Ab Tanha Raha Na Jayee
Hi Guys .. didnt find much to do on IF . this weekend . so decided to give it a shot on writing a Little Fanfic.
Hope u guys enjoyed reading..it .. coz this is the first time i have written One .
It was another Morning in the Walia House ... buzzing with commotion ... preparations for2 weddings Sahil and Rashi's and Anu and rohits wedding .. was in Full swing . But bani was distant form .. these' tayari's' . She had other things on her Mind .Mostly Her husband -JJi . , Some times she just couldnt believe that she was married to Him .deep in thoughts sitting in the family mandir in the walia residence
As she bowed her head joining her hands togather simultaneously to offer respect and ask for blessings and love from Mata Rani ...for herself and mr Walia along with her 2 sisters .
" what has happenned to me today .. Ma i cant even pray without being distracted .
Please forgive Me . she says softly and leaves the Pooja Ghar to give prasad and aarti to the rest of the family members . who were sitting in the sitting room ... talking
daadi , and Maasi were busy deciding the menu of the mehendi and sangeet,Maasi's glasses slipped down to the tip of her nose she opened her eyes wide looking at Bani above the glasses Bani extended the aarti thali towards both maasi and Daadi and handed them the prasad
"Bani zara dekh .. nashta aab tak kyon Nahi lagaya hai Tony ne "Maasi questions
Ji Maasi .Bani replied promptly handing Anu prasad Who was . engrossed in . making a list of the things she required for her troseau. How Happy Anu looked .. her dream was finally coming true .
Sahil was writing out the invitation cards he had a glum look on his face .. as though ... getting married to Rashi was a Chore that he had to Complete ... while Aditya Uncle was discussing the arrangements for the decor of the house with the wedding Planners . Bani's eyes searched for her Husband . but he was no where in sight neither was Roshni, .. .sighing she left to check on breakfast . The Chef Had prepared all. that was requested ,Bani instructed Tony to serve breakfast Immediately as daadi and maasi had to eat on the dot , for health reasons
Tony Nodded his head in agreement .-looking like the C'at who swallowed a Canary' .. his mouth shut tight his cheeks popping out slightly..
Tony if anyone asks for me please tell them .. I had to leave urgently and will return soon .
Yes Ma'm once again he nodded
she quckly went to her room to check if Mr Walia had rememberd to take his Wallet and handkershief .. . she noticed that he had taken both but forgotten his Pen . it lay on the dresser . She picked it up and looked at it Lovingly a smile playing on her lips...Na Jaane Dimaak kahan Laga rehta hai mr Walia Ka ..? .
she felt Guilty that she hadnt been there in person to remind him to take the pen .Actually she had done this on Purpose ... coz she was crestfallen with him since That Morning they had woken up after consummating their relationshipand had remaked that he regretted making love to her and that it shouldnt have occured between Them
Oh god.. ! she muttered pushing back strands of her hair tucking them behind her ear, that had slowly loosened out and slipped to the corner of her eye .why couldnt she stop thinking of that nite . She was going insane ... recalling what had happenned between herself and Mr Walia ..her head was spinning .with recollections of mr walia's comments
she picked up her Bag, looking exhausted .. in a yellow paisely print saree. checked if her Mobile was in it .. in case maasi or Daadi tried to reach her , and walked out ... She caught a Taxi
as she sat in it ...
where to madame .. ?.promptly the driver asked turning the Fare meter
/ for a moment she didnt know where to go all she knew was she wanted to be alone by herself to gather her thoughts .she didnt know what destination to give the taxi driver ,
Beach pe // Juhu ... she said in a couple of seconds .saying the first place that came to her Mind
minutes later .. she was walking on the beach not many people were present ..as it was still early in the morning .. couple of late Joggers breezed passing her .. Whats happenin to me ? why cant i concenterate on anything ? she questioned her mind a frown creasing her brow
How can Mr walia say that he regretted what had happenned between them On the nite Sahil got engaged .
It was the Most beautiful and Memorable nite of her Life , a nite every married woman .. cherishes and shares with her Husband .Whats wrong with Mr walia . why dosent he Understand that I love Him and want to stay as his wife .Why ...?
Is it becasue of Roshni .? . Bani wondered ...her mind was in turmoil
why was Mr walia being Ignorant of her jealousy towards Roshni ...she had to talk to Him ... But How ... ? he has been avoiding me ... whenever i try to catch his attention .. he looks away..
Mr Walia U think I am not aware of this'' Ankh micholi u are Playing with me " she grinned . but what can I do ... u have ignited a fire , of which the flames are still Burning and want to be kept ablaze
Deep in thoughts she walked her head low watching the sand, didnt notice a wave roll quickly,to her feet lightly caressing it,.within seconds another one rolled in full speed and splashed her sari with water ... it wasnt until yet another one came in rapidly that she got out of her reverie and realised .. what had happenned to her saree .
