New FF-KTPK (a love journey) Part 24 updated page 24 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanx a lot for the PM.Sorry for being late but ur story is just mindblowing. Tanshi presented in a different angle.Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-5
Rishi is angry to see a man hugging tanu and he is PAWAN.
Tanu: where were u?? He gives a bouquet to her nd saya that it takes time to buy a beautiful bouquet for a beautiful girl. She takes the flowers nd both talk.
Rishi:who d hell he is??
Ahana:he is pawan tanu dii's fiance
Rishi is shocked to know that tanu is engaged. He breaks glaas in anger nd hurts himself.
Ahana is shocked and shouts for manu to come. Tanu looks at rishi nd is taken aback nd thinks wts this new drama.

Pawan:wts happening??
Tanu:nothing that stupid is hurt.
P:u know him
T:yeah!! Nd she narrates whole story to him nd pawan is angry.
P: I'll not spare him. He heads to go bt tanu stops him.
T:its ok. I don't want anything happen to u nd he smiles
Ahana dresses rishi's wound. Rishi is furious.
R: i want every single detail about this man.
Ahana is scared nd goes from there.

Neha goes to tanu nd ahana nd befriends with them.
Pawan heads to leave after bidding bye to them. Rishi follows him. Rishi hits him from d back. Pawan faces him.
P:wts d problem wid u??
R: u r my problem!!
P:wt do u mean??
R:break ur alliance with tanu i like her nd is RSB likes something he gets it by hook or by crook.
P:shut up!! I love her. R:really?? P:yess
R:so can u give ur life for her?? P:wt nonsense??
Rishi takes out a knife nd pawan is scares to death.
P:Hey wts this?? This is against d lawi will go to police. R:go. Pawan runs from there
Rishi:it means now tanu is mine. Ohh now i should place this knife back in canteen. He smiles.

Tanu nd ahana heads to leave after bidding bye to neha. They walk on road talking nd laughing. A car stops by them. Rishi opens d window nd asks them to sit. Tanu refuses. Manu,uv nd neha insists as its lonely. Ahana requests tanu nd tanu leaves from there angrily nd ahana looks at them.
Manu:why this girl is always angry??
Ahana:talk with respect she is my sis.

Rishi sees a car coming towards tanu nd runs to save her. He jumps on her nd both roll to a side. Tanu's head is lying on rishi's chest.Tanu instantly jerks her head upwards nd her hair flatters in d air. Rishi was mesmerized on seeing her.
All r shocked. Both stands up nd tanu is badly scolded.
Rishi:r u out of ur mind. U have no sense idiot. I ask u to come bt no u r an egoistic. Tanu is silently listens everything.
Ahana thinks:i dnt believe that someone made my dii silent... its miracle

Rishi holds tanu's hand nd makes her sit forcefully in d car nd drops her home. Tanu gives him a look when he leaves.

Tanu goes inside nd ahana tells d whole story to her mom.
Maa:beta u should say thnx to him. He is nice. He really likes u
Tanu:maa why do u forget that i m engaged??
Maa:oh tanu!! I don't like him. I dnt know what u nd ur papa see in him.
Tanu:maa he is good natured nd that's enough for me.
Maa:me nd ahana dnt like him. Learn something from us.
Ahana:lets go nd change. U will have to apologize tomorrow.
Tanu reminisce an incident.

Next Epi- TanShi friendship.
Edited by mommyangel55 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
mindblowing...awesome...waiting for next episode tanshi friendship...please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow super .Rishi become so jalo 🤣 and love the passion.
Tanshi become freinds. ā¤ļø waiting for update . Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting for tanshi friendship...loved the update... waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update rishi's passionate love for tanu and love jalu rishi wao tanshi friendship eagerly waiting for next update .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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haha pawan yha bi .. 😃 ...Weldon rishi...tanshi friendship omg wait ni ho rha
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome waiting for tanshi friendship 😃😃😊 update soonšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@mommyangel55 ! WOW Read the whole updates upto the recent one and really loved and enjoyed it a lot! Sorry for being late tho.. Anyway a very awesome and refreshing story!šŸ‘ā­ļø And, thank you so much for the PM😳
Eagerly waiting for the next part! Hope you'll update it soon ;))
Edited by _Avi_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-6
Tanu reminisces an incident where someone was trying to tease her when she was on a walk with pawan.She tries to shoo them and the guy is about to hit pawan but he runs and tanu screams at him to come back. A man comes wearing a handkerchief on his mouth and saving her. Tanu saw the bracelet of man but couldn't thank him. Fb ends.

Tanu: a girl wants her husband to be brave, protective and loving but pawan is coward and he can't protect even himself then how will he look after me.If he loves me then he can die for me bt he always leaves me to die.There is so much difference in pawan nd that guy who helped me being an unknown nd rishi is just like that guy.
Maa: correct thought
Ahana: u should think about this relation again. i know u r not happy with this alliance and u r doing it for papa's and pawan's happiness bt talk to papa. he cares about our hapiness nd will listen to u.. Tanu thinks.

Rishi goes to his room nd removes a cloth from a painting. It was TANU'S painting.
Rishi:i can't forget d day when i first saw u. u were in danger so scared nd innocent face it was, i fell for u that day. now u r always in front of and i can't afford to let ur life be spoiled. i tested that pawan he is not of ur type. i dnt know why i m doing it for u. wt feelings i have for u bt whenever i see u i can't take my eyes from u. when u slapped me i wanted to take revenge bt couldn't why?? u r a magician tanu nd i dnt wanna get out of this magic.

It is revealed that the guy who saved tanu from that goon when she was with pawan in fb was RISHI

Next day tanu spots rishi and goes to him
T:Rishi!!
R:me ??
T:yes
R:yeah!!
T:thnk u nd sorry
R:what??
Tanu repeats
R:i can't hear u
Tanu again says sorry nd thnk u
R:oh my god!! am i dreaming?? u r saying sorry nd thnk u to me??bt whyy??
T:thnk u for saving my life nd sorry for misbehaving with u
R: i won't let anything happen u to ever
Tanu looks at him in surprise
R: i will forgive on one condition
T:what??
Rishi extends his hand: i want ur friendship
Tanu looks at ahana who nods in yes nd they shake hands nd she smiles
R:i wnt let that pawan ruin ur life i know he is not right for u

FEW DAYS PASS
all is going well.neha has become close frnd os tanu nd ahana.tanu nd rishi r also now good frnds.
tanu goes to locker room. there r thunders of lighting.heavy rain starts.ahana searches for tanu but tanu gets stuck inside locker room as door gets jammed.ahana goes to rishi who calls out to tanu. rishi sees weather worsening nd asks manu nd uv to help all d students out of college and take ahana nd neha to his home nd he will look for tanu. ahana cries and rishi assures het that she will bring tanu.u go to home nd inform ur parents

Tanu is screaming for help nd gets afraid nd sits in corner. she cries bitterly.
a hard thunder sound cracks nd she screams RISHI!!!

just then rishi breaks d door nd she is stunned.

Next Epi-TanShi cute moment in locker nd meeting with rano

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