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Posted: 8 years ago
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Imaginery scene after truth is revealed


The truth is revealed why tanuja did all this and that rajji was behind all this. It is also revealed that netra had come with a motive of destroying Bedis. All are happy except rano as again tanuja has emerged victorious. Rishi is happy but feels guilty of not trusting tanuja. Tanuja returns back the property in rajji's name and tells him she is happy being his daughter and will always remain one. Rajji then announces that everything will go as per previous and that he will be owner of the property and will make a will and till then they will look after the business and no one will have ownership.

Tanuja then tells sorry for being rude and that she had to do all this only to save their property. She then tells them she is no longer the malkin of the house and that she will leave the house. Rano gets happy hearing that. Rishi then asks her where she is going. Tanuja says she will go back to village and that she will anyways have to leave after their divorce, so she is going now. Rishi tells her she is still his wife and she is not going anywhere. Tanuja leaves from there. Rishi then tells his mom that he is not divorcing tanuja and if she blackmails him again, he will be leave the house or do something and he really means it and leaves from there.

Rishi goes to his room. He sees tanuja packing her bag. Rishi goes and holds her tanuja and asks wat she is doing. Tanuja says "tumhe dikh nahi raha." Rishi says "dikh raha hai isliye pooch raha ho, tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho." Tanuja says "yaha ruk kar kya karoon, tumhara phirse roka hote hue dekhu, tumhara aur tumhari mom ka toh yehi kaam hai aur tumhari mom ne toh ladki bhi pasand kar le hogi and usse ghar bhi le aayegi." Rishi says "aise kuch nahi hoga, woh netra ke saath roka sab natak tha tumse i love u bulane ka. I'm sorry abhi maaf bhi kar do yaar." Tanuja looks at him angrily and leaves from there. Rishi thinks yeh bina kuch bole hi chali gayi, rishi beta tu toh gaya.

Tanuja comes out and thinks "kuch toh karna padega yeh ma beta ka, warna ma bolegi beta roka karle aur beta kar lega, fattu kahin ka, waise toh bahut kehta hai mujhse pyar karta par ma ke samne sab bhol jata hai." Tanuja comes downstairs. She goes to john and tells him something. John comes to rishi and says "rishi sir, woh tanuja madam ne..." Rishi asks him "kya tanuja madam, bolega bhi kya hua." John says "woh bahut gusse main thi and puri bottle whiskey ki pee gayi, maine rokne ki koshish ki par woh nahi suni, sir aap jaldi chaliye."

Rishi comes down runningly "yeh ladki bhi na, mujhe pagal karke chodegi." He goes and takes the bottle from her hand and asks her "yeh kya kar rahi ho, tumne puri bottle khatam kardi." Tanuja says "tum bhi jab dukhi hote ho toh sharab pete ho, maine pee li toh kya galat kiya." She shouts "Mrs. Rano singh bedi." All come down hearing this. Rano comes and asks rishi "yeh kyu chilla rahi hai mera naam lekar hai." Tanuja answers "apne ladle se kya pooch rahi hai, mujhse poocheye. Aaj toh aap khus hogi na, abhi toh naya kaam mil gaya hai aapko, phirse koi ladki lekar aayegi aur rishi ka roka karegi phir shaadi bus yehi toh aata aapko. ek baat toh bataye aur kitni baar rishi ki shaadi karegi." Rano doesnt say anything. Tanuja then goes to rishi and asks him "tum aur kitni baar roka aur shaadi karogey." Tanuja stumbles, rishi holds her and they share an eyelock. Tanuja then breaks the eyelock and stands.

