FF:Love came,but..what next?Part 14,Pg 13,31/03/10

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

aww poor bani

hopefully jai will give her all the love in the world :)

cont soon

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

feel sorry for bani , the way she was treated by her father , there was no one who understood her neither her parents nor tarang but all this made her strong and independent , good in a way. thanks for regular updates ,waiting for the next part

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Looks like no one tried to understand her. And she was left on her own to fend her ways Hence this I don't care attitude of hers. Wondering will AJi and she be able to build up a relationship. As laready Jai is with healding the truth. And I don't think Bani likes to be kept in the dark. So waiting tos ee when things will comeout int eh open.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Thanks to all readers and silent readers..😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Part 7

The first ray of the sun just fell on the face of Bani..she found herself in the balcony,last night she was seated there on the huge comfort chair,luckily she took a blanket with her, otherwise whole night she was supposed to suffer from the chilly air..

Suddenly she glanced at her cell phone,checked the call register..fifteen missed calls,from a single number,it was the number of Suman."Bas***d.." ,said Bani,it was for Suman for sure.Again her cell phone rang..Bani took the call...

"Bani..listen to me ..please..I am sorry..Bani.."..

"It doesn't matter to me..don't spoil my mood,Suman.."

"Baat toh sun..dekh yaar..nashe me usdin bahut kuchh anab shanab bak gaya main..main woh sab kehna nahi chaahta tha.."

"Nashe me insan sach kehta hai..Suman..jo tune usdin kaha..that is your true colour.."

"I can explain..Bani..please.."

"I don't need that..keep your mouth shut..."

"Tu kahan hai mujhe malum hai Bani..main wahan aakar scene create karna nahi chaahta..behtar hoga..tu agar Mumbai laut aaye..mujhse mil..bahut kuchh kehna hai tujhe.."

"Don't irritate..just get lost.."

Bani cut the phone..and made it silent.Bani enter in the room and signed in yahoo...

"Hey..you are online at this time?"

"Woh..aise hi..what about you?"

"I was checking my mails..tumko online dekha..kal ka dinner kaisa gaya?"

"Badhiya..."

"Are you upset?"

"Nahi..bas aise hi..purani kuchh baatein kal yaad aa gayi..neend puri nahi hui.."

"Kaisi baat?"

"Devi..my college friend..uski yaad aa gayi..?"

"Yaad aa rahi hai..toh phone kar lo usko.."

"She died when we were in our final semester..usko kidney problems thi.."

"I am so sorry..bahut kareebi dost thi na?"

"Yaa..bahut kareebi dost thi.Maine dekha hai..jo insaan mere dil k bahut kareeb hota hai.. wohi door chala jaata hai mujhse,kabhi zindagi beech me aati hai..toh kabhi maut..main kuchh nahi kar paati.."

"Hey..don't be so sad..zindagi me log milte hain..bichhadte hain..but we must move on.."

"Main,Devi aur Suman..hum ek group the college me.."

"The bewda group?Nashe me talli..haath me haath..?"

"Exactly..Devi ki marne ki khabar aai..Suman bahut ro raha tha..main khud kyaa roti.. ussiko samhal rahi thi..mere kandhe pe sar rakh k..is tarha ro raha tha..mera dupatta bheeg gaya tha..ansoon itna bahaya tha Suman ne.."

"Hmm..interesting.."

"Jab bhi Tarang ki baat hoti.."

"Kaun Tarang?"

"Tarang..jisse main shaadi karna chaahti thi..Dr. Tarang Sinha..."

"Ohh..he is a Doctor...nice name..haan..jab bhi tum Tarang ka naam leti..tab kyaa hota tha?"

"Suman chidh jaata tha..buri tarha se..bolta tha..us Chirkut Tarang ka naam mere saamne mat karna..uski baatein mujhe nahi sunni..."

"Hmm...jealous.."

