening speed work!!! Pati ho toh aisa (how old is this dialogue by now).


I am with you....even TV-wala JW I haven't ever thought of to be older than 36-38 but def FF-wala JW is much younger! 32-34 (so much more closer to my age.....ok can he BE anymore desirable!) 😳
Sara desh JW ki mutti mein hai toh yeh bangles kya cheez hai? 😉 JW chahe toh there will be bangle-walas working OT just for him or rather just for his wife! 😉 And you Bani still haven't realised that! 😛 He brings show tickets for you, buys bangles for you, takes you to Thai....arre aur kya chahiye! 😛 Ab chup chaap BK mein acchi bacchi ki tarah uski baat sun na! 😉 Aditee....ab jab keh diya hai maine Bani ko....tum jaldi se kuch hot and spicy likhna aur PM bhej dena! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean

I am with you....even TV-wala JW I haven't ever thought of to be older than 36-38 but def FF-wala JW is much younger! 32-34



That is something I think maybe even the show waale think abt...for RK and the way his looks are he would've been best showed as a 35-36 y/o JW...maybe w/Jigs as the same age or little older then him. Given then it wouldn't have been Jaibhaiya but that's a small sacrifice to make.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry to butt in…have been a passive reader till now. But I had to write that I am a great admirer of this work of wit/analysis/bantering et al and this has provided me with several hours of pure entertainment. I am a great fan of RK and I watch KS only for him.Maybe you should a crisp version of this thread to RK on his birthday.
Bye..CAT
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: catcat

Sorry to butt in…have been a passive reader till now. But I had to write that I am a great admirer of this work of wit/analysis/bantering et al and this has provided me with several hours of pure entertainment. I am a great fan of RK and I watch KS only for him.Maybe you should a crisp version of this thread to RK on his birthday.
Bye..CAT



Thanks much. And do join in when u can 😛. Lol waise I like (love) the idea...we may just have to do that. RK if nothing else will get a good laugh...and hopefully we'll be there to hear it 😳. Oh and I can vouch for the fact that the rest of the AF will have no probs w/this.
Edited by armaandeewani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
loved ur writing aditee.. and do keep it upp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


loved the bantering<thanks to catcat, i could not find the appropriate word
for it>.. its soo funny!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani



Thanks much. And do join in when u can 😛. Lol waise I like (love) the idea...we may just have to do that. RK if nothing else will get a good laugh...and hopefully we'll be there to hear it 😳. Oh and I can vouch for the fact that the rest of the AF will have no probs w/this.


Thanks catcat and AD us have a problem with RK's laugh never! The problem would only exist if we weren't there to hear him! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Btw Aditee another note for you....can we have JW doing his walk of all walks...that manly, adrenaline-oozing walk in your next FF! 😳 Thanks for obliging my obsession with the top 2 buttons now if you can only indulge my masculine walk fantasy I will personally put in a word for the big guy up there to get you JW in your agla janam....yaa phir even better to transform your DH into JW in this janam itself! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Morning girls!

Pi.. you mean the walk he showed us in the July 18 epi? What a walk it was yaar!
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Posted: 19 years ago
BTW girls.. I think Aditee might only be on later today as she has folks over na?

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Posted: 19 years ago

I knew I should have stayed a little longer😡 par kambakht neend yaar, mein chali gayi JW land mein aur Aditee ne aake part 12A post kardi and to top it all off I was so lost in JW land that I even overslept by 15minutes, good thing it was 15minutes more of JW 😆 and JW is so sweet to make it up he made sure I was not late for work, mein jaanti some way or another my not being late for work even after extra 15minutes of sleep must have something to do with JW, my sexy jaadugar😳

chal aditee yeh le mera review😊

Originally posted by: aditee

12A
This one became too long so cudnt put them on a plane

Sorry!
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B & JW almost didnt make it to their appointment. Bani was sure they were not going to make it,

at first I thought you would start the FF by then still in bed and then rushing to get ready for the appt. but since that didn't happend I went ahead and made it up, and yes JW no clothes😉

kept taunting him for making them late

kitni chalaak hai, khana bhi khaya aur complain bhi kiya, not right Bani
JW turns around and coolly asks "Maine socha tum to jaana nahi chahti thi Bk, so its good if we miss it right"
The look on her face was priceless!

