Imaginery scene based on pune track final part updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Rishi goes and changes and leaves for the meeting. He asks netra to take rest and then go and visit his mom. He will be busy with the meeting and not to call him. Tanuja is tensed after the call with netra and thinks both are in one room and thinks how could rishi do this. Rohit sees her tensed and asks her wat happ, she says nothing and tells him to drive fast.

They reach the hotel. Tanuja enquires at reception about the room rishi is staying and tells rohit to book the rooms and she goes to check. Rohit books the room. Tanuja goes to the room and finds no one there. She is relieved and thinks rishi may have gone to meeting. She calls rishi but his phone is switched off. She leaves from there and meets rohit who gives her the keys of her room and tells her to go and rest. Tanuja also tells him to go and rest. Rohit tells her if he sees rishi he will him to come and meet you. Tanuja nods and goes to her room.

Tanuja goes to her room and calls ahana and tells her she has reached but hasnt met rishi yet. She then goes and gets freshened. Rishi comes from the meeting and meets rohit. Rohit tells rishi to go and meet tanuja as she was very worried after a phone call. He doesnt know who was on the phone but she got very tensed. Rishi asks about her room number and thinks why she got tensed and who was on the phone. Tanuja opens the door and is surprised to see rishi. Rishi sees her eyes are red and asks her if she cried. Tanuja tells him why would she cry. Rishi asks her why her eyes are red and not to give excuse of something went inside her eyes. Rishi asks her to tell the truth and asks about the phone call that made her tensed.

Tanuja tells him about the conversation with netra and asks him how can he stay with that chipkali in same room. Rishi tells her he had no choice as no room was available. She asks him if no room was available, how she and rohit got the rooms. Tanuja tells him to go to that chipkali as she might be waiting for him to make him hers. Rishi leaves from there. Tanuja thinks "chala gaya bina kuch kahe." After sometime, rishi comes back with his suitcase and tells her he will stay with her. Rishi says he will talk to her after he gets freshened up and leaves for the bathroom.

Someone knocks at door, tanuja goes and opens and sees netra. Netra comes inside and asks her to go back. Tanuja asks her how is her mom. Netra starts laughing and tells her nothing had happened to her mom and it was her and rano's plan so that she could come with rishi. She tells her she will make rishi hers today and then she will be out of his life forever. Netra tells tanuja how they lied to rishi and he also believed them and also how she bribed the manager so that they can stay in one room. Rishi comes out and asks her what else she had planned. Netra is shocked to see rishi.

Rishi tells how disgusting of her to even think she could make him hers. Rishi then asks her how dare she could talk to his wife like that and tells her to be within limits. Netra tells him they are going to get divorced and that he has done roka with her. Rishi says he will never divorce tanuja and this roka was done only because of his mom's blackmailing and tells her to forget about the roka and to never ever come in front of them. He then tells her she has only seen his good side and not to make him show his ugly side which is 100 times worse than tanuja's khadoos behavior and if she wants to know about his that side to go and ask his mom. He tells her it will be better for her if she stays away from them and tells her to leave. Netra leaves from there.

Rishi goes and tells tanuja "tum bhi iss chipkali ke baatho mein aagayi aur apni aankhen laal karle. tumne soch bhi kaise liya ke main tumhe dokha dunga." Tanuja tells him she feared she would lose him and that netra may also do something like wat malaika did during their honeymoon. Rishi asks wat malaika did. Tanuja tells him how malaika had the same plans and she had spiked his drink and tells him everything that had happened. Rishi tells he doesnt remember anything and asks her why she never told him about all this. She tells him because he hated her at that time and would not have believed her. Rishi tells her he never hated her, he was only angry on her coz of the situation.

Netra calls rano and tells her what had happ. Rano gets tensed that rishi now knows everything and will be angry. Rano tells netra to go her home and not come in front of rishi till the situation becomes normal and she wont be able to tolerate his anger. Netra leaves for her home. Rano is frustrated as all her plans went for a toss and once again tanuja and rishi have come closer.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great piece of writing. Really good hope something like that would have happened in the show
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Posted: 8 years ago
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you just rocked
cant wait for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kitni achi imagination hai 😭 cvs pta nai kaha sy ideas lati hai ghisa pita repeat tracks kash forum k writers cvs mein hote to kam sy kam unique dakhne ko milta kuch
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update .Kash show mai asia hota but this is not possible.
Can u please a immigation on jalo rishi.I realy got tired of seeing jalo tanuja.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aisa ho tho kita accha laga.kab rishi ko pata chalagi netra ke plan ki baare mai😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Rohit comes and asks tanuja if he can go back now that rishi is there. Tanuja tells him he can go and to give her a call after he reaches. Rishi goes to see him off. Rohit leaves from there. On the way, rishi calls UV. UV puts the phone on speaker as MP is also there. UV tells him everyting is fine in office. Rishi tells him he knows and tells them why tanuja was trying to stop him. UV tells rishi to talk with tanuja and clear all his misunderstandings and to find out why she is doing all this. MP tells rishi one thing is clear that tanuja loves him a lot and she cant see him with anyone else. Both advice him to clear tanuja's insecurities and to stay there and spend time with her and take it as their honeymoon and not to worry about work as they will handle it.

