FF ZAKHAM..Last part & Epilougue@Pg 32 25/03/10 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
hey nice....
bani says ghanchakkar mera Boss nahi hota..toh main..sar fodh deti iska..😆😆

waiting 4 nex update.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: teenzs

hey nice....

bani says ghanchakkar mera Boss nahi hota..toh main..sar fodh deti iska..😆😆

waiting 4 nex update.......



thanks a lot for liking the update.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
gr88 part
i can understand wat kind of boss jai would be
becoz
even my boss is a big ghanchakar
loved it
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part

i can understand wat kind of boss jai would be
becoz
even my boss is a big ghanchakar
loved it
plzzz cont soon



Boss log aise hi hote hai..waise..what is the age of your Boss?😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: yakkudimag



Boss log aise hi hote hai..waise..what is the age of your Boss?😆

he would be 27
abhi hi 4 mahino pehle hi got married
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
great part specially bani talking to herself 😆 pls cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: amiee

great part specially bani talking to herself 😆 pls cont soon....



thanks a lot..the story is so far..wait and watch..😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Loved the update and especially Bani's thoughts going on her mind😆😆 Considering her Boss to be a male version of Pia🤣howlarious and then calling him a Ghanchakar....some boss's are like that...too curious for their own good
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: pooks

Loved the update and especially Bani's thoughts going on her mind😆😆 Considering her Boss to be a male version of Pia🤣howlarious and then calling him a Ghanchakar....some boss's are like that...too curious for their own good



Jai toh openly line maar raha hai..Bani ko..

Bani ko samajh me nahi aa raha hai..k uska Boss..uska aashik hain..



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Posted: 17 years ago
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[FLASHBACK 4.0]

14th January,2006

Bani Office me hai..ek file check kar rahi hai...achanak uske Mobile par ek SMS.


"come to my cabin."

Jai ka SMS tha..

Bani gai andar.."
yes ..aapne bulaya tha?"

Jai--aao baitho..

Bani--jee..


Jai--tumko mujhse koi problem hai kya?

Bani--main samjhi nahi..

Jai--nahi..main bol raha tha..k hum toh pahle bhi mil chuke hain..aur aisa toh nahi k tum mujhe pahle se jaanti nahi ho..toh ..tumhara mood mujhe dekhte hi bigad kyon jata hai?

Bani--aapko yeh baat karni hai abhi?

Jai--haa..kya hum fir se dost nahi ban sakte?

Bani--toh..hum me dushmani hai kya?

Jai--toh fir tum..mujhe avoid kyon karti ho?

Bani--avoid kaha kar rahi hoon?

Jai--toh mujhse baat kyon nahi karti?

Bani--zaroorat nahi padti..isi lia baat nahi karti...

Jai--dost jab chaahe baat kar sakte hain..iske lia kisi "zaroorat" ki zaroorat nahi...

Bani--ok..kahiye..kyaa kehna hai aapko?


Jai--yehi kehna tha..Office me aise rehti ho..jaise k..tumko punishment di gai hai..

Bani--nahi..aisi koi baat nahi hai..

Jai--aur mujhe dekhte hi tumhara chehra utar jata hai..

Bani--aap mujhe ghalat samajh rahe hain Mr. Walia.

Jai--toh..samjhaao mujhe..

Bani--actually..main bahut hairan thi..k mujhe bulakar naukri di aapne..

Jai--tumhara record dekh kar hi tumko appoint kia hai..is lia nahi k tumko pahle se hi jaanta hoon..

Bani--ok....ab?

Jai--ab kuchh nahi..Daveen k ghar me party hai..tum chalogi?

Bani--woh Mr. Sibbal ne mujhe bhi invite kia hai..

Jai--toh tum chal rahi ho na?


Bani--haa..waise bhi..aur koi jagah toh jana nahi hai..main jaaungi ....

Jai--ok..main aaunga....tumko lene..


Bani--uski zaroorat nahi hai..mere paas apni Car hai...

Jai--kab kharida?

Bani--kharid lia tha..papers taiyar nahi the...number plate bhi nahi laga tha..Mumbai aakar... pehla kaam yehi kia tha..Flat kharida aur Car bhi ...insurence k papers taiyar nahi the..aur baki formalities bhi puri karni thi..isi lia..ab tak car istemal nahi kar rahi thi..


Jai--ooohhh..toh party me milogi na?

Bani--haaa....kyon nahi....zaroor milungi.....

Jai--waise..main soch bhi nahi sakta tha ..k woh Rohan tumhara dost hai..

Bani--haa...Rohan..aap k bare me puchh raha tha..aap bahut achhe lage hain usko...

Jai--kyaa??


Bani--haa...he found you very much interesting..

Jai--please..stop it..

Bani--toh main chalu?

