FF-The Reluctant Bride-Updt Ch.22 & Epilogue-11/19 - Page 34

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Posted: 16 years ago
Bani preggers...............Jai's gonna be a papa 🄳
And Bani's outburst! šŸ˜• Can't blame her though, she heard what Jigs said 😔
Jai is so sensible, at least he suspects that there is someone who has poisoned Bani's mind and kya sahi pakda hai, Jigsssssss 😔 😔 😔
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose

thanks i know about science stream
actually i am also part of it
well the word graduate was mis understood hence taht question..
thanks for explaining
will be waiting for next parts eagerly 😃
rose

Thanks for the clarification..I was also a student of Science..but I completed 12th from a Girls' school..and I too got confused by the word graduated..
I live in India..Kolkata..when I was in 11th..Colleges closed the 12th course..at least in my State..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Your JW is smart yaar..... good to see that... !
KS JW is completly buddhu...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thank God this Jai Walia is sensible. He knows, or rather suspects, the right person already. I hope the idea forming in his mind works and Bani shouldn't hurt the baby. The baby didn't do anything. I hope Jai catches the culprit and sorts out with Bani before she does something to the baby. Please continue soon. I love this story.

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ...

awesome part...and quite a short update.........

jai figured out that it must be jigyasa's kartuk ...............

hey update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

First of all thank you all for reading and posting such lovely comments.

I would also sincerely like to thank Tinni and Khushboo who helped me with the storyline when I was stuck and for editing it before I posted..could not have done without you guys..Love ya..

Secondly I am finishing this FF..this will be the last chapter as the story has come to an end..

My goal was to finish this story before I went away on vacation to India …I am looking forward to my vacation … So see you guys on 13th of December when I come back… Until then..

Enjoy!!!! This was my first attempt...hopefully not my last… but then again time will tell.

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Jigyasa….Jigyasa….he thought….she was always creating problems for them….could it be her…hmmmmm…he could not think of anyone else coming up with such an absurd idea…and the state Bani was in…she would surely believe such nonsense….he had to get to the bottom of this….he thought with a frown…

He smiled as an idea started forming in his head…

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Chapter 22

Masi called everybody for dinner. When Jai came out of the study, he frowned …he saw that Bani was sitting in her usual place and she was not out serving either….

Masi, Bani kaha hai??...

Arre bus atti hi hogi…Rano ko bheja hai…tabiyaat teek nahi thi na..iss liye meine usko aaj mana kar diya tha niche aake madat karne ke liye…

Just then Bani walked down holding her head high…she looked straight at Jai…not looking away when she saw that he was looking at her…

Come sit Bani…said Jai pulling her chair out for her…

She frowned seeing his concern for her…she knew he was not faking it but she was so mad and so annoyed…

Half way through the dinner…Jai made an announcement… Mai aap sab ko ek khush khabri dena chahata hu…haan kisike liye ye khush khabari hogi aur kisike liye nahi… par…

Bani stilled….what is he talking about…so now the guilt of aborting the child would be solely hers, if she made that choice…at least that is what his announcement would confirm…

Almost at once everybody looked excited and wanted to know what the announcement would be…

Grabbing Bani's hand he said….Bani and I are going to become parents…aaj hi pata chala hai…that is why Bani has been getting sick and not for any other reason…but there is something else too with it….Bani does not want to have this baby….

Everyone gasped out loud….

Here he goes throwing me to the wolves thought Bani…letting me face the wrath of everybody…as if this will all be my fault…thought Bani… but then held her head high….

Bani yeh kya soch rahi ho beta??? What is wrong with you??...Itni acchi khush khabari hai aur tum usse hi….. Masi voice trailed away…

Bani who had calmed herself, felt a flash of anger within her, trying to take her hand grasp out of Mr. Walia hand, turned with eyes filled with tears towards him, trying to get him to release her so that she could wallow in her sorrow and pity alone….

Jai put his hand out…stopping Masi and anyone else from talking….

Please aap log meri puri baat sun lijiye…she is upset as she is under the impression that there is a Will that exists…a Will that states that I need to reproduce an heir before the age of 38 otherwise I lose my inheritance….so she is not happy about having this baby and wants the choice of making the decision of whether she wants the child or not….

Now I think that except for Bani and her sisters…he continues…we all know that there never was any inheritance…that this business, this house, this wealth has all been earned after Mummy and Papa passed away…so I do not know how and from where Bani heard about this Will...does anyone know?….can anyone shed some light on this matter?….

Jai looked around the table…he noticed that everybody was looking at him except Jigyasa who was busy stuffing her mouth with the roti…and pretending to be more interested in the food than the conversation…he also noticed….Bani looking at Jigyasa…

A little while later, Jigyasa noticed that everybody is looking at her….

What??? Kya baat hai… kyu tum sab mujhe ghur ghur ke dekh rahe ho…what is going on??? What have I done???.....

