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PART 8


At night rishi was not able to sleep due of excited to see tanu ... he was try clothes to select which one he will wear next day ... with light on n noise in room maanpreet could not able to sleep n wake up ... on seeing rishi in front of mirror with shirt ... he check the time n glare as it was only two o'clock in the midnight .


M : ruffle his hair with doing his face " Bhai what are you doing at this time ? " .


R " Chotey im selecting which shirt i should wear tomorrow , you sleep " .


M " Bhai its midnight n with your noise n light how i can sleep , please bhai sleep na " .


R " Chotey see this one is good na " saying he put the shirt in front of him on showing maanpreet with his smile .


M " Bhai there is time tomorrow i promise to select one right now i wont be able to know i want to sleep " .


R " Ok if you say so i will try to sleep but if i cant then i cant do any thing for you " he lay on this side .


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Tanu was rolling on bed due of the nightmare she was seeing ... actually its the flash of girl n boy on the bridge which she was seeing ... on seeing how girl fall in water n was drowning n was having suffocate due of drowning ... she feel same suffocate as she was being drowning in that river until she found the bead body on mud soil ... she wake up she was sweating ... ahana wake up n saw her state n offer her water n try to comfort her she was tense on seeing her ... she ask her what happen why she sweating ... tanu hug her due of scared n suffocate she was having ... after being relax she narrate what she dream n how she was feeling suffocated ... ahana make her relax n on saying its just a nightmare but the quest is why she felt drowning what connection it can be with her n why she has a mark birth of alphabet which no one could read it ... tanu get confused n think it all babaji game n then both sleep again .


Next day rishi wear a blue thirt n was being hurry to go there ... tanu who wear a blue salwar kaweez let her hair loose ... she too is happy to met rishi ... in the evening pawan parents pawan n maanshi arrive at neha place ... pawan n his parents enter rishi told them he will park car ... maanpreet was so excited on seeing girls there who look nice ... he start his flirting as soon he found one ... while flirting with girl he encounter with ahana n both saw other one n fume glaring on saying tum pointing finger to over one with furious look ... chocolate was in ahana hand .

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Rishi who arrive to maanpreet with full swing to met tanu but on seeing ahana angry look he stop to protect his bro ... he ask maanpreet slowly to not give her reply .. maanpreet did not accept to let her go .
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M " Bhai dont worry i will handle this moti " .

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Ahana fume more as he said moti to her " Oye kisko moti kaha ? Lafantar ho tum , mere piche bhi yahan ageye , tum jaise ladko ko mein janti hoon kaise tik karna na " showing her glare look .


M " Oh haan moti to choti baat hai tum ko bais kehna chahiye , jo kahti rehti ho , kane ke siweh janti kya ho moti bais " he laugh .


A " Arey tumne deka apne aap ko , kitna sukre ho , jaise ke kabse kuch nahi kaya , sukre ho tum , lafantar bhi ho , agar mujhse panga liya to mera dai kilo ka haat kafi hai samje , lafantar " showing her big eyes .

Rishi who try to stop both but could not as both was not listening to him there argument cont tu tu mein mien until he could not not bear it n shout chup ... both stop n look at him .


R " Chotey , hum mehman hai yahan , aur ise ladne se kuch bhi nahi hoga " he murmuring slowly now to maan ''Yeh na usski behen hai chup ho ja aur chal chotey " .


A " Kuch siko apne bhai se , bare aye ladki ko cherne lafantar kahika " .


M " Oye kabhi deka hai kudko aine mein bais , tumko kaun cherega han moti kahiki " .

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Tanu reach there on seeing both urging n saw rishi who was standing there could not talk she start with him now .


T " What are you doing here standing n watch them , cant you stop them "


Rishi was lost on seeing her ... how she was looking stunning so pretty ... he could not ans her only gazing her in giggle smile .


Tanu turn ahana to her n murmuring " Bas kar ye mehman hai aur woh hai " .


Ahana who was confused on her di " Di you know this lafantar is following me from panjab airport n now he reach here too " murmuring to tanu .


M " Oh hello panjub , mumbai , mall is for your father han , that why no one should be seen when you are there han , aur ek aur baat mein bhi kehsakta hoon tum mere piche arehi hoo haan , bari aye " .


R " Chotey bas karo mafi mang lo aur chalo andar " showing him his sorry face n sign toward tanu ... which maanpreet realize both are sis n just as he was about to say sorry .


Ahana taunts him " Han mehman ho maafi to tum hi ko hi mangna parega " with attitude style .


Maanpreet then decide to not say sorry " Now i wont say it until you wont say it , its your duty to serve guest right now you will say sorry not me " saying so he leave there with attitude look .

