KS SS Competition - Read/Vote Here!!=)

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Dear Members, 😃

I hope you've all had a nice easter break! Unfortunately I was really ill over the past couple of days and hence there was a delay in posting the entries. The wait is finally over and I now present to you... wait for it ;) ...

.. the KS SS Competition!! =)

Rules for Voting! ~~~~

1. You may ONLY vote for 1 short story!
2. Participants are requested not to vote. This is imperative for the spirit of competiton.
3. Please post your vote in this thread! No PM voting allowed.
4. Please do not create multiple IDs to vote.

Period of Voting: 09 April - 01 May 2010

And finally... a BIG thank you to the participants 👏 👏 👏

If there are any problems, please let me know via PM!=)

Radha! 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Never Put the Speaker Phone On

Oh Zara Zara, touch me, touch me, touch me

Oh Zara Zara, kiss me, kiss me, kiss me

Oh Zara Zara, hold me, hold me, hold me

Oh Zara Zara, oooohhhhh, ooooohhhh

Jai laughed out loud as he watched his friend Aditya get slapped the second time for the night. It was Friday night, and they were at the club as usual. As a glaring Aditya came towards him, he couldn't help but laugh more.

Aditya – Yes, continue laughing at me. You're already hooked up with Miss Bani. Girls can be so hard-to-get these days.

Jai – For you! (bursting into laughter again)

Aditya – Come on, yaar, stop it.

Jai – Seriously, you tell the first girl her ass is huge and you got slapped. And you go back and do the same thing. Did you expect a different reaction? You don't tell girls that their asses are big.

Aditya – Seriously, I thought they liked-

Aditya was interrupted by the buzz of Jai's phone. As Jai took the phone out of his jeans pocket, they both looked at the name flashing on the screen, already knowing who it was – Playboy.

Playboy, well actually, Ranveer Bali, was Jai Walia and Aditya Singh's other best friend. Jai pressed the speakerphone button.

Jai and Aditya (greeting Ranveer as they always do) – What's up, Ran-Ran?

Ranveer (drawling) – I'm out with my girl.

Aditya – As always!

Jai – So, is it Anjali?

Female voice – No, it's Rhea.

Jai (not really thinking) – Oh right, Anjali was last month-

Rhea – Excuse me!

Jai (realizing that Ranveer is on speakerphone and sheepish at almost ratting his friend out) – Anjali was Laxman's girlfriend. He broke up with her last week. I have so many friends. I sometimes mix their girlfriends up. By the way, my name is Jai, and I am Ranveer's good friend.

Aditya – Yeah, and I'm Aditya, the other friend.

Jai – Do you want to meet Laxman? I want to make sure that you don't think Ranveer's a playboy. Let me call him. He's sitting away from us. The poor guy is distraught after his breakup. I don't think he even knows his name right now.

Jai (shouting to a guy who never met nor saw Jai before) – Hey Laxman!

Guy (looking at Jai as if he's weird) – Who the hell is Laxman?

Jai (addressing Rhea) – See what I told you Rhea? Doesn't even know his name.

Jai (turning back to the guy and waving some rupees in the air) – Laxman, forget Anjali and come here and talk to Ranveer's girl, Rhea. Come on.

The guy got up and walked to Jai, seeing the money in the air.

Jai – Say hi to Rhea, Laxman.

Guy – Hi Rhea!

Rhea – Hi Laxman! Get over Anjali and move on. Be happy!

Guy – Okay.

Jai – Good, now go and find a girl. (pushing the guy away and shoving the money back into his pocket)

The guy glared back, Aditya growled and bunched his muscles, and that sent him packing back to where he was.

Ranveer – Rhea, why don't you go over there and get some drinks? I just have to talk to these two for a few minutes.

Rhea – Okay!

Ranveer turned off the speakerphone as Rhea walked away.

Ranveer (yelling) – You duffers! What the hell was that all about?

Jai (yelling back) – You idiot! How was I to know you're on the speakerphone? Who told you to put on speakerphone? Why the hell did you call us in the middle of your date anyway?

Ranveer – Actually, Rhea is driving me nuts. She's too smart for me. I don't understand half of our conversation, and it doesn't look as if I'm getting anywhere tonight with her.

Aditya – Serves you right! Now you have to keep your damn testosterone in check.

Ranveer – Why are you talking? Jai already texted me and told me you got slapped for hitting on a girl.

Aditya – Jai!

Jai – Oh yeah, he got slapped again.

Jai and Ranveer burst into laughter.

Jai (regaining his composure) – Ranveer, you should stop with all these girls. I am getting old. I will be 24 next week. How do you expect me to keep up with all these girls names'? I'll be lucky if I don't forget my girlfriend's name. Heard that? Singular! One! Not plural!

Ranveer – Oh, give me a break.

Aditya – Give you a break? He's right. We are getting old. We cannot keep up with your girls' names.

Ranveer – Hey, shut up! You have no girlfriend. You have enough space in your brain to remember the names so just stop talking.

Jai and Ranveer laughed again.

Aditya – You two watch, one day, I'll have the hottest girl in my arms.

