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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys

I thought that i hadn't made a post for ages now and decided to make my own Fan fic so here goes!!!!! Please tell me how you liked it!! I will do it in Parts...

Part 1

(It is 8 am at the Walia house and only Bani has woken up. Its a Saturday and Bani think that it is a Friday She goes and makes some tea for Jai and comes back into the room. Jai is still asleep)

Bani: Jai! Jai! Wake up Jai!

(jai still doesn't wake up)

Bani: JAI!!!!

(He still doesn't wake up but by accident she woke up someone else)

Rano: Di! What is it your waking up everybody

Bani: Well that is good! Now quick you go and get ready for collage! GO!

Rano: Di, Have you hit your self in the head or something!?!

(Rano has a confused face because it is Saturday and there is no collage today. And before Rano could speak....)

Bani: Now stop trying to act smart with me and go and get ready for collage. And wake up Sahil as well. AND DONT ARGUE.

Rano: OK!!!

(Rano goes away looking all puzzled and Bani tries to wake up Jai)

Bani: Jai! Wake up

(He does wake up but pretend to go back to sleep)

Bani: Ok then. If you are not going to wake up like that then.....

(Bani walks off and Jai gets up wondering what Bani is going to do. He hears her coming towards the room and lays down again and pretends to be fast asleep. Bani enters with a big bucket full of ice cold water)

Bani: This will surly wake him up! 😛

Jai: (Sits up) NAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! NOOOOOOOO!! Bani no don't you dare putting that water on me!

Bani: I am going to put that water on you

Jai:NOOOO!!!!!

(Bani comes to Jai and nearly spills the water on him when.........)

Dadi: Oi! Puther! What are you doing??

Bani:(putting down the bucket) Notting

(Jai and Dadi laughs)

Jai: Dadi, she was going to pour that ice cold water on me! ON A SATURDAY MORNING!!!

Bani : SATURDAY!!! I thought that today was FRIDAY!! OH NO!! That means I haven't done the party preparations

(Dadi laughs and leaves.)

Jai: It ok Bani. I will tell Tony to do all the arrangements. Anyway i think that you should put your feet up for one day!

Bani: Aww! Thank-you Jai! I Love You!

Jai: I Love You too!!!

(They both hug each other)

********************************************************

AT THE PARTY

Jai: Ladies and gentlemen. Welcome to my party to celebrate my new project, the new orphanage in Mount Abu for my dear wife Bani. And here is a special song for her… it's mine and hers favourite song so enjoy the party!!!

(song plays)

Jai: May I have a dance with this beautiful lady???

Bani: Yes sure only on one condition!

Jai: What?

Bani: You will have to do a hundred sit ups!!!

Jai: WHAT??? NO WAY!!!! Well then I am better off with dancing with Jigyasa!

Bani: No no no!

(Bani gets Jai and they both laugh and dance1)

Part two will be comming up shortly!!!

Hope you like it !!!

Love

Radika xxx

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sweetu144 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
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awww thats sweet n funny...
continue soon!!
jpatel thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thankz everyone to your respones here is Part 2

Part 2

(After the Party)
Jai: Bani, come with me I want to show something speical to you
Bani: What? What something speical?
Jai: I am taking you somewhere. Where this blindfold and don't take it out until I say so know come outside with me
Bani: Urrrr.... OK Jai, but where are you taking me???
Jai: You will see!!!!
(Both Bani and Jai sit in the car and Jai takes Bani to her surprise...)
Jai: Here we are madam.
(he gets out of the car and goes to the other door to take Bani out.
Bani: Thanks
(They both get out of the car and Jai guides Bani to her surprise)
Bani: Jai, where are you taking me
Jai: I said you will see na!!! Ahh Here we are!!! Ok now take off your blind fold...
(Bani takes off her blindfold and...)
Bani: WOW JAI!!! wow it is beautiful........

To be Continued....
Part 3 will be coming up soon
Hoped you liked it
Love Radika
*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
where is she??


please cont soon! this is good!
jpatel thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Hey Thankz here is Part 3!!!!