Jigyasa…said Aditya….kya tumne…

When Jai said…nahi Aditya…tum kuch nahi bologe….let me talk to her….since it is something that concerns me I should be the one to decide what should be done??

Done??? What are you going to do??? And about what, Jai bhaiya?? What are you guys talking about??? Meine kya kiya hai?? What have I done??

Jigyasa, ek baat batao… kya tumhe kuch pata hai ees Will ke bare mein?? This Will that has disturbed Bani so much that she is willing to take such a drastic step…..

Jai bhaiya, mei to kuch nahi janti aap kis bare mein bol rahe hai…what Will are we talking about?? Oh but Jai bhaiya let me congratulate you though….aur Bani what nonsense are you talking about…aborting the baby…itne deeno ke bad ees ghar mei ek nanhe bacchhe ki kinkari gunje gi aur tum usse pehle hi….kya kar rahi ho Bani??

Par Jigyasa Aunty….maine to…uss din…appko…said Bani….looking at Jiyasa unbelievingly….when it dawned on her that this was another one of her tricks….

Frustrated, Bani looked at everybody and pulling her hand out of Jai's ran away from the table….

Munna, yeh kya ho raha hai, beta??

Masi….mei…so saying brushed his hand over his head…mei nahi janta Masi……glaring at Jigyasa….he walked away….

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Meanwhile Bani had gone to her bedroom, upset that she had once again done it…she had got Mr. Walia upset with her…but then it was not her fault…or was it??? she thought….she was led to believe the things about the Will….about the clause in the Will…about the baby…but then again why did she not clear it with him…why oh why??....she groaned did she not go and talk to him instead of jumping to conclusions…now she knew he would be mad at her… he would, right???? Now then again, how could he believe that it was all her fault this time???... but then it was not her fault last time either and he was still extremely upset and angry then too…But then again is it always going to be like this? For the rest of my life??... Am I going to fall for Jigyasa Aunty's tricks everytime, having to listen to her barbs and being taken for a ride?? How can I let her make a fool of me??...

Oh how was she going to face him?? how was she going to pacify him??...how was she going to make him understand that she would not repeat something like this again??…that she would go to him if she had doubts about anything to clarify…that she would not let other people's talk or thinking influence her relationship with him???

A little while later when she had calmed down she kept her hand on her stomach, thinking about a life that was growing within her…even though she said that she did not want the baby, she could not even think about hurting this unborn child… I am so sorry baccha, I was using you to get back at your father but what choice did I have under the circumstances…I have not even seen you or felt you but I know that I already love you….how can I even think of letting you go…letting you die…please forgive me...

She needed to clarify the situation before it got out of hand any further…she had to tell him that she was sorry and that she….and that she what?? did she really care for him…did she really …..suddenly shy….not willing to put the thoughts into words… When did this happen???...so thinking she started walking towards the door, when the door flew open and she saw Mr. Walia walk in with a grim expression…

He looked at her without blinking, making Bani close her eyes…she knew he was mad but he looked very upset and very sad…as if it was the end of the world….

She turned away not able to see him in so much pain…looking back she thought of every time that she had tried to defy his authority, he had very calmly resolved the issue by making a quick decision…she had thought she was doing the same this time…only she did not realize that she had hurt him so…he walked past her to go stand by the window….She walked up to him…a little nervous about what his reaction would be…gently placing her hand on his shoulder…she apologized…Mr. Walia, I know I keep on making mistakes and then apologizing to you…I am sorry though…mujhe phir se ek baar maaf kar dijiye…mujhe pata hai ki mujhe aapke paas foren aa jana chahiye tha…too clarify the matter….I promise and give you my word I will not make any hasty decisions here after...bas ek baar aur…

Jai turned around….Dekho Bani, jaise bhi hai, lekin Jigyasa meri behen hai…jaise tumhari behene hai waise hi…sahi ya galat, acchi ya buri woh hai to meri behen hi na…mei janta hu ki woh galat thi…usse aise nahi karna chahiye tha, par tumhara behavior bhi to aise hota hai that she gets encouraged to create trouble between us…haan par agar hum hi usse koi karran nahi dete hai to woh kucch kar hi nahi sakti hai na…I cannot guarantee that our life will be peaceful with no arguments or issues with Jigyasa but I will always side with you if you are right Bani…

Putting his hand out…Bani kya mei tumse kuch maang sakta hui??

Ji….kya??

Kya tum zindagi bhar mera saath dogi?? Maine kabhi tumhe bataya nahi, tumse kaha nahi…meri baas ek galati ho gayi tumse kabhi puccha hi nahi…par Bani kya karta… I liked you and then I fell in love with you…Bani I love you…

Bani looked up with surprise in his eyes, a smile forming on her face, said I do too…Mr. Walia….

You do what, Bani??

Ji, woh mein…suddenly feeling her face turn red, she started turning around to walk away when Jai caught her… turning her, lifting her face asked…you too what Bani??

She hid her face in his chest mumbling….mujhe nahi pata…..Jai laughed holding her tight in his arms…so should I call up the doctor to set up an appointment so that you and the baby are both taken care of properly??