Jai--yes please..


baahar aakar Bani apne desk par baithi...sar pakad k baith gai..Jai k baaton se bahut pareshaan ho gai.,.

yeh Jai usse itna chipak kyon raha hai?woh ek mamuli employee k ilava aur kuchh nahi..aur jis jaan pehchaan ki baat kar raha hai..usko Bani dosti nahi keh sakti..aur kitna jaanta hai Jai usko?aur Bani bhi kitna jaanti hai Jai ko?


Jai uska dost nahi...Jai uska dost kaise ho sakta hai?nahi..Jai uska dost nahi..

bahut fark hai Jai aur Bani k andar.

umar ka fark hai..but that difference is secondary..dekha jaaye toh film industry k Superstars bhi hai..40 years k..par teenagers toh unki fans hoti hai..umar ka fark koi fark nahi hai.

par fark hai bahut..dono ki zindagian..zindagi jeene ka andaaz..dono ka aaj..aur kal..bahut fark hai..insab me..dono ki soch alag..aur ..haa..yeh baat sahi hai..k dost banne k lia zaroori nahi..k har baat common ho..par itni jaldi koi kisika dost kaise ban sakta hai?


Dosti yaa dushmani..dono ko waqt dena chahie...

par..Bani samajh rahi hai..kuchh kuchh..k Jai Walia ka irada kyaa hai..varna SMS kar k cabin me bulana..hmm..mamla gadbad hai..

Bani ko shuru k din ki baat yaad aa rahi hai..Art Gallary me mulakat..aur fir us tarha Bani ko Picture bhejna..Bani se baat karna..usko is tarha bulana Office me..aur naukri dena..sab baaton ko normally ya casually lene ki koi wajah nahi hai Bani k paas..

Jai Walia ..Bani ne socha..kaise is Jai Walia se chhutkara mil jaaye..yeh naukri jitni jaldi ho sake chhodna hai usko..par 6 maheene ka notice bhi dena hoga..July se pahle Bani yeh naukri chhod nahi sakti.

pahle Bani Pia ko Jai k saath dekhte hi chidh jaati thi..par ab usko lag raha hai..k Pia jitna Jai k kareeb rahegi..Jai ko utna hi kum mauka milega ..uske kareeb aane ka..


Bani bahut zyada pareshaan hai...aise me.."hey Bani.."


Pia thi..


Bani--oohh..tu..kyaa baat hai?

Pia--is weekend me kuchh plan hai tera?

Bani--kyon?

Pia--mera koi plan nahi hai..tu kuchh batana..please..

Bani--kal ek party hai..chalegi?

Pia--kaha par hai party?

Bani--tujhe chalna hai k nahi bol..mere saath chalna hai..bas..aur kuchh nahi bata sakti main abhi..bol chalegi?

Pia--ok...

Bani--aur..yeh baat tu kisiko nahi batayegi..kisiko matlab..kisiko nahi..Boss ko bhi nahi..thik hai?


Pia--yaa..ok..main nahi bataungi..kitne baje?

Bani--main 7 baje aa jaungi tujhe pick karne..taiyar rehna..

Pia--ok..


Bani(man hi man)--hmm..Jai Walia..bahut shaukh hai na..ishque jhaadne ka?jhaado..shaukh se..Pia par ishque jhaado..Bani Dixit ka khayaal chhod do...yeha tumhari daal nahi galne waali..


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Daveen--hey Jai..tera glass khaali kyon hai?

Jai--ohh..haa..nahi..kuchh nahi..

Daveen--Bani aayegi..maine usko phone par bhi kaha hai..zaroor ana..aayegi..

Jai--tujhe kaise pata k main Bani ki raah dekh raha hoon?

Daveen--Darling..main janta hoon tujhe..Bani ka intezar kar raha hai..yeh bhi janta hoon..le ..woh aa gai..par uske saath woh dusri patakha kaun hai?


Jai--ohh..shit..it is Pia...

Daveen--Pia kaun?

Jai--mere Office me kaam karti hai..Bani ki dost..isko kyon laai...

Daveen--kabab me haddi hai kya?

Jai--pata nahi kyon..Pia mujhse bahut chipakti hai....

Daveen--arre..tu hai THE JAI WALIA..tujhse koi bhi chipakna chaahegi...Bani isi taraf aa rahi hai...

Bani-hello Sibbal Saab..she is Pia..my friend..

Daveen--hii Pia..

Pia--hello..I must say..nice party..Mr. Walia..aap ..?

Daveen--Jai mera dost hai..

Pia--oohh...

Bani--Pia..tum mere saath chalo..

Bani Pia ko lekar chali gai...

Jai Bani ko dekhne laga..Pia ko chhodti hi nahi..Jai kaise baat karega usse?Bani bhi na.. ghalat waqt par ghalat logo ko le aati hai saath..


[END OF FLASH BACK]

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"Bani Dixit..arre..Sanjay Pandey me kyaa rakha tha..hum toh the na..jo Sanjay k paas hai.. woh humare paas bhi hai..jaanu.."


"Excuse me..what is your problem..kyon pareshaan kar rahe hain aap mujhe?"