Part 3

Bani: WOW JAI!!!! wo its beautiful.....
Jai: I just for you!!! Because I love you!! now come on get on the boat!!!
(Bani and Jai were at the sea side and were goign to a little island which had and candle light diner ready on it!!!!)
(Bani and Jai got on the boat and Rode to the Island!!! As they got closer they saw that the ground was covers in heart shaped ballons and in the water around them was floating candles in heart shape and heart confettii!!)
Bani: Jai, Why did you do this. There was no need to!!
Jai: yes there was because it has been three months since our wedding!!!!
Bani: That why!!! Jai you are strange you are meant to be doing all this after 1 YEAR of marriage not 3MONTHS
Jai: OK OK Bani, Then i will say that this is because I don't want to do those sit ups!!
Bani: Jai, I am gonna hit you
(Bani tries to hit Jai and Jai laughs at her)
Waiter: (looking strangly at Bani and Jai fighting) Urmm.... Dinner is ready!!!
Jai: Oh sorry, Ok serve it..
(Jai and Bani sat down at the table and where looking into each others eyes!)
Waiter: Diner is served. Bon appiete!
Jai: I order your Favourite Bani
Bani: Aww, Jai.... Thank-you , I ....I....I am.... speechless
Jai: No problem Bani This is just for you so enjoy!
(They ate their food)
Jai: Ohh yes i nearly forgot
(Jai rumaged thourgh his pocket trying to find someething)
Jai: Ahhh!!! Found it!!!
( He took out a case)
Jai: This is for you bani...
(and he open it up and in it was a dimond ring!!!!!)
Bani: wow, Jai... what is this for.....
Jai: It is for our love Bani. I love you
(jai put the ring on Bani and they Kissed!!!)

Hope you like it I am gunna do part 3 very soon!!!!!
Love
Radika xxxxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww thats so sweet..thats realli cute..hoope J does something like this for Bani 4 real on da show..
i wanna see him blindfold bani and take her to a romantic location..that would be sweet..
continue soon!! i lurve ur ff!!
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: converse_chick

Hey guys

I thought that i hadn't made a post for ages now and decided to make my own Fan fic so here goes!!!!! Please tell me how you liked it!! I will do it in Parts...

Part 1

(It is 8 am at the Walia house and only Bani has woken up. Its a Saturday and Bani think that it is a Friday She goes and makes some tea for Jai and comes back into the room. Jai is still asleep)

Bani: Jai! Jai! Wake up Jai!

(jai still doesn't wake up)

Bani: JAI!!!!

(He still doesn't wake up but by accident she woke up someone else)

Rano: Di! What is it your waking up everybody

Bani: Well that is good! Now quick you go and get ready for collage! GO!

Rano: Di, Have you hit your self in the head or something!?!

(Rano has a confused face because it is Saturday and there is no collage today. And before Rano could speak....)

Bani: Now stop trying to act smart with me and go and get ready for collage. And wake up Sahil as well. AND DONT ARGUE.

Rano: OK!!!

(Rano goes away looking all puzzled and Bani tries to wake up Jai)

Bani: Jai! Wake up

(He does wake up but pretend to go back to sleep)

Bani: Ok then. If you are not going to wake up like that then.....

(Bani walks off and Jai gets up wondering what Bani is going to do. He hears her coming towards the room and lays down again and pretends to be fast asleep. Bani enters with a big bucket full of ice cold water)

Bani: This will surly wake him up! 😛

Jai: (Sits up) NAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! NOOOOOOOO!! Bani no don't you dare putting that water on me!

Bani: I am going to put that water on you

Jai:NOOOO!!!!!

(Bani comes to Jai and nearly spills the water on him when.........)

Dadi: Oi! Puther! What are you doing??

Bani:(putting down the bucket) Notting

(Jai and Dadi laughs)

Jai: Dadi, she was going to pour that ice cold water on me! ON A SATURDAY MORNING!!!

Bani : SATURDAY!!! I thought that today was FRIDAY!! OH NO!! That means I haven't done the party preparations

(Dadi laughs and leaves.)

