SS: Yours Lovingly (Complete) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Dhani..... such a cute story....... you have written it sooooo well...
Love your writting......
Can't wait for your next one...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Dhani,
One more short story, great. I liked this Bani, confident and no nonsense type unlike what they have made of her in the serial. I think you could have written a para or more in the end, I am craving for more.
Waiting for the next ss.
take care and keep writing
Shweta

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani.. great SS yaar.. wow.. actually u do write nice mushy stories.. lol. im glad jai changed and has a heart.. only for bani.. lol.. bani angry dixit. ha ha.. i like that name. lol.. hope we get an epi for this yaar..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani!
cute and sweet story.. it wasnt bad like you think, you write mushy stories pretty well.do write more
nadia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhilashasharma


ditto.... i too thot it was anand... but its not.... the scooty scene reminded of anand... 😆

guys movie name is Anandam, i have not watch this movie but i know the story. i hear the story of this movie is very gd but nt the actors...
dhani very well written, as usually, wish u happy new year!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys,

Wow!! So many here are actually south Indians, I really had no idea about it. The only one I know is Sheena. It's really nice to see it. Yes, I have shamelessly ripped of 'Anandam', it was college, teeny-weeny romance, and I turned it completely upside down. The only thing I had taken was the exchange of letters part and everything else was a figment of my imagination!!!!

In fact, the first scene is also a rip off from the movie 'Four weddings and a Funeral', it was damn funny, all the hero's exes meet in a wedding and bit**h about his other exes, who by the way are present there. Imagine that. Please do watch that movie if you get a chance, it is very funny!!! Totally hilarious!!!

Anyways, thanks guys for your comments!!!!

God bless

Dhani

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Posted: 16 years ago
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can anyone tell me which language is anandam in??
after all im also a south indian.....lol...
is it malayalam??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey teenu,
Its in Telegu!!!!

God bless
Dhani
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiya...
U have adapted the movie but u wrote it in ur own way ,esp JB char they are so funny and lively here. you shld hav even thrown in JB at eachother throats like the movie ,sophisticated JW and demure bani standing in middle of road/func and yelling and abusing will be really a threat.
But very well written ,and i did guess which movie it was the moment i read the letter part..
Nice work!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardhani

Hey guys,

Wow!! So many here are actually south Indians, I really had no idea about it. The only one I know is Sheena. It's really nice to see it. Yes, I have shamelessly ripped of 'Anandam', it was college, teeny-weeny romance, and I turned it completely upside down. The only thing I had taken was the exchange of letters part and everything else was a figment of my imagination!!!!

In fact, the first scene is also a rip off from the movie 'Four weddings and a Funeral', it was damn funny, all the hero's exes meet in a wedding and bit**h about his other exes, who by the way are present there. Imagine that. Please do watch that movie if you get a chance, it is very funny!!! Totally hilarious!!!

Anyways, thanks guys for your comments!!!!

God bless

Dhani

hi dhani, i am suprise as well tt they are so many telugu ppl here like u i only know tt shoba akka speak telugu, dear you have only copy the letter part and rest is ur imagine which is very well written.. do write some more ss for us.

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