On the other hand, tanuja calls ahana and tells both beeji and her about what had happened. They are relieved that without her saying anything truth came in front of rishi. Both tell her to confess her feelings to rishi as it is right time as no one is there to disturb them. Beeji tells tanuja "woh chipkali rishi ko apna banane aati, tu usse apna bana le." Ahana also joins in and tells "ab tum chintu ko ek bhai ya behen de do." Tanuja starts blushing. Beeji tells her "hamare zamane mein toh abhi tak puri fauj kadi kar dete, tum longo se ek nahi hota." Rishi comes and sees tanuja talking on phone and her cheeks has turned red. Tanuja tells them rishi has come and that she will talk to them later.

Rishi asks her why her face has turned red. Tanuja tells him kuch nahi. Rishi gets call from ahana. She tells him beeji wants to talk to him. Beeji says "tujhe mana kiya phir bhi toh us chipkali ke saath chala gaya. tujhe samaj nahi aata yeh teri maa our us chipkali ke mili bagat hai. itni khubsurat biwi ko chodkar chala gaya." Rishi says "ab maaf bhi kar do, phir aisi galti nahi hogi." Beeji says "teri saza yeh hai ki tu tanuja ko kush rakega aur mujhe parpota ya parpoti laake de." Rishi says "beeji aap toh aise keh rahi ho jaise kisi dukan milega...waqt lagta hai aapko pata hai na." Beeji - "mujhe sab pata hai, bina koshish ke kuch nahi milta...samjha." Rishi - "haan beeji." Rishi then talks to ahana and tells her not to worry abt tanuja and he will take care of her.

Tanuja then tells rishi they should go back if his meeting is over. Rishi tells they are not going back. Tanuja tells him she doesnt have clothes to change as she left in hurry. Rishi tells her that is not an issue, they will go and shop. He tells her they need to talk but will do so after coming back. They go shopping. Rishi buys her bracelet as he felt very bad wen netra broke it. They return after shopping and tanuja goes to have bath.

After having bath, tanuja sees she forgot the towel. She asks rishi for towel. Rishi - koi towel nahi milna wala, chahiye toh aake le lo. Tanuja - rishi bahut mazak ho gaya, plz towel de do. Rishi - nahi doonga, aise hi bahar aajao, waise bhi yahan sirf mein hi hoon. Tanuja starts sneezing. Rishi gets worried and gives her the towel. Tanuja comes out in anger and asks him "yeh kya tha, aise kaun karta apni biwi ke saath, agli baar agar tum towel bhool gaye toh main bhi nahi dungi." Rishi - "mat dena, main toh aise hi aajoaga, waise bhi tumse kya sharm." Tanuja - us chipkali ke saath rehte rehte tum ek dum besharm ho gaye ho, waise tumhari mom kya dinosaur khandan ki hai jab dekho chipkali utta laate hai, pehle malaika, ab yeh netri. Rishi - tum kuch zyada nahi bol rahi ho. Tanuja - ab bolna shura kahan kiya hai, agar shuru kiya toh tum sehen nahi paaogay. Rishi - matlab.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.After eposide litile bit relex.Geep writting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
Tanuja - matlab ke tum ek number ke fattu ho jisi sirf badi badi baatein karni aati hai aur kuch nahi. Rishi thinks it would be better if she takes out her anger and he will talk to her after she cools down. Rishi - meri baat suno. Tanuja - kya suno ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho wagera, wagera. Tum mujhse koi pyar nahi karte, tum sirf apni mom se pyar karte ho, woh jaise nachati waise nachthe ho. Rishi - aisa nahi hai. Tanuja - aisa hi hai, pyar ka dursa naam vishwas hota hai jo tumne kabhi kiya hi nahi, jab dekho bas shaq karte ho. tumhe aag se bachaya, tumhare liye goli khayi, kyu, kyuki tumse pyar karti ho aur tumhe lagta hai main tumhare paiso se pyar karti ho. Rishi - aag aur goli toh tanu. Tanuja - tanu ka yaad hai par maine jo ganpati ke waqt tumhe aag se bachaya aur terrorist attack mein jo goli tumhe lagni wali thi woh khaya woh yaad nahi. Rishi - I'm sorry woh main bhool gaya. Tanuja - aise hi ek din mujhe bhi bhool jaaogay. ek kaam karo tum us chipkali ke paas jao, wohi tumhare liye teek hai, tumhari mom bhi kush rahege. Tanuja starts sneezing as her hair is still wet. Rishi - tum bhi na baccho ki tarah behave karti ho, kitna bolti ho. Shaant raho thodi deer. He makes her sit on bed and starts drying her hair.