Jai: It ok Bani. I will tell Tony to do all the arrangements. Anyway i think that you should put your feet up for one day!

Bani: Aww! Thank-you Jai! I Love You!

Jai: I Love You too!!!

(They both hug each other)

********************************************************

AT THE PARTY

Jai: Ladies and gentlemen. Welcome to my party to celebrate my new project, the new orphanage in Mount Abu for my dear wife Bani. And here is a special song for her… it's mine and hers favourite song so enjoy the party!!!

(song plays)

Jai: May I have a dance with this beautiful lady???

Bani: Yes sure only on one condition!

Jai: What?

Bani: You will have to do a hundred sit ups!!!

Jai: WHAT??? NO WAY!!!! Well then I am better off with dancing with Jigyasa!

Bani: No no no!

(Bani gets Jai and they both laugh and dance1)

Part two will be comming up shortly!!!

Hope you like it !!!

Love

Radika xxx

👏

that was soo good huny!!! and Funny... lol

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Posted: 19 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: converse_chick

Thankz everyone to your respones here is Part 2

Part 2

(After the Party)
Jai: Bani, come with me I want to show something speical to you
Bani: What? What something speical?
Jai: I am taking you somewhere. Where this blindfold and don't take it out until I say so know come outside with me
Bani: Urrrr.... OK Jai, but where are you taking me???
Jai: You will see!!!!
(Both Bani and Jai sit in the car and Jai takes Bani to her surprise...)
Jai: Here we are madam.
(he gets out of the car and goes to the other door to take Bani out.
Bani: Thanks
(They both get out of the car and Jai guides Bani to her surprise)
Bani: Jai, where are you taking me
Jai: I said you will see na!!! Ahh Here we are!!! Ok now take off your blind fold...
(Bani takes off her blindfold and...)
Bani: WOW JAI!!! wow it is beautiful........

To be Continued....
Part 3 will be coming up soon
Hoped you liked it
Love Radika

👏

cant wait!!!! its soo CUTE how u left us lik thinkin hmmm wat can it b

LoranMaddiLee thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: converse_chick

Hey Thankz here is Part 3!!!!

Part 3

Bani: WOW JAI!!!! wo its beautiful.....
Jai: I just for you!!! Because I love you!! now come on get on the boat!!!
(Bani and Jai were at the sea side and were goign to a little island which had and candle light diner ready on it!!!!)
(Bani and Jai got on the boat and Rode to the Island!!! As they got closer they saw that the ground was covers in heart shaped ballons and in the water around them was floating candles in heart shape and heart confettii!!)
Bani: Jai, Why did you do this. There was no need to!!
Jai: yes there was because it has been three months since our wedding!!!!
Bani: That why!!! Jai you are strange you are meant to be doing all this after 1 YEAR of marriage not 3MONTHS
Jai: OK OK Bani, Then i will say that this is because I don't want to do those sit ups!!
Bani: Jai, I am gonna hit you
(Bani tries to hit Jai and Jai laughs at her)
Waiter: (looking strangly at Bani and Jai fighting) Urmm.... Dinner is ready!!!
Jai: Oh sorry, Ok serve it..
(Jai and Bani sat down at the table and where looking into each others eyes!)
Waiter: Diner is served. Bon appiete!
Jai: I order your Favourite Bani
Bani: Aww, Jai.... Thank-you , I ....I....I am.... speechless
Jai: No problem Bani This is just for you so enjoy!
(They ate their food)
Jai: Ohh yes i nearly forgot
(Jai rumaged thourgh his pocket trying to find someething)
Jai: Ahhh!!! Found it!!!
( He took out a case)
Jai: This is for you bani...
(and he open it up and in it was a dimond ring!!!!!)
Bani: wow, Jai... what is this for.....
Jai: It is for our love Bani. I love you
(jai put the ring on Bani and they Kissed!!!)

Hope you like it I am gunna do part 3 very soon!!!!!
Love
Radika xxxxx

HOW CUTEEE.... i cant wait... fer part 4 and all that... its cute u slh contin👏😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww what a romantic story 😳

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