Ahana fume in rage n decide to make him say sorry n leave there leaving tanshi alone ... after they left tanshi laugh on ahman scene both say sorry at same time for there bro n sis act ... tanu try to go ... rishi stop her ...

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R " HI will you be friend with me ? " saying he forward his hand to her .


T : like his act but decide to do some attitude " Mujhse dosti karna asan nahi hai , sochugi dehkoogi kal barso kuch kahoon gi " she was leaving with smile .


Rishi hold her duppata " Attitude han , i like it , itna bhi der mat lena kahi koi aur iss natij se dosti na karne " .


Tanu just pull her stole n show him a smile n leave there ... rishi now become more determined to make her accept his friendship .


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PART 9


Tanu wanted to see what can rishi do to make her agree to be friend ... rishi who roam around her to get her attention ... on seeing his behavior ahana fume on him ... ahana come there n pat his shoulder n ask what his doing on raising her eye borrows ... rishi dont wanted to have argument with her just show her tray n pick it there n start to serve guest .


Bani who saw it she went to him n ask what his doing he's a guest not worker ... he just said from now dont think him as guest but a family member as he's pawan bro n he like to do work saying so he look at tanu ... bani was impress with him n leave there .


Ahana go to rishi look at him " Hmm so you want to serve right ? Then you can flirt with girls right that your work na flirting with girl like your bro ? " .


R " Well if i was the first type rishi then i would surely agree with you but not any more , as for now i have only one person whom i want to win , means i want to reach till her heart got it " he was staring tanu .


A " You are the one whom di was saying resto wala rishi , but let me mind you before you win her heart you should win mine first over wise forget her got that " .


R " Oh hello miss moti , i meant sali , why your heart han " .


A " If i dont give my concern di wont accept you got that as she is more naive in this matter , you guys know only to give pain that all , play with girl emo then leave her alone " saying so she was with moist eyes n leave from there .


Rishi could not understand her talk but know she was saying right but since he met tanu he did not felt to look at other girl than her .


Malaika neha cousin reach there she is modern type girl she like rish boy n most who live abroad she is a beautiful girl ... while she was walking looking around n was about to slip ... rishi grape her n she was lost on rishi look ... rishi make her stand properly n ask if she is ok ... she just hold rishi hand n said yes ... she introduce herself ... she was wearing a short gown enough to attract boy .


Rishi did not get attract toward her look attire also he just make an excuse n leave ... malaika met bani n others n also ask about handsome rishi ... after get all info she decide to get him for her by hook or by crook ... maanpreet saw her n get attract due her look n decide to be friend with her ... he goes to her with a tray n want to impress girls like bhai as every one was praising rishi ... he goes to malaika n present himself ... she did not show him any interest n leave .


While having diner ... when ever rishi try to get something ... malaika touch it first n offer him only to touch his finger ... rishi feel awkward which was clearly seen by others ... maanpreet too ask from malaika to pass things which she did but did not let him to touch her hand ...


Later after diner all gathers in hall youngters said lets play game ... they all agree rishi was just staring tanu to get her glance ... some time they do share eyes contact n they look away later ... ahana said let play panja game ... maanpreet laugh at her on saying she know only fight things like boy ... both was about to argue when rishi hold maanpreet ... pawan neha said lets play passing the parcel n whom music will stop he will have to sing or say something like praising any one there n who wont he will be out ... they all agree n make arrangement to start they sat round tanshi was opposite to over one like ahamaan .


Next to rishi malaika sat there she was happy to beside rishi ... maanpreet who was not as he wanted to sit next to her ... pawan neha sit close ... they start the game play music goes on n they pass the cushion ... rishi eyes was just on tanu ... first it stop on pawan father n he said he cant n out from play ... it cont malaika touch rishi hand n he jerk n leave it ... second stop was on bani she sing on WADA KARlE SAJNA TERE BIN MEIN NA RAHU MERE BIN TUNA RAHEIN HOGE JUDA she point at guljeet ... he reply YEH WADA RAHA ... all shout hooo ... tanshi look at other one while bani n guljeet was singing .

Its cont n stop on some else n cont stop on pawan he stand n when in the middle take neha with him to dance he sing on AAJ KAL TERE MERE PYAAR KE CHARCHE HAAR ZABAN PAR neha reply ACHA pawan SAB KO MALUM HAI AUR KABAR HOGAYI ...neha reply TO KYA both dance then they sit after all claps ... its cont again another one out n it cont until it stop on guljeet now .