Room service comes with soup that rishi had ordered. He brings the soup and asks tanuja to have it. Tanuja says she doesnt want. Rishi - chup chap pee lo tumha accha lagega, warna. Tanuja - warna kya karogey. Rishi - kiss karoga. He feeds her soup. She has it making face. Rishi - aage se agar mere baat nahi maani toh tumhari saza yehi hogi ke main tumhe kiss karoga. Tanuja - yeh bhi koi saza hai. Rishi - yehi toh main chahata hoon tum meri koi baat nahi mano. Rishi - bahar chale, tumhe accha lagega. Tanuja - mujhe kahin nahi jana, tumhe jana tum jao, meri chinta mat karo. Rishi - aise kaise chinta nahi karu, biwi ho meri. Tanuja gets up and goes to window and stands there. Rishi comes and back hugs her and says sorry. He makes her sit on the bed, holds her hand and says "sorry tumhe galat samajne ke liye, tum sahi keh rahi thi pyar toh karta hoon par vishwas karta. aaj ke baad aisa nahi hoga. tumse koi saval nahi puchuga, jab tumhe teek lage tab tum mujhe bata dena tum yeh sab kyu rahi ho. ab has bhi do, tum aise acchi nahi lagti."

Tanuja - toh kaisi acchi lagti hoo. Rishi - jab tum hasti ho, tumhari hasi bahut acchi hai, hamesha haste rehna. Smile plz. Tanuja smiles. Rishi - yeh hui na baat. Agar tum aise nazar rahogi toh hum beeji ki khwahish kaise pura karegay. Tanuja - kaunsi khwahish. Rishi - hamare bacche ko dekhne ki khwahish, main akela toh pura nahi kar sakta na. tumhe meri madath karni hogi. Tanuja - tumhe hamesha romance he soojtha hai. Rishi - kya karu meri biwi bahut unromantic hai, mujhse jab dekho door bagti hai, toh uske hissa ka romance bhi main hi karta hoon. Tanuja thinks in mind "yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha, itna gussa, lekin accha hi hai ab kabhi kisi chipkali ke taraf nahi dekhega." Rishi - kya soch rahi ho. Tanuja - kuch nahi.

Tanuja sitting still lost in her thoughts. Rishi thinks tanuja is feeling insecure regarding him and thats why getting angry. He thinks he will talk to her when her mood is good. Rishi again asks her "chalo long drive pe jate hai." Tanuja - kaha na mujhe kahin nahi jana. Rishi - accha teek hai, gussa mat karo. Rishi doesnt understand how to handle her. He thinks he needs to talk to her. He holds her hands and asks her wats the matter. She looks at him and tears starts falling. Rishi wipes her tears and asks wat happ. Tanuja - agar mein nahi aati aur agar woh chipkali apne plan mein khamiyab ho jati toh. mein toh tumhe kho dete. Rishi feels bad seeing so much pain of hers. He hugs and tells her - aise kuch nahi hota, main sirf tumhara hoon, koi hamare beech nahi aa sakta. Tears doesnt stop falling. Rishi consoles her and tells her his flirting with netra was only to make her jealous and nothing else. He only loves her and will never leave her.

After sometime, tanuja comes out of his embrace and wipes her eyes and tells him she is okay. To make things normal rishi says - chalo khana khate hai, bahut bookh lagi hai. Tanuja - haan, tum order karo, mein mooh dhokar aati hoon. Rishi orders food and calls UV and tells him how upset tanuja is. UV tells him everything will be fine and tells him to take tanuja out tomm and make her feel good and to tell her how much he loves her. Rishi tells he will and keeps the phone. Tanuja comes from bathroom and goes and stands near the window looking at the room. Rishi goes and back hugs her. they stand like that till intervened by room service.

Rishi gets the food. He makes tanuja sit and tells her today he will feed her. They have food. Rishi tells her he will change and come. Tanuja calls ahana and tells her everything. Ahana tells her its fine to get angry. It was her frustration and tells her to forget everything and take it as a new beginning with rishi. Tanuja feels better after talking to her and decides to take it as new beginning. Rishi comes and sits besides her. Tanuja keeps her head on his shoulder. Rishi keeps his hand around her and tells her how much he loves her. He tells her to forget everything. she nods. He then tells her lets sleep as it has been very tiring day. He makes her sleep on his shoulder and sleeps holding her. Both sleep thinking tomm will be a new day, a new beginning for them.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mindblowing yaar..

I feel so bad for tanuja for her insecurity and rishi awww...itnaa sweet and caring hubby..

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