imaginary scene based on precap(new update)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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here is my imaginary scene after precap

Rishi said netra u r beautiful not only by face but also by heart🤢(seriously) .Tanuja overhears this and shettered.Netra watchs tanuja and she tries to tell rishu about this but he cuts her and continues.Tanuja comes down with teary eyes.
Ahana sees her and tries to talk to her but tanuja ignores her and directly goes to bar.She drinks too much.Ahana goes and told Rishi about this.
Rishi comes down and shocked.
Bcz tanuja is standing on bar counter and keeping a bottle on her head and dancing.All people in party r laughing on her.Rishi goes to her.Bar tender said sir she drinks 6 bottles back to back
Rishi shocked again.
Ri:Tanuja neeche aao
Ta:Nhi m nhi aaungi
Ri: Plz tanuja neeche aao sab hass rahe h
Ta: kya karo m neeche aakar
ri: kya
T:Kya kya tum bhi upar aa jao yahan se vision bhut acha h tum chipkali se sagai karo m yahin se dekhungi😆 yahan m sabse badi lag rahi hun
Ri:Kya bacchon jaisi baat kar rahi ho yar
T:Ha aao tum bhi
Ri(in anger):Tanuja maine bola na neeche aao.
T(puppy face):Tum tum mujhe daant rahe ho jao m tumse baat nhi karti and comes down herself.
Rishi takes a sigh of relief.
But tanuja goes to rano
Ta:Yeh dekho meri pati ki maa mtlb meri Saasu maa jinhen m kabhi achi nhi lagi but yeh chipkali (points her) inhe aankhon ka tara lagti h
Then moved towards chipkali
T:Aur yeh chipkali bhi bhut badi chudail h ek bar Saasu maa ne bola aur yeh mere pati k piche hi pad gayi patichor kahin ki.
Ri:Tanuja yar yeh sab kya bol rahi ho
Tanuja comes to Rishi and kissed on his cheeks and start laughing (same holi wala scene 😆)
All r shocked.Pk gets frustrated and he holds her hand very tightly in frustration.she slaps him.😆
Ta(shouts):Pk tumhe kitni bar bola h mera hath mat pakda karo par tum samjhte hI nhi.mera hath pakdne ka haq bas Rishi Singh Bedi ko h mere Rishi ko.
This brings smile on Rishi's face.He movies towards her but tanuja goes to dj and said dj wale babu gaana baja de.Dj plays song and she start dancing.But Rishi signals dj to stop the song.
Tanuja is in Hitler mood
T:Song kyu band kiya mujhe dance karna h
Dj: Sir ne bola h and points towards Rishi
T:Kyu band karwa diya song tumhari sagai h na toh mera dance toh banta h
Rishi cups her face and said
Ri:tumhe kya ho gaya h tanuja kabhi bolti ho netra se dur rahun aur kabhi kuch aur.Par kabhi yeh nahi bolti ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho
Tanuja gets emotional and
T:Pyar bhut pyar karti hun tumse.jante ho kabse pyar karti hun tumse
R:Kab se
T; Tab se jab m tanu hua karti thi mtlb mere pichle janam se.Tumhare liye apni jaan tak de di par tumne kya kiya mere sath Rishi aur Voh bhi is chipkali k liye m maaf nhi karungi tumhe and she fainted but Rishi holds her.He takes her to his room and calls the doc.In between
Ah:Dekha biji maine aapko bola tha ki tanuja hi tanu di h par aapne meri baat nhi mani.meri tanu di h
Rishi asked how can she said this
Ahana tells about her convo with tanuja on mehandi.
Rishi is over the moon but he said agar yeh meri tanu h toh yeh mujhe property k liye kabhi nhi chor kar jaegi kuch aur baat.
As netra feels guilty so she tells everything.Rishi slaps her and said
Ri:Maine tumhe apna dost smjjha tumhare samne tanuja k liye roya tumne mere sath aisa kiya.M tumhe bhut acha samjhta tha netra par tum toh Insaan kehlane layak bhi nhi.Abhi k abhi is ghar se nikal jao aur kabhi apni shakal mujhe mat dhikana warna m tumhe jaan se mar dunga.She leaves.
But ahana and biji follows her and ahana pucnhes her.Ahana and biji gives an earfull of her acts.And pushed her from their house and shut the door on her mouth.
Rishi is sitting next to tanuja and holding her hand.He had tears in his eyes.He caressing her head and said
Ri:Tumne itna kuch saha h tanu Voh bhi meri wajah se m apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhi kar sakta.Kaise m nazare milaunga tumse.And he cires alot.Doc comes and Rishi hides his tears behind a fake smile.She asked the reason for her condition.
Rishi said she drinks a lot.
Doc:Okkk then it's normal she will be fine.abhi inhe rest karne dijiye.Sabah jaise hi yeh uthe inhe nimbu pani de dena yeh bilkul theek ho jaengi. Rishi thanks her and she leaves.
Massi: Abhishek ab humari yahan koi zaroorat nhi hume chalna chahiye
Pk:But Massi tanuja yahan h toh hum kaise
Rishi:Tanuja isi ghar m rahegi bcZ Voh meri wife h
Pk:H nhi thi ab Voh meri hone wali wife h
Ri: Hone wali thi na par meri ho chuki h Voh nhi 2 bar.Ab seedhe tareekey se jao yahan se warna tumhe bhi netra ki tarah dakkhe mar kar bahar nikal dunga.
Pk:Ab toh jaa rha hun par dekh lunga tumhe Rishi Singh Bedi
Ri:M yahi hun dekh lena abhi jao
He leaves form there.
Next morning tanuja wakes up and said mera sir ghum rha h.She tries to get up but she realises that someone is holding her hand and its rishi.He is sitting on floor by holding her hand.(same scene when Rishi drinks on biji's b'day)
she looks him lovingly.Rishi wakes up and found her staring him
Ri:Good morning Mrs bedi
Ta(starts her drama):m yahan tumhare room m kaise aur mera hone wala pati ak kahan h aur mera yeh sir kyu ghum rha h
Ahana comes and gives her lemon juice and said pee lo di kal raat ka hangover utar jaega..tanuja drinks and feels good.
Tanuja asked about last night.Rishi tells her everything about last night and also about netra's act and about tanya.
Tanuja is on the moon bcZ she comes to know that her Rishi is still hers and still loves her.
She hugs him tightly and rishi too hugs her.

