TanShi Ss ' Kismat Connection ' Updt Part 9 Pg 43 Add 23 /6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow new one hansa it look superb please start it
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interesting, will wait for more 😊
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Originally posted by: mena_k

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please carry on... 😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
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Hi guys thx for lots of respond which i get im glad n make me to do part 1 fast too 😃.


Here we go 😉


Kismat Connection






Part 1



It begins its night in America after 20 years old .



Rishi room


Rishi was sleeping , he was sweating , n was agitating on bed , he was seeing a shade flash image like two kids a girl slip from a boy hand n fall in the river on calling his name " Rishi " , due of that voice he wakes up , n try to recall the faces but in vain , he wonders why he got this dream , n he got it most during his birthday what connection it has with him , he dont know , after some time he fall slept again .



Next day maanpreet wakes up rishi with birthday music tune , he wakes up , on hearing the music n both bros hugs , with smile on faces .



" Many happy return of the day bhai , you turn 30 today " ; Maanpreet wish him .



" Thx chotey , i know you will be first like always " ; Rishi reply him .



" We always let your chotey wish you first , happy birth day Rishi " ; from the door their parents n beeji reply him .



He go to them hug them for wishing him , Maanpreet tease him on saying " Bhai you become old now 30 years , bhai you should be retired now " ; with his naughy smile .



Rishi run after him to hit him as he told him he turn old , both throw pillows on each ever , the elders smile on seeing their love , they leave them , after Raj told them for party at night on his birth day .



Rano was little sad n tense after they leave the boys , beeji n Raj notice it n knew the reason even that Raj ask her " Rano why you are thinking about it ? " .


" Today my son turn 30 n today date 19 years ago we would lost him , how can i forget it , it now where his life will start with problem dont you remember it ? " ; she was worried .



" Dont worry Rano , i know i remember every things , i know we should make him married soon , but we cant force him too , you know how he is right ? " ; raj reply her n console her .



" Raj we cant we cant take lt lightly too , we should think on it ok " ; beeji talk to Raj .



At night in party there was lots of beautiful girls , whom their parents want to settle their daughter , they were all wel known person .



Rishi n Maanpreet seen lots of beauties they were little surprise how come so hot sexy chicks can be there , both bro was happy n start their flirting touching the girls , girls was liking it as they wanted to with most rich bachelor guy .



Rano go to both , she pull them in a corner n ask them " Tum dono ko inmein se kisko pasan hai ? " .



" Mum sab bohot hot sexy hai , magar humein aisi sawteli mum nahin chahiyein , woh sab hamare ki umar hai , dad par nahin match hoga " ; both bros ans on did high five to each ever with laugh .



Beeji pull their ears n reply " Becharmo apne dad ko bhi nahin chorte tum do ? yeh ladkien to tum hare hai Rishi putar , tum inmein se ek chunlo shaadi ke liye simple , sab tumhare ki pasan ke hai , kiya kehte ho hot sexy right ? " .



On hearing this Rishi who was drinking juice spit out , Maanpreet laugh on hearing beeji talk n he say " Bhai apko beeji phasi dena chati hai , isiliye yeh sab ladkian yahan hai aur mum chup wow , inlogo ne apko halal karna chahta hai " .



" Mum ! beeji ! mujhe shadi nahin karna , na abhi na khabi bhi , aap logo ko kyun mere piche pare ho shaadi ki ? , mein na tho shaadi mein na to pyaar mein vishwas karta hoon , tho kyun kar loon , mein aise hi tik hoon kyun chotey ? " ; Rishi reply them in his antic style .



" Aur mum beeji ! bhai ke dictionary mein , sirf maza flirting fun masti sab hai , sirf pyaar aur shaadi nahi hai , woh ek ladki ke saath teen gante nahi reh sakta aur aap log usse shaadi ke liye bol rahe hein wohi bhai se , ladki sirf heish ke liye hai bas , aisa bhai manta hai , koyi pyaar viyar nahin hote sab dika wah hai aur kuch nahin , right bhai ? " ; Maanpreet reply them .



Beeji n Rano was unable to believe how come Rishi think like this , why he dont believe on relation ship .



Raj join them n take boys side , he said " Rano beeji , why harassing Rishi today ? let him choose one as we know he will surely find one n may like her too , then slowly he will love her right son ? " ; he hit Rishi shoulder .