bullseye! love how he answered that, what a witty response only ur FF JW could've said such a thing
Darshan had gotten the day off coz he worked late and

Darshan??? ok fine I feel sorry for the poor guy, BUT who care?? I am sure JW takes good care of him ($) no more comments

so JW behind the wheel (click) truly a Kodak moment

ooooooo, since bani doesn't wanna sit next to him, can I? can I? oh pleaseeeeee can I?

6 PM dusk.............
Visa approved, JW calls his travel desk books the tkts for Sat nite tomm nite basically....

arey JW ka raj hai Visa kaise approve na hota😉

Bani si tired, nervous, upset that he is finally making her go, and she is terrified of flying............. terrified of being with JW alone to a strange city,

she has the sexiest and richest mind you man going with her and she is scared? Never fear JW is here, bani tumhe kuch hone se pehle JW apni jaan de de

on their way back home
B: Aapko aaj kaam par nahi jaana (opens and looks at her passport for the nth time)
JW enjoying her excitement, amused "Nahi" "Kyon main ek din ki chutthi nahi le sakta"

if only, only you were married to me JW tumhe kabhi kaam pe jaane hi nahi deti, would want you with me at all times, in bed😉
B: Sure kyon nahi (smiles)
Remembers that she better not get too close to him, coz she never knows whats going on in that devious mind of his.............

deep down she probably wants to go and sit in his lap😆
JW: Mera note nahi mila tumhe aaj subah?
B: Mila tha (upset maybe he didnt call.........)
JW I didnt want to wake u Banee tum raat ko late soi ho,

awwwwwww, hayeeeeee shooooo shweeet what a husband man, but I agree with everyone I love this note idea so romantic
B: Oh! (relief) Maine socha........
JW (all interested) Hmmm kya socha?

yehi na ke he was with me😉 😆
B: Kuch nahi
B: Mr W, I will not stay in the same room with you
JW laughs........

liar kahin ki you know she wants to be on the same bed with him
B: I know its your plan. Aap mujhe wahan le jaakar...........
JW haan le jaakar?
B looks out the window..........

stop looking out the window, JW is sitting next to you
JW: Jai Walia make the rules Baneee

I officially make JW the govt. of my life he will hold the power of the Senate, the house of Rep. and the Pres. 😆 I will do as he says, and follow any rules he makes😉 JW zindabad!!!
B turns around with a verbal whiplash, all annoyed hissing..
B:BANI WALIA MAKES THE RULES FOR JAI WALIA (the moment she says it she is not so sure anymore, turns crimson)

I dunno why but I blushed like anything when she says that😳
JW:(laughs hysterically) I didnt catch the name clearly, kya naam bola
B: No!
JW Bani what?
B Bani walia (almost a whisper)
JW Walia kaun hai?

😳 😳 😳 😳 such a cute scene, he is soo naughty, what a tease, I love it!!!!!!!
B looking out the window again..........

koi is ladki ko bolo yaar, window ke bahar kuch nahi hai 😕
B I dont know, I dont want to know...........

you know, and yet to still want to know😆
JW look at me

I am looking 🤓 I want to see him as clearly as possible😳
B: Please Mr Walia

Yes, please Mr. Walia look at me😆
JW: Bani whether u like it or not that name belongs to you, its mine and will always be mine......

Transaltion of the above: Bani you belong to me, your mine and you will always be mine,
B thinks not if I can help it!