Jai and Ranveer laughed harder.

Aditya – Stop it!

Ranveer – Drats! You're lucky Miss Smarty Pants is calling me or you wouldn't hear the end of my teasing.

Ranveer cut the call and Jai put away the phone.

Jai – So, it's Rhea now. Remember that!

Aditya – Yeah!

Just then, Jai felt two female arms encircling him. He turned around and looked at his girlfriend since two years.

Jai – Hi Rhea!

Bani pulled her hands away from Jai's neck so fast that Jai didn't even know. He looked at Bani to find her glaring at him with her hands on her hips. Aditya watched on with glee.

Bani – Who is Rhea?

Jai – Bani, listen, I made a mistake. I was just talking to Ranveer, and he's with this girl named Rhea so it just slipped out of my mouth.

Bani – If you expect me to believe that, I must say that your expectations are rather high.

Bani whipped around and briskly walked away. Jai sprang from his chair and walked after her, muttering a "Damn Ranveer and Rhea."

Aditya (to himself) – That one has several girls and he has problems. This one has one girl and he has problems. I might as well stay single!

Edited by radha07 - 15 years ago
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The Reality


"I killed your mother Bani…she got crushed under my car…it was raining…and I couldn't see properly…and she just…" Jai whispered hoarsely, despaired by having to admit the guilt that had been eating him.

Bani grabbed him by his shirt, her eyes stormy with anger, "What did you just say Mr Walia? You murdered my mom…you killed her and made me an orphan!" She screamed against the howling wind. A storm was brewing up in the dark sky, just as wild as the storm that had just been unleashed by her husband confessing the truth of how her mom had died.

Jai covered his face with his hands, "I didn't murder her Bani…she ran across the road…one minute the road was empty and then she just came from no where." He shouted anguished at being called a murderer…all that he had imagined coming true when the truth would come to light.

Bani slapped him hard, shaking with rage, her fists curled, eyes blazing, "Don't tell me lies…all you have done for the last few weeks is tell lies. First the mechanic, then the cheque Roshni had…then Rocky…and Park Road…now I know why hated whenever anyone talked about Park Road, why you had fear in your eyes…why you broke out in sweat! I hate you…I hate you for everything! For taking away my parents…for my lost childhood and most for not being truthful…you should have told me the truth…I would have taken my sister and walked away…I hate that I have been sheltered by the murderer…I was forced to marry my mother's killer."

Jai could not take the accusations…her hateful words…the truth of his relationship with her. He dropped down on his knees…and sobbed in his hands. "Do…what…you want…with me…Bani…but don't hate me. I am sorry…I am sorry…but I am in love with you…I fell in love with you…and didn't want to lose you..."

Bani took steps back, away from the broken down man…the man she too had fallen in love…but she could no longer love him…how could she love him when he had taken her mother away…when he had lied to her…no she did not want to love her mother's killer.

Her step faltered as she stepped on a jutting piece of broken concrete, her high heel rocked and she fell. Her head came down hard on the broken concrete floor. A scream escaped her as she blacked out.

The sharp scream brought him out of his miserable state. His hands fell off his face as he stared at his wife lying on the floor. "Bani!" he screamed, before getting up clumsily and staggering like a drunkard towards her. "Bani!" he picked her up and cradled her. "Please don't die…I won't be able to live if you die…I cannot live knowing I killed you too…please…Bani…don't…die." Tears streamed down his face as he buried his face in her hair. He did not know how long he sat there…how long he held her. Someone pulled him away from her…someone took her away from his arms…someone left him alone without her.

When he woke up, he could not remember how he got to where he was. He stared at his wife lying on the hospital bed, looking pale, her eyes shut tight. Slowly he moved his hand and took her delicate, small hand in his huge palm. It looked so childlike in his plump hand. Tears clouded his eyes as fingers closed gently around him and the reason why she was lying on the bed came back to him. "I am so sorry…Bani…I am a terrible man…not worthy of you…you are right…all I know is to hurt people…and that too good people Bani."


Somewhere deep in her mind she could hear a voice…someone was talking to her…yes…it was him…it was her Mr Walia. She could see him kneeling in front of her and crying…why was he crying? What did she do to hurt him? She saw herself drop down in front of him, reaching out and touching his face. "Please don't cry Mr Walia…I didn't mean what I said. How could I call you murderer…you cannot kill anyone Mr Walia." He kept on crying and she could not stand to see him cry, so she reached out and gathered him in her arms and kissed his wet cheeks, eyes and lips all the while whispering to him not to cry.

Her eyes flew open and she stared at the bent head of Jai Walia, his tears falling on her hand. She snatched her hand away as she remembered everything…everything that had happened before she fell. The man who was crying…her husband was also her mother's killer…she could not love him…no "never" she cried out.

Edited by radha07 - 15 years ago
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Meeting the Parents

Jai ran his hand through his hair as he stepped out of his car. Today, he was going to meet Bani's parents. He looked at the stark white mansion, gulping. Known to be ruthless in the business world, Bani's father Nishikant Dixit was his father's business rival. If Bani had not managed to convince him that her father had already heard about him and that he had no problem with his daughter going out with his rival's son, Jai wouldn't have been within a ten-mile radius of the house.