She asks "bolo na rishi aur kitni baar shaadi karogey." Rishi then tells "main kohi shaadi nahi kar raha and aur tumhe bhi kahi jaane nahi dooga." Tanuja laughs and asks "tum apni mom ke khilaf jayogey mr. fattu. tum toh wohi karte ho na jo woh kehti hai, woh bolegi khade raho toh khade rahogey, woh bolegi bait jao toh bait jahogey, woh bolegi tanuja ko chod do toh chod dogey, woh bolegi phirse shaadi karlo toh kar logey haina." Rishi then goes to his mom and says "mom main aakri baar keh raha hoon, main tanuja se bahut pyar karta hoon and uske saath hi rehna chahata hoon aur agar apne hume alag karne ki koshish ki ya mujhe blackmail kiya toh main yeh ghar chodke chala jaaoaga, is that clear."

He goes and holds tanuja's hand and says "tum chalo yaha se." Tanuja resists going. Beeji says everyone to go and sleep. Rishi then picks up tanuja and goes to his room. He comes to his room and makes her sit in the bed. He then holds her hand and says sorry that he hurt her and tells her to sleep. He makes her sleep and kisses her forehead and sits besides her holding her hand. After sometime he dozes off and in sleep besides her. Tanuja in sleep hugs him and sleeps hugging him. Morning rishi gets up and sees tanuja sleeping hugging him. He feels happy and kisses her forehead. He then thinks "isse sab yaad hoga isne kal raat ko kya kiya ya phir sab bhool chuki hogi. kahi phirse zidd na kare jaane ka." He gets up and goes to freshen.

Tanuja gets up and sees rishi is not in the room. Rishi comes from washroom and sees her awake, he says good morning. Tanuja asks him "main yaha kya kar rahi hoon, main toh bag pack kar rahi thi na, phir kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi." Rishi goes and tells her nothing happ and says he will get her lemon water and leaves from there. Tanuja smiles and gets up and goes to freshen up. Rishi comes back with lemon water. Tanuja comes back. Rishi gives her the lemon water. Tanuja asks "yeh kya hai." Rishi says "limbu pani, pee lo tumhara hangover utar jaayega." Tanuja looks at him and says "hangover." Rishi says "haan pee lo." He makes her drink. After drinking tanuja asks him anything happened yesterday. Rishi says nothing and tells her not to even think of leaving him and that she is not going anywhere and leaves from there. Tanuja becomes happy hearing this and thinks she will confess her love for him.

After sometime rishi comes back. Tanuja is sitting in front of the dressing table and getting ready. Rishi goes and sits on the bed and keeps looking at her. Tanuja then calls him, he goes near her. She gives him the sindoor and asks him to put. Rishi does so. She then gives him the mangalsutra. Rishi takes it and makes her wear. She puts her hand around his waist as he ties it. Rishi then keeps his hand on her shoulder and gestures wat she wants to say. Tanuja blushes and hugs him. Rishi also hugs her back. Tanuja then tells him she only loved him and will always love him and promises she will never leave him. She finally tells "i love u rishi." Rishi becomes very happy hearing it as he has been waiting for so long to hear it. He also tells her how much he loves her and hugs her very tightly.

After sometime both come out of embrace and are smiling looking at each other. Rishi then carress her face and tucks her hair behind her ear as he loves doing it and kisses her on the cheek. Tanuja also kisses him back. He holds her face and is about to kiss her when he hears manpreet calling "rishi bhai rishi bhai." Rishi says "yeh chota bhi na hamesha galat waqt par hi bulata hai." Both laugh and he says lets go and see what happ now.

In office, rishi thinks he has to do something for tanuja as she has done so much for him and his family. At night after dinner, everyone goes back to their room. Tanuja and ahana are in kitchen arranging everything. Manpreet comes and tells them john will do and that they should go and spend time with their husbands. Ahana asks "kya hua tumhe, bukar hai kya, tumhe kabse mera saath time spend karna hai." Manpreet says "very funny" and gestures he wants tanuja and rishi to spend time together. Ahana then says to tanuja lets go and rest now, rest john will do and they go from there.

