TanShi SS: Withstanding Love - Part 4 (last part), pg 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a truly beautiful piece.
I love how desperate Tanu was in her pain that she finally spoke out. She had carried her burdens alone for longer than the 7 years.

She was despitefully used by that family too but when she left that house with nothing. She sacrificed her love and happiness to save their company and his lack of trust in her caused her so much even while she was in the house.

Ever being torn between love for his family and his true love, Rishi had failed her in my opinion, but he does love her and hopefully history will not repeat itself. It's time that he makes er his first priority and trusts her.

She had given up everything up for the him and his family and she was so overwrought that night, so desperate to keep him from going through with the engagement that she played directly into Netra's hands.

My favourite line must be" I thought you did that thing without clrhes" or something like that🤣

I am so glad. even though she had some doubt at first she finally recognised the true character of her love. She finally realised what they had both missed at one time or another, They were only made for each and he would never cause her such pain deliberately other and allowed other to seperate them,

They experienced so much pain, such long seperation and longing. Now they would have to start from scratch. 'their babies would have to adjust to their new family structures, so going forward it will not be easym but they are starting out with what's needed. Each other and love.

Oh yes, i love how you wrote Tanya into Rishi's life. I hope it will be something as believable as your take on it.

Another amazing OS Tessie Pooh. Loooved it.⭐️👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was so emotional and perfect, you are making me fall inlove with kasam now, hearth warming Natasha rishi daughter, they finally came to face the truth it was all nethra's plan to separate them, even after blaming and hating each other for 7years, they finally came back together, i love this loni
keeping feeling us with oses
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Achelvi

Thanks for writing such an excellent and emotional OS...great job

aww thank you Achelvi dear, am glad you enjoyed the OS 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AniSweety

My dear..you just rocked the story like anything

No mistake at all..rishi and tanuja.. frustration..pain..loss of love..that despo..hot romance..rishi knowing truth..tanuja knowing truth fantastic to core

awww thanks dear AniSweety, I appreciate such high praise very much 😊... as we are unlikely to see any such developments anytime soon, we have to settle for our imagination, right? 😆. I am glad you enjoyed my version of the story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333

Excellent OS...Beautifully written
Loved the way Tanuja said she is Tanu and Natz is their daughter
Finally they clared their big MU's
Feeling sad for Rohith and Smiley
Loved their confrontation
I wished Netra to get slaps from both Rishi and Tanuja
Nicely balanced the blame game to which fans are fighting whose fault is.
So Rishi used his One Night that helped him to get his love back

Netra should get more than slaps for being such a devil! 😡 she is a slithering repulsive reptile! yuck! anyhoo, glad you enjoyed the story Divya dear, thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suntala

What a fabulous piece of imagination it is yaar. Kasam, its TRP would have hit very very high, had CVs gone just like in this OS. Hope they will do something spectacular like this while clearing TanShi MUs. It would be excellent if they look at this OS while planning for that revelation.

wow, I am highly flattered by this sweet comment 😳, thank you for the praise Suntala dear, I appreciate it, and am glad you enjoyed the OS 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Wow such a wonderful os.Love it.Kash we had have this in show instead of aalo ka paratha.

thanks arya dear 😊, even I wish things had gone a different route in the show, but uh well, at least it helps the imagination along 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara1990

Finally Rishi knows Tanuja is Tanu and Natasha is their daughter. Awesome OS.

thanks for the comment sara 😊, you're quiet of late... yes in my imagination I can at least satisfy myself with such nice developments 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thaaankuuu Didi of mine 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lornab

I have no words to describe how beautifully u brought all the emotions of Rishi , Tanuja and even the truth of Tanu. Just one thing I can say U totally nailed it and brought tears to my eyes.

awww was touched by having brought tears to your eyes Lorna dear 😊, it means I emoted the story well and was able to connect with you. It means a lot dear, thank you very much!

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