"Par jab usne Tarang ki shaadi ki baat suni..tab woh bhi bahut dukhi hua..kaha..yeh achha nahi hua..."

"Sahi kaha.."

"Suman k saamne TV star ki bhi taarif nahi kar paati..tab bhi chidhta hai.."

"Really?"

"Yes..you know..Rajeev Khandelwal..the TV star..he is really hunk..last year..uske birthday par phone kar k maine usko wish bhi kia.."

"Jhoot.."

"Nahi..sach..apne fans k wishes k lia ussi ek din k lia Rajeev ne ek SIM card lia..lots of fans..usko wish kia sab ne..Rajeev is really something,handsome,attractive.."

"Aur?"

"Very intense..his father is Retired Army Officer,Lt.Col. C. L. Khandelwal,his mother Vijayalakshmi Khandelwal..his elder brother is in Army,Major Sanjeev Khandelwal..his younger brother's name is Rahul..Jaipur me rahte hain..Kartar ,his homwtown.."

"Wow..you are encyclopaedia about that TV star..I am impressed.."

"I am just a fan..meri ek dost ne..Karwa Chauth ka vrat bhi rakha tha Rajeev k lia..."

"Pagal hai thodi si..nahi?"

"Puri pagal hai..Suman yeh sab sunta hai..aur kehta hai..kyun us cartoon k peechhe time waste karti hai.."

"Hmm..baat saaf hai..he has soft corner for you.."

"No..he is my friend..my sutta friend,not my class friend but my glass friend..he was in Production Engineering Department...haan..college me sab samajhte the..k humare beech khichdi pak rahi hai.."

"Okay..I think..you should tie a knot with him.."

"Are you crazy?"

"Why not?It makes sense..I think he is the correct life partner for you.."

"Nahi...woh nahi hai..well..ek sutta maar loon...ghar pe toh mushkil hai.."

"Arre..ek private jagah rakhna chahie..jahan tum sutta maar sako.."

"Hain na..paani ki tanki..uske upar chadh jaati hoon.."

"Lekin Boss..shaadi k baad toh yeh sab chhodna padega tumko.."

"Main shaadi hi nahi karnewali..and don't call me 'Boss'.."

"Kyun?"

"Tarang bhi Boss kehta tha..infact aaj bhi raste me mil jaaye toh..Boss hi kehta hai.."

"Ohhooo..toh woh aaj bhi aapke dil me baste hain.."

"Recently hi shaadi hui hai uski..aparently four months.."

"Shit..tumne usko kaha kyun nahi...that you love him..?"

"Kaha na..bhool gayi thi.."

"Shut up...you are hopeless.."

"Same thin I think about Tarang..hopeless...uski Biwi nahi hai..hai Bai..kaamwali Bai.."

"That he is.."

"Actually..uski Biwi ki Maa hospital me thi..aur koi nahi tha duniya me..humdardi k chalte yeh shaadi ki usne.."

"Cut the crap..bahut log hospital me bharti hote hain..bahuton k..koi nahi hote..sab se shaadi karega?"

"Aisi baat nahi hai..Tarang bura insaan nahi hai..waqt bura tha.."

"Then why are you complaining?"

"Sorry..bore kar dia aapko.."

"Aisi baat nahi hai Bani..main thing is you are depriving yourself..is tarha koi jee kaise sakta hai?Aaj tumhare dost hain..kal ko woh apni apni zindagi me masroof honge..kyaa karogi?Ahista ahista ek depression tumko apne lapet me le lega.."

"Achha..ek baat bataiye..meri aankhe dekh kar kyaa lagta hai k unme koi emotions nahi hain..?"

"Maine itne dhyaan se photo nahi dekha..tum mujhse bahut alag ho..main chhichhora..and you look so serious."

"Ek baar..ek orkut friend ne kaha tha..k meri aankhe bahut shaant hain..koi jazbaat nahi dikhta unme..very cold eyes..bahut zyada maayus..aisi aankhe jinki hoti hai..woh log thande dimag se kisika khoon bhi kar sakte hain.."