Jai climbed the ten steps to the door and rang the bell. The door was opened promptly by a teenage boy. Bani had told him she had a little brother. His name was Rohan and he was twelve, born 10 years after Bani.

"Hi, Rohan, I'm Jai." The boy frowned at him. "Why are you frowning at me?" Jai asked.

"You're Didi's boyfriend?" he asked.

"Yes, I am."

"Could have picked better," Rohan muttered, walking away, leaving the door open for Jai to come in. Jai stepped in uncertainly. If the son did not like him already, what about the father?

Jai followed Rohan to the living room, where he found Bani and her parents, rising from their seats as he entered.

"Namaste," he greeted them. They greeted him back. He touched Bani's parents' feet before sitting down. From the looks on their faces, they seemed impressed. He did a little somersault in his head. While Bani and her parents sat on one couch, he and Rohan were placed on another, facing them.

"So, Jai, where did you meet my daughter?" Nishikant asked.

"At the club!" Jai coughed. He and Bani had met at the club indeed, but Nishikant didn't even know that his precious daughter went to the club. Bani glared at him.

"Pardon me?"

"We met at the temple. We bumped into each other while walking out. We go every Saturday."

"Papa, he's lying. He said at the club first!" Rohan shouted. Bani and Jai glowered at Rohan. Jai was beginning to not like Bani's booger of a little brother.

"Rohan, you know your sister does not go to the club. And how can you treat your sister's boyfriend like this? He says something and you say he's lying." Kiran admonished her son.

"But mama-"

"Stop! Now behave like a good boy!"

"Sorry about that, Jai!" Nishikant said.

"No worries!"

"So, what work do you do?"

"Help your daughter practice to populate India," Jai murmured under his breath. He and Bani were like bunnies, always at it. Good thing she was on the pill - another thing her father didn't know.

"I work in Dad's office as the general manager."

"Oh."

"Dad, he's lying again. He said that he helps Didi practice to populate India. Whatever that means!"

Bani turned a brilliant shade of crimson while Nishikant and Kiran looked on at their son, wondering why he was behaving like this.

"One more peep out of you, and I won't allow you to play with your friends tomorrow," Kiran waved a finger at her son.

"Mom-"

"One more peep, Rohan!"

"Hmph!" Rohan sat back, folding his hands and sticking his tongue out at Jai.

"Rohan! That's it! Go to your room! Now! What is wrong with you?"

"Mama, I don't like this Jai. Didi is always with him. She used to play with me and help me and now she doesn't. Because of him!" Rohan exclaimed, poking fingers at Jai.

"You and your sister can sort that out! Jai is her boyfriend! You have to let your sister know her priorities!" Kiran shouted.

"Her what? What are priorities?"

"What's important in her life. Now go, up to your room, and I don't want to see you down here until Jai has left."

Rohan got up pompously and walked off.

"Sorry about that again. Don't know what's wrong with him today," Nishikant said.

"Actually, he has a point. Maybe Bani should try to get their normal schedule in order again so he doesn't feel left out when I'm around. Better yet, maybe I could try and bond with him."

"That's a good idea."

Jai danced in his head. More ways to meet Bani. He could chuck the brat with his sister while he and Bani go out and have fun, and, of course, practice on populating India. He grinned on that one.

Jai talked for a while more with Nishikant and Kiran, Bani sitting quietly. Finally, it was time for him to leave. Everyone got up. Nishikant and Jai shook hands. Kiran ran her hand on his face. Bani gave him a fleeting look. He knew that they would meet at the club that night and then back to a small house they had bought on the outskirts of Mumbai for'.you know what? Practicing on populating India!

Bani stood between her parents as Jai walked off.

"Bani, you have chosen a fine young man for yourself. I'm proud of you."

"I'm proud of me too. I chose a man with a fine ass," Bani murmured.

"Did you say something?" her mother asked.

"Something is biting my foot. I think it's fine ants."

"Oh, let me see."

Jai stepped out the door, smiling, thinking about how many times he would ravish Bani that night. Absent-mindedly, he began to walk down the stairs, slipping on the first one. Jai rolled down the ten steps to land in a pile of mud. Where did it come from? It wasn't there earlier. Then, it was all pink fluff as someone rained a bucket of pink feathers on him. Jai looked into Rohan's menacing face as he placed his hand on his aching back.

"You little brat!"

"Serves you right! Practice on populating India now with your back! Don't you think I know what that means? Have to act innocent in front of the parents, you know!"
Edited by radha07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for creating this topic.....
Thanks to all writer for participating....All r gr8 story...
My Vote: Entry 3
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all entries are great

I vote for entry no 1😊
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All three are awesome.
My vote: Entry # 1
Good luck all.
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wonderful fanfics
vote for # 3
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all the entires were just wonderful
my vote goes to entry # 1
best of luck to all the contestants..
may the best writer win....
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all the entries were amazing
vote: 1

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