" No dad you are wrong here ! i may spend times with them but to fall in love no wise ,:not only them but no one can make me lose my heart on her , there is no one who can make my heart beat for her , n i dont believe how can some one can stay with a person so long times , seriously it just formality that it , that why im not interested in all this things n no girl has made for me , who can deal with me or to handle me right " ; in a polite n funny style he said his decision .



Raj smile n said " Ok as you wish will not force you , ok beta lets go to cut your cake now " .



The boys leave from there , Rano n beeji get angry on Raj for not forcing or talk clearly with Rishi about his life can be in danger if he dont get married in his 30 years old , he told them leave all in god hand if he made some one for him , he will make them meet .



Beeji told him they need first to search a girl which kudli will match with Rishi then they may make him married to her , Rano n Raj accept .



Same time in Panjab we saw


A girl dressing as a bride attire , with red outfit , combing her long silky hair , wearing bangles , payal , mang tika , earrings n necklace , with less make up , she looks little sad as she will be far from her parents n sis , she think her would be husband is the one whom her heart is waiting for , she pray to god if it good to be married with mahesh then every thing must pass well other wise he should do any thing to stop it , her pray broke on hearing her sis calling her name .



" Tanu di ! Tanu Di barat has come , i came to take you let go now " ; Ahana told her , before leaving the room Tanu take bless from idol n walk slowly .



In America


Rishi was about to cut the cake after blowing candle , the light went n he hold the knife wrong way n cut his palm , he shout loudly in pain .



In panjab


While Tanu was walking suddenly felt pain in her right hand n could felt some one was in pain as the persone was so close to her , she stop n hold her hand due of paining , she go back in her room .


" Di what happen ? why you are holding your hand ? tell me di what wrong ? " ; Ahana ask her in a tense look .


" I dont know Ahana , i felt my hand get cut , as i get cut with knife it like that , but i did not hold any knife then why this pain ? it so paining , please bring ice n rub it on my hand " ; Tanu reply her in a confusing look n look at the idol .



In America


Light on n they saw Rishi hand with blood he get cut , Rano get worried n attend him , with so love affection , she ask him what happen how he hold knife in wrong way .



Rishi was confused , as suddenly his heart was having pain , like some one close to him was going far , what was that , he could not understand it , he jst said he dont know , he leave the party without cutting the cake , he enter in his room sit on the edge of the bed



Wonders what was happening to him all of a sudden , he look at his wound n talk to himself " Kya huwa mujhe ? woh ehsas kya tah ? woh dil mein dard ? , aisa kabhi nahin huwa to phir aaj kyun ? woh sapna jo ata hai , woh dono bache kaun hai , aur woh ladki pisalti samein mera naam kyun liya ? kya woh ladka kahin mein toh nahin jab mein bacha tah ? kya confusion hai , woh awaz mere kanon mein ghuch ti hai manu jaise , woh mujhe bula rahin hai , mujhe kyun yaad nahin ata kya raaz hai ? Rishi beta ulajna maat intizo se yeh saab na mum ki waja se hai koi baat hi nahin hai fizoor mein chor rahan hoon yes there is nothing to worry " ; on cont watching his wound .



In panjab


Tanu was sitting on bed she hold her hand n was blowing on it , she also think how she got that pain , without touching anything how that possible , why she felt as some one was in pain n she could feel it , she talk to herself " Kyun mujhe aisa lag rahi hai ke kuch acha nahin ho raha hai , kyun mera dil mujhe piche kich rahi hai , aisa lagta hai ke manu koi mujhe bola ra han hai , koi aisa jo dil ke kareeb ho jo dil mein ho , par kaun hai woh , mahesh ke saat meri shaadi hai phir bhi , aisa kyun lagta hai ke mera dil maan nahin raha hai , agar koi aur hai mere liye to kyun samne nahin atah , aisa na ho ke dher ho jaye jab woh ayega , barat achuki hai mera dil mujhe kehta hai mat jao par dimag bolti hai jao , karu to kya karu ? bolo god kuch to jawab do ? " ; she was with teary eyes n confused .



We saw Tanshi confused faces in separated frame on watching their hands .



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That all guys for part one if you guys appreciate it please do hit like n leave your comment from which i will know if i should cont or not ok .


Next : Tanu broke her wedding


Thx

Love 😃


HANSA


Edited by --HANSA-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow liked the concept and after reading the precap i only want to say is update sooner!! And thanks for the pm too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ditto do update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

Wow liked the concept and after reading the precap i only want to say is update sooner!! And thanks for the pm too

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