"Was it a compliment?..Well..jitna bhi maine dekha hai..itna hi pata chalta hai..k tumhare andar bahut kuchh hai...jo tumne dil k kisi kone me daba k rakha hai..you have just concealed yourself..apne chaaron aur ek baraf ki deewar bana k rakh di hai tumne..koi kitni koshish kare..woh deewar tod hi nahi paata.."

"Vikram..ne kaha tha..meri aankhon me dekhte hue usko darr lagta hai.."

"Ab yeh Vikram kaun hai?"

"Ek launda hai..jo do maheene pahle meri pehchaan me aaya tha..bahut natak hain uske.. meri taraf se kuchh tha nahi..par ek din achanak mere saamne aa kar bolne laga k main bahut badi kameeni hoon..main ladkon ko behkati hoon..logon ko istemal kar k fek dena meri khasiat hai..woh bahut hi shareef hai..seedhi tarha apni raah par chal raha tha..uske
jazbaaton ko hawa di maine..usko uksaya..behkaya.."

"Sach hai kya?"

"Nahi..ghar k paas hi rehta hai..ek din bore ho rahi thi..toh uske saath movie dekhne gayi.. Delhi 6..itni boring movie..main hall me baithe baithe so gayi..woh bhi so gaya..baad me usne mujhe phone kia..bola..k main usko bahut achhi lagi..meri dressing style usko pasand aai..fir usne mujhse puchha k woh mujhe kaisa laga.."

"Haan..kaisa laga woh tumko?"

"Meri paas ki nazar kumzor hai..ek aankh me +2 ..ek me +2.5..bina chashme ya lense k mujhe paas ki chees nahi dikhti..aur usdin maine na chashma pehna naa lense.."

"My God.."

Jai now started laughing...Bani is really a joker..

"Haan..maine bas itna hi dekha k lamba sa aur gora sa ek ladka mere saamne khada hai.. maine guess maar k kaha..k haan..you look good in mouchtuch..just trim kara lo..thoda sa.."

"Usne kyaa kaha?"

"Uski moochhe nahi hai..woh chidh gaya..k kisi aur ko dekh rahi thi tum..mere rahte"

Jai was laughing like hell...

"Baad me chashma laga k dekha maine usko..6'3" height..rang gora..shakal kaafi achhi.. naak bahut lambi..samose jaisi naak...woh kuchh ishare karta raha..main ignore karti rahi.. finally usse milna..ya net par chat karna chhod dia..issi lia jab usdin achanak mila..toh mujh par ilzaam lagane laga..bolne laga..he wants me back in his life..."

"Toh tumne kyaa kaha?"

"Maine kaha ,"Tumhara istemal kar k kab feka?Rape kia tumhara?Kya tum mere bachche k Baap bannewale ho"?"

Jai fell from his chair..he was laughing..more and more...

"Tum one and only piece ho..duniya me..my goodness.."

"Woh Vikram bhi kehta tha...k meri aankhe khatarnaak hain.."

"Pata hai..when you are kissing someone..your eyes are supposed to be closed..varna tum apne partner par yakeen nahi karti.."

"Mujhe kaise pata hoga..?Maine kahan kisiko kiss kia hai?"

"I just can't believe that you never kissed anyone.."

"Haaaan..kia hai na..apne Bhai Baheno ko kia hai..cousins..jab chhote the..Bhanje Bhanjian.."

"Hey Bhagwan..I am not talking about peck..I am talking about smooch..French kiss"

"Nahi..woh nahi kia.."

"Arre..din dhal rahe hain.."

"Kahan.?Abhi toh subha k 8 baje hain..."

"Arre woh nahi..."

"Toh kyaa?"

"Arre..tum bilkul gadhi ho..itna detail me batana hoga?Mera matlab hai waqt haath se nikal raha hai.."

"Ohhh..hmm.."