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Divya333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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As usual you rocked it Pari...it would be very very nice if Tanuja really drinks n says her inner voice...loved it... Netra deserves Ahana's punch... My favourite kiss scene 😳 liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Bas Tanuja ne drink kya Kiya sare mu clear ho gye koi CVs Ko btate Jake sirf mu hi stories Ko achha nhi banaye unhe clear karne se stories achhi Banti hai 😡
Very nice imagination
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pari Teri writing ki to mein fan ho 😃 kya,story likhi hai simply outstanding 👏 tu CV mein Jaye GI k tujhe push kro mein kasam k studio zor sy Dhaka or to makhi ki jgah 😉 or likhna plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What to say pari. Loved it very very very much. Wish these happen in kasam also. But no our CVS wilnot give us such things. You have a very bright future. Pls become writer of any serial.I will surely watch it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ye kya tha pari shirf kiss.Rishu kha hai Rishu ko la.Bas continue thus aur la rishu ko.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Ye kya tha pari shirf kiss.Rishu kha hai Rishu ko la.Bas continue thus aur la rishu ko.

😆 ye dakh rishu maang rhi kitny pyar sy dy na chulbul rishu 😉 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ess drink story ne mujhe ek show ki yaad dila di jaha same to same tumhari story jesa hua tha bt yaha main point reborn he waha pregnency...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful imagination Pari!, kash tum cvs hote yaar. Drunk Tanuja is the best that I loved about her I mean the way she behaves tha t time and tells all the truth.During the holi episodes she was superbly cute and again want that to happen in the show but our cvs always do what we dont want. Just keep writing more such wonderful stories..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333

As usual you rocked it Pari...it would be very very nice if Tanuja really drinks n says her inner voice...loved it...Netra deserves Ahana's punch... My favourite kiss scene😳liked it

@bold mere dil ki sabse badi wish jo mujhe nahi lagta kabhi puri hogi

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