Tanuja reaches her room and sees rishi standing near the window and looking at the moon. She goes and hugs him from behind and asks him wat he is talking with moon. Rishi turns back and says "kuch nahi, bas tumhara wait kar raha tha. Tumhe kuch dena hai." He goes to the cupboard and gets a box and gives it to her. she becomes excited and opens it and sees a beautiful saree. She tells him its very nice and tells thank you. Rishi then tells her "pehenke dikao." Tanuja asks "abhi." Rishi nods in yes. She goes to change. She comes back and rishi just keeps staring at her. She goes near him and asks him to tie the dori. Rishi ties and moves his fingers on her back. she feels ticklish and turns around.

Rishi then makes her sit on the bed and he sits down and asks her to keep her feet on his lap. He then takes payal from his pockets and makes her wear. He remembers how he broke hers last time and feels sad that he never trusted her. Tanuja understands wat he is thinking and asks him they must be expensive na. He makes her wear the other payal and says for him nothing is more expensive than her. She says "kya baat hai, bade romantic mood mein ho." Rishi smiles and gets up and sits besides her and asks if she liked, she says she loved them. she keeps her head on his shoulder and holds his hands.

Rishi takes her hand and kisses her fingers, then her her hand slowly moving up her arm. Tanuja sits straight as she gets affected by his touch. He then goes and kisses on her shoulder blade. Tanuja holds his shirt tightly. He then holds her face and kisses her. Tanuja also responds as both of them have been waiting for this since very long. He then runs his hand on her back and unties the dori. Tanuja hugs him tightly. He then makes her sleep on bed and starts kissing her all over. Tanuja also kisses him back and finally both have again become one after so long.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here goes few tanshi scenes


Its sunday, so everyone at home. Tanuja comes down and sees ahana running after chintu. She comes and holds chintu and asks why he is making her mom run. Ahana says "dekho na, keh raha hai aaj nahi nahaoga kyuki aaj sunday hai, itna saara kaam hai aur yeh mujhe pareshan kar raha hai." Tanuja says "tum jao and apna kaam karo, mein isse nehala dungi, chinta mat karo iska." Ahana asks "r u sure, yeh bahut tang karega tumhe." Tanuja says "haan, main isse sambhal lugee." Tanuja then tells chintu "chalo, aaj chachi tumhe nehalagi." She takes chintu along with her.

Rishi comes down searching for tanuja and unable to see her anywhere. He finally asks ahana. she tells him she is with chintu and is bathing him. Rishi goes to them. He reaches bathroom and sees chintu and tanuja playing with water and splashing water on each other. He takes his mobile and records their masti. Tanuja finally sees him and asks him wat he is doing here. He says nothing and keeps his mobile outside and goes inside. Chintu asks "chachu aap bhi nahaogay." Rishi looks at tanuja and says "haan agar tumhari chachi mujhe bhi nehalagey toh zaroor nahaoga." Tanuja blushes and splashes water on him. Rishi also joins them and they all start splashing water on each other.

Ahana comes to check on them and sees all three playing. She asks "yeh kya ho raha hai." Tanuja says "dekho na rishi humme pareshan kar raha hai." She picks chintu and brings him out and starts drying him and asks ahana for his clothes. Ahana brings his clothes and tells her she will make him wear and asks them to go and change as they are fully wet. Rishi and tanuja leave from there.

They meet rano on the way who asks them wat is happening, why they are wet. Rishi says they were bathing chintu. Rano asks whether they were bathing chintu or each other. She then tells rishi to go and change. They both leave for their room. Tanuja asks rishi to go and change else he will catch cold. Rishi tells her "tum bhi toh bheegi hui ho, tum pehle change karlo warna tumhe sardi lag jayegi." Tanuja tells him "tum pehle jao rishi." Rishi looks at her and says "ek kaam karte dono saath mein jaate hai, tum meri help karna aur mein tumhari help karoga." Saying this he holds her hand and takes her to the bathroom.