He sing on AI MERE JOHRAJAZI TUMHEIN MALUM NAHIN TUM ABI TAK HAI HANSI AUR MEIN JAWA TUJPE KURBA MERI JAAN MERI JAAN ... all shout yeee ... guljeet look at bani who blush hide her face ... it cont then n stop on mother pawan she said she wont sing n leave they cont n stop on neha .

Neha sing she pull pawan with her both dance ... rishi take guitar n play it while neha will sing KASAM KI KASAM HAI KASAM SE HUM KO PYAAR HAI SIRF TUMSE AB YEH PYAAR NA HOGA PHIR HUM SE both was dancing n others was just watching them n claps for them .


Its cont n stop on maanpreet ... rishi encourage him on saying show them what bedi's are ... after rishi talk maanpreet stand up open his tshirt n start to dance in the middle n pull malaika to him ... BACHNA AE HASEENO LOO MEIN AA GAYA HUSN KA ASHIQ HUSN KA DUSHMAN APNI ADA HAI YARO SE JUDA HEHO he pull malaika to him n dance on touching her skin n pull her close to him ... all claps except ahana who felt its disgusting n did a glare look to him .


Its cont then stop on malaika who go in middle n start a sensual dance n sing she pull rishi to her n start to sing on TANHA TANHA YAHAN PE JINA KYA BAT HAI KISIKO PYAAR DE DE KISI KA PYAAR LE LE while dancing she touch rishi in a sensual touch n caress him pull him close to her ...


Rishi was in a awkward look n was watching tanu on seeing how she was not happy n was controlling her anger her jealousy on crushing her stole he leave malaika n sit ... on seeing him sit tanu was relax ... which rishi like it .


The game cont turning pawan mother , bani guljeet n malaika was out now there was hawan , tanshi ahaman who cont the game ... it stop on ahana she said she wont sing ... tanu ask her to try ... maanpreet taunt her " How can she sing , she can only yell n shout but no singing " he look at her with raising his eye borrows .


With maanpreet taunts ahana sing on SHEESHA HO YA DIL HO AGIR TOT JATA HAI TOT JATA HAI she become emo with teary eyes ... maanpreet tease her on saying " Wow i got my ans why you are like this " he was being in prank n laughing ... ahana leave with sad n teary eyes ... rishi glare at maanpreet for his act ... tanu was about to go but maanpreet realize his mistake n sign her to relax he will go n leave .


Tanu was looking tense for ahana but rishi sign relax to her n she try to cont the game .


Ahana was upset wipe her tears ... maan reach there on seeing her sitting on bench he join her n sit beside her ... he touch her shoulder with a sorry face n said sorry to her on holding his ears .


Ahana did not look at him n stand to go ... he hold her hand " Im really sorry ahana , i was just kidding , i never knew if it will hurt you , please believe me " try to pacify her .

A : remove his grip on her hand face him " We cant do prank every time , think before you talk next time , please go n leave me alone " .


Maanpreet refused to go until she wont smile or forgive him , both start again there tu tu mein mein when she was about to slip ... he hold her both get an intense eye lock for at least 5 mins both was lost in other one eyes ... there trance broke with the noise from the game n the compose themselves on saying sorry ... she thx him n both felt awkward n leave there n join the game again .

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Game was cont now rishi turn n he pick three roses n give to the three girls ahana , neha n tanu as he reach to tanu n offer her rose he sing on KOI MIL GAYA MERA DIL GAYA KIYA BATA HOON YARA MEIN TO HIL GAYA MIL HI GAYA ... he was only staring tanu while singing ... game cont last was tanu turn ...

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She sing on JAANE DIL MEIN KABSE HAI TUM JABSE MEIN HU TAB SE HAI TU MUJHE KO MERE RAB KI KASAM YARA RAB SE PEHLE HAI TU ... she was hiding her glance toward rishi .


THAT IT GUYS ENJOY IT 😃

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Edited by --HANISA-- - 8 years ago
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Wao what a rocking update dear me waiting for it too much loved this it's just awesome and yelo again that mk in villain avatar come me sub sy zayada love ahman cute fight and tanshi cute chit chat or rishi song is so awesome "hai kasam ki kasam hai kasam sy humko pyar hai sirf tum sy "update soon
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Complete the part soon.Wating for it
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HI GUYS ADD PART 8 & 9
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Amazing part!!
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Wow love both update.Rishi was trying to be tanu's friend.Milika is so cheep(not mor than netra).Rishi not give her any bhaw.Ahaman seen was so good.Please continue.Update soon.Thanks for pm.
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Lovely update dear
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Waao wonderful update. Plss continue soon. The songs arereally wonderfully chosen.

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