No, not if I can help it😡 I am finding my seld a Walia and getting married to him, sumjhi then I will be MRS. WALIA😳 and yes my Mr. Walia better be like JW😉
B(sulking) Mujhe Pia se milna hai

PIA😡 iss naam ko sunte hi mera rom rom boil honne lagta hai, yeh Pia kahan se aa jaati hai, I will go and hunt her, be right back Aditee😈
JW(teasing) last week hi to mili na, on Saturday,
B: Meri ek hi behan ab yahan hai mujhe us se milna hai before we go, mera matlab I go.......

yes Bani go, police ek laash milli hai, you must go and identify the body, they think its Pia😈, don't mein hoon na JW ke liye tab tak mein unhe seduce....I mean sambhaal ti hoon😉

JW:Pati bhi ek hi hai tumhara (softly, amused)
B:I dont want him...........

so it's confirmed, now I can take him, I am starving Mr. Walia but first some seasoning, please strip down, yes that means all the way I don't want any piece of cloth anywhere near you😈
JW Oh! achha mujhe kuch aur impression mila tumhare room mein embassy jaane se pehle
As usual he had been the one to control his urges and stop her much to her ambarrassment.........

usse toh rok liya JW, lakin mujhe koi nahi rok sakta😆
B: i dont want to talk about it! (flushes)
JW: Good , hame baat nahi karni chahiye.............(amused)

he better not talk about it varna😡, chalo for our amusement unhe baat karni chahieh thi Aditee, would have love to see what she would've said, na chahte hue bhi woh response zaroor deti
B punches the radio, the AC, the CD player keys, and looks for a CD,........ just randomly distracts him
JW:Kya kar rahi ho?
B: mujhe yeh CD nahi sun na

she sounds like a lil baby😕
JW: i dont know Bani, I listen to biz news only, ..............pata nahi Sahil ya Anu ki choice hai, go buy more CDs and stack em here

mujhse pooche na pleasee,
B: Mujhe bhook lagi hai
JW: banee plz wait, ruk jao half hour hamare rest mein kha lete hain.
B: Nahi abhi kahin khana hai
JW speeds............ turns around, goes the opp way, doesn talk to her, knowing she is sulking

I like him behind the wheel, so controlling, my kind of guy😆
B:Ab kahan ja rahe hai
JW no response
B:Mr W mujhe aaj raat ko Pia ke ghar rukna hai

phir se pia😡 didn't I tell you she is dead, I am sorry accident tha😈
JW: We are going home Bani.
B:Thats not my house
JW: OK fine we are going to MY house

He is soo nice calling it there house, par yeh Bani, theek hai, ab woh ghar humhara hai, Mera or JW ka😳
JW somehow manages to ignore her tantrum and drive home
Parks, gets off, opens her door

what a gentlemen!!😊
JW: Chalo
B: mujhe Pia ke ghar jaana hai

Pia is dead, Ram naam Satya hai, Ram naam Satya hai😆
JW: Abhi nahi Banee, its past 7, tumne usko call bhi nahi kiya (patiently)
B:Mujhe Bk nahi jaana
JW: dont worry main hoon na, trust me

I trust you, I trust you😳
B: wohi to nahi kar sakti (blurts)
JW starts laughing.........

😆 I know JW that is the joke of the day
JW showing immense patience, he thot he never had not born with it never acquired it................
JW:Abhi andar chalo, subah tkts cancel kar lenge
B: Promise?
JW: Swear (pinches his throat)

😆 Agar zaida zor se pinch hua toh mein kiss kardoon, you'll feel all better😳
Tony has a huge spread ready as usual, she eats ravenously, JW just stares intensly part amused, part in an understanding way

I could just imagine her, sitting there eating like a pig😆
B goes back to her room........ showers, readies for bed is removving the pink bangles she forgot to.............. looks at her passport again, laefs thru it
JW(from the doorway, closing the door behind him) aur tum Bk jaana nahi chahti
B:Passport slips and falls, he picks it up
JW:(gently) whats bothering you
B YOU!