Wat happens in bathroom leaving to ur imagination
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Everyone is sitting in the hall. Tanuja comes down looking at rishi. Rishi also keeps staring at her. Netra sees this and gets angry. Tanuja keeps going towards rishi. Netra puts her leg forward and tanuja falls down and rishi sees netra doing this but before he could say anything, tanuja is on the floor. Tanuja also knows it is netra who has made her fall.

Rishi runs towards tanuja. Everyone gets worried. Rishi gives tanuja his hand and asks her if she is ok. She gets up holding onto him and rishi makes her sit on the sofa and tells MP to call the doctor. Tanuja tells no need to call the doctor and that she will apply ointment and will be okay. She tells rishi to go office and that she is fine. Rishi says "aise kaise office chala jao tumhe is halat mein chodkar, chalo pehle apne kamre mein, mein dawai laga deta hu." He makes her stand up but she is unable to walk. Rishi takes her in her arms and takes her to their room.

Rano tells netra "kya zaroorat thi tanuja ko girane ki, ab dekho yeh aur rishi ko toh bas bahana chahiye usse utane ka." Netra leaves from there in anger. Rishi keeps tanuja on the bed and goes and gets ointment. He comes and keeps her leg on his lap and tells netra made her fall. She tells him she knows and that she is fine and nothing happened to her. Rishi says "tum bhi bahut badi nautanki ho." He then starts massaging her leg without the cream. Tanuja gets affected by his touch and tells him to go to office. Rishi asks "kya hua, kuch kuch ho raha hai main nahi sumjuga." Saying this he winks at her. Tanuja removes her leg from his lap and tells him to go. Rishi tells her to take care of herself and leaves from there.

Rishi comes down talking on the phone. Netra sees him and thinks if she also falls down, then rishi will also take her to her room in his arms. She acts as if she has tripped and fallen down. Rishi tells john to help her and take her to her room and leaves from there hurringly. John gives his hand to her. Netra says in anger that she is fine and gets up and goes to her room.
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Rano tells rishi to take netra for dinner and beeji hears this. Rishi does not want to go but then thinks he will make tanuja jealous and she will do something and stop him from going. Beeji comes to tanuja and tells what she just heard and tells her do something. Tanuja tells beeji she is not going to do anything and tells she is tired of all this. If rishi wants to go with that chipkali, let him go, she will not do anything and tells beeji also not to do anything. If rishi doesnt want to go, he will only do something and not go.

Rishi comes to his room and sees tanuja playing with chintu. He goes to change and comes back and stands in front of mirror combing his hair. He sees tanuja not reacting and not asking anything. Chintu tells tanuja "chachi, kheer bana do, aap bahut accha kheer banati ho." Tanuja tells him "chalo, bana dete hai." She takes chintu along and leaves from here. Rishi thinks what has happened to her. MP comes to his room. Rishi tells him how tanuja ignored him completely and has gone to make kheer. He tells MP he doesnt want to go and he was getting ready only to make tanuja jealous and it doesnt look like she will stop him. MP tells him not to worry if tanuja wont do anything, he will do something and stop him from going.

Rishi comes down and sees tanuja making kheer. He goes to kitchen to drink water and hopes she will ask him where he is going but she completely ignores him. Netra comes all dressed up and tells rishi she is ready and tells him let go. Rishi looks at tanuja but she doesnt even look up. He then looks at MP who is standing on the stairs. Netra holds rishi's hand and takes him along. Beeji and ahana are sitting on the sofa and seeing and talking whether rishi will go or not. MP comes down stairs hurryingly and falls down and calls out rishi bhai. Rishi goes running towards him. All go to MP. Rano scolds him for being careless and falling. Rishi calls the doctor and helps him to stand up and takes him to his room.

Netra comes and asks rishi about dinner. Rishi shouts at her "tumhe dinner ke padi hai, yahan mera bhai gir gaya, main kahin nahi ja raha apne chote ko chodkar." Netra leaves from there in anger. Tanuja, ahana, and beeji look at each other and smile. Tanuja comes to them and tells beeji that i told u na if rishi doesnt want to go, he will do something and he took MP's help.