"arre..Sanjay ne tumse shaadi nahi ki..hum toh hai na..Raani banake rakhenge tumko..kaun sa ladka tumse shaadi karega..jiski barat waapas chali gai ho..batao na..kyaa kia tha tumne.. Sanjay Pandey ko..tumhari kaun si kartoot ka pata chal gaya tha..k shaadi k mandap se laut gaya woh?"

"SHUT UP.."

"bhadakti kyon ho jaan..pure shaher ko pata hai..tum par sab thook rahe hain..arre bhai... aisa toh hona hi tha..tumhara baap Sanjay Pandey ko faansna chaahta tha..tumko aage kar k.."

"listen ..I am warning you..."




"nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..."


Bani ki neend toot gai...woh uth kar baith gai...woh sara badan paseena paseena ho gaya hai..muh pura laal ho gaya hai..

Jai ki neend bhi toot gai...usne Bani k sar par haath rakha.."Bani..kyaa hua..neend me chilla kyon uthi?"

Bani ne Jai ki taraf dekha..Bani bahut darr gai hai...

Jai--kyaa hua?bura sapna dekha?

Bani--woh main..Sanjay...

Jai--Sanjay?kyaa hua Sanjay ko?

Bani--nahi kuchh nahi..

Jai--batao..Bani ..kyaa hua tha...bolo..kyaa dekha tumne?

Bani--kuchh nahi..

Jai--kuchh nahi?kuchh kaise nahi Bani,apna chehra dekho,pura peela pad gaya hai, batao ..kyaa hua tha?Sanjay ne kyaa kia tha?

Bani--kuchh nahi..kaha na..kuchh nahi..kyon pareshaan kar rahe ho mujhe?mujhe mere haal par chhod do..please..

Jai--tumne davai nahi li?

Bani--hmm..

Jai--tumne davai li hai?

Bani--bhul gai..

Jai--aise kaise chalega...?

Bani--mujhe Allahbad jana hai...mujhe jana hai Allahbad...

Jai--kyon jana hai Allahbad..?

Bani--mujhe jana hai..Allahbad...mujhe jana hi hoga..bahut saare..sawalon k jawab dene.. mujhe jana hoga..

Jai--kaun se sawal?


Bani--nahi..kuchh nahi...

Bani bistar se uth kar chali gai..balcony me...

Jai uske pichhe gaya...


Jai--kyon jana hai Allahbad?

Bani--mujhe jana hai..kal hi jana hai..


Jai--main bhi saath jaaunga..


Bani--nahi..main akeli jaaungi..koi mere saath nahi jaayega..samajh gaye?koi nahi jaayega mere saath...

achanak phone bajta hai...


Jai--hello...

"Uma bol rahi hoon..Bani se baat karaiye..."

Jai--haa...

Bani ne aakar phone uthaya.."haa bol.."

Uma--Sunita is dead...she commited suicide..

Bani--kyon?

Uma--baaraat ghar se waapas chali gai thi...

Bani--ohh no...


Bani ne phone rakh dia..

Bani zameen par hi baith gai..


Jai--Bani..kyaa hua..Bani..batao kyaa hua?

Bani--Sunita...

Jai--kaun Sunita?

Bani--woh mar gai...khudhkhushi ki hai usne...

Jai--whatt..yeh kaun thi?

Bani--Sanjay ki bahen..meri dost thi..woh mar gai..uski baaraat waapas chali gai..aur usne..khud ko khatam kar lia..

Jai--Bani..dekho ..meri taraf dekho..Bani..sun rahi ho meri baat??...Bani..suno...

Bani zameen par hi so gai...asal me woh behosh ho gai..uska chehra pura safed ho gaya...

behoshi me bar bar ek baat Bani bolti rahi..
"Sanjay.,....tumhare paapon ki wajah se..sab tumhara dosh hai..Sanjay..I wish ..I could kill you...I could kill you...Sunita..tumhari wajah se mari.."

raat k tab 1 baje the...

Doctor aya..Bani ko injection dia..

Jai ne Uma ko phone kia..


Uma--haa..kahiye..

Jai--kaun kaha par mari hai..yeh khabar abhi batana zaroori tha..?

Uma--kyon..kyaa hua?

Jai--itna bhi hosh nahi ..k Bani pregnant hai..uske lia yeh khabar kitna khatarnak saabit ho sakta hai?

Uma--whattttttttt?Bani pregnant hai?


ab Jai chauk gaya..

Jai--apko nahi pata?


Uma--jee nahi..Bani ne bataya hi nahi..aur..aap dono k bich..toh koi rishta bhi nahi hai..

Jai--kyaa?

Uma--aap dono k rishte ki sachchai main jaanti hoon..Mr. Walia..

Jai--main baad me baat karta hoon..


Jai ne phone rakh dia..

Uma ko yeh baat malum hai..k Bani aur uske bich ..iska matlab..Uma ko aur bhi bahut kuchh malum hai...par yeh Sanjay k bare me Uma kitna jaanti hai?

Jai ko yehi pata karna hai..




Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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