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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

He was so comfortable in his chair near the side of fire with a light blanket on him he started reading the book then someone knocked
'Oh no let it be I m not getting up from the chair it's so comfortable in here' he thought and continued to read there was a knock again it was harder than before and there was a knock again and again.
He got up in frustration and reached the door there was a heavy snow fall outside and due to the frost on the door plains he could not see clearly as he cleared the frost he noticed a girl standing out her face was not clear as it was covered with a shawl he opened the door and she got inside but stood near the door she was shivering due to cold breeze of snow coming from out.
Her nose and chicks with her lips were red pink in color due to cold but she was a beauty he kept on looking at her as she wiped on the snow over her dress

Song played: na jaane kab yeh huwa, na kisi ko khabar, na khud ko pata
khoye khoye rehte hum yahan hain
silsilo ka silsila hai, huwa shuru abb jo nikle bhi jaan
abb se hai hum raahi chaahton ke
yeh jaise phela nasha, woh pheli nazar, phela guma
yuun lage mohabbat hi jahaan hai
doston ki dosti, yaaron ki yaari kam lagne lagi
behke hai hum behka yeh sama hai
kaise samjhaau tumhe mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh o o o....
aankhon mein aitbaar hai yeh o o o....
mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh o o o....

'who r u' she asked suddenly as she felt something strange around her
'Same thing if I ask u' he walked closer to her
She rain of terror ran in her body as she heard someone else in her house it became so quite that she was able to hear him coming near her his each foot step moved forward towards her made her shiver inside.
It was then when she lost all her senses when she felt him breathing on her face his warmth breath over her face told her the distance, he was close. Suddenly she stepped back and dashed up in a chair and got hurt ……..
'Are u ok? ' he tried to help her but she moved away
He saw her spread her arms in the air and tried to walk away she moved away towards the door way
'I m sorry by mistake if I entered your house I'll have to go I m really sorry' she walked out.
'yeah u should be' he turned and saw a photo frame kept on the side table he picked it up and took it near the fire to see it clearly in the light.
'Oh! Man' he ran towards the door ways he looked everywhere she would be close she can't walk so far in such a heavy snow fall He thought and walked out to find her .

It was still snowing he kept on walking looking for her not so far but he saw someone lying. He made sure it was her as he reached near her she was lying fainted on the middle of the road her whole body was covered with snow and she was shivering he moved back her hair which were lying over her face he checked her breath. It felt like they were on there last stages he picked her up in his arms and started to walk.

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please comment

kitty~




Edited by koolkitty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
loved loved it 👏 awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow loved it soooo much after a long time i am reading iqbal pallavi fic, hardy anyone makes them now great start btw, can't wait to read more 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

loved loved it 👏 awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

thnkxxx to be continued very soon😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

wow loved it soooo much after a long time i am reading iqbal pallavi fic, hardy anyone makes them now great start btw, can't wait to read more 😳 😃

well thankx a lot keep reading and keep on ur good comments coming😳😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part!!! u r going just amazing 👏
just keep these wonderful parts coming 😳 😳
plz cont soon...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kitty ur ff is..................................................
BINDAAS 👏 👏
gauri is blind............ 😉
well do update fast 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil hearts

awesome part!!! u r going just amazing 👏
just keep these wonderful parts coming 😳 😳
plz cont soon...........

thank u!!!!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fida-cute

kitty ur ff is..................................................
BINDAAS 👏 👏
gauri is blind............ 😉
well do update fast 😉

😆😆becoz i m bindass too😆hmm will try too do soon😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

She touched the bed on which she was lying it was her bed she knew it her hands spread and called "ipshita?" no one replied she again called "baba?" she knew everyone was there but she was confused why no one was replying her, finally she heard a familiar voice yes she knew that voice "doctor karan patel?"
"How do u fell now better than before or you're still feeling sick?"
"I m fine thank u!"
"Ok I have given u some medicines take care"
She smiled as he left
"Gauri how do u fell now beta?"
"I m fine baba don't worry" she took baba's hands in her
"Ok gauri I m living see u in the afternoon" said baba
"Bye" she waved
"Hi gauri" she heard ipshita
"Hi ipshita" she replied back
"How r u sweetie" ipshita sat near her
"I fine but last night I totally lost my control when I heard a heavy voice coming close too me" gauri took ipshita's hands
"Actually I m sorry" he said
"Ipshita it's the same voice he is here" gauri was confused
"Gauri oh yeah last night u met him he is shiv" ipshita smiled looking at him
"What?? I m sorry I mean hi" she was still confused
"Shiv u talk to gauri I'll just come" she left the room while gauri sat there with a red face
He step close she could hear him
"What did u do with me?" gauri asked in a trying to be high voice she waited for his answer but there was a no reply
In frustration she got out of the bed and started to walk when he held her wrist
'Sorry' she heard as he whispered into his ears
She slightly pushed him and said 'I don't believe sorry from such a guy kind of arrogant person, senseless creature doesn't even know how to talk to a girl ,u r a fool ……….and she continued on n on
'Shut up' he said as he held her by her shoulders and pushed her to the wall side looking at her continuous but with clean eyes
She struggled and tried to get out of his reach
'what do u think of your self I said u sorry for no mistake and u keep on abusing me from that time why do u speak so much? Huh"
She kept quite
'Bolo nah why u r quiet now" he urged her to speak
'Will u leave me? Just get out of here NOW' tears rolled her eyes
He left her and went out of the room
She went towards the door guiding her steps the slammed the door hard
She felt like a lump in her throat she felt like crying loud but only long tears fell down her cheeks clashing each other with a mixture of different emotions

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please comment i request my silent readers specially😳

kitty~~

Edited by koolkitty - 17 years ago

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