FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09 - Page 33

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

simply gr88888888........................wonderful update as always dil khush ho gaya ajj tou finally they chatted 😃😃😃 this update is awesummm plz giv us more updates just like this 😊 plz do update asap plzzzz eagerly waiting the lenght of update was perfect they way both r talking n all luved it

👏

saba

Originally posted by: xx-ReenO-xx

nice part! loved it continue sooon! loved the conversations and beatings tht shiv got... QUESTION: y is shiv so anry kindaa??? =(

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wow awesome update.. it was so intimate n romantic.. enjoyed it...
Plzz continue soon..

Originally posted by: pia.

this was the best part i loved it very glad to see gauri open up now it will be great to read their parts can't wait for the next part which i hope will be soon and long

Originally posted by: stunninstar

nice ff.. loved it..cont. soon..

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

lovely part

itne dina baad update kiya so first angry

but yaar itna awssssome part tha ke

ye dil mange more

Originally posted by: jagrutid

ok confeshion time..as per every thing ive been doing lately i never get back to the corresponding person till like ages so even with your update i read it time ago and didnt get a chance to get back to you so sorry! but what can i say about your update. one in a million..you may update only once in sometime but every bit of it is worth the wait. i simply loved it... i really enjoyed reading the specific bit about shiv change in character from that certain anger to romance was soo good that i can just picture gauri having seen shiv on the phone angry her worry at it and then the suprise element when shiv is ever so soft with her...loved!!! it..so good. aw shivs advances are so naughty but bless gauri she is so innocent..they are just too good together..was truley a memroable chapter pls to continue soon wating for your next update....addicted fan of your writting now so pls continue soon jagruti...😊

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

hmm... I am waiting.... Thats ok yaar.... don't worry..... But you came back ...to give your comment for me... that is like ... "you made my day today.." with all the FF's you are writing and all other tasks... you came back thats really wonderfull...

and dosti ka pehla usull..... kisine kaha hai... ... "No Sorry No thankyou..."

one in a million.... 😳😳 now I am blushing... thankyou thankyou.... I really want to update... but.... as I told you I didnot plan on extending this fan Fic it should have been finished long time back... so getting to continue.... I have to think of hundred things.... to continue.... i am now thinking on what to write next... i am totally blank... I am thinking... what would you all like to read.... ..

and Once you get one "wow" from your readers... you want to get more of them... so you think harder....
and thankyou for loving it.... and that to coming from you... "one in a million.."

Ohh thankyou.... I didnot see anyone mentioning it... but Its one of my favourite parts.... it shows how mature Shiv is and how innocent Gauri is.... Shiv... has been dealing with many people around him... so he knows how to be in control of his emotions....

But I think.... his charm and his intelligence are all giving away when it comes to Gauri.... he is clean bowled... by her.... innocence ... charm.... and cute... face....😆😆😆

You got it right.... i wanted him to look naughty.... I wanted him to be a little naughty from the start.... as with all the seriousness associated with his image as "Shiv Kapoor" .... common... he is may be 27 or 28 years old... so he is young and enthusiastic.... how can he not have the take it lite attitude... but he cannot show it always.... so his family is where it comes out.... I hope I can write more of them in future...

Gauri is innocent... she is innocent to what Shiv is offering her... probably she will learn his way going forward....

Thankyou for saying that..... I wish them to be together too.... I feel they are made to be together and to live together... but will they live together we have to wait and see...???

You made it memorable to me .. by giving your comment....

I hope I get more ideas so that i can update soon... let us see .... i will surely let you know when I update...

I am addicted fan to your fan fiction.... I never comment as I want to read the whole FF before I comment....

DO keep giving me your comments....

Thankyou, for taking the time to post a comment here..... I know how hard it is .... as I am always a silent reader to many FF's.....

I will surely try to give an update as soon as possible ... at least for you.... but let me get an idea on how to continue first...

Bunny.