In MP's room, rishi helps him to sit down and tells him "tune baccha liye uss chipkali ke saath jane se, thank you chote." He asks him if he hurt himself, MP tells him little bit but he will be ok. Doctor comes and checks and tells he will give some painkillers and gives an ointment to massage and that he will be fine. Tanuja tells ahana to take care of him and she will get their dinner and leaves from there. Rishi goes behind her.

Tanuja comes and tells divya to serve dinner to others and she will take MP and ahana's dinner to their room. Rishi tells her he will also have his dinner with MP. Tanuja takes him aside and tells him "tumhe toh romance karna aata nahi, unki romance ke kyu band baja rahe ho, unhe saath mein rehne do." She goes and takes the tray to their room. Rishi goes behind her and asks her "mujhe romance karne nahi aata ya tumhe, jab dekho mujhse door bagati ho toh romance kahan se karo." Tanuja asks him "toh door jane dete kyu ho." Tanuja gives the food to them and takes chintu along and tells ahana not to worry about him and she will serve him and leaves from there. Rishi also tells them not to worry about chintu and goes behind tanuja.

Divya serves everyone dinner. Tanuja feeds chintu. Rishi comes and sits besides chintu. After few bites, chintu says enough, he doesnt want more. Tanuja starts manaoing him and tells him if he has to be strong he has to eat and tells him even kheer is there. She kisses him and tells him to eat as he is a good boy. Chintu eats. Rishi feels happy seeing them and goes to kiss chintu. Chintu moves behind and rishi ends up planting a kiss on tanuja's cheek. Beeji feels happy and asks chintu why he moved away. Chintu says "chachu ke dadi chubti hai par chachi kitni soft soft hai." Rishi says "woh toh hai" and tells chintu he will shave tomm and then kissi him. Netra and rano look at him angrily. Chintu then tells tanuja he will have kheer. Tanuja then feeds him kheer.

After feeding him, tanuja gets up to leave. Beeji tells her to have dinner. Tanuja says she is not hungry and will have later. Rishi thinks she is upset coz of him and not having dinner. Rishi too gets up. Tanuja asks him "tum kyu ut gayi, tumhara toh khana bhi pura nahi hua." Rishi tells her "tum nahi khaogey toh main bhi nahi khaoga." Tanuja tells him 'yeh kya bachpana hai, mujhe sach mein bhook nahi hai, tum khao." Rishi holds her hand and makes her sit and serves her and tells her "chup chap khalo warna jabardasti khiloaga." All smile seeing their love. Netra asks him why he is forcing her if she doesnt want to eat. Rishi asks her to stay away from their personal matter and not to interfere. Tanuja feels happy and tells rishi she will have little bit. All the praise the kheer made by her. Netra leaves from there after she is done.

Tanuja gets up and goes to kitchen after done with dinner. Ahana also comes down with the tray. Rishi goes to MP. Ahana tells tanuja "rishi ko rokne ke chakar mein sach mein lag lagi MP kho. Yeh dono lafanter kabhi nahi sudhregay, aisa kaam hi kyu karte hai." Tanuja also tells her what happ in dining table. They tell john to clean the dining table and leave from there. They go to MP's room and see rishi talking with MP. Seeing them, they stop. Chintu also comes. Tanuja asks chintu to sleep with her as MP is hurt. Chintu agrees and tells her to tell him stories. Ahana changes his clothes and tanuja takes him along. Rishi also tells ahana to take care of MP and leaves.