Oh God .. aab mien Ghar kaise jaaongi is haalat Mien ..? she questions her self ,feeling helpless . Just then her Mobile rings ...
who can it be ...? she wonders not in the mood to answer any phone calls . she lets it ring .. she wasnt in a Mood to Talk to anyone ... But what if MR walia was trying to Call her .?.. she realises and answers the call ..
Bani Maami ... Kahan Hai Aap ... Anu asked excitedly ?
Bani all of a sudden was tongue tied not able to answer . pausing a minute ...
Oh ho Maami ... aap ko Yaad Nahi .. we have to go shopping ... for my trousseau / kal hamari baat hui thi..?
Oh haan Anu .. sorry mai Bhool Gayee . Bani Felt Guilty ditching anu like this ..
koi baat nahi ... why dont we meet at the Mall .. aap bhi bas wahi pe aa miliye Mujhe .
Theek hai Anu . bani agreed reluctantly and ended the call to go . she really wasnt in the Mood for any shopping . that too for a Trousseau.. but she had promised Anu ... ahe would help her prepare for her wedding .
sitting in the taxi on the way to the mall , Bani 's mind travelled wickedly to that nite mr walia nd she had consummated their marriage . the Images in her head were so bright and full of life that she merged into them ... and felt Jai 's lips.. travel slowly ..Oh so softly from the base of her throat up to her cheek then slowly but surely behind her neck standing so close in front of her , she could feel the scent of his Perfume ..- one that left u .in a sizzle . ... he looked up into her eyes and put his arms around her neck and bought her long silky hair in front on to the side of her neck and carefully slid the necklace from her neck that was becoming a huge bother to his lips which were on route to her back where he slowly untied the dori of her Blouse with his Mouth meanwhile one hand caressed her stomach and the other travelled down her Arm to where her bangles rested on her wrist tinkling softly as his hand lands on them.gently .
I" Bani , aaj tum Kitni Khoobsoorat lag rahi ho ", ..". Kahin meri Nazar na lag jayee" .. he whispered softy into her ears .
Party mien bas tumhi hi Ko dhoond raha tha .... tumhare bina mera maan nahi lagraha Tha ...... Kab se ise Raat ke intezaar mien ... bechain rehta tha ... aur aaj .. akhir ... ... tum meri baahon ke darmiyan aahi gayee ... and he lifted her into his arms Bani wrapped her arms around his Neck and buried her face into his neck .she wished she could stay here like this in Jai's arms and never ever have to lift her head again . being here felt so Good but it couldnt last forever .. blushing profusely but thanking the darkness of the nite that Jai couldnt see her cheeks turn crimson . ...he lay her gently down on to the huge bed that looked inviting, her long hair spreadout on the pillows ... from the huge window of the bedroom the moonlite flooded the room . giving a soft lite to the ambience perfect for this moment ...
Madame ... Oh madame ! .. a loud voice jolted her out of her daydream and back to Reality .
it was the taxidriver .. looking at her Puzzled ... chewing tobacco ... Aap theek to hai na Madame ..?
bani was still blushing from her thoughts ..and replied- han mai theek hoon ..
lo ji aap ka Mall aa gaya he scowled bringing his vehicle to abrupt halt ,bani almost slid out of the seat ... giving him a annoying look .. she pulled out some notes from her Bag , to pay him, while he still watched her as if he didnt believe her when she reassured him she was alrite .,.. she climbed the stairs upto the Mall , her sari was damp from her Knees and Below and clung to her legs .neverthe less she had no choice but to come for Anu's sake.perhaps she could buy a new sari and change it ... .she spotted Anu .. in a bright colored blouse and jeans . she was on the mobile ... talking ... no wild guesses .. who esle would it be But Rohit .
Bani maami kab se aapka wait kar rahi hoon ..! anu turned of the mobile. sounding impatient .
Sorry Anu ..bani apologised .. bas mien ek kaam mien mashroof ho gayi thi (she lied).
Anu .. meri sari ... bani looked down at her legs and anu too shifted her eye s on to bani's legs
Oh ... yeh kaise hogaya .../ ?Anu questioned a frown pleating her brow ..
woh sab Baad mien exclaimed Bani .. pehle mujhe change karna hai ... and she pulled Anu's hand and walked towards the garment stores ..
The Mall to day was Packed ... it was the weekend .. and Young and Old ... came to the Mall to shopp.. or rather window shop .. bani was conscious of her Saree.. so damp and sticky ..even her sandals were drenched .. with sea water .. and they felt uncomfortable .. she hoped none of the shoppers noticed her attire .
