New FF-KTPK (a love journey) Part 24 updated page 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
So good as always.wow You have done miracle by making raka positive.
I personaly like to see our jealous rishi (which we use to see in preleep .Postleep we didn't get jealous rishi 😭 only jealous tanuja )
At least through ur Ff we can get.
Update soon . Waiting to see jalo rishi . Thanks for pm
Edited by ayra1210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
🤣 rocking update you did a big miracle raka positive well done 👍🏼 Wao jalo tanshi and especially eagerly want to see jalo rishi kash drama mein bhi aisa kuch hota ho jalo rishi look really cute 😳 update soon and thanks for PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Nice...Mind blowing... Waiting for jealous tanshi...Tks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Ayu agla part kab ayega 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Part-11
Next morning tanu wakes up nd goes to house temple. She sings beautifully.
OM JAI JAGDISH HARE...
All wake up nd come out of their rooms one by one.
Manpreet:Wow what a voice
UV:I m feeling so calm
Neha:So touchy voice
Ahana;Tanu dii daily does it. In fact she loves singing
Rishi smiles
Malaika:I m impressed
Rano:One day she will daily sing in thee morning once she becomes my bahu

Tanu gives aarti to everybody. She goes to give it to rishi
T:What did u ask??
R:you...
T:What??
R:Ur hapiness
Tanu smiles nd eyes him lovingly:Nothing for urself??
R:Ur happiness is mine
Tanu smiles broadly nd wants to hug him tight
Rishi leaves smilingly

Later after breakfast rishi nd mk r having chit chat. Both r talking by giving high fives to each other nd mk even leans her head on his shoulder nd tanu is getting furious as she watches it from balcony.
Just then a guy enters
Guy:Hii everyone. I wanna meet tanu nd ahana
Rishi:Who r u?
Rishi then sees tanu running towards him nd she hugs the guy.
Rishi is shocked nd clutches his fist in anger.
Tanu:Thnk god u came. I was waiting for so long

The guy is Aditya
(Guyss Aditya is played by Naman shaw as he has worked with Kratika before)
Adi:I missed u so much
Tanu:Me too. Bt now u r here so i m gonna give u a lot of time just like before
Adi: And yeah priyanka...
Before adi could complete his sentence tanu puts her feet on his nd he shouts.

Rishi nd Mk r boggled. Tanu smiles nd drags him in. All greet adi nd rano asks tanu to show him his room
Rishi:Ahan!!! who is he??
Ahana:Aditya? Ohh he is dii's best frnd just like mk is urs. He nd dii r very close to each other.
Rishi:Nonsense. Three people in a girl's life.First her cheap fiance,Second her best frnd nd third her true lover... All want u bt u r mine tanu

Tanu says sorry to adi for hitting him
Adi: its ok bt why didn't u let me take priyanka's name?
Tanu:bcoz i wanna make rishi jealous of u... as he makes me jealous of mk nd i want him to realise this bcoz i think i feel smthng for him nd he feels too too bt neither he says nor me so we both are in dilemma... tanu says in one breath
Adi:relax relax. i got it. dnt worry he will surely express his feelings bt why r u doing this u r engaged
Tanu: U know how pawan is. Infact he reacted furiously at our stay in he house. nd al know here too the i m not happy with this marriage so once bauji comes i will talk to him about this.
Adi:I m happy for u. Tanu leaves

Its night time
Tanu is in her room.
Rishi comes from behind nd twirls her hand nd pulls her towards him nd eyes her angrily
T:What r u doing??
R:Listen sherni its not good
T:What is not good??
R:U hugged aditya. U r talking to him cont since his arrival as if u both r alone in this wprld
T:Jealous???
R:Jealous my foot..
Suddenly rishi realises that he is being counter questioned as once he asked the same jealousy question to tanu

R:Why... why would i be jealous??
T:Then why r u acting like this?? Adi is my best frnd like mk is urs
R:Adi??
T:Yeah adi means aditya
R:Can't u take his proper name?
Tanu smiles: Actually i call him adi by love just like some people call me sherni by love
Rishi is left speechless

Next Epi- Continuation of jealousy😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
lovely update...waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Too good update 🤣 love it kash cvs bhi drama mein kuch aisa jealousy track laye eagerly want to see jalo rishi 😳 cvs to sirf bachari tanuja ko hi jealous krty rhty hai update sooner eagerly waiting for next part and thanks for PM.
Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
No doubt again wonderful.so finally we get our jalu rishi 😉 .Tanshi are furiouing in jealousy but not confansing their love.
Update soon.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
aayu...i literally have no words... 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Tu mere ff ka bhi sapna poora karegi rishi ko jealous karke 😆please continue😆

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