Rishi goes to change and comes back and sees tanuja telling chintu stories. He comes and sleeps besides chintu. Chintu tells him "chachu aap bhi kahani suno, chachi bahut acchi kahani suna rahe hai." Rishi tells him "haan beta wohi sunne aaya hu." After sometime, rishi sees both of them have slept. He puts blanket on them and sleeps besides chintu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Imaginery scene based on precap of tanshi dinner

Tanuja confesses her love to rishi. She says what he wants to hear "i love u rishi." Tanuja says she always and will only love rishi all her life and he is her life and will do anything for him. Rishi holds her hand and kisses it and says he always knew she loves him but wanted to hear from her and hugs her. Tanuja also hugs him back and says sorry for hurting him. Netra comes there and sees them hugging and leaves from there in anger. On the way, she meets beeji who asks her why she is angry. Netra says nothing. Beeji says if she tries to come between tanshi, she wont leave her and asks her to stay away from rishi.

MP comes and tells beeji about the dinner date. Beeji becomes very excited and says lets go and see wat is happening. MP, beeji go upstairs. UV also joins them. Ahana sees them going and thinks wat these ppl are up to and she also goes behind them. They all reach terrace and see tanshi hugging. All become very happy. Tanshi come out of embrace and rishi kisses her on forehead. He holds her face and is about to kiss her when she keeps her finger on his mouth and says she is feeling like someone is watching them. All hide except beeji who excitedly keeps watching them. Rishi looks around and sees beeji and he says to tanuja she is right, beeji is there. He then tells her he is feeling hungry and says lets eat. Both sit down and eat. MP, UV, ahana take beeji from there.

Beeji tells to MP and UV "yeh tumhara bhai bilkul pagal hai, itni khubsurat biwi samne hai and isse khane ki padi hai, bhukad kahi ka, kam se kam tanuja ko kiss hi kar leta." They tell beeji let them enjoy themselves as after so long they are together and take her to her room. After having dinner, both come down and see MP, ahana, and UV waiting for them. They start teasing them. Rishi starts blushing. Tanuja pulls MP and tells him to make sure that rishi comes to their room after sometime and she runs from there. Ahana says "sharma gayi" and she also leaves from there.

MP and UV ask him how was the dinner. Rishi blushes and then tells them tanuja has finally confessed her feelings. MP and UV start pulling his leg and tell him that now he will forget them. Rishi says "aisa kuch nahi hai." MP says "bhai aap bhool gaye kaise tanuja ne meri, aapki, mom ki insult ki malkin banke." They keep on instigating him against tanuja. Rishi finally says "is puri malkin to aadi malkin bana dunga and ghar se nikal dunga agar isne phirse aisa kuch kiya toh. main abhi jakar kehta hoon usse ke agar usne meri family ke insult ke toh main usse chod dunga." Rishi is about leave when they stop him and tell him they were just pulling his leg and that tanuja really loves him and to support her and trust her as she wont do anything against him or the family. Rishi hits them and leaves from there.

Rishi reaches his room happy and opens the door and sees the room lit with candles everywhere. He then hears tanuja's voice asking him to lock the door. He locks and comes inside and sees tanuja coming out of the curtains in a saree. He just keeps staring at her. Tanuja comes near him and asks him "waise hi lag rahi hoon na jaise tum chaahate the, bhindi, jumkhe, aur..." Rishi just nods and asks "aur..." Tanuja then brings her hand up and says aur and opens it. It has mangalsutra. Rishi takes it and makes her wear it. She tell opens her other hand and it has sindoor. He puts sindoor on her. Tanuja tells him she wants to be the way he likes her, his simple tanuja like before.

Rishi cups her face and hugs her. He then kisses her on her cheeks and says "i love u." Tanuja also tells him "i love u too" and kisses him. Rishi then holds her face and kisses her. Tanuja also responds with equal passion and holds him tight as she doesnt want to be away from him even for a second. Both come out of kiss to breath some air and go and sit on the bed. Rishi keeps his head on her lap and holds her hand and kisses it and tells her not to ever leave him as he cant live without her. She kisses him on the forehead and says she will never leave him and that even death cant do them apart.

He gets up and hugs her. He then kisses her on shoulder and then in the nape of the neck. He then makes her sleep and kisses her all over. she also kisses him back and finally they become one once again.

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