"Main sach me hairan hoon..pata nahi kaise survive kia tumne?"

"Achha..main chali..abhi tak brush nahi kia..see you later..bye.."

"Bye.."

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Jai was driving his car in the same way..where he met Bani..he just hoped to meet her again...and he found Aleandro..but Bani wasn't there...she might be some steps ahead... suddenly Jai heard a cry.."LEAVE ME..."..Jai ran towards the sound..

It was Bani..a guy was forcing himself upon Bani..Bani was serving him with her kicks and punches..but the guy looked so strong..."You called me bas***d..I will show you..what a bas***d can do...today I will make another bas***d..rather we will make..I will teach you a lesson..."..Bani kicked just hit under his waist line..ran ..and she collided with Jai..the guy chased her and saw her with Jai..

"Stay away..."..Jai warned..

"You stay away..it's between us.."

"I can see that..when she is not willing..why are you forcing her..just get lost.."..Jai warned again..

"Maanna padega..Bani..teri zindagi khaali nahi rehti..mardon se bhara hai..yehan aa kar bhi aashik bana lia..baaz aa jaa..aur iski umar ho chuki hai..zyada din tak kuchh kar nahi paayega..main bahut zyada..."..the guy couldn't complete his words..a soild punch and he got knocked out...

Jai called his employee and told him to take Aleandro to the farm house..Bani gave the address..Jai said,"..Aaiye..car me..main pahoocha doonga...is haalat me..riding nahi kar paayengi..kaafi disturbed hain aap.."

Bani got into the car..while driving Jai asked,"Kyaa kar raha tha..ohh..dekha kyaa kar raha tha..kyun kar raha tha?"

"Kyunki..maine usse shaadi karne se inkaar kar dia tha..."..Bani said..

"My God,shaadi k convince karne ka aisa tareeka...kaun tha?"..Jai asked again..

"Suman Purohit..college ka dost hai..tha...usko mujhse shaadi karni hai.."..Bani replied curtly..

"Aapko rishtey se kyun inkaar hai?I mean..he is handsome..karta kyaa hai?" Jai asked..

"Diploma in Mechanical Engineering,B.Tech in Production Engineering and M.Tech in Metallurgical Engineering,abhi Siemens me Quality Testing Department ka incharge hai..uska Baap bhi Engineer tha..abhi businessman hai..Maa hai Phillosophy me Ph.D.. Principal in a Girl's college..uski Bahen bhi M.Tech hai...IBM me hai..Baap k shopping mall aur petrol pumps hai Ahmedabad me...."

Encyclopaedia..again...Jai thought..

"Dopaher k 1 baj gaye hain..chaliye..kahin baith kar khana khaate hain...fir aapko pahoocha doonga..thik hai?" Jai offered..

"Okay.." Bani said with a sigh..

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago

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sakura*

@sakura*

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

nice update👏

poor bani feel sorry for her.........wonder when and how she is going to fall for jai..........cont. soon

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

hey ananya

u are updating this FF quite frequently

thats good yaar

wohoo bani really is something

sabke baare mein sab info rakhti hai

and really bani ke dost bhisab ek se ek namoone hai

jai is also playing smart

he is not letting bani know that he is only prithviraj chauhan, her orkut freind

and bani shares everything on chat with jai

thats unbeleivable

plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

poor bani, suman IS a bas***d. wow but bani is hilarious too, and a living encyclopaedia :P wonder how she will fall for jai

just one Q, on the internet/yahoo, does she know that the person with the JW-picture is actually the real JW?

cont soon

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Wondering when the bubble is going to burst. And the men in her life really sucks. Including Jai. He is not being truthful to her and sure that is not going to sit right with her. So waiting to see how things will shape up between them.

Also can we get an update on the other fanfics too of yours.

bye

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

interesting conversation between jai and bani . thanks for regular updates , the story is shaping very well , looking forward for the next update to find out more about suman and bani

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