Haan…said Bani nodding her head…still refusing to look up…

Chalo khana khane…kuch nahi khaya tumne…

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Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye, shayad yahi to pyaar hai

betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye, shayad yahi to pyaar hai

kutch bhi kaha na, kutch bhi suna na, phir bhi

bechain dil hai humara, behke kadam hai

mushkil main hum hai,dekho

sambhle bhala kaise yaara

chahe bina bhi nazdeek hum chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyaar hai

nazrein bichade, pehre laga de, dil pe

par dil kisiki na mane,

Kaaton pe chalke, sholon mein jalke, roke

milke rahenge deewane

o o o

chahat ki lau to, aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

ye mulaqatein, yeh teri ankhein

ek pal na main bhool pau

kitni mohabbat, hai kitni chahat ,tumse

kaise bhala main bataoo

Acha lage jo, toh samne muskuraye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi to pyaar hai

kutch bhi kaha na, kutch bhi suna na, phir bhi

bechain dil hai humara, behke kadam hai

mushkil main hum hai, dekho

sambhle bhala kaise yaara

chahe bina bhi

nazdeek hum chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyaar hai - 5

Movie: Lucky- No time for love

Singer: Adnan Sami & Lata Mangeshkar

Courtesy: Khushboo

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Epilogue

Bani….screamed Jai….

Ji….aai mei…Bani ran upstairs quickly dropping what she was doing in the kitchen…telling Tony… abhi tum sambhal lena….

Kya hai….said Bani…as she entered the bedroom wiping her hands on her paloo…

She did not see Jai, but heard the door closing behind her and arms going around her…kaha rehe gai thi kaal raat ko?? Kitna intezar kiya maine….phir pata hi nahi chala kabhi neend lag gai….kabhi aai tum sone ya aayi hi nahi…abhi I want my morning kiss…no no first I want my good night kiss and then….

Then what?? Kya aap pagal ho gaye hai…aur rahi baat mere der se aane ki, woh aap apne bete se puch lijiye…kaal raat ko sone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha…baas masti karni thi aur khelna tha…woh Jigyasa Aunty ne usse chocolate jo khila di thi sone se pehele….Jai…aap kuch kehete kyun nahi unse….Meri to baat woh bilkul sunti nahi….kuch manti hi nahi…keheti hai…if I don't spoil him who else will?

No no no….mei tum dono ke beech me bilkul nahi padne wala…abhi jagad rahi ho…complaint kar rahi ho…kaal koi baat hogi to tum Jigyasa ki side lekar mujhe se jagad ne betto gi….isme nuksani to meri hi hai na…phir mujse baat nahi karogi aur mujhe maanana padega…na baba na…I do not want to be a part of this at all…

Ok then you suffer and don't question me as to why did come late to sleep…

Just then there was thumping on the door...Mama…mama…

Uff..aah gaya…now I will not be able to spend any time with you…are you coming to office today?? Atleast then we will be able to eat lunch together…alone…just the two of us…hmmm….maybe we can go out for the afternoon…

Making big eyes at Jai, Bani grumbled…Jai aap bhi na…Nikky se bhi chhote ho jaate hai…

Opening the door she picked up Nikhil, their 3 year old….hogayi neend tumhari…

Nikhil turned and put his head on her shoulder…seeing his father said…Papa…and turned and put his arms out for Jai to pick him up…

Oh my beta!!!....said Jai….

Papa ko dekha to Mama ko bhool gaya na…

Nikky turned around and grinned at Bani saying…Papa…gumne chalo..

Nahi beta…not now…now your Papa has to go to work and so does your Mama…come lets get you ready and Masi is going to take you to the garden…chalo lets get ready…

No Papa…No Mama…no work….

Finally pacifying him with a long drive in the evening….Nikky let Jai and Bani go to work…holding on to Masi's hand waving them bye…

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The end

Guys it was fun writing this FF. Hope that you enjoyed it as much as I did…

Please do not forget to comment….

Edited by pptm469 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WHAT!!!! Am i seeing right? Is this really finished... OH NO!!!!!!!!!!! I think you had got Tin's flu... only she has the habit of ending the FF all of a sudden...

But i must say i thoroughlyy enjoyed the FF... thanks... hope to see u writing another.
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Posted: 16 years ago
the end was very nice
enjoyed the journey of reluctant bride'
do come back with new ff
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Posted: 16 years ago

dat was a rly nice ff😊

good endingšŸ‘šŸ‘
do start a new one soon😃
love,
teenu
Edited by teenzs - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

WHAT!!!! Am i seeing right? Is this really finished... OH NO!!!!!!!!!!! I think you had got Tin's flu... only she has the habit of ending the FF all of a sudden...

But i must say i thoroughlyy enjoyed the FF... thanks... hope to see u writing another.

😔😭 meri badnami, I protest but think of it Abhi if I do not finish one how do I start anotheršŸ˜‰...

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