TanShi OS~First Kiss In The Rain

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TanShi OS
First Kiss In The Rain






Believe me Rishi, you will enjoy and nothing will happen to you...Tanu was holding his hand and was dragging him in the rain...

They were standing on the road waiting for taxi when it started raining...

You know it very well Tanu...I don't like rain much as I always fell ill...wish it know how to fall upwards...he was resisting himself from going with her...

Rishi always hated rain but Tanu loved it...for her it was a blessing of God but for Rishi it was just a part of water cycle which managed to make him ill often...


He was still on his place not agreeing to go with her...


Do you believe me Rishi???...Tanu asked with a strange twinkle in her eyes, twinkle of belief, twinkle of trust, twinkle of love...

She asked him so innocently that he could not refuse her anymore and was lost in her eyes, in her deep dark eyes...

It was the first time he experienced the feeling to be spell bounded... and when he regained his senses he found himself under the showering rain with Tanu... this was the best feeling he had in many years...

As fast moving drops of water strike on his eye, he felt something, something very strange and relieving...


Suddenly his eyes searched for Tanu...


She was there on the empty road... dancing...her head high, enjoying every drop falling on her face, with her hands open she was twirling around and around...

She is so beautiful...his heart whispered to him... her smile was like a tonic of happiness... her rosy lips on her face were looking like a cherry on a beautiful cake... her hair were like a dark fantasy...she was looking like a goddess in true sense...

She was wearing white kameez red dupatta and was dancing under the street lights...Rishi was short of words to describe her beauty...

His mother always narrated him a story that on the first rain of season, angels come on earth...he never believed it but now he could say, she was right...his angel was right in front of him...


He was busy enjoying the sight before his eyes when she slowly came to him and said...

Will you dance with me?"she forwarded her hand towards Rishi...

Her voice was so sweet that without a second thought...Rishi extended his one hand towards her and put another hand on her shoulder...

Tanu smiled and gently corrected his hand position... from her shoulder to her waist...

His hand moved over her waist...feeling its softness over her dress..to him the touch was just heavenly...


Very gently he pulled Tanu so closer to him that he could smell her breath...

At that moment he felt true happiness, the true joy, the true life...

He sensed that'' Yes I am alive''moment...


Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha
Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa


He was lost in the depth of her eyes and the rain was playing the background music for them...

Then slowly their legs moved and they started to dance...

They don't know when rain stopped and moon came out from the clouds to see them dancing on an empty road under the street light...


I love you Tanu...his eyes spoke to hers...

I love you too Rishi... her eyes replied back...


"It is true enough that when two people are in true love, words stop to talk and eyes takes over the task"



She was smiling looking at him and her curved lips were distracting him to the extreme...

With one last dance step Rishi pulled her to him...and whispered close to her lips...can I kiss you?...making her feel his breath on her lips...

He felt so weak and scared after what he said...visions of how she will react were continuously going on in his mind...but then without saying anything she forwarded her lips...


A faint smile hit his face and he lowered his mouth to hers, and she instantly closed her eyes... then, she felt his soft, sweet lips against hers...


He didn't scare her by being too aggressive, but she definitely felt like they both wanted to try it again and again. It was perfect...the kiss which started with few soft pecks turned into something deep...


"The first kiss that you share with the person whom you loves is something magical...something unforgetable...its something more than few pecks on lips but is filled with passion and love...everything around you becomes blur...you feel like you are in heaven...everything feels so amazing"

After kissing each other for few minutes they slowly pulled apart...looking lovingly at each other...

Rishi's eyes were still fixed on her lips and he wanted to taste them for a second time...


Seeing the permission in Tanu's eyes he dared to kiss her again...this time a bit more passionately but then he instantly pulled back with sudden sneezing... he was caught by cold...


Tanu started to laugh and he joined her with a smile ...


This all because of you future wifey...he made an innocent blame on her rubbing his red nose with his index finger...


Ok Rishi , if I am the reason then let me cure it my future hubby...saying this she softly kissed his nose...put her hand on his wrist and grabbed him tightly and with smile,they forwarded on the road to get back to their home...

Edited by meerab... - 9 years ago


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TomNJerry... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OS Updated...
Leave comment if you like the OS😛
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Edited by meerab... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow that was an awesome os. I just love it. It was so romantic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely, romantic, sweet, with a tinge of humor 😊 he hates the rain but is spellbound by her and ends up in said rain creating magic as they move as one and end up in a magical kiss.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

lovely, romantic, sweet, with a tinge of humor 😊 he hates the rain but is spellbound by her and ends up in said rain creating magic as they move as one and end up in a magical kiss.

yep the os was super duper awesome sis.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very romantic. Loved it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just read few lines and I am already in love with it.
Going to read it completely once I return back from my school.
Res.. 😳
******
Unres..
I just returned from my school and the first thing I did was to open my laptop and read your OS.
It was simply magical. I was just thinking about your OS only during my free time in school.
And I am not disappointed. You wrote more wonderfully then I imagined.
The way you described it.. 👏
Rishi fearing rain was cute. 😳
Him seeing Tanu and the way you described their beauty it was magical. And very romantic. 😳
And the best part the kiss. You wrote that part really well.
I just loved this.
I can't Wait to read more.
Please write the next soon and please do pm me when you write
Edited by wayback - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow! this one was so romantic and a perfect one for tanshi do write more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it!! So beautifully portrayed!!

Thanks for the PM dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly i love rain scene and an os on Rain that makes more and more ... 😆

Ramantic ... lovely ... Very Nice OS ... Loved it!

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