Liar Liar pants on fire, I think whats bothering her is that why hasn't he kissed me yet😆
JW: U are funny when u are nervous
B: U are NEVER funny..............

you should ask us at AF 😆 we'll fill you in on his humour
JW: do u really not wnat to go?
B:Mujhe Pia se milna tha

piapiapiapiapiapiapiapia, I am going to go insane😕
JW:Kal saara din uske aath rehna(gently pushes her hair back from her face, cups it in his hands)

Aditee don't you dare bring Pia in this, uska naam le aayi ho that's bad enough😡
B:I dont want to be kissed, mujhe sona hai.
JW AchhaTum so jao and then I will kiss you(winks)

awwwwwww, okie honey I am going to sleep are you coming to kiss me now😳 here I'll even pucker up
B:NO!

YES!
He is still in his blue pant shirt, he gently brings her closer to his body, she hides in the V again, eyes closed arms by her side, trying her best not to wrap it around him..................

hmmm.... the V I am beginning to like this V 😆
JW has no such pretensions, he wraps his arms close and tight and breathes into her hair and they just stand there...............

aww
Car mein mujhe tumne itna pareshaan kiya, sorry nahi bologi?
B: Nahi

JW on that silly girls behalf, I am sorry😳now can I get my kiss
JW chuckles again..............
JW: main boloon, instead?
B surprised she lifts up her head to look at his face,
JW:Chalo mujhe dekha to...........

so romantic Aditee, your making me nuts for him
B: realises she is being tricked again, tries to move away, he holds her wrist to pull her back, her pulse begins to thump against the fingers encircling her wrist........ he accidentally cracks a bangle, and it falls off
JW:(sincerely) I am soo sorry Banee ..........Kisses her long slender wrist thru her remaining bangles, watching her intently.........there was something disturbingly erotic about the way he kissed her wrist like that.........

I'll break all my choodiyaan if you promise to kiss the pain away😉 but Aditee JW is soo rich yet Bani wears kaanch ki choodiyaan😆, oh who cares right😉

B:Dekha aapne kya kar diya pink mera fave tha
JW:Mera bhi (winks)
B:Go away

you see JW she is ordering you to come to me, aajao I am waiting with open arms 🤗
JW: Now I REALLY ahve to say sorry (she thinks he is going to kiss her)
pUlls her back to him this time holding her upper arms, breath warm on her face.............. and goes near her lips she waits.......... eyes closed......whispers"SORRY!"

what a teaseee, soooo cute
And steps back
eyes dancing devilishly.............

Ankhon ki gustakhia maaf ho😉
JW:If u want to be kissed u have to ask....... (winks)

really that is all I have to do, Ok I want to be kissed, I'll even add a pleaseeee
It takes a moment for her to register what he just said, from his tone and expression, her knees buckle, he starts to laugh,she takes a furious swing at him................ JW side steps it and pulls her toward him for a long slow kiss of silky exploration........... his grip tightening further to support her trembling body..........................

hmmmmm....I bet she enjoyed that didn't she😉

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Bani waks to the knock on the door.
Its Tony with a HUGE CARTON
T:Maam, yeh aap ke liye aaya hai
B:Mere liye?
She is sleepy and confused
There is a note in an envelope
She opens the box first, wondering what it cud be looks like bangles in every conceivable color................... opens the note with shaky hands.............
Color suffuses her cheeks when she reads it

kya aditee getting personal huh😉 didn't I say last night that you might be living like Bani & JW
"Hope you like them, I am sorry about last nite, ONLY for the bruise on ur wrist, nowhere else (a wink symbol)"
JW
I loved the ending, perfect, what a dialouge how did you think of this, great job👏I really wish I woulda read it last night but it was worth the wait, I am glad I read it when I was up and alert, post the next part soon yaar, hope you had a good sleepover😉




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