Bani and Anu .. enterda small shop carrying sarees and salwars .. .. it was full of breathtaking beautiful sarees ...lookedas if it was a Designer boutique
..maami .. see how Gorgeous these sarees are ... , anu . said excitedly and lifted one from the Rack a pretty lime green one with tiny glitter s and placed .. it against Bani ..
WOW .. Anu squealed ' Jai Mama to gaye kaam se " its perfect for u .. anu decided ..
on hearing jai's name .. Bani 's heart skipped a beat ... and she blushed a Lil .. the sari was Indeed very beautiful ..
Itna mat sochiye .. just wear it maami ..
lekin iska Blouse ... .. bani began to protest ... holding up the blouse ... which had a style way different to what she usually wore .this one was cut with a deeper neckline and the back to was cut low .. this was something Roshni ji wears . .
yeh wala nahi anu .. chalo kuch aur dekte hai ...
Anu burst out laffing .her eyes bright with mischief
Maami dear this is the very style that will turn Jai mama's head ...360 degrees, annu remarked otherwise Roshni aunty will steal him away .
Anu ..! Bani exclaimed ,anu had suprised her with her honesty .
Anu .. Roshni ji is Rohits aunt
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so ...? Bani maami Roshni aunty wants Jai mama and mummy is supporting her ... and u arent doing anything . i want u to remain as My Maami Not Roshni aunty...Kuch Karo Please ... How can u sit quietly and not do anything ..? anu finished frustratededly
meanwhile bani was shocked to hear anu say this . , she was aware of so much that was happening in the walia house .
Please maami itna mat chaunkiye(astonished ) ,kal mai bhi to shaadi karoongi , lekin agar rohit aur mere beech mien koi aagyaya to .. mujhe .. us ladki ko apni sahi jagah dikhani hogi.Anu spoke her mind firmly
Anu had a point here Bani realized ..she wasnt fighting enuff to send a message to jai that she despises the fact that Roshni is staying full time in Walia mansion .. even though she had her brothers house to stay..
maybe it was Hi time .. she stood up and stand her ground . mr Walia was her Husband after all .
it was almost 9in the nite before anu could Leave the Mall ... her list went on and on ... Bani was exhausted and her eyes weary with lack of sleep .
inside the walia mansion .. evryone was waiting worried For Anu and Bani ... even dinner was postpned till the 2 arrived .
aare aap dono hai Kahan ...? maasi asked ... anxiously .. apna mobile bhi nahi uthti ho ../ as Both girls enterd the House
Bani was busy looking at Jai who .. looked at her his face devoid of any expression .it seemed that it didnt bother him she had gotten late he hadnt even called her to ask where and whats keeping her this late .
B a n I ... Maasi's voice invaded her thoughts ...
Ji maasi Baani looked at her startled .. and began ... woh .. mall mien ......
Jai tune bhi bani ko Phone karke nahi poocha .. Khan hai woh .. ? woh theek to hai ...? maasi asked jai
Jai looks directly at Bani now .. Bani just loved it when Maasi grilled MR walia ... and he was at a loss for words .
woh Maasi . bani explained , . mere Phone ki battery .ko charge karne ki zaroorat thi shayad isliye .. Woh mujhe contact nahi kar Payee .
jai looked again at Bani while Daadi and aditya uncle glanced at each other .
Roshni looked at Bani and asked her .. kya baat hai Bani .. tumhari ankhen .. itni thaki hui kyon hai ..?Bani was too tired to Reply to anyone least of all Roshni ... but Anu butted in ..
Bani maami theek say Nahi soyee hai Raat Ko .. to aankhen to waisi hi dekhengi .. na . ? anu supplied sheepishly . silencing Roshni to brood
Bani nudged Anu with her elbow to shut up .but was to late .
Finally dinner was over and everyone retired to their respective rooms .
in Jai and bani's bedroom ..
Jai sat on his armcahir and poured a drink for himself .butterflys were hovering in the pit of Bani's stomach ..this is how Mr Walia's presencee Made her feel- Nervous and her heart beating frantically
she couldnt help But speak ... MR walia .. Please aap yeh mat pi jiye ..
Bani .. mujhe mat roko ... jai said softly ... she just gave up
Mr Walia itne ziddi Kyon Hai .. she thought as she lay on the bed in her Gown and tried to Go to sleep ... pondering on what Anu had told her while they were at the Mall about Roshni andMr Walia .
Bani very Much wanted to spend the rest of her life with Jai ... but he didnt show any interest in their marriage or their realtionship .
Maasi is rite I have to start acting like Mrs Walia .and be a wife to jai . a wife has every rite to mend her realtionship with her Husband .If mr Walia isnt bothering ... Then I have to make Him Understand .. that he is My Husband .and in the process if i have to make a few changes then so be it .
Part 2 click on link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/332234/ab-tumhare-bina-dil-ko-chain-na-ayee-ff2
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